Comments received on poems by Syd
I Felt Like Jesus
Heartwriter said:
I do have to say for a poem it\'s gets the highest grade in the class. It was written superb. You just got Jesus mixed up with Willie Nelson! Lol
July 13th, 2018 15:08
Heartwriter said:
I do have to say for a poem it\'s gets the highest grade in the class. It was written superb. You just got Jesus mixed up with Willie Nelson! Lol
July 13th, 2018 15:08
I Felt Like Jesus
Syd said:
It was marked as 18 + Orcidee. I can\'t understand why it hasn\'t shown up as an adult poem.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 14:37
Syd said:
It was marked as 18 + Orcidee. I can\'t understand why it hasn\'t shown up as an adult poem.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 14:37
I Felt Like Jesus
orchidee said:
Woof! I\'m a watchdog! Should this be marked 18+?
Erm fine write as a poem. Can\'t say I agree with it though.
July 13th, 2018 14:29
orchidee said:
Woof! I\'m a watchdog! Should this be marked 18+?
Erm fine write as a poem. Can\'t say I agree with it though.
July 13th, 2018 14:29
The Surfer
Reyas said:
Beautiful piece, not sure if there was supposed to be a message or not but the one I take from it is everyone craves for freedom but if we’re not careful that freedom can also be our end. Either way, once again, spectacular job.
July 12th, 2018 16:03
Reyas said:
Beautiful piece, not sure if there was supposed to be a message or not but the one I take from it is everyone craves for freedom but if we’re not careful that freedom can also be our end. Either way, once again, spectacular job.
July 12th, 2018 16:03
The Surfer
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Coral and sharks right , that could be lurking monsters under waves. Wow you wrote the poem in a fascinating awesome way, the sport is thrilling but looks too scary to me. You phrase eloquently so kudos.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 15:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Coral and sharks right , that could be lurking monsters under waves. Wow you wrote the poem in a fascinating awesome way, the sport is thrilling but looks too scary to me. You phrase eloquently so kudos.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 15:05
Grey
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I do hope that car soon has an engine fitted.
June 28th, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, I do hope that car soon has an engine fitted.
June 28th, 2018 00:50
Grey
Syd said:
Thank you Faye, I\'m flattered by your fine comment. I\'m glad you enjoyed the poem.
Take care - Syd
June 27th, 2018 11:54
Syd said:
Thank you Faye, I\'m flattered by your fine comment. I\'m glad you enjoyed the poem.
Take care - Syd
June 27th, 2018 11:54
Grey
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the emotionless shade of grey so eloquently Syd - - - it aptly applies to any who are brought low by depression but the image and your clever last line put readers right on what is so well personified - a car with that shade and no colour is sure going to suffer methinks. A great read.
June 27th, 2018 11:47
Fay Slimm. said:
You describe the emotionless shade of grey so eloquently Syd - - - it aptly applies to any who are brought low by depression but the image and your clever last line put readers right on what is so well personified - a car with that shade and no colour is sure going to suffer methinks. A great read.
June 27th, 2018 11:47
Grey
sjc513 said:
“I seem fine on the outside but my smile is fake.” Love that part so relatable very good work!
June 27th, 2018 11:41
sjc513 said:
“I seem fine on the outside but my smile is fake.” Love that part so relatable very good work!
June 27th, 2018 11:41
Moths
Frogspoetry said:
excellent write,i never realized that weare living in prison of self image,wealth and captivity.we hold ourselves captive by trying to live up to societies standards that we are never truly free to be our true selves.great read Syd,excellent
June 22nd, 2018 10:27
Frogspoetry said:
excellent write,i never realized that weare living in prison of self image,wealth and captivity.we hold ourselves captive by trying to live up to societies standards that we are never truly free to be our true selves.great read Syd,excellent
June 22nd, 2018 10:27
Moths
Heartwriter said:
This was a captivating write. A pleasure to read with a hint of sadness. Society isn\'t free either. We each have our problems that cage us. Often it\'s my big mouth. I should put my foot in it. I really enjoyed your take on a disappointing world.
June 22nd, 2018 05:26
Heartwriter said:
This was a captivating write. A pleasure to read with a hint of sadness. Society isn\'t free either. We each have our problems that cage us. Often it\'s my big mouth. I should put my foot in it. I really enjoyed your take on a disappointing world.
June 22nd, 2018 05:26
Moths
orchidee said:
Bzzz, those moths eating your paper money too? All those £50 notes?! Wot, you got none? You\'re having me on?! heehee.
Btu can they eat the plastic-type fivers and tenners now? Dunno. I\'ve not left one out for a moth to try to eat!
June 22nd, 2018 03:36
orchidee said:
Bzzz, those moths eating your paper money too? All those £50 notes?! Wot, you got none? You\'re having me on?! heehee.
Btu can they eat the plastic-type fivers and tenners now? Dunno. I\'ve not left one out for a moth to try to eat!
June 22nd, 2018 03:36
Moths
BlackTie said:
\"I am captive
In society
Anchored in the open sea...\"
Love this. Great read. Very elegant use of your pen. How to many of us don\'t realize how society is a sort of prison.
June 21st, 2018 19:39
BlackTie said:
\"I am captive
In society
Anchored in the open sea...\"
Love this. Great read. Very elegant use of your pen. How to many of us don\'t realize how society is a sort of prison.
June 21st, 2018 19:39
Bottle Of Madness
orchidee said:
Oohh I won\' try it, whatever it is. Might descend into real madness!
June 17th, 2018 10:09
orchidee said:
Oohh I won\' try it, whatever it is. Might descend into real madness!
June 17th, 2018 10:09
Bottle Of Madness
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing tie recalls old footprints and think more and more about time\'d effect. Wonderful poem is shared.
June 17th, 2018 09:25
Pintu Mahakul said:
Amazing tie recalls old footprints and think more and more about time\'d effect. Wonderful poem is shared.
June 17th, 2018 09:25
Temporary
orchidee said:
Will the word \'temporary\' be temporary, in that it won\'t last forever?! heehee.
June 9th, 2018 12:49
orchidee said:
Will the word \'temporary\' be temporary, in that it won\'t last forever?! heehee.
June 9th, 2018 12:49
The Darker Side Of Wonderland
MLHnow said:
Again, you give much in every word and truly give WORD to us all
My wordy self has not this beautiful fully open door. My doorway is very cluttered and you have to move odd items out of the way to enter! MLH
June 5th, 2018 21:44
MLHnow said:
Again, you give much in every word and truly give WORD to us all
My wordy self has not this beautiful fully open door. My doorway is very cluttered and you have to move odd items out of the way to enter! MLH
June 5th, 2018 21:44
Languidly Basking
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
SLR said:
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. :-) love the lines \'ingesting medicine but I\'m not ill\' and \'a sea of artificial tranquility\' . Well written.
May 18th, 2018 23:09
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kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
kitcat said:
Full of sorrow Syd you written that Brilliant very deep very sad
April 26th, 2018 10:07
Child Of Change
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53
Consolidation
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
Laura🌻 said:
Wow, Syd...dark but powerful!
This write packed a punch!
Powerful words that can help many!
Be kind to yourself!
~Laura~
April 24th, 2018 17:40
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