Comments received on poems by Syd



The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

I once considered Valium when i was having having anxiety over a sick child. Glad Glad. i. didn\'t take it,, tried spiritual invocation instead.
Your poem is fabulous but i hope you not really yearning for this side effects med for innsomnia. Kudos for entertaining entertaining poem.

October 17th, 2026 16:31

The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
Tristan Robert Lange said:

As someone sober from alcohol, Syd, I felt uncomfortable recognition in that first part. Especially having such a ready answer for anyone who might question it. Much respect to you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 17th, 2026 14:34

The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
Teddy.15 said:

Did you just open the pandora box of the 70\'s

My girlfriend would be jealous if she knew my true feelings for you

That\'s such a simple yet powerful metaphor for someone addicted

Kudos my dear friend, I\'ve seen what drugs do to people in my home town in London I always had compassion for them, your poem is of an excellent discussion. Last words, just shows pure strength 🌹

October 17th, 2026 09:27

The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
sorenbarrett said:

Valium, Xanax, Lorazepam you name it a drug made for modern society no longer afraid of wild beasts just the wolf at the door, and a bear market. A sad but good write.

October 17th, 2026 07:43

Playlist
Teddy.15 said:

This makes me remember my big sister in the very early 90\'s with those acid pills and music. What a fabulous song, I nearly missed this because I was busy this weekend.so.glad I didn\'t 🌹

October 13th, 2026 13:26

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Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t think I liked this, Syd... bought back too many memories of my life (thankfully long past) of my life as a wage slave....😜
Would have left a comment on your Utube page, but not sure how to go about it ...
All came together nicely on the vid.

October 12th, 2026 16:14

Playlist
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. Great flow.

October 11th, 2026 08:39

Playlist
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Syd, get this recorded and I’ll turn it up…though I’m keeping a safe distance from Barry’s boots. I’ve survived the workweek; I’d like to survive the dance floor too! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

October 10th, 2026 22:25

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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A fantastic lyrical poem on music addiction, the refrains are excellently poetic too wow. Music is artificial but once addicted its hard to let go off it. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too


October 10th, 2026 15:35

Playlist
sorenbarrett said:

Music as weekend therapy for a mundane life. Nicely written again in song form. Good one Syd

October 10th, 2026 08:42

Whack-a-Mole
NafisaSB said:

Well at least you still make resolutions. I stopped as life tends to follow its own course whatever you want or choose doesn’t always happen

October 2nd, 2026 01:40

Whack-a-Mole
Thomas W Case said:

Vivid and sharp. Powerful work.

September 27th, 2026 09:32

Whack-a-Mole
Teddy.15 said:

What a wonderful poem, here, here to all of this, I can\'t find a favourite line they are all super brilliant and very relatable. Bravo my dear friend Syd a fantastic piece of poetry. 🌹

September 26th, 2026 02:34

Whack-a-Mole
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Syd, this made me laugh and wince at the same time. Life really can feel like one freaking warning light after another. Loved this my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 25th, 2026 22:23

Whack-a-Mole
Doggerel Dave said:

Beyond recognition of an old banger I once owned, I’ll leave deeper interpretation to any metaphor maniacs 😂who may be watching. Rich in horrible detail, Syd; thanks for the memory; glad it is just that now.


September 25th, 2026 17:01

Whack-a-Mole
sorenbarrett said:

A flood of metaphors makes a collage of meaning in this poem. Nicely worked it carries a surreal feel.

September 25th, 2026 14:14

Whack-a-Mole
maydanae said:

So abstract, yet filled with clarity, love the word choice! Thanks for sharing

September 25th, 2026 13:49

AI Spy
Tristan Robert Lange said:

First, great tile! And yes, 💯free-range festering manure wins over factory-produced perfection every damn time, Syd. I’m not against the appropriate use of AI any more than I would have been against Gutenberg’s printing press. But when someone is using AI to shortcut creativity, I do have to ask why. I also don’t trust AI’s ability to determine human writing from its own. My poem today touches on why! 🤣 🤦‍♂️ Well, all that is neither here nor there. Brilliant rant, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 22nd, 2026 22:21

AI Spy
Doggerel Dave said:

Nice rant, Syd.
I hope it raises awareness in some of the practitioners and act as a warning.
Not quite sure what the copy and paste does though. I would be pleased to add another piece of artillery to my armoury.
I\'ve actually called a \'poet\' out, though it made not one whit of difference to anyone\'s reaponses here.

September 22nd, 2026 18:11

AI Spy
sorenbarrett said:

As long as it is advertised as AI and not put out as someone\'s work I am okay with it but fail to see the point in that it attempts to put emotion into a write where the author has none. Well written

September 22nd, 2026 13:03

Dark Blue
NafisaSB said:

It’s good to know it’s a thing of the past👍

September 22nd, 2026 06:37

Fearful Of Our Future - Song
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Syd, I’m over here across the pond, but I recognize that weird feeling of watching the familiar change around you and not knowing where any of it is headed. A fantastic song and read, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 19th, 2026 15:07

Fearful Of Our Future - Song
sorenbarrett said:

A great song of what a mess we are in. A pub song it sounds like.

September 19th, 2026 14:28

Spare A Thought
Paul Bell said:

I don\'t know what went wrong with the 80s, the music was shit, the decade just seemed to produce nothing.
Probably get vilified for that, but that\'s how I remember it.
Wonder if there were more divorces in the 80s.

September 8th, 2026 13:03

Spare A Thought
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Terrific write, Syd! I love how this travels through changing cultures with humor while still acknowledging the wreckage left behind. The eighties jab especially got me 😂...I was never much of a fan either. Really enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

September 8th, 2026 08:44

Spare A Thought
Doggerel Dave said:

Ah (sob) the sixties and seventies gone... The eighties from your vantage point did not impinge - for me it was a time of struggle, an attempt to attain some stability (more or less achieved). As for the rest...
A really neat quick framework which makes me wonder what I was at sometimes...

Great Syd, Thanks.

September 7th, 2026 22:45

Spare A Thought
Cheeky Missy said:

You too, eh? I swear, I was so grateful once 1990 rolled around, thankful the \'80\'s were finally OVER. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. And since fashion brought back the ghastly \'80\'s styles you can suffer a double take as the trendy souls go about sans the attitudes of that era, but in the hairstyles and garments.

September 7th, 2026 21:21

Spare A Thought
sorenbarrett said:

A eulogy to the passing of ages and of generations. Nicely done

September 7th, 2026 15:49

Soul Teacher
NafisaSB said:

beautifully written, enjoyed it...

September 4th, 2026 02:34

Man / Machine
Doggerel Dave said:

2018 - a year of enlightenment or despair, Syd?
For me it is someone who has learnt the songs , sings them in response to any circumstance or event...
Nice one, mate

September 3rd, 2026 17:39

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