Comments received on poems by FineB
AUTUMN IN WEMBLEY
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable reminder that autumn brings its own beauties to those who watch, listen and record in fine words. Thank you for sharing Wembley\'s seasonal blessings with us dear Alan.
December 20th, 2019 11:26
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable reminder that autumn brings its own beauties to those who watch, listen and record in fine words. Thank you for sharing Wembley\'s seasonal blessings with us dear Alan.
December 20th, 2019 11:26
AUTUMN IN WEMBLEY
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch,
Many thanks.
Take care and keep on wiriting FineB
December 20th, 2019 04:00
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch,
Many thanks.
Take care and keep on wiriting FineB
December 20th, 2019 04:00
AUTUMN IN WEMBLEY
Goldfinch60 said:
Those Autumn days can be filled with wonder and beauty.
December 20th, 2019 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those Autumn days can be filled with wonder and beauty.
December 20th, 2019 01:33
The White Lady
Nafis Light said:
It doesn\'t seem Gothic to me, even though it is in the Gothic Category.
Maybe it is due to own\'s fantasy and imagination.
I did several times many years ago, watch a Philippine ghost movie called White Lady.
It was scary because...the visual is there and they made it like that in the movie.
I relate more to the Love part of the character here and I...sympathize, instead of feeling scared.
It is an irony, because it\'s like ghosts are supposed to be scary...but there is no fear at all from the people.
November 29th, 2019 06:45
Nafis Light said:
It doesn\'t seem Gothic to me, even though it is in the Gothic Category.
Maybe it is due to own\'s fantasy and imagination.
I did several times many years ago, watch a Philippine ghost movie called White Lady.
It was scary because...the visual is there and they made it like that in the movie.
I relate more to the Love part of the character here and I...sympathize, instead of feeling scared.
It is an irony, because it\'s like ghosts are supposed to be scary...but there is no fear at all from the people.
November 29th, 2019 06:45
Creative Process
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Indeed Fine! A joy too, I think, to create with ambiguity and metaphors; to perhaps allow the Holy Spirit to infuse meaning into the reader’s soul. Thanks for the inspiration!
November 16th, 2019 19:10
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Indeed Fine! A joy too, I think, to create with ambiguity and metaphors; to perhaps allow the Holy Spirit to infuse meaning into the reader’s soul. Thanks for the inspiration!
November 16th, 2019 19:10
Creative Process
Suresh said:
I kept knocking on the door of my muse, and now I realize, she was visiting you.
November 11th, 2019 21:59
Suresh said:
I kept knocking on the door of my muse, and now I realize, she was visiting you.
November 11th, 2019 21:59
Creative Process
orchidee said:
A good write Fine. Did I \'cheat\' - write some poems in advance, ready for one per day on here?! lol.
November 4th, 2019 02:57
orchidee said:
A good write Fine. Did I \'cheat\' - write some poems in advance, ready for one per day on here?! lol.
November 4th, 2019 02:57
Creative Process
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I think we all agree with your words FineB
November 4th, 2019 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I think we all agree with your words FineB
November 4th, 2019 01:03
Creative Process
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoy I did - and yes - the art of creativity is what puts the icing on the cake of life.
November 3rd, 2019 15:08
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoy I did - and yes - the art of creativity is what puts the icing on the cake of life.
November 3rd, 2019 15:08
It hurts as a human
FredPeyer said:
Great poem! If all of us would just do one good deed a day, this world would be spectacular!
October 31st, 2019 10:08
FredPeyer said:
Great poem! If all of us would just do one good deed a day, this world would be spectacular!
October 31st, 2019 10:08
The Coven
FredPeyer said:
Love this poem, FineB, \"motivated by greed, depravity, mayhem...\" sounds like our Government! :-)
October 31st, 2019 10:02
FredPeyer said:
Love this poem, FineB, \"motivated by greed, depravity, mayhem...\" sounds like our Government! :-)
October 31st, 2019 10:02
The Coven
orchidee said:
Now look, some only join in cos of that naked slap and tickle stuff! I wouldn\'t know, of course - swoon! (ooh heehee).
October 31st, 2019 03:06
orchidee said:
Now look, some only join in cos of that naked slap and tickle stuff! I wouldn\'t know, of course - swoon! (ooh heehee).
October 31st, 2019 03:06
It hurts as a human
Fay Slimm. said:
The conditions besetting humans are described so well - - consideration and kindness do need first place then right vibes in life are worth every celebration.
October 27th, 2019 15:00
Fay Slimm. said:
The conditions besetting humans are described so well - - consideration and kindness do need first place then right vibes in life are worth every celebration.
October 27th, 2019 15:00
It hurts as a human
Neville said:
What a grand job you have done pulling so many current injustices, wrongs and predicaments together and drawing our attention to them.. N
October 27th, 2019 14:35
Neville said:
What a grand job you have done pulling so many current injustices, wrongs and predicaments together and drawing our attention to them.. N
October 27th, 2019 14:35
The ISLE of Wight
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you have captured the exotic Isle poetically and it sounds quite a place to visit and see some medieval architecture perhaps. I admire many a medieval architecture by the way. Kudos.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too
October 22nd, 2019 13:10
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you have captured the exotic Isle poetically and it sounds quite a place to visit and see some medieval architecture perhaps. I admire many a medieval architecture by the way. Kudos.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too
October 22nd, 2019 13:10
The ISLE of Wight
orchidee said:
A fine write, and in the shape of that isle, Fine!
October 22nd, 2019 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write, and in the shape of that isle, Fine!
October 22nd, 2019 01:34
The ISLE of Wight
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been to the Isle of Wight once many, many years ago and I would giv it the biggest complement of them all, I would go back.
October 22nd, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
I have been to the Isle of Wight once many, many years ago and I would giv it the biggest complement of them all, I would go back.
October 22nd, 2019 00:34
The ISLE of Wight
Neville said:
Never been to the Isle of Wight but would love to one day..
I have been to Madeira tho .. Nice one Fine B..
October 21st, 2019 16:25
Neville said:
Never been to the Isle of Wight but would love to one day..
I have been to Madeira tho .. Nice one Fine B..
October 21st, 2019 16:25
The ISLE of Wight
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FRIEND ! ISLE of WIGHT been with my Parents and also took Angela ~ She loved it ! never far from the SEA and (because its an island) less traffic than UK mainland ! Good climate all year round and much to do ! All the places you mention in your elegant Poem bring back memories. They all speak good English and the cuisine is mainly English as well ~ especially in the Boarding Houses & Hotels ~ Full English every morning !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 21st, 2019 15:49
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks for sharing FRIEND ! ISLE of WIGHT been with my Parents and also took Angela ~ She loved it ! never far from the SEA and (because its an island) less traffic than UK mainland ! Good climate all year round and much to do ! All the places you mention in your elegant Poem bring back memories. They all speak good English and the cuisine is mainly English as well ~ especially in the Boarding Houses & Hotels ~ Full English every morning !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
October 21st, 2019 15:49
It hurts as a human
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ WE AGREE ! Seems like Planet Earth has become unsuitable for HUMANS ~ mainly due to HUMAN activity ! As you point out reasons could be ~
1. Too many People (7.5 billion & rising) not enought resources
2. Unemployed & desperate Poeple resorting to crime
3. People worried about the future *GLOBAL WARMING* etc become very unstable
4. Unsuitable WORLD LEADERS ~ Trump - Boris - Putin etc
STOP THE WORLD I WANT TO GET OFF !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEMS ~ Thanks
October 13th, 2019 19:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ WE AGREE ! Seems like Planet Earth has become unsuitable for HUMANS ~ mainly due to HUMAN activity ! As you point out reasons could be ~
1. Too many People (7.5 billion & rising) not enought resources
2. Unemployed & desperate Poeple resorting to crime
3. People worried about the future *GLOBAL WARMING* etc become very unstable
4. Unsuitable WORLD LEADERS ~ Trump - Boris - Putin etc
STOP THE WORLD I WANT TO GET OFF !
BLESSINGS & Peace & Joy
Love A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEMS ~ Thanks
October 13th, 2019 19:39
It hurts as a human
dusk arising said:
What an intriguing write about such negatives but somehow you maintain a positive vibe throughout. Maybe because i read your own comment beforehand.
Your piece leaves me feeling that it\'s all about a lack of respect for everything around us. Astonishingly, when i think about it, that lack of respect can be traced right back to lack of respect from mother to child..... and ask yourself... where does that lead to..... well i\'m not hard and fast on the issue but i do see how it leads to the society you describe so well.
A disturbing, thought provoking read.
October 13th, 2019 14:25
dusk arising said:
What an intriguing write about such negatives but somehow you maintain a positive vibe throughout. Maybe because i read your own comment beforehand.
Your piece leaves me feeling that it\'s all about a lack of respect for everything around us. Astonishingly, when i think about it, that lack of respect can be traced right back to lack of respect from mother to child..... and ask yourself... where does that lead to..... well i\'m not hard and fast on the issue but i do see how it leads to the society you describe so well.
A disturbing, thought provoking read.
October 13th, 2019 14:25
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