Comments received on poems by Syd
Frozen
Joanna Garrido said:
Read one of your poems in return. Nice write. Lovely imagery
February 9th, 2019 10:06
Joanna Garrido said:
Read one of your poems in return. Nice write. Lovely imagery
February 9th, 2019 10:06
Frozen
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present need to keep warm in this winter\'s big freeze
February 3rd, 2019 10:39
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present need to keep warm in this winter\'s big freeze
February 3rd, 2019 10:39
Carbon Dust
sylviasearcher said:
Forgetting what our grey matter
Is conditioned
And concerned about
Humankind is broken.
😪
Yet there could be hope?
Unlearn the toxic vision
Words like these may unteach us 🤗
January 13th, 2019 12:36
sylviasearcher said:
Forgetting what our grey matter
Is conditioned
And concerned about
Humankind is broken.
😪
Yet there could be hope?
Unlearn the toxic vision
Words like these may unteach us 🤗
January 13th, 2019 12:36
Carbon Dust
orchidee said:
Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire instead of coal, cos I had run out of coal. Couldn\'t see the harm in it, until me friend returned! lol.
January 13th, 2019 10:40
orchidee said:
Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire instead of coal, cos I had run out of coal. Couldn\'t see the harm in it, until me friend returned! lol.
January 13th, 2019 10:40
A Simple Tribute
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:58
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:58
A Simple Tribute
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:57
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:57
A Simple Tribute
Goldfinch60 said:
I think we all have those words showing \'what might have been\'.
November 30th, 2018 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
I think we all have those words showing \'what might have been\'.
November 30th, 2018 02:18
Telepathic
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Syd, this is simply outstanding. There is so much wisdom to be distilled from these few verses.
Communicating mind to mind is a phenomenal concept that we may all experience in a future life. :-)
Excellent write.
November 26th, 2018 18:01
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Syd, this is simply outstanding. There is so much wisdom to be distilled from these few verses.
Communicating mind to mind is a phenomenal concept that we may all experience in a future life. :-)
Excellent write.
November 26th, 2018 18:01
Telepathic
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen especially between good friends and the loved ones in our lives.
November 26th, 2018 16:31
Goldfinch60 said:
This can happen especially between good friends and the loved ones in our lives.
November 26th, 2018 16:31
Wheezer
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully written rhythmic poem with such deep meaning. The images are locked in the reader\'s mind.
Great job, Syd. :-)
November 20th, 2018 12:24
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wonderfully written rhythmic poem with such deep meaning. The images are locked in the reader\'s mind.
Great job, Syd. :-)
November 20th, 2018 12:24
Psilocybin Stride
orchidee said:
A good write Syd. She seems Kaleidoscopic and psychedelic (not necessarily meaning \'high\' on something).
Time for a lay down to recover, after those long words this time of day! lol.
November 15th, 2018 02:46
orchidee said:
A good write Syd. She seems Kaleidoscopic and psychedelic (not necessarily meaning \'high\' on something).
Time for a lay down to recover, after those long words this time of day! lol.
November 15th, 2018 02:46
Psilocybin Stride
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your fantasies come to life in this poem. I particularly loved the last verse, \"Will she make me blossom or will she make me scream.\"
I had those exact thoughts the first time I saw the tattoo sleeves. :-)
Great job!
November 14th, 2018 20:08
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your fantasies come to life in this poem. I particularly loved the last verse, \"Will she make me blossom or will she make me scream.\"
I had those exact thoughts the first time I saw the tattoo sleeves. :-)
Great job!
November 14th, 2018 20:08
Man/Machine
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Syd, this is an excellent poem, but such a sad commentary on what is becoming of humanity.
Yet, I could also substitute \"robot\" with someone who is diagnosed with bipolar disorder. Edit joints.
When I first started reading this poem bipolar disorder came to mind.
November 14th, 2018 19:58
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Syd, this is an excellent poem, but such a sad commentary on what is becoming of humanity.
Yet, I could also substitute \"robot\" with someone who is diagnosed with bipolar disorder. Edit joints.
When I first started reading this poem bipolar disorder came to mind.
November 14th, 2018 19:58
Wheezer
orchidee said:
Ooh I\'d never have thought of all those words if I was unwell like that! (ooh heehee). A fine write Syd.
October 27th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Ooh I\'d never have thought of all those words if I was unwell like that! (ooh heehee). A fine write Syd.
October 27th, 2018 01:45
Wheezer
Laura🌻 said:
Syd,
An awful experience...
but a great write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 23:26
Laura🌻 said:
Syd,
An awful experience...
but a great write!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 23:26
Parachutes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! What an excellent write. I feel as though I was living there too -through your words.
Our memories never let us forget the good times we\'ve experienced. :)
October 18th, 2018 11:18
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Wow! What an excellent write. I feel as though I was living there too -through your words.
Our memories never let us forget the good times we\'ve experienced. :)
October 18th, 2018 11:18
Icarus (Powder Blue)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good imagery and warning on the dangers of drug use.
October 17th, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good imagery and warning on the dangers of drug use.
October 17th, 2018 00:26
Icarus (Powder Blue)
Fay Slimm. said:
A forceful warning on drug-use and the fall that precedes flights to more danger - - love the chosen image Syd as it lays stress on the poem\'s strong phrases on false security.
October 16th, 2018 16:07
Fay Slimm. said:
A forceful warning on drug-use and the fall that precedes flights to more danger - - love the chosen image Syd as it lays stress on the poem\'s strong phrases on false security.
October 16th, 2018 16:07
Icarus (Powder Blue)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, Syd, the poem was quite enjoyable. The reader is able to feel every aspect of the journey you\'ve outlined in your stanzas.
What\'s great is the image you included of Icarus, makes us clearly understand that false sense of security you mentioned.
Thanks for posting. :)
October 16th, 2018 15:34
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Yes, Syd, the poem was quite enjoyable. The reader is able to feel every aspect of the journey you\'ve outlined in your stanzas.
What\'s great is the image you included of Icarus, makes us clearly understand that false sense of security you mentioned.
Thanks for posting. :)
October 16th, 2018 15:34
Death
Syd said:
I couldn\'t agree more Goldfinch, thanks for reading and leaving feedback.
- Syd
September 24th, 2018 06:01
Syd said:
I couldn\'t agree more Goldfinch, thanks for reading and leaving feedback.
- Syd
September 24th, 2018 06:01
Death
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write, you start dying the moment you are born. Enjoy every moment of your life.
September 22nd, 2018 10:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write, you start dying the moment you are born. Enjoy every moment of your life.
September 22nd, 2018 10:39
Aquaplane
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing read Syd - - I love the way you wind words around to obtain the flow of momentum -- and a last line to sigh for which gives the reason for risk-taking - - as \"the road to excess\" - a brilliant write.
September 14th, 2018 13:43
Fay Slimm. said:
An intriguing read Syd - - I love the way you wind words around to obtain the flow of momentum -- and a last line to sigh for which gives the reason for risk-taking - - as \"the road to excess\" - a brilliant write.
September 14th, 2018 13:43
Reacquaintence With My Dreams
misskay said:
Great work syd
I enjoyed it a lot
August 17th, 2018 11:00
misskay said:
Great work syd
I enjoyed it a lot
August 17th, 2018 11:00
Reacquaintence With My Dreams
Laura🌻 said:
Syd,
May your positivity continue to glow and enjoy that sanctuary you so desire within your dreams!
I enjoyed reading this great poem very much!
~Laura~
August 16th, 2018 19:21
Laura🌻 said:
Syd,
May your positivity continue to glow and enjoy that sanctuary you so desire within your dreams!
I enjoyed reading this great poem very much!
~Laura~
August 16th, 2018 19:21
Beautiful People
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Syd, the beauty of people comes from inside of them.
July 27th, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Syd, the beauty of people comes from inside of them.
July 27th, 2018 00:26
Beautiful People
Poetic Dan said:
Flowed as delightful as your soul
Thank you for sharing
July 26th, 2018 13:00
Poetic Dan said:
Flowed as delightful as your soul
Thank you for sharing
July 26th, 2018 13:00
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