Comments received on poems by Syd
Augmented
sorenbarrett said:
The plus\'s and negatives of medicine and its attempted cures. Very nicely written
May 30th, 2026 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
The plus\'s and negatives of medicine and its attempted cures. Very nicely written
May 30th, 2026 07:47
Manifest
sorenbarrett said:
Although a bitter and sour concoction this poetic message is so well sent with rhyme and measure it deserves a fave. I have always felt strongly that true poetry is more than just beautiful words but emotion and this seems to have it
May 28th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Although a bitter and sour concoction this poetic message is so well sent with rhyme and measure it deserves a fave. I have always felt strongly that true poetry is more than just beautiful words but emotion and this seems to have it
May 28th, 2026 04:33
Stan
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fun tail of alien encounter and transferred powers well written in rhyme it well could be a song.
May 27th, 2026 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fun tail of alien encounter and transferred powers well written in rhyme it well could be a song.
May 27th, 2026 16:38
Isaac
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind yer adolescents (yeh do) it is a warning I, at the other end of the lifecycle, could well listen to. My P C is addictive and much easier to become involved with than to get dressed and get out.
Well writ, Syd.
May 16th, 2026 19:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind yer adolescents (yeh do) it is a warning I, at the other end of the lifecycle, could well listen to. My P C is addictive and much easier to become involved with than to get dressed and get out.
Well writ, Syd.
May 16th, 2026 19:17
This Body
Teddy.15 said:
Awe, I know you will find the olive you need for your engine my dear Syd, I hope you are well my friend, just to cheer you up and please feel free to come back and look anytime, try being a a 51 year old gal with Memapause kicking in, everything aches all the wrong things grow and I\'m always really really angry even with babies in prams lol 🤣 see I bet you have a smile now!
May 5th, 2026 15:08
Teddy.15 said:
Awe, I know you will find the olive you need for your engine my dear Syd, I hope you are well my friend, just to cheer you up and please feel free to come back and look anytime, try being a a 51 year old gal with Memapause kicking in, everything aches all the wrong things grow and I\'m always really really angry even with babies in prams lol 🤣 see I bet you have a smile now!
May 5th, 2026 15:08
This Body
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem personifies the body as a machine, highlighting its aging, decay, and the artificial replacements that accompany it. Welcome to my world .❤️
May 5th, 2026 05:38
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem personifies the body as a machine, highlighting its aging, decay, and the artificial replacements that accompany it. Welcome to my world .❤️
May 5th, 2026 05:38
This Body
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you with arthritis kicking in, muscle shrinkage, energy loss, aches and pains, a general slowing down age takes its toll. Well written
May 5th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you with arthritis kicking in, muscle shrinkage, energy loss, aches and pains, a general slowing down age takes its toll. Well written
May 5th, 2026 04:10
Donkey
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve lived with or close too a few donkey\'s in my time in London. Ah what a wonderful character and what a lovely dedication
And with a lot of humour too. Fab write Syd
May 2nd, 2026 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve lived with or close too a few donkey\'s in my time in London. Ah what a wonderful character and what a lovely dedication
And with a lot of humour too. Fab write Syd
May 2nd, 2026 09:16
Skeleton
Thomas W Case said:
Raw, cosmic, and unflinching—this one grips the inevitability of death and spins it into stardust.
Your voice is intimate with mortality, gritty yet strangely tender, pulsing between decay and rebirth.
April 7th, 2026 07:51
Thomas W Case said:
Raw, cosmic, and unflinching—this one grips the inevitability of death and spins it into stardust.
Your voice is intimate with mortality, gritty yet strangely tender, pulsing between decay and rebirth.
April 7th, 2026 07:51
Skeleton
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of your best sets of lyrics. Love this! Love the thoughts inside and I too believe the end is not the end. Kudos great beat to this one. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 13:19
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of your best sets of lyrics. Love this! Love the thoughts inside and I too believe the end is not the end. Kudos great beat to this one. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 13:19
Skeleton
Abdullah123 said:
I don\'t know if I agree that our consciousness is \'reborn\' in the literal sense, but I do adore how this poem reframes death as a universal necessity by exulting it beyond just a personal loss or occurrence to a cosmic event. Great write
April 5th, 2026 13:04
Abdullah123 said:
I don\'t know if I agree that our consciousness is \'reborn\' in the literal sense, but I do adore how this poem reframes death as a universal necessity by exulting it beyond just a personal loss or occurrence to a cosmic event. Great write
April 5th, 2026 13:04
Skeleton
sorenbarrett said:
I have always seen death as an old friend a reliever of pain and a siren that sings softly. Reincarnation implied as the body decomposes. The soul liberated to be reborn. Nicely done.
April 5th, 2026 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
I have always seen death as an old friend a reliever of pain and a siren that sings softly. Reincarnation implied as the body decomposes. The soul liberated to be reborn. Nicely done.
April 5th, 2026 13:00
Skeleton
Cindy said:
I love this poem(or song)it deeply explores the topic of death. Nicely written!
April 5th, 2026 12:55
Cindy said:
I love this poem(or song)it deeply explores the topic of death. Nicely written!
April 5th, 2026 12:55
An Ode To Earworms
Thomas W Case said:
This is deliriously alive—a carnival inside your skull, where tiny earworm craftsmen hammer out rhythms that won’t quit.
I can practically hear the metronome swing and smell the honeycomb buzzing with manic, beautiful obsession.
March 29th, 2026 08:30
Thomas W Case said:
This is deliriously alive—a carnival inside your skull, where tiny earworm craftsmen hammer out rhythms that won’t quit.
I can practically hear the metronome swing and smell the honeycomb buzzing with manic, beautiful obsession.
March 29th, 2026 08:30
Mechanoids In March
Teddy.15 said:
Will it seep into their pupils
And crack them open
Like potholes in the road?
Wow Syd, your mind certainly does wander! Nothing wrong with that, makes you a very talented poet 🌹
March 25th, 2026 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
Will it seep into their pupils
And crack them open
Like potholes in the road?
Wow Syd, your mind certainly does wander! Nothing wrong with that, makes you a very talented poet 🌹
March 25th, 2026 09:16
Mechanoids In March
Doggerel Dave said:
Let it continue to wander, mate -that\'s where poetry comes from, I\'m told.
Syd, I\'m going to go out on a limb here - AI or even AGI should be the least of anyone\'s worries.......
March 24th, 2026 22:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Let it continue to wander, mate -that\'s where poetry comes from, I\'m told.
Syd, I\'m going to go out on a limb here - AI or even AGI should be the least of anyone\'s worries.......
March 24th, 2026 22:36
Mechanoids In March
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought yes machines will one day become conscious and the question is will they feel. A good write
March 24th, 2026 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought yes machines will one day become conscious and the question is will they feel. A good write
March 24th, 2026 07:39
An Ode To Earworms
sorenbarrett said:
Unusual in a good way. This poem speaks to an old term and uses it in a new way. Nicely worded
March 23rd, 2026 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Unusual in a good way. This poem speaks to an old term and uses it in a new way. Nicely worded
March 23rd, 2026 04:28
An Ode To Earworms
Doggerel Dave said:
I wish my earworms were as upbeat and melodic as that, Syd. What is your secret, extra sensitive receptors?
Muchly enjoyed.
PS: (preemptive strike) Am well: not quite ready to pop me clogs yet...!
March 23rd, 2026 04:08
Doggerel Dave said:
I wish my earworms were as upbeat and melodic as that, Syd. What is your secret, extra sensitive receptors?
Muchly enjoyed.
PS: (preemptive strike) Am well: not quite ready to pop me clogs yet...!
March 23rd, 2026 04:08
Fingertips
Doggerel Dave said:
Tess Parks lyrics
Dripping purple lilac
They are the purest
Smoothest
Angels kiss
Viscous velvet vocals
Melding gently
With Anton Newcombe’s
Swirling medley
Fuzzy leather of suede
Coupling silk
and velvet
Harmonic bliss
Softly
Tumbling
Topsy-turviness...
Worries gently eclipsed
Gravelly vocals winding
In an autumn wonderland drive
Asymmetrical symphonies unfold
Imperfect perfection thrives
In winter’s light
The air’s so still
The purest verse
Perched on her lips
The snow’s so white
The flakes so crisp
Falling through
Her fingertips
Imperfection blooms
In swirl and psych
Fractured photons
Caught in sight
A soul folded
Between song
and prayers
Bringing joyous
Tears to eyes
Hi Syd - If that is what you wrote, I\'ll go with it. Comes upon my page in wing bats or something (all incomprehensible symbols). Had trouble with Google translate... Ok - enough of that, I\'m off to find out what this lady is all about... maybe back later...
March 13th, 2026 15:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Tess Parks lyrics
Dripping purple lilac
They are the purest
Smoothest
Angels kiss
Viscous velvet vocals
Melding gently
With Anton Newcombe’s
Swirling medley
Fuzzy leather of suede
Coupling silk
and velvet
Harmonic bliss
Softly
Tumbling
Topsy-turviness...
Worries gently eclipsed
Gravelly vocals winding
In an autumn wonderland drive
Asymmetrical symphonies unfold
Imperfect perfection thrives
In winter’s light
The air’s so still
The purest verse
Perched on her lips
The snow’s so white
The flakes so crisp
Falling through
Her fingertips
Imperfection blooms
In swirl and psych
Fractured photons
Caught in sight
A soul folded
Between song
and prayers
Bringing joyous
Tears to eyes
Hi Syd - If that is what you wrote, I\'ll go with it. Comes upon my page in wing bats or something (all incomprehensible symbols). Had trouble with Google translate... Ok - enough of that, I\'m off to find out what this lady is all about... maybe back later...
March 13th, 2026 15:57
Fingertips
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images in this poem of a person who captures the image of modern day beauty. Nicely imaged
March 13th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images in this poem of a person who captures the image of modern day beauty. Nicely imaged
March 13th, 2026 11:35
Spine (90s Kids)
sorenbarrett said:
It only gets worse my parents children in the 1020\'s said it of my generation children in the 1950\'s that I said of my children when they were small in the 1980\'s and they say of my grandchildren just growing out of childhood now. Each generation has its problems and I hear you I would not want to be a child today.
March 6th, 2026 16:12
sorenbarrett said:
It only gets worse my parents children in the 1020\'s said it of my generation children in the 1950\'s that I said of my children when they were small in the 1980\'s and they say of my grandchildren just growing out of childhood now. Each generation has its problems and I hear you I would not want to be a child today.
March 6th, 2026 16:12
The Heckler (Explicit)
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for that, Syd – seen (from a distance and the further the better) a couple during the course of a long and chequered life.
Great write.
Not a bad ending really – he got chucked out. Unfortunately he has probably joined a fascist boys club by now.
But the ones I fear are the totally silent ones – those you never hear from until it is too late…
March 5th, 2026 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for that, Syd – seen (from a distance and the further the better) a couple during the course of a long and chequered life.
Great write.
Not a bad ending really – he got chucked out. Unfortunately he has probably joined a fascist boys club by now.
But the ones I fear are the totally silent ones – those you never hear from until it is too late…
March 5th, 2026 17:33
The Heckler (Explicit)
Demar Desu said:
i would love to hear this in music form
March 5th, 2026 16:39
Demar Desu said:
i would love to hear this in music form
March 5th, 2026 16:39
The Heckler (Explicit)
sorenbarrett said:
Most identifiable unfortunately all too common most being uneducated and of low intellect but some more dangerously being bright and educated as well as (highly religious) Well written
March 5th, 2026 16:11
sorenbarrett said:
Most identifiable unfortunately all too common most being uneducated and of low intellect but some more dangerously being bright and educated as well as (highly religious) Well written
March 5th, 2026 16:11
Contrast
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous dear Syd, ps write for you and don\'t worry what anyone else thinks as long as it comes from your heart, you will find your audience 💜
February 28th, 2026 18:10
Teddy.15 said:
Fabulous dear Syd, ps write for you and don\'t worry what anyone else thinks as long as it comes from your heart, you will find your audience 💜
February 28th, 2026 18:10
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