Licking Razor Blades
L. B. Mek said:

you have an instinctive talent for seamless rhythm,
though bleak in tone, their is real purpose and message to unearth for those willing to dig beyond the shock-value aesthetics,
you have showcased a glimpse at a very contemplative and empathetic Poet,

August 24th, 2020 04:59

Licking Razor Blades
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian here ~ Good Evening Sid - Thanks for a very intriguing Poem. Loved the PIC we dont use that type of blade anymore we use three small blades embeded in Plastic @r 50 x the cost. The old type were very useful ! One of my Party Tricks used to be chewing Razor Blades & I never cut my mouth ! I agree with your premise - we do spend too much time trying to reconnect with the past ! However to live *WE must seize the Present* and move on ! Thanks for sharing - please check our site - Thanks

Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛

August 23rd, 2020 15:55

Into The Fumes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Very descriptive poem that completely captures the reader\'s emotions.

It is so refreshing to read poetry that doesn\'t include hackneyed language. :-)

September 19th, 2019 16:01

Heavy Vinyl
orchidee said:

A fine write Syd. Well, I only asked for a DVD tape in a shop, and they looked at me as if I was mad - or 5 million years old! lol.
They\'re not THAT old. They should get their finger out, and get some tapes in!

February 17th, 2019 08:44

The Void
SerenWise said:

Very well written, well done

February 9th, 2019 12:22

Frozen
Fay Slimm. said:

First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present need to keep warm in this winter\'s big freeze

February 3rd, 2019 10:39

Carbon Dust
orchidee said:

Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire instead of coal, cos I had run out of coal. Couldn\'t see the harm in it, until me friend returned! lol.

January 13th, 2019 10:40

A Simple Tribute
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.

Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.

December 6th, 2018 03:57

Telepathic
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Syd, this is simply outstanding. There is so much wisdom to be distilled from these few verses.

Communicating mind to mind is a phenomenal concept that we may all experience in a future life. :-)

Excellent write.

November 26th, 2018 18:01

Wheezer
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wonderfully written rhythmic poem with such deep meaning. The images are locked in the reader\'s mind.

Great job, Syd. :-)

November 20th, 2018 12:24

Psilocybin Stride
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Your fantasies come to life in this poem. I particularly loved the last verse, \"Will she make me blossom or will she make me scream.\"

I had those exact thoughts the first time I saw the tattoo sleeves. :-)

Great job!

November 14th, 2018 20:08

Wheezer
orchidee said:

Ooh I\'d never have thought of all those words if I was unwell like that! (ooh heehee). A fine write Syd.

October 27th, 2018 01:45

Parachutes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow! What an excellent write. I feel as though I was living there too -through your words.

Our memories never let us forget the good times we\'ve experienced. :)


October 18th, 2018 11:18

Icarus (Powder Blue)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good imagery and warning on the dangers of drug use.

October 17th, 2018 00:26

Icarus (Powder Blue)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Yes, Syd, the poem was quite enjoyable. The reader is able to feel every aspect of the journey you\'ve outlined in your stanzas.

What\'s great is the image you included of Icarus, makes us clearly understand that false sense of security you mentioned.

Thanks for posting. :)

October 16th, 2018 15:34