Ashtray
MelissaJA said:

Strong imagery here. \"crumpled cigarettes smouldering with anger\" -such a good descriptive line

August 27th, 2020 23:52

Licking Razor Blades
L. B. Mek said:

you have an instinctive talent for seamless rhythm,
though bleak in tone, their is real purpose and message to unearth for those willing to dig beyond the shock-value aesthetics,
you have showcased a glimpse at a very contemplative and empathetic Poet,

August 24th, 2020 04:59

Licking Razor Blades
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here ~ Good Evening Sid - Thanks for a very intriguing Poem. Loved the PIC we dont use that type of blade anymore we use three small blades embeded in Plastic @r 50 x the cost. The old type were very useful ! One of my Party Tricks used to be chewing Razor Blades & I never cut my mouth ! I agree with your premise - we do spend too much time trying to reconnect with the past ! However to live *WE must seize the Present* and move on ! Thanks for sharing - please check our site - Thanks

Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛

August 23rd, 2020 15:55

Into The Fumes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Very descriptive poem that completely captures the reader\'s emotions.

It is so refreshing to read poetry that doesn\'t include hackneyed language. :-)

September 19th, 2019 16:01

Heavy Vinyl
orchidee said:

A fine write Syd. Well, I only asked for a DVD tape in a shop, and they looked at me as if I was mad - or 5 million years old! lol.
They\'re not THAT old. They should get their finger out, and get some tapes in!

February 17th, 2019 08:44

The Void
SerenWise said:

Very well written, well done

February 9th, 2019 12:22

Frozen
Fay Slimm. said:

First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present need to keep warm in this winter\'s big freeze

February 3rd, 2019 10:39

Carbon Dust
orchidee said:

Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire instead of coal, cos I had run out of coal. Couldn\'t see the harm in it, until me friend returned! lol.

January 13th, 2019 10:40

A Simple Tribute
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.

Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.

December 6th, 2018 03:57

Telepathic
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Syd, this is simply outstanding. There is so much wisdom to be distilled from these few verses.

Communicating mind to mind is a phenomenal concept that we may all experience in a future life. :-)

Excellent write.

November 26th, 2018 18:01

Wheezer
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wonderfully written rhythmic poem with such deep meaning. The images are locked in the reader\'s mind.

Great job, Syd. :-)

November 20th, 2018 12:24

Psilocybin Stride
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Your fantasies come to life in this poem. I particularly loved the last verse, \"Will she make me blossom or will she make me scream.\"

I had those exact thoughts the first time I saw the tattoo sleeves. :-)

Great job!

November 14th, 2018 20:08

Wheezer
orchidee said:

Ooh I\'d never have thought of all those words if I was unwell like that! (ooh heehee). A fine write Syd.

October 27th, 2018 01:45

Parachutes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow! What an excellent write. I feel as though I was living there too -through your words.

Our memories never let us forget the good times we\'ve experienced. :)


October 18th, 2018 11:18

Icarus (Powder Blue)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good imagery and warning on the dangers of drug use.

October 17th, 2018 00:26