Comments received on poems by Syd
Avalanche
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the cycle of life in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
This seems the cycle of life in this poem well written
June 9th, 2026 12:15
Digest
sorenbarrett said:
Reading has become a lost art. This poem reintroduces it as a love. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
Reading has become a lost art. This poem reintroduces it as a love. Well done
June 8th, 2026 14:26
Digest
peto said:
Get well soon syd
Thoroughly enjoy your writing and topics
The 1st verse is particularly special
Excellent
June 8th, 2026 14:07
peto said:
Get well soon syd
Thoroughly enjoy your writing and topics
The 1st verse is particularly special
Excellent
June 8th, 2026 14:07
Ginger In Australia
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m sending this to Ed Sheeran 🤣 hilarious creative and actually the last stanza holds a very important message for the world, kudos Syd, some fabulous funny lines that made me chuckle, I\'ve got loads of ginger friends in the UK and I tell you they can certainly take the piss too, the comedy clubs in London in the 90\'s used the gingers for their opening jokes. Fabulous my friend lol 😂 and by the way not sure about Australia as the spiders can really bite... 🕷️
June 7th, 2026 15:06
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m sending this to Ed Sheeran 🤣 hilarious creative and actually the last stanza holds a very important message for the world, kudos Syd, some fabulous funny lines that made me chuckle, I\'ve got loads of ginger friends in the UK and I tell you they can certainly take the piss too, the comedy clubs in London in the 90\'s used the gingers for their opening jokes. Fabulous my friend lol 😂 and by the way not sure about Australia as the spiders can really bite... 🕷️
June 7th, 2026 15:06
Corporate Man
peto said:
I was hoping half way through he would get what he deserved
An epic syd
Superb
June 6th, 2026 17:47
peto said:
I was hoping half way through he would get what he deserved
An epic syd
Superb
June 6th, 2026 17:47
Corporate Man
Teddy.15 said:
I was born poor and I never ever thought for one single minute that society or family owed me something, I am where I am today because my fingers and feet have bled to get me here and when I mean here is in a modest home and a job I really hate due to Bullies but I do it because I have to pay for my bread like everyone else apart from the royals and the politicians lol. Oh Syd sorry to turn this into me. 🤣 Love your work, this one is full of soul and sadly true of our reality. 🌹
June 6th, 2026 16:36
Teddy.15 said:
I was born poor and I never ever thought for one single minute that society or family owed me something, I am where I am today because my fingers and feet have bled to get me here and when I mean here is in a modest home and a job I really hate due to Bullies but I do it because I have to pay for my bread like everyone else apart from the royals and the politicians lol. Oh Syd sorry to turn this into me. 🤣 Love your work, this one is full of soul and sadly true of our reality. 🌹
June 6th, 2026 16:36
Corporate Man
sorenbarrett said:
A stark and all too real poem of relationships, values and payback. Well written in rhyme and good flow and a fave
June 6th, 2026 13:58
sorenbarrett said:
A stark and all too real poem of relationships, values and payback. Well written in rhyme and good flow and a fave
June 6th, 2026 13:58
Corporate Man
Paul Bell said:
Yes, no health and money aint worth didly squat, except to others.
Some may say you reap what you sow, and so it seems.
Do taxmen go to heaven, I wonder.
June 6th, 2026 12:01
Paul Bell said:
Yes, no health and money aint worth didly squat, except to others.
Some may say you reap what you sow, and so it seems.
Do taxmen go to heaven, I wonder.
June 6th, 2026 12:01
Farage Doesn\'t Speak For Me
Teddy.15 said:
Nigel Farage is a nasty racist using his mates money yes Trump to fuel the fires of hatred in the UK Brexit was a huge mistake but the voters should have done their homework better to see just what a man Farage is, he is a liar and a corrupt want-to-be politician who will never make it as long as the real British communities stick together. Ruining my beloved Uk. He is a disgusting appalling twat. 🌹 I\'ve seen the Henry Novak film, a tragedy to see a young innocent lad die because the police didn\'t do their job properly Henry will never get justice he deserves.
June 3rd, 2026 15:21
Teddy.15 said:
Nigel Farage is a nasty racist using his mates money yes Trump to fuel the fires of hatred in the UK Brexit was a huge mistake but the voters should have done their homework better to see just what a man Farage is, he is a liar and a corrupt want-to-be politician who will never make it as long as the real British communities stick together. Ruining my beloved Uk. He is a disgusting appalling twat. 🌹 I\'ve seen the Henry Novak film, a tragedy to see a young innocent lad die because the police didn\'t do their job properly Henry will never get justice he deserves.
June 3rd, 2026 15:21
Farage Doesn\'t Speak For Me
sorenbarrett said:
A strong political statement that sends its message powerfully. Well done
June 3rd, 2026 15:20
sorenbarrett said:
A strong political statement that sends its message powerfully. Well done
June 3rd, 2026 15:20
Augmented
sorenbarrett said:
The plus\'s and negatives of medicine and its attempted cures. Very nicely written
May 30th, 2026 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
The plus\'s and negatives of medicine and its attempted cures. Very nicely written
May 30th, 2026 07:47
Manifest
sorenbarrett said:
Although a bitter and sour concoction this poetic message is so well sent with rhyme and measure it deserves a fave. I have always felt strongly that true poetry is more than just beautiful words but emotion and this seems to have it
May 28th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Although a bitter and sour concoction this poetic message is so well sent with rhyme and measure it deserves a fave. I have always felt strongly that true poetry is more than just beautiful words but emotion and this seems to have it
May 28th, 2026 04:33
Stan
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fun tail of alien encounter and transferred powers well written in rhyme it well could be a song.
May 27th, 2026 16:38
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fun tail of alien encounter and transferred powers well written in rhyme it well could be a song.
May 27th, 2026 16:38
Isaac
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind yer adolescents (yeh do) it is a warning I, at the other end of the lifecycle, could well listen to. My P C is addictive and much easier to become involved with than to get dressed and get out.
Well writ, Syd.
May 16th, 2026 19:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind yer adolescents (yeh do) it is a warning I, at the other end of the lifecycle, could well listen to. My P C is addictive and much easier to become involved with than to get dressed and get out.
Well writ, Syd.
May 16th, 2026 19:17
This Body
Teddy.15 said:
Awe, I know you will find the olive you need for your engine my dear Syd, I hope you are well my friend, just to cheer you up and please feel free to come back and look anytime, try being a a 51 year old gal with Memapause kicking in, everything aches all the wrong things grow and I\'m always really really angry even with babies in prams lol 🤣 see I bet you have a smile now!
May 5th, 2026 15:08
Teddy.15 said:
Awe, I know you will find the olive you need for your engine my dear Syd, I hope you are well my friend, just to cheer you up and please feel free to come back and look anytime, try being a a 51 year old gal with Memapause kicking in, everything aches all the wrong things grow and I\'m always really really angry even with babies in prams lol 🤣 see I bet you have a smile now!
May 5th, 2026 15:08
This Body
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem personifies the body as a machine, highlighting its aging, decay, and the artificial replacements that accompany it. Welcome to my world .❤️
May 5th, 2026 05:38
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem personifies the body as a machine, highlighting its aging, decay, and the artificial replacements that accompany it. Welcome to my world .❤️
May 5th, 2026 05:38
This Body
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you with arthritis kicking in, muscle shrinkage, energy loss, aches and pains, a general slowing down age takes its toll. Well written
May 5th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
I feel you with arthritis kicking in, muscle shrinkage, energy loss, aches and pains, a general slowing down age takes its toll. Well written
May 5th, 2026 04:10
Donkey
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve lived with or close too a few donkey\'s in my time in London. Ah what a wonderful character and what a lovely dedication
And with a lot of humour too. Fab write Syd
May 2nd, 2026 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve lived with or close too a few donkey\'s in my time in London. Ah what a wonderful character and what a lovely dedication
And with a lot of humour too. Fab write Syd
May 2nd, 2026 09:16
Skeleton
Thomas W Case said:
Raw, cosmic, and unflinching—this one grips the inevitability of death and spins it into stardust.
Your voice is intimate with mortality, gritty yet strangely tender, pulsing between decay and rebirth.
April 7th, 2026 07:51
Thomas W Case said:
Raw, cosmic, and unflinching—this one grips the inevitability of death and spins it into stardust.
Your voice is intimate with mortality, gritty yet strangely tender, pulsing between decay and rebirth.
April 7th, 2026 07:51
Skeleton
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of your best sets of lyrics. Love this! Love the thoughts inside and I too believe the end is not the end. Kudos great beat to this one. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 13:19
Teddy.15 said:
This is one of your best sets of lyrics. Love this! Love the thoughts inside and I too believe the end is not the end. Kudos great beat to this one. 🌹
April 5th, 2026 13:19
Skeleton
Abdullah123 said:
I don\'t know if I agree that our consciousness is \'reborn\' in the literal sense, but I do adore how this poem reframes death as a universal necessity by exulting it beyond just a personal loss or occurrence to a cosmic event. Great write
April 5th, 2026 13:04
Abdullah123 said:
I don\'t know if I agree that our consciousness is \'reborn\' in the literal sense, but I do adore how this poem reframes death as a universal necessity by exulting it beyond just a personal loss or occurrence to a cosmic event. Great write
April 5th, 2026 13:04
Skeleton
sorenbarrett said:
I have always seen death as an old friend a reliever of pain and a siren that sings softly. Reincarnation implied as the body decomposes. The soul liberated to be reborn. Nicely done.
April 5th, 2026 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
I have always seen death as an old friend a reliever of pain and a siren that sings softly. Reincarnation implied as the body decomposes. The soul liberated to be reborn. Nicely done.
April 5th, 2026 13:00
Skeleton
Cindy said:
I love this poem(or song)it deeply explores the topic of death. Nicely written!
April 5th, 2026 12:55
Cindy said:
I love this poem(or song)it deeply explores the topic of death. Nicely written!
April 5th, 2026 12:55
An Ode To Earworms
Thomas W Case said:
This is deliriously alive—a carnival inside your skull, where tiny earworm craftsmen hammer out rhythms that won’t quit.
I can practically hear the metronome swing and smell the honeycomb buzzing with manic, beautiful obsession.
March 29th, 2026 08:30
Thomas W Case said:
This is deliriously alive—a carnival inside your skull, where tiny earworm craftsmen hammer out rhythms that won’t quit.
I can practically hear the metronome swing and smell the honeycomb buzzing with manic, beautiful obsession.
March 29th, 2026 08:30
Mechanoids In March
Teddy.15 said:
Will it seep into their pupils
And crack them open
Like potholes in the road?
Wow Syd, your mind certainly does wander! Nothing wrong with that, makes you a very talented poet 🌹
March 25th, 2026 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
Will it seep into their pupils
And crack them open
Like potholes in the road?
Wow Syd, your mind certainly does wander! Nothing wrong with that, makes you a very talented poet 🌹
March 25th, 2026 09:16
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