Comments received on poems by Syd



Psilocybin Stride
orchidee said:

A good write Syd. She seems Kaleidoscopic and psychedelic (not necessarily meaning \'high\' on something).
Time for a lay down to recover, after those long words this time of day! lol.

November 15th, 2018 02:46

Wheezer
orchidee said:

Ooh I\'d never have thought of all those words if I was unwell like that! (ooh heehee). A fine write Syd.

October 27th, 2018 01:45

Wheezer
Laura🌻 said:

Syd,

An awful experience...
but a great write!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

October 26th, 2018 23:26

Parachutes
Goldfinch60 said:

Very moving tribute.

October 17th, 2018 23:56

Icarus (Powder Blue)
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good imagery and warning on the dangers of drug use.

October 17th, 2018 00:26

Icarus (Powder Blue)
Fay Slimm. said:

A forceful warning on drug-use and the fall that precedes flights to more danger - - love the chosen image Syd as it lays stress on the poem\'s strong phrases on false security.

October 16th, 2018 16:07

Death
Syd said:

I couldn\'t agree more Goldfinch, thanks for reading and leaving feedback.

- Syd

September 24th, 2018 06:01

Death
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true write, you start dying the moment you are born. Enjoy every moment of your life.

September 22nd, 2018 10:39

Aquaplane
Fay Slimm. said:

An intriguing read Syd - - I love the way you wind words around to obtain the flow of momentum -- and a last line to sigh for which gives the reason for risk-taking - - as \"the road to excess\" - a brilliant write.

September 14th, 2018 13:43

Reacquaintence With My Dreams
misskay said:

Great work syd
I enjoyed it a lot

August 17th, 2018 11:00

Reacquaintence With My Dreams
Laura🌻 said:

Syd,

May your positivity continue to glow and enjoy that sanctuary you so desire within your dreams!

I enjoyed reading this great poem very much!

~Laura~



August 16th, 2018 19:21

Beautiful People
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Syd, the beauty of people comes from inside of them.

July 27th, 2018 00:26

Beautiful People
orchidee said:

A fine write Syd.

July 26th, 2018 13:11

Beautiful People
Poetic Dan said:

Flowed as delightful as your soul
Thank you for sharing

July 26th, 2018 13:00

Beautiful People
Heartwriter said:

I agree 100 percent! Great write.

July 26th, 2018 12:46

Beautiful People
Laura🌻 said:

Syd,

A beautifully written poem that expresses my sentiments exactly with a great song to go along!

~Laura~


July 26th, 2018 12:09

Gun Shot
Edthepoet said:

Fantastic write. I\'ve read a few of your other pieces. We share some common ground in style I think. Glad I found your work.

July 26th, 2018 12:05

Gun Shot
orchidee said:

I know - I was gonna help myself, but I read that self-help book twice too, and ran out of time. They didn\'t tell me was a 1,000 page book. lol.

July 19th, 2018 10:39

Gun Shot
Heartwriter said:

Great comparisons. I enjoyed this. Wild and tame.

July 19th, 2018 04:49

I Felt Like Jesus
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, although I am a believer I can also believe that others could feel like Jesus on any given day and differing circumstances.

July 14th, 2018 00:41

I Felt Like Jesus
dusk arising said:

I think you may upset a few poets here who seem to be \'devout\' christians believing in the words only of a man written mistranslated book.

Your approach to a christian belief is refreshing, uplifting and surely encouraging in these times of a diminishing belief in the population.

July 13th, 2018 18:58

I Felt Like Jesus
Heartwriter said:

I do have to say for a poem it\'s gets the highest grade in the class. It was written superb. You just got Jesus mixed up with Willie Nelson! Lol

July 13th, 2018 15:08

I Felt Like Jesus
Syd said:

It was marked as 18 + Orcidee. I can\'t understand why it hasn\'t shown up as an adult poem.

- Syd

July 13th, 2018 14:37

I Felt Like Jesus
orchidee said:

Woof! I\'m a watchdog! Should this be marked 18+?
Erm fine write as a poem. Can\'t say I agree with it though.

July 13th, 2018 14:29

The Surfer
Heartwriter said:

Awesome dude!

July 12th, 2018 16:05

The Surfer
Reyas said:

Beautiful piece, not sure if there was supposed to be a message or not but the one I take from it is everyone craves for freedom but if we’re not careful that freedom can also be our end. Either way, once again, spectacular job.

July 12th, 2018 16:03

The Surfer
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Coral and sharks right , that could be lurking monsters under waves. Wow you wrote the poem in a fascinating awesome way, the sport is thrilling but looks too scary to me. You phrase eloquently so kudos.

Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.

July 12th, 2018 15:05

The Surfer
E-Poems said:

Your work is effortlessly brilliant. ~ E

July 12th, 2018 14:36

Grey
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I do hope that car soon has an engine fitted.

June 28th, 2018 00:50

Grey
Syd said:

Thank you Faye, I\'m flattered by your fine comment. I\'m glad you enjoyed the poem.

Take care - Syd

June 27th, 2018 11:54

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