Comments received on poems by Syd



Love & Hate
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem that takes us on a journey from hate through anger and prejudice to love and peace it covers it all. Nicely done Syd

June 20th, 2026 12:57

DJ Dusty
Friendship said:

Nicely done

June 20th, 2026 09:45

DJ Dusty
Teddy.15 said:

A truly brilliant story in lyric your rhyming is smooth like butter, I bet this took a while to write, very clever and your lines got more and more eccentric which really gives the reader the juice, imagery kudos and Syd, an excellent piece. 🌹


June 19th, 2026 23:55

DJ Dusty
sorenbarrett said:

A DJ bugged by bugs. Well done

June 19th, 2026 20:02

Joe & Benny
Teddy.15 said:

A fabulous song with lyrics that are so real and Jo is a person not only have you brought him to life but reminds me of some I myself knew in London. 🌹

June 19th, 2026 12:22

Farage Doesn\'t Speak For Me
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

excellent write, you summed it up perfectly my friend

June 19th, 2026 02:26

Joe & Benny
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. You\'ve left my jaw hanging, floored at the outrageous twist of supposed \"fate.\" I cannot believe it. Thank you for sharing.

June 18th, 2026 20:54

Joe & Benny
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem regarding addiction and God. Well done

June 18th, 2026 19:12

Avalanche
sorenbarrett said:

This seems the cycle of life in this poem well written

June 9th, 2026 12:15

Digest
sorenbarrett said:

Reading has become a lost art. This poem reintroduces it as a love. Well done

June 8th, 2026 14:26

Digest
peto said:

Get well soon syd
Thoroughly enjoy your writing and topics
The 1st verse is particularly special
Excellent

June 8th, 2026 14:07

Ginger In Australia
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the song and lyrics. It seems hot.

June 7th, 2026 15:16

Ginger In Australia
Teddy.15 said:

I\'m sending this to Ed Sheeran 🤣 hilarious creative and actually the last stanza holds a very important message for the world, kudos Syd, some fabulous funny lines that made me chuckle, I\'ve got loads of ginger friends in the UK and I tell you they can certainly take the piss too, the comedy clubs in London in the 90\'s used the gingers for their opening jokes. Fabulous my friend lol 😂 and by the way not sure about Australia as the spiders can really bite... 🕷️

June 7th, 2026 15:06

Corporate Man
peto said:

I was hoping half way through he would get what he deserved
An epic syd
Superb

June 6th, 2026 17:47

Corporate Man
Teddy.15 said:

I was born poor and I never ever thought for one single minute that society or family owed me something, I am where I am today because my fingers and feet have bled to get me here and when I mean here is in a modest home and a job I really hate due to Bullies but I do it because I have to pay for my bread like everyone else apart from the royals and the politicians lol. Oh Syd sorry to turn this into me. 🤣 Love your work, this one is full of soul and sadly true of our reality. 🌹

June 6th, 2026 16:36

Corporate Man
sorenbarrett said:

A stark and all too real poem of relationships, values and payback. Well written in rhyme and good flow and a fave

June 6th, 2026 13:58

Corporate Man
Paul Bell said:

Yes, no health and money aint worth didly squat, except to others.
Some may say you reap what you sow, and so it seems.
Do taxmen go to heaven, I wonder.

June 6th, 2026 12:01

Farage Doesn\'t Speak For Me
Friendship said:

Well said

June 3rd, 2026 15:59

Farage Doesn\'t Speak For Me
Teddy.15 said:

Nigel Farage is a nasty racist using his mates money yes Trump to fuel the fires of hatred in the UK Brexit was a huge mistake but the voters should have done their homework better to see just what a man Farage is, he is a liar and a corrupt want-to-be politician who will never make it as long as the real British communities stick together. Ruining my beloved Uk. He is a disgusting appalling twat. 🌹 I\'ve seen the Henry Novak film, a tragedy to see a young innocent lad die because the police didn\'t do their job properly Henry will never get justice he deserves.

June 3rd, 2026 15:21

Farage Doesn\'t Speak For Me
sorenbarrett said:

A strong political statement that sends its message powerfully. Well done

June 3rd, 2026 15:20

Augmented
sorenbarrett said:

The plus\'s and negatives of medicine and its attempted cures. Very nicely written

May 30th, 2026 07:47

Manifest
Teddy.15 said:

And all the while there is an angel beside you. 💜

May 28th, 2026 07:55

Manifest
sorenbarrett said:

Although a bitter and sour concoction this poetic message is so well sent with rhyme and measure it deserves a fave. I have always felt strongly that true poetry is more than just beautiful words but emotion and this seems to have it

May 28th, 2026 04:33

Stan
sorenbarrett said:

This is a fun tail of alien encounter and transferred powers well written in rhyme it well could be a song.

May 27th, 2026 16:38

Isaac
Doggerel Dave said:

Never mind yer adolescents (yeh do) it is a warning I, at the other end of the lifecycle, could well listen to. My P C is addictive and much easier to become involved with than to get dressed and get out.
Well writ, Syd.

May 16th, 2026 19:17

Isaac
sorenbarrett said:

Well written and nicely composed

May 16th, 2026 13:11

This Body
Teddy.15 said:

Awe, I know you will find the olive you need for your engine my dear Syd, I hope you are well my friend, just to cheer you up and please feel free to come back and look anytime, try being a a 51 year old gal with Memapause kicking in, everything aches all the wrong things grow and I\'m always really really angry even with babies in prams lol 🤣 see I bet you have a smile now!

May 5th, 2026 15:08

This Body
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem personifies the body as a machine, highlighting its aging, decay, and the artificial replacements that accompany it. Welcome to my world .❤️

May 5th, 2026 05:38

This Body
sorenbarrett said:

I feel you with arthritis kicking in, muscle shrinkage, energy loss, aches and pains, a general slowing down age takes its toll. Well written

May 5th, 2026 04:10

Donkey
sorenbarrett said:

A great song and fun read. Well done

May 2nd, 2026 12:43

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