Comments received on poems by Syd
Tinderbox
Paul Bell said:
The magnifying glass is worth ten years now, maybe two with good behavior, overcrowding etc.
Felt sorry for the Prof, they hounded the guy. I mean, who doesn\'t plager.
Snowing in London, that\'s extreme.
August 15th, 2026 05:38
Paul Bell said:
The magnifying glass is worth ten years now, maybe two with good behavior, overcrowding etc.
Felt sorry for the Prof, they hounded the guy. I mean, who doesn\'t plager.
Snowing in London, that\'s extreme.
August 15th, 2026 05:38
Mr Zippy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, what a gloriously fucked-up ride this is! π Dark, grotesque, funny, and somehow it winds its way toward redemption without losing any of its lunacy. And I LOVE THE FUCKING SONG! One hell of a write, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
August 8th, 2026 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, what a gloriously fucked-up ride this is! π Dark, grotesque, funny, and somehow it winds its way toward redemption without losing any of its lunacy. And I LOVE THE FUCKING SONG! One hell of a write, my friend! πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
August 8th, 2026 08:37
Mr Zippy
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a tale that takes one to another time with characters of the time. Well done
August 7th, 2026 13:03
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a tale that takes one to another time with characters of the time. Well done
August 7th, 2026 13:03
The Dimming
Paul Bell said:
They all want their message out there.
Guy does a shit in Outer Mongolia, someone\'s got an opinion on it.
Just wait till AI really gets going. If you think it\'s bad now, you aint seen nothing yet.
August 5th, 2026 09:12
Paul Bell said:
They all want their message out there.
Guy does a shit in Outer Mongolia, someone\'s got an opinion on it.
Just wait till AI really gets going. If you think it\'s bad now, you aint seen nothing yet.
August 5th, 2026 09:12
The Dimming
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, satire is at its strongest when it commits to its voice, and this certainly does. I found myself chuckling more than once, even while feeling the exasperation underneath it all. Great job on this. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 1st, 2026 20:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, satire is at its strongest when it commits to its voice, and this certainly does. I found myself chuckling more than once, even while feeling the exasperation underneath it all. Great job on this. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 1st, 2026 20:29
The Dimming
Doggerel Dave said:
Semi automatic click on the title (too early in the morning), picture pops up β what?? Who?? Itβs Syd, so I can enjoy (if thatβs the right word) your take down.
Trouble is, it should be easy to pull the plug on them (there are enough delusional nutters in the world anyway), the problem, as you so rightly point out, happens to be the number of clowns (men) who take noticeβ¦
July 31st, 2026 18:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Semi automatic click on the title (too early in the morning), picture pops up β what?? Who?? Itβs Syd, so I can enjoy (if thatβs the right word) your take down.
Trouble is, it should be easy to pull the plug on them (there are enough delusional nutters in the world anyway), the problem, as you so rightly point out, happens to be the number of clowns (men) who take noticeβ¦
July 31st, 2026 18:26
The Dimming
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written it gives its message with power. Well done
July 31st, 2026 17:31
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written it gives its message with power. Well done
July 31st, 2026 17:31
The Dimming
peto said:
Right wing left wing
They are all part of the same bird
Can\'t trust any of them
Topical and brave subject to address
Kudos syd
July 31st, 2026 16:22
peto said:
Right wing left wing
They are all part of the same bird
Can\'t trust any of them
Topical and brave subject to address
Kudos syd
July 31st, 2026 16:22
Toxic
NafisaSB said:
Such people do deserve the severest punishment though sometimes they manage to evade it
July 21st, 2026 06:59
NafisaSB said:
Such people do deserve the severest punishment though sometimes they manage to evade it
July 21st, 2026 06:59
Toxic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The images of decay and predation really caught me, Syd. They perfectly capture how this poisonous ideology consumes insecurity and converts it into hatred. Savage write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 20th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The images of decay and predation really caught me, Syd. They perfectly capture how this poisonous ideology consumes insecurity and converts it into hatred. Savage write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 20th, 2026 08:12
Toxic
Doggerel Dave said:
Plenty of Tates and Andrews in this world I\'m afraid, many of whom hide their bigotry etc in all manner of ways and justifications....the sub humans who follow them, just for starters.
Worthwhile write Syd, at the time of their arrest and disgrace even if it does leave me somewhat nauseous.
July 19th, 2026 15:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Plenty of Tates and Andrews in this world I\'m afraid, many of whom hide their bigotry etc in all manner of ways and justifications....the sub humans who follow them, just for starters.
Worthwhile write Syd, at the time of their arrest and disgrace even if it does leave me somewhat nauseous.
July 19th, 2026 15:41
Kev\'s Bong
peto said:
Beautiful tribute syd
Can\'t beat real
That 2nd verse was how i\'d feel had I had a toke on that bong
I enjoyed the yts line also
RIP kev
Ta for the memories syd
July 19th, 2026 13:51
peto said:
Beautiful tribute syd
Can\'t beat real
That 2nd verse was how i\'d feel had I had a toke on that bong
I enjoyed the yts line also
RIP kev
Ta for the memories syd
July 19th, 2026 13:51
Toxic
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revenge on people I choose to isolate myself from. Well done
July 19th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of revenge on people I choose to isolate myself from. Well done
July 19th, 2026 07:54
Toxic
Teddy.15 said:
I was literally thinking of these two when I was reading, yes seems they may have come to take what is coming to them, caught In Miami I believe. We certainly need less of these evil souls in the world. A great write I felt every line. πΉ
July 19th, 2026 07:48
Teddy.15 said:
I was literally thinking of these two when I was reading, yes seems they may have come to take what is coming to them, caught In Miami I believe. We certainly need less of these evil souls in the world. A great write I felt every line. πΉ
July 19th, 2026 07:48
Kev\'s Bong
Teddy.15 said:
My deepest condolences to you dear Syd, I\'ve lost two loved ones myself this year, due to cancer. As for Kev Some souls just weren\'t meant to be in this world. A beautiful poem. πΉ
July 18th, 2026 15:38
Teddy.15 said:
My deepest condolences to you dear Syd, I\'ve lost two loved ones myself this year, due to cancer. As for Kev Some souls just weren\'t meant to be in this world. A beautiful poem. πΉ
July 18th, 2026 15:38
Kev\'s Bong
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartbreaking tribute, Syd. You remember Kev through something imperfect, funny, and unmistakably his...then let that warmth stand beside the horror of losing him. The result feels honest because grief and laughter remain together. Iβm truly sorry for your loss, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 18th, 2026 09:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a heartbreaking tribute, Syd. You remember Kev through something imperfect, funny, and unmistakably his...then let that warmth stand beside the horror of losing him. The result feels honest because grief and laughter remain together. Iβm truly sorry for your loss, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 18th, 2026 09:39
Kev\'s Bong
sorenbarrett said:
A sad tribute to a strange fellow. It is these people that leave holes in our past that are filled with nostalgia. Well done
July 18th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
A sad tribute to a strange fellow. It is these people that leave holes in our past that are filled with nostalgia. Well done
July 18th, 2026 06:57
Contrast
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really struck me. I love how the entire piece embraces tension instead of trying to resolve it. It reminds us that beauty, pain, joy, and loss all give shape to one another. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really struck me. I love how the entire piece embraces tension instead of trying to resolve it. It reminds us that beauty, pain, joy, and loss all give shape to one another. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 9th, 2026 22:57
Contrast
sorenbarrett said:
This poem/song is full of the positives and negatives of life the balance that is necessary to enjoy the good. Well done.
July 9th, 2026 13:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem/song is full of the positives and negatives of life the balance that is necessary to enjoy the good. Well done.
July 9th, 2026 13:10
Proud Of Our Poverty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this stirred up so much for meβ¦the shared bath times, the streetlights as a clock, that particular brand of scrappy childhood that felt hard in the moment but somehow shaped you for the better. You captured that so well. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 8th, 2026 19:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this stirred up so much for meβ¦the shared bath times, the streetlights as a clock, that particular brand of scrappy childhood that felt hard in the moment but somehow shaped you for the better. You captured that so well. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 8th, 2026 19:12
Proud Of Our Poverty
Teddy.15 said:
My dad grew up in a house like that in Yorkshire. Reminds me of my holidays up north. πΉ
July 8th, 2026 07:52
Teddy.15 said:
My dad grew up in a house like that in Yorkshire. Reminds me of my holidays up north. πΉ
July 8th, 2026 07:52
Proud Of Our Poverty
Doggerel Dave said:
Your images, claimed to be AI generated, felt real for me and enough commonality with the deep south (Londonβs East End) for me to relate, Syd.
The lines
βWe\'re proud to have memories
Proud of our people\'s sovereignty
Proud of our upbringing
Proud of our poverty!β
are as succinct an example of false consciousness as anyone could provide and what keeps those folks where they are.
Great stuff.
July 7th, 2026 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Your images, claimed to be AI generated, felt real for me and enough commonality with the deep south (Londonβs East End) for me to relate, Syd.
The lines
βWe\'re proud to have memories
Proud of our people\'s sovereignty
Proud of our upbringing
Proud of our poverty!β
are as succinct an example of false consciousness as anyone could provide and what keeps those folks where they are.
Great stuff.
July 7th, 2026 19:32
Proud Of Our Poverty
Paul Bell said:
It is strange that through hardship, poverty, certainly few luxuries, there were few suicides.
Roll on today, mental health is through the roof, suicide is daily.
It seems the more you have, the less you actually have.
July 7th, 2026 13:35
Paul Bell said:
It is strange that through hardship, poverty, certainly few luxuries, there were few suicides.
Roll on today, mental health is through the roof, suicide is daily.
It seems the more you have, the less you actually have.
July 7th, 2026 13:35
Proud Of Our Poverty
sorenbarrett said:
This well could be a song in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
This well could be a song in poetic form with rhyme. Nicely done
July 7th, 2026 13:13
Pound of Flesh
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really hit me hard. There\'s something beautifully vulnerable about this...the joy of creating standing right beside the risk of sharing it. That balance feels incredibly honest. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 6th, 2026 14:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Syd, this really hit me hard. There\'s something beautifully vulnerable about this...the joy of creating standing right beside the risk of sharing it. That balance feels incredibly honest. Wonderful write, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 6th, 2026 14:49
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