Comments received on poems by Syd



Psilocybin Stride
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Syd, I absolutely loved this. It captures both the wonder and the unpredictability of psilocybin in a way that feels mythical rather than merely descriptive. The chorus especially stayed with me. I also love how you personify psilocybin as a feminine, almost mythic presence...beautiful, alluring, nurturing, and completely unwilling to tolerate arrogance. I couldn\'t agree more. Fantastic song, my friend. πŸ„πŸŒˆπŸ–€πŸ™

July 3rd, 2026 09:04

Psilocybin Stride
Doggerel Dave said:

Syd, I\'m perfectly able to sit, enjoy the video very much but also heed the warnings within. Sometimes experiential learning becomes unnecessary when the argument is so clear for me at my place in the life cycle.
With respect to the actual video, I don\'t know how both you and AI do it, but your relationship appears very productive, the result compelling.

July 2nd, 2026 20:38

Psilocybin Stride
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

beware the seduction, good write

July 2nd, 2026 13:51

Psilocybin Stride
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write of warning for a seductive siren. Well written and a fave

July 2nd, 2026 13:36

Nathious - Son of Donkey
Doggerel Dave said:

Straight to U Tube. Great fun, so long as I remain in the slightly more refined end of town.
I can understand what happened here. Your man was created when a record number of folks (including me) donated their 1% and 2% Neanderthal DNA. Now I\'m all effete and delicate while your man charges on....
Thanks Syd - thoroughly enjoyed.

June 30th, 2026 19:35

Nathious - Son of Donkey
Friendship said:

nicely written

June 30th, 2026 18:21

Nathious - Son of Donkey
Teddy.15 said:

Superb lyrics 🌹

June 30th, 2026 15:32

Nathious - Son of Donkey
sorenbarrett said:

A fun song-peom that tells the story of a fiction character. Well written

June 30th, 2026 10:18

Talking To The Pork
NafisaSB said:

yes indeed - there are better people to talk to at 1 am in the night that a piece of pork - talk to the walls [lol] or self

June 30th, 2026 06:05

Talking To The Pork
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work. Funny stuff.

June 28th, 2026 08:19

Talking To The Pork
peto said:

Great write syd
Truly enjoyed and laughed
I will say if I was on that vodka and the scrumpy
It would probably be talking back to me
Bit like the pink elephants
Magic

June 27th, 2026 20:43

Talking To The Pork
Doggerel Dave said:

As a veggo, I couldn\'t avoid this one, Syd.
No preaching though...
Enough material there to make a reader think (as they say round here), should they be so inclined.

June 27th, 2026 20:24

Talking To The Pork
sorenbarrett said:

This may be written in humor but it holds more. A metaphor possibly as well. With its humor it teaches of how we treat our food and animals in general. Well written it is a fave

June 27th, 2026 11:38

Talking To The Pork
Teddy.15 said:

lol my dad used to put whole pig heads in the over ears and all. I\'m sure your neighbours could hear you through the wall though 🀣 🐷

June 27th, 2026 09:31

Talking To The Pork
Friendship said:

🀣Enjoy your humor.πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜‚

June 27th, 2026 09:02

Seagull
Teddy.15 said:

LOL so true, your imagery is gastly this morning poo drops instead of rain. I really enjoyed this walk with you dear Syd, it\'s the simple things that makes us real. πŸ’œ

June 25th, 2026 02:24

Seagull
Friendship said:

Nicely done. Your poem serves as a meditation on the passage of time and the lessons learned from youthful indiscretions, suggesting that while today\'s teenagers may not understand the same experiences, the essence of adolescence remains timeless. You seem to highlight the universal themes of nostalgia, memory, and the bittersweet nature of growing up.

June 24th, 2026 19:34

Seagull
sorenbarrett said:

A poem raw and vivid reminiscing about teenage years and the mark left and how that age has little realization of what is to come. Well written

June 24th, 2026 15:10

Love & Hate
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem that takes us on a journey from hate through anger and prejudice to love and peace it covers it all. Nicely done Syd

June 20th, 2026 12:57

DJ Dusty
Friendship said:

Nicely done

June 20th, 2026 09:45

DJ Dusty
Teddy.15 said:

A truly brilliant story in lyric your rhyming is smooth like butter, I bet this took a while to write, very clever and your lines got more and more eccentric which really gives the reader the juice, imagery kudos and Syd, an excellent piece. 🌹


June 19th, 2026 23:55

DJ Dusty
sorenbarrett said:

A DJ bugged by bugs. Well done

June 19th, 2026 20:02

Joe & Benny
Teddy.15 said:

A fabulous song with lyrics that are so real and Jo is a person not only have you brought him to life but reminds me of some I myself knew in London. 🌹

June 19th, 2026 12:22

Farage Doesn\'t Speak For Me
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

excellent write, you summed it up perfectly my friend

June 19th, 2026 02:26

Joe & Benny
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. You\'ve left my jaw hanging, floored at the outrageous twist of supposed \"fate.\" I cannot believe it. Thank you for sharing.

June 18th, 2026 20:54

Joe & Benny
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting poem regarding addiction and God. Well done

June 18th, 2026 19:12

Avalanche
sorenbarrett said:

This seems the cycle of life in this poem well written

June 9th, 2026 12:15

Digest
sorenbarrett said:

Reading has become a lost art. This poem reintroduces it as a love. Well done

June 8th, 2026 14:26

Digest
peto said:

Get well soon syd
Thoroughly enjoy your writing and topics
The 1st verse is particularly special
Excellent

June 8th, 2026 14:07

Ginger In Australia
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the song and lyrics. It seems hot.

June 7th, 2026 15:16

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