Comments received on poems by Syd
Adrift
Syd said:
Thank you Maxine. I was addicted to anti anxiety medication for ten years. The withdrawal symptoms were terrible. I\'m finally free from them now though.
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
- Syd
November 27th, 2023 03:17
Syd said:
Thank you Maxine. I was addicted to anti anxiety medication for ten years. The withdrawal symptoms were terrible. I\'m finally free from them now though.
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
- Syd
November 27th, 2023 03:17
Surfing
Doggerel Dave said:
The loss - it still tickles the edge of the memory, though in no coherent form....
Intervene early and slap them up here. Do try please.
Good to see you once more, Syd.
November 24th, 2023 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
The loss - it still tickles the edge of the memory, though in no coherent form....
Intervene early and slap them up here. Do try please.
Good to see you once more, Syd.
November 24th, 2023 18:14
Adrift
Doggerel Dave said:
Still at it, Syd? You must know what you are doing to have survived so long when many don\'t....
March 12th, 2023 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Still at it, Syd? You must know what you are doing to have survived so long when many don\'t....
March 12th, 2023 18:17
Into The Fumes
Syd said:
Yes, I was diagnosed with an inflamed liver at the time. I have since recovered.
- Syd
March 12th, 2023 08:11
Syd said:
Yes, I was diagnosed with an inflamed liver at the time. I have since recovered.
- Syd
March 12th, 2023 08:11
Licking Razor Blades
2781 said:
After the thrill we are left with a nightmare.
March 11th, 2023 21:29
2781 said:
After the thrill we are left with a nightmare.
March 11th, 2023 21:29
Proud Of My Poverty
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to see you back, Syd.
While I can be proud of my working class roots (London\'s East End, before it became trendy), I cannot vote for anything which glorifies poverty...... (I\'m pretty sure that is not what you meant, but that\'s the word I\'m gnawing away at right now).
March 11th, 2023 18:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Great to see you back, Syd.
While I can be proud of my working class roots (London\'s East End, before it became trendy), I cannot vote for anything which glorifies poverty...... (I\'m pretty sure that is not what you meant, but that\'s the word I\'m gnawing away at right now).
March 11th, 2023 18:53
Slug Trap
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah sounds cruel if they do that to cats and slugs unless the slugs are real pests. The ones I have encountered did very little harm . And then your rant on the media is fantastic as well, a sarcastic verse against know it all governments who are only human and make grave mistakes many times. Kudos.
Plz pleez don\'t forget to read and comment my newest poem too.
November 10th, 2020 05:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah sounds cruel if they do that to cats and slugs unless the slugs are real pests. The ones I have encountered did very little harm . And then your rant on the media is fantastic as well, a sarcastic verse against know it all governments who are only human and make grave mistakes many times. Kudos.
Plz pleez don\'t forget to read and comment my newest poem too.
November 10th, 2020 05:03
Slug Trap
orchidee said:
I\'m a bit uncultured. I might not be a Qanon anti vaxer, if I knew what it was! heehee.
November 10th, 2020 03:03
orchidee said:
I\'m a bit uncultured. I might not be a Qanon anti vaxer, if I knew what it was! heehee.
November 10th, 2020 03:03
Ashtray
MelissaJA said:
Strong imagery here. \"crumpled cigarettes smouldering with anger\" -such a good descriptive line
August 27th, 2020 23:52
MelissaJA said:
Strong imagery here. \"crumpled cigarettes smouldering with anger\" -such a good descriptive line
August 27th, 2020 23:52
Licking Razor Blades
Vanz said:
I connect with this in ways i didn\'t expect. I suppose it is a bit like crimson salt...
August 24th, 2020 21:39
Vanz said:
I connect with this in ways i didn\'t expect. I suppose it is a bit like crimson salt...
August 24th, 2020 21:39
Licking Razor Blades
L. B. Mek said:
you have an instinctive talent for seamless rhythm,
though bleak in tone, their is real purpose and message to unearth for those willing to dig beyond the shock-value aesthetics,
you have showcased a glimpse at a very contemplative and empathetic Poet,
August 24th, 2020 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
you have an instinctive talent for seamless rhythm,
though bleak in tone, their is real purpose and message to unearth for those willing to dig beyond the shock-value aesthetics,
you have showcased a glimpse at a very contemplative and empathetic Poet,
August 24th, 2020 04:59
Licking Razor Blades
orchidee said:
Oohh, I don\'t fancy licking them. I\'ll stay with using them for shaving only!
\'Crimson salt\' has me hiding behind the sofa shuddering at the thought.
August 24th, 2020 01:58
orchidee said:
Oohh, I don\'t fancy licking them. I\'ll stay with using them for shaving only!
\'Crimson salt\' has me hiding behind the sofa shuddering at the thought.
August 24th, 2020 01:58
Licking Razor Blades
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening Sid - Thanks for a very intriguing Poem. Loved the PIC we dont use that type of blade anymore we use three small blades embeded in Plastic @r 50 x the cost. The old type were very useful ! One of my Party Tricks used to be chewing Razor Blades & I never cut my mouth ! I agree with your premise - we do spend too much time trying to reconnect with the past ! However to live *WE must seize the Present* and move on ! Thanks for sharing - please check our site - Thanks
Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛
August 23rd, 2020 15:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Brian here ~ Good Evening Sid - Thanks for a very intriguing Poem. Loved the PIC we dont use that type of blade anymore we use three small blades embeded in Plastic @r 50 x the cost. The old type were very useful ! One of my Party Tricks used to be chewing Razor Blades & I never cut my mouth ! I agree with your premise - we do spend too much time trying to reconnect with the past ! However to live *WE must seize the Present* and move on ! Thanks for sharing - please check our site - Thanks
Love - Peace - Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛
August 23rd, 2020 15:55
Liberty Cap
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah extraordinary amazing poem wow! I ESP admired how you rhymed in the forage porridge stanza. Oatmeal porridge is my breakfast. Kudos.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 4th, 2019 09:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah extraordinary amazing poem wow! I ESP admired how you rhymed in the forage porridge stanza. Oatmeal porridge is my breakfast. Kudos.
Pls pleez do review /comment my newest poem too.
December 4th, 2019 09:27
Into The Fumes
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Very descriptive poem that completely captures the reader\'s emotions.
It is so refreshing to read poetry that doesn\'t include hackneyed language. :-)
September 19th, 2019 16:01
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Very descriptive poem that completely captures the reader\'s emotions.
It is so refreshing to read poetry that doesn\'t include hackneyed language. :-)
September 19th, 2019 16:01
Heavy Vinyl
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'needles kiss\' is thrilling as it sets the music to your soul.
February 18th, 2019 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That \'needles kiss\' is thrilling as it sets the music to your soul.
February 18th, 2019 01:01
Heavy Vinyl
orchidee said:
A fine write Syd. Well, I only asked for a DVD tape in a shop, and they looked at me as if I was mad - or 5 million years old! lol.
They\'re not THAT old. They should get their finger out, and get some tapes in!
February 17th, 2019 08:44
orchidee said:
A fine write Syd. Well, I only asked for a DVD tape in a shop, and they looked at me as if I was mad - or 5 million years old! lol.
They\'re not THAT old. They should get their finger out, and get some tapes in!
February 17th, 2019 08:44
Frozen
Joanna Garrido said:
Read one of your poems in return. Nice write. Lovely imagery
February 9th, 2019 10:06
Joanna Garrido said:
Read one of your poems in return. Nice write. Lovely imagery
February 9th, 2019 10:06
Frozen
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present need to keep warm in this winter\'s big freeze
February 3rd, 2019 10:39
Fay Slimm. said:
First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present need to keep warm in this winter\'s big freeze
February 3rd, 2019 10:39
Carbon Dust
sylviasearcher said:
Forgetting what our grey matter
Is conditioned
And concerned about
Humankind is broken.
😪
Yet there could be hope?
Unlearn the toxic vision
Words like these may unteach us 🤗
January 13th, 2019 12:36
sylviasearcher said:
Forgetting what our grey matter
Is conditioned
And concerned about
Humankind is broken.
😪
Yet there could be hope?
Unlearn the toxic vision
Words like these may unteach us 🤗
January 13th, 2019 12:36
Carbon Dust
orchidee said:
Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire instead of coal, cos I had run out of coal. Couldn\'t see the harm in it, until me friend returned! lol.
January 13th, 2019 10:40
orchidee said:
Or shiny coal? I lost the plot. I put a friend\'s diamonds on me fire instead of coal, cos I had run out of coal. Couldn\'t see the harm in it, until me friend returned! lol.
January 13th, 2019 10:40
A Simple Tribute
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:58
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww such awesome muse, brilliant word choice and your muse gathered well, from forgotten pages it seems. This is one of your most creative masterpieces I must say. It really leaves my poetic heart in awe. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:58
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