Comments received on poems by Shadowbox15
Storm of Worries
FineB said:
Thank you ShadowBox15
Great poem.
Anxiety I can worry at times.
I am wondering will they pay me in time for Xmas.
I have started a new job.
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 09:26
FineB said:
Thank you ShadowBox15
Great poem.
Anxiety I can worry at times.
I am wondering will they pay me in time for Xmas.
I have started a new job.
Keep writing
FineB
November 28th, 2017 09:26
Storm of Worries
orchidee said:
Good write Shadow. A sort of storm that dries everything up.
November 28th, 2017 08:48
orchidee said:
Good write Shadow. A sort of storm that dries everything up.
November 28th, 2017 08:48
Fireworks in my Stomach
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SHADOW ~ What a lovely way to describe the feelings we all have as we grow & develop ! \"Fireworks in my Stomach\" We all develop differently but you poem describes how I felt when I was 15 ! By the time I was 20 most of them had well and truly exploded ! Most of them (Thank GOD) under control ! The things you describe will probably all explode in the next five years ~ There is a right time & place for everything ! Thanks for sharing and avoid premature explosions ! Yours BRIAN
November 27th, 2017 19:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW SHADOW ~ What a lovely way to describe the feelings we all have as we grow & develop ! \"Fireworks in my Stomach\" We all develop differently but you poem describes how I felt when I was 15 ! By the time I was 20 most of them had well and truly exploded ! Most of them (Thank GOD) under control ! The things you describe will probably all explode in the next five years ~ There is a right time & place for everything ! Thanks for sharing and avoid premature explosions ! Yours BRIAN
November 27th, 2017 19:01
Porcelain Doll
Laura🌻 said:
I guess ready to be gazed upon, but not engaging! Enjoyed reading your write! Your poem was definitely engaging!
November 25th, 2017 17:53
Laura🌻 said:
I guess ready to be gazed upon, but not engaging! Enjoyed reading your write! Your poem was definitely engaging!
November 25th, 2017 17:53
Porcelain Doll
FineB said:
Thanks Shadow.
Awesome.
She must have been quite a beauty in the flesh this woman one of those types who is unforgettable.
Keep writing
FineB
November 25th, 2017 15:52
FineB said:
Thanks Shadow.
Awesome.
She must have been quite a beauty in the flesh this woman one of those types who is unforgettable.
Keep writing
FineB
November 25th, 2017 15:52
Porcelain Doll
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing your \"Up in the Air\" experience SHADOW ! I have met some \"Porcelain Ladies\" in my time and some of them were as hard as they looked ! How we look does matter ~ because sometimes it reflects our psyche & attitude ! Loved the Poem ~ BRIAN
November 25th, 2017 15:40
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing your \"Up in the Air\" experience SHADOW ! I have met some \"Porcelain Ladies\" in my time and some of them were as hard as they looked ! How we look does matter ~ because sometimes it reflects our psyche & attitude ! Loved the Poem ~ BRIAN
November 25th, 2017 15:40
If Dogs Could Get Married
Shadowbox15 said:
My parents think that I should make this a children’s book. Any thoughts?
November 24th, 2017 23:36
Shadowbox15 said:
My parents think that I should make this a children’s book. Any thoughts?
November 24th, 2017 23:36
A Lucky Poodle
rrodriguez said:
What a lady and what a poodle and whst a poem.... Finely written...
November 24th, 2017 21:59
rrodriguez said:
What a lady and what a poodle and whst a poem.... Finely written...
November 24th, 2017 21:59
My Relationship with Perfectionism
rrodriguez said:
Great job and so ralatable. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2017 21:57
rrodriguez said:
Great job and so ralatable. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2017 21:57
Super-Duper Clumsy Girl
rrodriguez said:
I like your style of writing. It\'s very rythmicacal in structure. I luke to read your poems. Thanks for sharing.
November 24th, 2017 21:53
rrodriguez said:
I like your style of writing. It\'s very rythmicacal in structure. I luke to read your poems. Thanks for sharing.
November 24th, 2017 21:53
If Dogs Could Get Married
rrodriguez said:
Your poem is very clever nicely written...
November 24th, 2017 21:48
rrodriguez said:
Your poem is very clever nicely written...
November 24th, 2017 21:48
Super-Duper Clumsy Girl
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHADOW ~ It happens to us all ~ part of being HUMAN ~ Thanks for sending ~ Loved the humour ! Whatever problems we have ~ MPS Is a good site ~ GRIN AND SHARE IT ~ Yours as ever BRIAN (UK)
November 23rd, 2017 17:45
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SHADOW ~ It happens to us all ~ part of being HUMAN ~ Thanks for sending ~ Loved the humour ! Whatever problems we have ~ MPS Is a good site ~ GRIN AND SHARE IT ~ Yours as ever BRIAN (UK)
November 23rd, 2017 17:45
Gambling Myself Away
Shadowbox15 said:
Thank you all for your appreciation.
November 22nd, 2017 19:22
Shadowbox15 said:
Thank you all for your appreciation.
November 22nd, 2017 19:22
My Relationship with Perfectionism
NaturalRealist91 said:
That was a beautiful poem. Cause for a beautiful interpretation
November 20th, 2017 19:00
NaturalRealist91 said:
That was a beautiful poem. Cause for a beautiful interpretation
November 20th, 2017 19:00
My Relationship with Perfectionism
NaturalRealist91 said:
i love that. gives a great vision of why you should never try to be flawless at another being\'s expense. you cannot give love if you do not love yourself. flaws and imperfections are the exact characteristics that perfect us.
November 20th, 2017 17:48
NaturalRealist91 said:
i love that. gives a great vision of why you should never try to be flawless at another being\'s expense. you cannot give love if you do not love yourself. flaws and imperfections are the exact characteristics that perfect us.
November 20th, 2017 17:48
My Relationship with Perfectionism
orchidee said:
A fine write Shadow. And the last stanza is enough, I feel. Or else it\'s a bit like scrubbing something which will never be perfectly(!) clean.
November 20th, 2017 14:48
orchidee said:
A fine write Shadow. And the last stanza is enough, I feel. Or else it\'s a bit like scrubbing something which will never be perfectly(!) clean.
November 20th, 2017 14:48
A Lucky Poodle
Accidental Poet said:
If your great great great grandmother penned this poem, she was a fine poet of her day. And personally, I believe all animals go to Heaven, so her small poodle should be with her still. Thanks for posting Shadow.
November 17th, 2017 08:49
Accidental Poet said:
If your great great great grandmother penned this poem, she was a fine poet of her day. And personally, I believe all animals go to Heaven, so her small poodle should be with her still. Thanks for posting Shadow.
November 17th, 2017 08:49
The Dove
Accidental Poet said:
Beautifully written dialog with your heart. May your heart flourish in future endeavors.
November 15th, 2017 20:26
Accidental Poet said:
Beautifully written dialog with your heart. May your heart flourish in future endeavors.
November 15th, 2017 20:26
Healing Charms
Accidental Poet said:
Very nice write Shadow. Not sure how, but I agree that many animals have senses and healing powers.
November 15th, 2017 20:18
Accidental Poet said:
Very nice write Shadow. Not sure how, but I agree that many animals have senses and healing powers.
November 15th, 2017 20:18
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