Comments received on poems by Syd



Cracks In The Dam
Christina8 said:

A brave and well written write! I suffer from severe anxiety so I can only imagine your hell. I hope you are faring much better these days! Thanks for sharing!

December 19th, 2017 19:12

He Sat On My Hamster
Syd said:

Lol. Thanks for reading James. Yes it is an epic sad story. - Syd

December 19th, 2017 07:29

He Sat On My Hamster
orchidee said:

Arrghh they\'ve mutated then, me hamsters! they\'re giant-size in me pic then. They are two guinea-pigs! lol.
A wonder he did not get nasty bite from the hamster, where he did not want it!

December 18th, 2017 08:57

He Sat On My Hamster
Syd said:

Hi Fay, no need to apologise for your wry smile. I think my parent\'s forgave me, my father probably can\'t remember as it was 20 years ago, such a long time. I tried to make the poem humorous even though I was genuinely upset at the plight of my hamster.

Thanks for reading and leaving feedback - Syd

December 18th, 2017 06:51

He Sat On My Hamster
Fay Slimm. said:

This true tale explains why young lads have to wait a while before learning what life has in store - a great flow to this sad little read of a loved hamster breathing his last. Sorry Syd but I had to hide a wry smile at your plight - hope your parents forgave you for lying to them.

December 18th, 2017 06:45

He Sat On My Hamster
Michael Edwards said:

I remember the FS story so well - and don\'t tell Orchidee about it. Gave me a Monday smile.

December 18th, 2017 04:19

Post Card Poem (2008)
Syd said:

Lol! Cheers James, glad you enjoyed and can relate - Syd

December 13th, 2017 10:08

Post Card Poem (2008)
orchidee said:

Well, this poem has appeared in Greek, so.....?!

December 11th, 2017 02:48

Post Card Poem (2008)
Goldfinch60 said:

So the holiday did not go well and you tried to blame it on David Blaine eh?

December 11th, 2017 02:29

Post Card Poem (2008)
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m sure its very good if only I could read it.

December 10th, 2017 10:37

Post Card Poem (2008)
orchidee said:

Oohh how you write it in Greek? What buttons do you press for it? I can translate it, given enough time! heehee. To start with: Why is your head up your......apoe?! swoon! lol.

December 10th, 2017 10:30

Artificial Happiness
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write and so true, I always think that I am very fortunate Syd that although there are worries in my life I do have true happiness.

December 10th, 2017 02:45

Artificial Happiness
orchidee said:

A fine write Syd. I started with \'soap-land\' happiness, then saw \'Eastenders\' and plunged into dark depression. Then again, so would anyone! lol.

December 9th, 2017 13:02

The Doors Of Perception
Syd said:

Ha ha yeah must of been communications instead. Seriously though I had no idea and it\'s about Aldous Huxley anyway lol

December 8th, 2017 08:09

The Doors Of Perception
Laura🌻 said:

Thank you for...
A great write...
A great read...
A great pic...and
the inspiration to read
The Doors Of Perception/
Heaven and Hell

December 8th, 2017 07:05

How Much Is Too Much?
Syd said:

Hi FineB, yeah I totally agree with your comment.

Thanks for reading - Syd

December 3rd, 2017 08:38

How Much Is Too Much?
FineB said:

Hi Syd

I liked this


That was powerful and brilliant.

It\'s so sad in the world so many have plenty and so many have so little.

We should be grateful for what we have ultimately.

Keep writing
FineB

December 2nd, 2017 16:47

How Much Is Too Much?
madisontoure said:

This is so good!

December 2nd, 2017 15:59

How Much Is Too Much?
Tony36 said:

Wow, great write

December 2nd, 2017 15:55

How Much Is Too Much?
ZIGGY said:

Hi there a great theme well wort the effort it must of taken some strong word choice but that is a given with a theme like this I feel

December 2nd, 2017 12:26

How Much Is Too Much?
Syd said:

Than you Mottakeenur, glad you like the poem - Syd

December 2nd, 2017 11:25

How Much Is Too Much?
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Awesome!...reasonable!!

December 2nd, 2017 10:31

How Much Is Too Much?
Syd said:

Thank you Laura, glad you enjoyed.
Take care - Syd

December 2nd, 2017 06:55

How Much Is Too Much?
Laura🌻 said:

Spot on Syd!
A well written message
reiterated in your response
to Jeremy’s comments!
Great read! Thank you.

December 2nd, 2017 06:39

How Much Is Too Much?
Jeremy Leach said:

Wow, that\'s great and kept me reading every well-written line. A lot of thought\'s gone into this. Questions I ask myself too. These seem unstable times.

December 2nd, 2017 05:22

Never Again (2008)
Syd said:

Cheers Tepo. Yeah the Rubicks cube line has always been one of my favourites. I know what you mean as regards to filling. This is one of my oldest ones but since MPS only lets you upload one a day, I\'m slowly uploading my back catalogue.

Glad you like it. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback - Syd

December 1st, 2017 18:15

Girl With The Black Hair
FineB said:

Thanks Syd.

That was a deep, cool poem.

Excellent and good.

Well written.

Keep writing
FineB

December 1st, 2017 15:40

Difference In Taste
Goldfinch60 said:

Great write and so very true, we all like different things, if we were all the same life would be so boring.

December 1st, 2017 01:55

Difference In Taste
Jeremy Leach said:

That\' a great poem. I like the message too.

November 30th, 2017 13:43

Difference In Taste
Syd said:

Thank you Outback I\'m glad you enjoyed. 6hrs? Is that how long you have left in your day before you can get stuck into the wine? Lol - Syd

November 30th, 2017 11:38

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