Comments received on poems by Syd
The Fifth Floor
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Sid,
Every cell a horror story, each verse deeper and deeper into the savagery and carnage of the insane. The poem it self, perfect rhyming, meter and the theme composed with deftnes and skill. Well done indeed.
All the best,
Tony.
October 30th, 2026 17:23
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Sid,
Every cell a horror story, each verse deeper and deeper into the savagery and carnage of the insane. The poem it self, perfect rhyming, meter and the theme composed with deftnes and skill. Well done indeed.
All the best,
Tony.
October 30th, 2026 17:23
The Fifth Floor
Teddy.15 said:
Fascinating read, such imagery I used to live near the south western hospital which was for the \"nut cake\" when I was a kid. In the 70\'s/80\'s I us d to see all sorts on the streets. 🌹
October 30th, 2026 16:21
Teddy.15 said:
Fascinating read, such imagery I used to live near the south western hospital which was for the \"nut cake\" when I was a kid. In the 70\'s/80\'s I us d to see all sorts on the streets. 🌹
October 30th, 2026 16:21
The Fifth Floor
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, I was ready to follow that trolley right down the hall… I’d like to withdraw my application for the night shift. 🤣 Excellent, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 30th, 2026 12:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, I was ready to follow that trolley right down the hall… I’d like to withdraw my application for the night shift. 🤣 Excellent, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 30th, 2026 12:00
The Fifth Floor
sorenbarrett said:
I remember visiting Atascadero state hospital for the criminally insane in California and although I worked in the prison this place was creepier and darker. Nicely written for this season of the year. Well done
October 30th, 2026 11:30
sorenbarrett said:
I remember visiting Atascadero state hospital for the criminally insane in California and although I worked in the prison this place was creepier and darker. Nicely written for this season of the year. Well done
October 30th, 2026 11:30
Press Studs
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Syd! As someone who came of age in the nineties, I can certainly appreciate the cultural time machine you\'ve constructed! LOL! It\'s amazing how a few familiar references can bring back an entire chapter of life. Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2026 05:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah, Syd! As someone who came of age in the nineties, I can certainly appreciate the cultural time machine you\'ve constructed! LOL! It\'s amazing how a few familiar references can bring back an entire chapter of life. Much appreciated, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2026 05:41
Press Studs
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought all the memories of my childhood, and more, a wonderful song full of nostalgia, love this one a fabulous beat and wonderful rhyme, fabulous. Love the last lines too here you have a beginning a middle and an ending kudos my dear friend. 🇬🇧 ❤️
October 29th, 2026 02:51
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought all the memories of my childhood, and more, a wonderful song full of nostalgia, love this one a fabulous beat and wonderful rhyme, fabulous. Love the last lines too here you have a beginning a middle and an ending kudos my dear friend. 🇬🇧 ❤️
October 29th, 2026 02:51
Press Studs
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant notes on an era in song, Syd. 90’s plus, you say? Thought it was more likely the 80s until you applied the correction. But who am I? I’m stuck, at least mentally, in the 60s and 70s, so…
October 28th, 2026 15:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant notes on an era in song, Syd. 90’s plus, you say? Thought it was more likely the 80s until you applied the correction. But who am I? I’m stuck, at least mentally, in the 60s and 70s, so…
October 28th, 2026 15:54
The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I once considered Valium when i was having having anxiety over a sick child. Glad Glad. i. didn\'t take it,, tried spiritual invocation instead.
Your poem is fabulous but i hope you not really yearning for this side effects med for innsomnia. Kudos for entertaining entertaining poem.
October 17th, 2026 16:31
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I once considered Valium when i was having having anxiety over a sick child. Glad Glad. i. didn\'t take it,, tried spiritual invocation instead.
Your poem is fabulous but i hope you not really yearning for this side effects med for innsomnia. Kudos for entertaining entertaining poem.
October 17th, 2026 16:31
The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone sober from alcohol, Syd, I felt uncomfortable recognition in that first part. Especially having such a ready answer for anyone who might question it. Much respect to you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2026 14:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
As someone sober from alcohol, Syd, I felt uncomfortable recognition in that first part. Especially having such a ready answer for anyone who might question it. Much respect to you. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2026 14:34
The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
Teddy.15 said:
Did you just open the pandora box of the 70\'s
My girlfriend would be jealous if she knew my true feelings for you
That\'s such a simple yet powerful metaphor for someone addicted
Kudos my dear friend, I\'ve seen what drugs do to people in my home town in London I always had compassion for them, your poem is of an excellent discussion. Last words, just shows pure strength 🌹
October 17th, 2026 09:27
Teddy.15 said:
Did you just open the pandora box of the 70\'s
My girlfriend would be jealous if she knew my true feelings for you
That\'s such a simple yet powerful metaphor for someone addicted
Kudos my dear friend, I\'ve seen what drugs do to people in my home town in London I always had compassion for them, your poem is of an excellent discussion. Last words, just shows pure strength 🌹
October 17th, 2026 09:27
The Beautiful Pharmaceutical - The complete saga 2008 - 2026
sorenbarrett said:
Valium, Xanax, Lorazepam you name it a drug made for modern society no longer afraid of wild beasts just the wolf at the door, and a bear market. A sad but good write.
October 17th, 2026 07:43
sorenbarrett said:
Valium, Xanax, Lorazepam you name it a drug made for modern society no longer afraid of wild beasts just the wolf at the door, and a bear market. A sad but good write.
October 17th, 2026 07:43
Playlist
Teddy.15 said:
This makes me remember my big sister in the very early 90\'s with those acid pills and music. What a fabulous song, I nearly missed this because I was busy this weekend.so.glad I didn\'t 🌹
October 13th, 2026 13:26
Teddy.15 said:
This makes me remember my big sister in the very early 90\'s with those acid pills and music. What a fabulous song, I nearly missed this because I was busy this weekend.so.glad I didn\'t 🌹
October 13th, 2026 13:26
Playlist
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t think I liked this, Syd... bought back too many memories of my life (thankfully long past) of my life as a wage slave....😜
Would have left a comment on your Utube page, but not sure how to go about it ...
All came together nicely on the vid.
October 12th, 2026 16:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t think I liked this, Syd... bought back too many memories of my life (thankfully long past) of my life as a wage slave....😜
Would have left a comment on your Utube page, but not sure how to go about it ...
All came together nicely on the vid.
October 12th, 2026 16:14
Playlist
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, get this recorded and I’ll turn it up…though I’m keeping a safe distance from Barry’s boots. I’ve survived the workweek; I’d like to survive the dance floor too! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, get this recorded and I’ll turn it up…though I’m keeping a safe distance from Barry’s boots. I’ve survived the workweek; I’d like to survive the dance floor too! LOL! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 10th, 2026 22:25
Playlist
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fantastic lyrical poem on music addiction, the refrains are excellently poetic too wow. Music is artificial but once addicted its hard to let go off it. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
October 10th, 2026 15:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fantastic lyrical poem on music addiction, the refrains are excellently poetic too wow. Music is artificial but once addicted its hard to let go off it. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
October 10th, 2026 15:35
Playlist
sorenbarrett said:
Music as weekend therapy for a mundane life. Nicely written again in song form. Good one Syd
October 10th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Music as weekend therapy for a mundane life. Nicely written again in song form. Good one Syd
October 10th, 2026 08:42
Whack-a-Mole
NafisaSB said:
Well at least you still make resolutions. I stopped as life tends to follow its own course whatever you want or choose doesn’t always happen
October 2nd, 2026 01:40
NafisaSB said:
Well at least you still make resolutions. I stopped as life tends to follow its own course whatever you want or choose doesn’t always happen
October 2nd, 2026 01:40
Whack-a-Mole
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful poem, here, here to all of this, I can\'t find a favourite line they are all super brilliant and very relatable. Bravo my dear friend Syd a fantastic piece of poetry. 🌹
September 26th, 2026 02:34
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful poem, here, here to all of this, I can\'t find a favourite line they are all super brilliant and very relatable. Bravo my dear friend Syd a fantastic piece of poetry. 🌹
September 26th, 2026 02:34
Whack-a-Mole
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this made me laugh and wince at the same time. Life really can feel like one freaking warning light after another. Loved this my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this made me laugh and wince at the same time. Life really can feel like one freaking warning light after another. Loved this my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 25th, 2026 22:23
Whack-a-Mole
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond recognition of an old banger I once owned, I’ll leave deeper interpretation to any metaphor maniacs 😂who may be watching. Rich in horrible detail, Syd; thanks for the memory; glad it is just that now.
September 25th, 2026 17:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Beyond recognition of an old banger I once owned, I’ll leave deeper interpretation to any metaphor maniacs 😂who may be watching. Rich in horrible detail, Syd; thanks for the memory; glad it is just that now.
September 25th, 2026 17:01
Whack-a-Mole
sorenbarrett said:
A flood of metaphors makes a collage of meaning in this poem. Nicely worked it carries a surreal feel.
September 25th, 2026 14:14
sorenbarrett said:
A flood of metaphors makes a collage of meaning in this poem. Nicely worked it carries a surreal feel.
September 25th, 2026 14:14
Whack-a-Mole
maydanae said:
So abstract, yet filled with clarity, love the word choice! Thanks for sharing
September 25th, 2026 13:49
maydanae said:
So abstract, yet filled with clarity, love the word choice! Thanks for sharing
September 25th, 2026 13:49
AI Spy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, great tile! And yes, 💯free-range festering manure wins over factory-produced perfection every damn time, Syd. I’m not against the appropriate use of AI any more than I would have been against Gutenberg’s printing press. But when someone is using AI to shortcut creativity, I do have to ask why. I also don’t trust AI’s ability to determine human writing from its own. My poem today touches on why! 🤣 🤦♂️ Well, all that is neither here nor there. Brilliant rant, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First, great tile! And yes, 💯free-range festering manure wins over factory-produced perfection every damn time, Syd. I’m not against the appropriate use of AI any more than I would have been against Gutenberg’s printing press. But when someone is using AI to shortcut creativity, I do have to ask why. I also don’t trust AI’s ability to determine human writing from its own. My poem today touches on why! 🤣 🤦♂️ Well, all that is neither here nor there. Brilliant rant, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:21
AI Spy
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice rant, Syd.
I hope it raises awareness in some of the practitioners and act as a warning.
Not quite sure what the copy and paste does though. I would be pleased to add another piece of artillery to my armoury.
I\'ve actually called a \'poet\' out, though it made not one whit of difference to anyone\'s reaponses here.
September 22nd, 2026 18:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice rant, Syd.
I hope it raises awareness in some of the practitioners and act as a warning.
Not quite sure what the copy and paste does though. I would be pleased to add another piece of artillery to my armoury.
I\'ve actually called a \'poet\' out, though it made not one whit of difference to anyone\'s reaponses here.
September 22nd, 2026 18:11
AI Spy
sorenbarrett said:
As long as it is advertised as AI and not put out as someone\'s work I am okay with it but fail to see the point in that it attempts to put emotion into a write where the author has none. Well written
September 22nd, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
As long as it is advertised as AI and not put out as someone\'s work I am okay with it but fail to see the point in that it attempts to put emotion into a write where the author has none. Well written
September 22nd, 2026 13:03
Fearful Of Our Future - Song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, I’m over here across the pond, but I recognize that weird feeling of watching the familiar change around you and not knowing where any of it is headed. A fantastic song and read, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, I’m over here across the pond, but I recognize that weird feeling of watching the familiar change around you and not knowing where any of it is headed. A fantastic song and read, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2026 15:07
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