Comments received on poems by FineB



The ISLE of Wight
๐Ÿคs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ŸŒท๐Ÿ˜ธ said:

Wow you have captured the exotic Isle poetically and it sounds quite a place to visit and see some medieval architecture perhaps. I admire many a medieval architecture by the way. Kudos.


Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too


October 22nd, 2019 13:10

The ISLE of Wight
orchidee said:

A fine write, and in the shape of that isle, Fine!

October 22nd, 2019 01:34

The ISLE of Wight
Goldfinch60 said:

I have been to the Isle of Wight once many, many years ago and I would giv it the biggest complement of them all, I would go back.

October 22nd, 2019 00:34

The ISLE of Wight
Neville said:

Never been to the Isle of Wight but would love to one day..

I have been to Madeira tho .. Nice one Fine B..

October 21st, 2019 16:25

The ISLE of Wight
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FRIEND ! ISLE of WIGHT been with my Parents and also took Angela ~ She loved it ! never far from the SEA and (because its an island) less traffic than UK mainland ! Good climate all year round and much to do ! All the places you mention in your elegant Poem bring back memories. They all speak good English and the cuisine is mainly English as well ~ especially in the Boarding Houses & Hotels ~ Full English every morning !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™



October 21st, 2019 15:49

It hurts as a human
OUTBACK said:

THERE ARE ( NO ) WORLD LEADERS THAT HAVE DONE or WILL EVER - DO - A \" THING \" ! PEOPLE - WORRIED * ABOUT \" GLOBAL WARMING* ! YEA ! PRESENTLY* - THE - LATEST* - SCIENTIFIC* - EXPERTS* - CONSENSU$ * - PROPAGANDIZED* - ( LIES ) = INDOCTRNATED* - INTO -THE CONFINES* of THAT - WHICH IS CALLED = \" SOCIETY \" 1 AS - THE - COLD WAR - ATOMIC BOMB THREAT - END of THE WORLD SENERIO* / AS 9 / 11 / AS - TERRORISOM* = ( BUSINE$$ ) / AS PROBLEM* / $OLUTION* - DIRECTIVE$* of aTHE DIVIDE* & CONQUER* - METHODS* of THE - POLITICAL * -CRIMINAL$* - RAMPANT* - THROUGHOUT* the ENTIRE - HISTORY of THE WORLD* by WAY of ALL* - WHOM SO SIMPLY BELIEVE* & OBIDENTLY* - MINDLESSLY* - COMPLY to THEIR -AUTHORITY* of LAW & ORDER* - ALL BASED UPON THE SOLE PARISITICAL DISEASE CALLED = \" DEPENDENCY \" !

October 13th, 2019 20:32

It hurts as a human
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI FRIEND ~ WE AGREE ! Seems like Planet Earth has become unsuitable for HUMANS ~ mainly due to HUMAN activity ! As you point out reasons could be ~

1. Too many People (7.5 billion & rising) not enought resources
2. Unemployed & desperate Poeple resorting to crime
3. People worried about the future *GLOBAL WARMING* etc become very unstable
4. Unsuitable WORLD LEADERS ~ Trump - Boris - Putin etc

STOP THE WORLD I WANT TO GET OFF !

BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Love A & B ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก
Please check our POEMS ~ Thanks

October 13th, 2019 19:39

It hurts as a human
dusk arising said:

What an intriguing write about such negatives but somehow you maintain a positive vibe throughout. Maybe because i read your own comment beforehand.

Your piece leaves me feeling that it\'s all about a lack of respect for everything around us. Astonishingly, when i think about it, that lack of respect can be traced right back to lack of respect from mother to child..... and ask yourself... where does that lead to..... well i\'m not hard and fast on the issue but i do see how it leads to the society you describe so well.

A disturbing, thought provoking read.

October 13th, 2019 14:25

It hurts as a human
orchidee said:

A fine write Fine.

October 13th, 2019 01:55

It hurts as a human
Goldfinch60 said:

The times are changing as you have wonderfully shown in your words FineB.
The things that I find the worst are the lack of both politeness and respect, they may seem trivial in the world but they are important to me.

October 13th, 2019 01:42

It hurts as a human
Poetic Dan said:

Keep writing, words so precious to hear! As it was with every line you share, thank you!

October 13th, 2019 01:23

It hurts as a human
tepo said:

I\'ve spent quite a bit of time in London
Esp east end
Also from Glasgow so I get this
However
With people like you around
It may hurt
But
You show the kind of humanity we all should strive for
Pleasure to read you again

October 12th, 2019 17:42

London to Brighton 100k
orchidee said:

Happy Birthday too, yes?! The date format on here would show 9/16. It does not exist in UK format!

September 16th, 2019 01:34

London to Brighton 100k
orchidee said:

A fine write there Fine. I was worn out only walking to the Co-op and back. mid you, it was 10 miles each way. lol.

September 16th, 2019 01:33

London to Brighton 100k
Goldfinch60 said:

May the strength in your mind that helped you complete the walk always be with you.

When I was a lot younger it was the 50 mile London to Brighton walk.

September 16th, 2019 01:17

Tea at the Ritz
FineB said:

Hi Neville,

Glad you liked the poem?

How do you take your tea - Lapsangsouchong, Earl Grey or Darjeeling?

Keep writing FineB


September 15th, 2019 16:05

Tea at the Ritz
Neville said:

sounds heavenly.... just love scones jam & clotted cream...... N

September 14th, 2019 09:44

FRUSTRATION
Unsub said:

FineBul,

I\'m not keen on acrostics to be honest but this one was certainly much more entertaining that some of the run of the mill ones I\'ve seen here.

As for the underground. I deliberately travel on the underground to people watch to use as characters in my book.

Also watching their own mannerisms & listening to their conversations creates images in my head to help craft poems.

Anyway, next time you get frustrated on the tube, watch someone & in your head write a poem about them.

Unsub.

September 5th, 2019 04:43

Sharon Tate
FineB said:

Hello Fay.

Many thanks.

Yes, Sharon Tate\'s death was so bizarre and tragic and out of the blue.

Hollywood is more corporate now and certainly less hedonistic and wild compared to the days of the Swinging Sixties.

Keep writing FineB



September 5th, 2019 04:38

Sharon Tate
Fay Slimm said:

Poor young innocents got really hung up on the tinsel back then - one sad tragedy which your verse captures so well .

September 5th, 2019 04:20

Sharon Tate
Neville said:

Captured perfectly....

I went on an open top tour right past the Polanski estate a few years back..
gave me quite a chill I can tell thee...

September 5th, 2019 04:14

Sharon Tate
orchidee said:

A fine write Fine.
He\'s dead now. He\'ll answer for his monstrous deeds, as will his gang.

September 5th, 2019 01:34

Sharon Tate
Poetic Dan said:

Wow... Raw, so beautifully done.

September 4th, 2019 16:12

The Hotel Bar
Neville said:

a great film and a good re-make here...

September 3rd, 2019 10:46

Modern Disney Heroine
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI FRIEND - ANGELA HERE - Its nearly midnight (Sunday) here in NEW ZEALAND but I wanted to comment on your lovely Poem - Celebrating Disney Female role-models - before I went to bed ! From MINNIE MOUSE onwards the Disney Girls have always been an inspiration to me as have the Ladies in the Bible ! Loved all the Ladies you mentioned - the skills they possessed and the success they achieved ! In my profession PHYSIOTHERAPY the skills and gifts we Ladies bring to the Job make us equally valued as the Men so we have equal pay - equal opportunities and equal chances in promotion. What we do bring is healing hands in massage - lots of TLC for our Clients - a knowledge - and understanding - of Aromatherapy - Aquatherapy & Acupuncture which are important facets of our Job. Thanks for caring & sharing I enjoyed it !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

August 18th, 2019 07:08

Modern Disney Heroine
Neville said:

you have certainly made a niche for yourself FineB

Keep writing

Neville

August 18th, 2019 06:46

FRUSTRATION
Fay Slimm said:

Felt that outburst against things that go wonky at times in our life - - dunno how I would cope for more an hour with London Underground chaos so hats off to your closing line -- better to let out built-up steam to keep things in perspective and hope this write has done that for now Fine B

August 15th, 2019 12:47

FRUSTRATION
orchidee said:

Good write Fine.

August 15th, 2019 01:34

FRUSTRATION
Goldfinch60 said:

Good acrostic. We all get those days, I had a similar day yesterday while driving, all the idiots were on the road!

August 15th, 2019 00:29

FRUSTRATION
Michael Edwards said:

I never (or very rarely) look back and know not frustration - mine is more indifferent acceptance. But heigh - this a fine work from your fine pen.

August 14th, 2019 23:27

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