Comments received on poems by Syd
Toxic
NafisaSB said:
Such people do deserve the severest punishment though sometimes they manage to evade it
July 21st, 2026 06:59
NafisaSB said:
Such people do deserve the severest punishment though sometimes they manage to evade it
July 21st, 2026 06:59
Toxic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The images of decay and predation really caught me, Syd. They perfectly capture how this poisonous ideology consumes insecurity and converts it into hatred. Savage write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The images of decay and predation really caught me, Syd. They perfectly capture how this poisonous ideology consumes insecurity and converts it into hatred. Savage write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 20th, 2026 08:12
Toxic
Doggerel Dave said:
Plenty of Tates and Andrews in this world I\'m afraid, many of whom hide their bigotry etc in all manner of ways and justifications....the sub humans who follow them, just for starters.
Worthwhile write Syd, at the time of their arrest and disgrace even if it does leave me somewhat nauseous.
July 19th, 2026 15:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Plenty of Tates and Andrews in this world I\'m afraid, many of whom hide their bigotry etc in all manner of ways and justifications....the sub humans who follow them, just for starters.
Worthwhile write Syd, at the time of their arrest and disgrace even if it does leave me somewhat nauseous.
July 19th, 2026 15:41
Kev\'s Bong
peto said:
Beautiful tribute syd
Can\'t beat real
That 2nd verse was how i\'d feel had I had a toke on that bong
I enjoyed the yts line also
RIP kev
Ta for the memories syd
July 19th, 2026 13:51
peto said:
Beautiful tribute syd
Can\'t beat real
That 2nd verse was how i\'d feel had I had a toke on that bong
I enjoyed the yts line also
RIP kev
Ta for the memories syd
July 19th, 2026 13:51
Toxic
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revenge on people I choose to isolate myself from. Well done
July 19th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revenge on people I choose to isolate myself from. Well done
July 19th, 2026 07:54
Toxic
Teddy.15 said:
I was literally thinking of these two when I was reading, yes seems they may have come to take what is coming to them, caught In Miami I believe. We certainly need less of these evil souls in the world. A great write I felt every line. 🌹
July 19th, 2026 07:48
Teddy.15 said:
I was literally thinking of these two when I was reading, yes seems they may have come to take what is coming to them, caught In Miami I believe. We certainly need less of these evil souls in the world. A great write I felt every line. 🌹
July 19th, 2026 07:48
Kev\'s Bong
Teddy.15 said:
My deepest condolences to you dear Syd, I\'ve lost two loved ones myself this year, due to cancer. As for Kev Some souls just weren\'t meant to be in this world. A beautiful poem. 🌹
July 18th, 2026 15:38
Teddy.15 said:
My deepest condolences to you dear Syd, I\'ve lost two loved ones myself this year, due to cancer. As for Kev Some souls just weren\'t meant to be in this world. A beautiful poem. 🌹
July 18th, 2026 15:38
Kev\'s Bong
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartbreaking tribute, Syd. You remember Kev through something imperfect, funny, and unmistakably his...then let that warmth stand beside the horror of losing him. The result feels honest because grief and laughter remain together. I’m truly sorry for your loss, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartbreaking tribute, Syd. You remember Kev through something imperfect, funny, and unmistakably his...then let that warmth stand beside the horror of losing him. The result feels honest because grief and laughter remain together. I’m truly sorry for your loss, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:39
Kev\'s Bong
sorenbarrett said:
A sad tribute to a strange fellow. It is these people that leave holes in our past that are filled with nostalgia. Well done
July 18th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
A sad tribute to a strange fellow. It is these people that leave holes in our past that are filled with nostalgia. Well done
July 18th, 2026 06:57
Contrast
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really struck me. I love how the entire piece embraces tension instead of trying to resolve it. It reminds us that beauty, pain, joy, and loss all give shape to one another. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really struck me. I love how the entire piece embraces tension instead of trying to resolve it. It reminds us that beauty, pain, joy, and loss all give shape to one another. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Contrast
sorenbarrett said:
This poem/song is full of the positives and negatives of life the balance that is necessary to enjoy the good. Well done.
July 9th, 2026 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem/song is full of the positives and negatives of life the balance that is necessary to enjoy the good. Well done.
July 9th, 2026 13:10
Proud Of Our Poverty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this stirred up so much for me…the shared bath times, the streetlights as a clock, that particular brand of scrappy childhood that felt hard in the moment but somehow shaped you for the better. You captured that so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this stirred up so much for me…the shared bath times, the streetlights as a clock, that particular brand of scrappy childhood that felt hard in the moment but somehow shaped you for the better. You captured that so well. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 8th, 2026 19:12
Proud Of Our Poverty
Teddy.15 said:
My dad grew up in a house like that in Yorkshire. Reminds me of my holidays up north. 🌹
July 8th, 2026 07:52
Teddy.15 said:
My dad grew up in a house like that in Yorkshire. Reminds me of my holidays up north. 🌹
July 8th, 2026 07:52
Proud Of Our Poverty
Doggerel Dave said:
Your images, claimed to be AI generated, felt real for me and enough commonality with the deep south (London’s East End) for me to relate, Syd.
The lines
“We\'re proud to have memories
Proud of our people\'s sovereignty
Proud of our upbringing
Proud of our poverty!”
are as succinct an example of false consciousness as anyone could provide and what keeps those folks where they are.
Great stuff.
July 7th, 2026 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Your images, claimed to be AI generated, felt real for me and enough commonality with the deep south (London’s East End) for me to relate, Syd.
The lines
“We\'re proud to have memories
Proud of our people\'s sovereignty
Proud of our upbringing
Proud of our poverty!”
are as succinct an example of false consciousness as anyone could provide and what keeps those folks where they are.
Great stuff.
July 7th, 2026 19:32
Proud Of Our Poverty
Paul Bell said:
It is strange that through hardship, poverty, certainly few luxuries, there were few suicides.
Roll on today, mental health is through the roof, suicide is daily.
It seems the more you have, the less you actually have.
July 7th, 2026 13:35
Paul Bell said:
It is strange that through hardship, poverty, certainly few luxuries, there were few suicides.
Roll on today, mental health is through the roof, suicide is daily.
It seems the more you have, the less you actually have.
July 7th, 2026 13:35
Proud Of Our Poverty
sorenbarrett said:
This well could be a song in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
This well could be a song in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 13:13
Pound of Flesh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really hit me hard. There\'s something beautifully vulnerable about this...the joy of creating standing right beside the risk of sharing it. That balance feels incredibly honest. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 14:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really hit me hard. There\'s something beautifully vulnerable about this...the joy of creating standing right beside the risk of sharing it. That balance feels incredibly honest. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 6th, 2026 14:49
Pound of Flesh
Paul Bell said:
Always think, there\'s criticism, and there\'s criticism. Most poets put their heart and soul into their work, and if their poem doesn\'t resonate with you, find one that does, but don\'t slate poets work for being brave enough to put it out there.
Like the pound of flesh analogy.
July 6th, 2026 13:30
Paul Bell said:
Always think, there\'s criticism, and there\'s criticism. Most poets put their heart and soul into their work, and if their poem doesn\'t resonate with you, find one that does, but don\'t slate poets work for being brave enough to put it out there.
Like the pound of flesh analogy.
July 6th, 2026 13:30
Psilocybin Stride
NafisaSB said:
A siren so seductive that she will seep in you stealthily and steadily. A good write ✌️
July 6th, 2026 11:52
NafisaSB said:
A siren so seductive that she will seep in you stealthily and steadily. A good write ✌️
July 6th, 2026 11:52
Pound of Flesh
Doggerel Dave said:
It can be an issue, Syd.
It is the poet’s choice to bring their ‘Raw emotions and the pain’ to a space such as this. They need to be responsible for their own health.
As a side issue, I have taken a contributor’s position seriously and with the best empathy I can rustle up, only to find their agony was an imaginative creation.
We are in the middle of a poetic jungle here.
July 5th, 2026 23:26
Doggerel Dave said:
It can be an issue, Syd.
It is the poet’s choice to bring their ‘Raw emotions and the pain’ to a space such as this. They need to be responsible for their own health.
As a side issue, I have taken a contributor’s position seriously and with the best empathy I can rustle up, only to find their agony was an imaginative creation.
We are in the middle of a poetic jungle here.
July 5th, 2026 23:26
Pound of Flesh
peto said:
Brilliant syd
I love the line with works and needles
Gave me my fix for the day
Many addicts call the needles their works
Superb
July 5th, 2026 22:15
peto said:
Brilliant syd
I love the line with works and needles
Gave me my fix for the day
Many addicts call the needles their works
Superb
July 5th, 2026 22:15
Pound of Flesh
sorenbarrett said:
A great title reminiscent of Shylock in the Merchant of Venice. Well written
July 5th, 2026 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
A great title reminiscent of Shylock in the Merchant of Venice. Well written
July 5th, 2026 17:01
Psilocybin Stride
Teddy.15 said:
I like her she is a woman to reckon she with. 🌹
July 3rd, 2026 17:36
Teddy.15 said:
I like her she is a woman to reckon she with. 🌹
July 3rd, 2026 17:36
Psilocybin Stride
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, I absolutely loved this. It captures both the wonder and the unpredictability of psilocybin in a way that feels mythical rather than merely descriptive. The chorus especially stayed with me. I also love how you personify psilocybin as a feminine, almost mythic presence...beautiful, alluring, nurturing, and completely unwilling to tolerate arrogance. I couldn\'t agree more. Fantastic song, my friend. 🍄🌈🖤🙏
July 3rd, 2026 09:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, I absolutely loved this. It captures both the wonder and the unpredictability of psilocybin in a way that feels mythical rather than merely descriptive. The chorus especially stayed with me. I also love how you personify psilocybin as a feminine, almost mythic presence...beautiful, alluring, nurturing, and completely unwilling to tolerate arrogance. I couldn\'t agree more. Fantastic song, my friend. 🍄🌈🖤🙏
July 3rd, 2026 09:04
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