Comments received on poems by Syd



Liberty Cap
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woah extraordinary amazing poem wow! I ESP admired how you rhymed in the forage porridge stanza. Oatmeal porridge is my breakfast. Kudos.

Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.

December 4th, 2019 09:27

Into The Fumes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Very descriptive poem that completely captures the reader\'s emotions.

It is so refreshing to read poetry that doesn\'t include hackneyed language. :-)

September 19th, 2019 16:01

Heavy Vinyl
Goldfinch60 said:

That \'needles kiss\' is thrilling as it sets the music to your soul.


February 18th, 2019 01:01

Heavy Vinyl
orchidee said:

A fine write Syd. Well, I only asked for a DVD tape in a shop, and they looked at me as if I was mad - or 5 million years old! lol.
They\'re not THAT old. They should get their finger out, and get some tapes in!

February 17th, 2019 08:44

Heavy Vinyl
sylviasearcher said:

Beautifully written

February 17th, 2019 07:31

The Void
SerenWise said:

Very well written, well done

February 9th, 2019 12:22

Frozen
Joanna Garrido said:

Read one of your poems in return. Nice write. Lovely imagery

February 9th, 2019 10:06

Frozen
Fay Slimm - - (real name) said:

First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present need to keep warm in this winter\'s big freeze

February 3rd, 2019 10:39

Carbon Dust
LAWLESS said:

Not only a favorite, more like loved it!

Our natural tendency towards greed can consume us and destroy us. Hopefully we can \"Unlearn The toxic vision\".

One suggestion: you could add another line to stanza 3 in order to make them all 4 lines. I\'m turning into a conformist in my old age!

January 13th, 2019 16:19

Carbon Dust
Unsub said:

Syd,

seems to mirror my destiny of following my heart & not my head.

The breaking free of the illusion & finding the true Oneness within sits well with this piece too.

Awesome!

Unsub.

January 13th, 2019 16:19

Carbon Dust
sylviasearcher said:

Forgetting what our grey matter
Is conditioned
And concerned about

Humankind is broken.
😪

Yet there could be hope?

Unlearn the toxic vision

Words like these may unteach us 🤗

January 13th, 2019 12:36

Carbon Dust
orchidee said:

Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire instead of coal, cos I had run out of coal. Couldn\'t see the harm in it, until me friend returned! lol.

January 13th, 2019 10:40

A Simple Tribute
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.

Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.

December 6th, 2018 03:58

A Simple Tribute
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.

Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.

December 6th, 2018 03:57

A Simple Tribute
Goldfinch60 said:

I think we all have those words showing \'what might have been\'.

November 30th, 2018 02:18

Telepathic
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Syd, this is simply outstanding. There is so much wisdom to be distilled from these few verses.

Communicating mind to mind is a phenomenal concept that we may all experience in a future life. :-)

Excellent write.

November 26th, 2018 18:01

Telepathic
Goldfinch60 said:

This can happen especially between good friends and the loved ones in our lives.

November 26th, 2018 16:31

Wheezer
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wonderfully written rhythmic poem with such deep meaning. The images are locked in the reader\'s mind.

Great job, Syd. :-)

November 20th, 2018 12:24

Pure Punk
LAWLESS said:

Hello Syd, (great punk name by the way).

This is excellent! It conveys the attitude most punks have.

During the Disco era is when punk really started to make a difference for people. Your poem hits the mark. It is frustrating to listen to what you described in your first two stanzas. There is a lot of great music out there in all genres. It\'s just a matter of finding it.

sub is correct, I am a big punk fan and always will be.

Fuck society!

Forever,
Lawless

November 16th, 2018 10:08

Pure Punk
Unsub said:

Syd,

Not really a punk fan but did enjoy your style of structure & delivery in this piece.

Lawless is a big punk fan so he’ll probably enjoy this one.

Rock on! I mean punk off! Lol!

Unsub.

November 15th, 2018 18:57

Psilocybin Stride
orchidee said:

A good write Syd. She seems Kaleidoscopic and psychedelic (not necessarily meaning \'high\' on something).
Time for a lay down to recover, after those long words this time of day! lol.

November 15th, 2018 02:46

Psilocybin Stride
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Your fantasies come to life in this poem. I particularly loved the last verse, \"Will she make me blossom or will she make me scream.\"

I had those exact thoughts the first time I saw the tattoo sleeves. :-)

Great job!

November 14th, 2018 20:08

Man/Machine
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Syd, this is an excellent poem, but such a sad commentary on what is becoming of humanity.

Yet, I could also substitute \"robot\" with someone who is diagnosed with bipolar disorder. Edit joints.

When I first started reading this poem bipolar disorder came to mind.







November 14th, 2018 19:58

Wheezer
orchidee said:

Ooh I\'d never have thought of all those words if I was unwell like that! (ooh heehee). A fine write Syd.

October 27th, 2018 01:45

Wheezer
Laura said:

Syd,

An awful experience...
but a great write!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

October 26th, 2018 23:26

Wheezer
LAWLESS said:

Very well done. Great vocabulary. This does remind of some of the crack and meth heads I\'ve known.

I\'ve never done that shit either! Those people age ten years in one week! I\'m already an old fart.

October 26th, 2018 16:43

Put Me To Stud
LAWLESS said:

Many a drunk poem from my pen; I can relate. I was a little confused about the lines \"Narrow odds and handicapped\" & \"The peak of my career\". Is the peak the finish or a highlight? No matter, I enjoyed it very much.

I think being put out to stud is every horny man\'s dream!

October 21st, 2018 10:56

Parachutes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow! What an excellent write. I feel as though I was living there too -through your words.

Our memories never let us forget the good times we\'ve experienced. :)


October 18th, 2018 11:18

Parachutes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very moving tribute.

October 17th, 2018 23:56

Parachutes
LAWLESS said:

A great write that delivers a wallop to the heart.

October 17th, 2018 18:43

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