Comments received on poems by FineB
It hurts as a human
Goldfinch60 said:
The times are changing as you have wonderfully shown in your words FineB.
The things that I find the worst are the lack of both politeness and respect, they may seem trivial in the world but they are important to me.
October 13th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
The times are changing as you have wonderfully shown in your words FineB.
The things that I find the worst are the lack of both politeness and respect, they may seem trivial in the world but they are important to me.
October 13th, 2019 01:42
It hurts as a human
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing, words so precious to hear! As it was with every line you share, thank you!
October 13th, 2019 01:23
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing, words so precious to hear! As it was with every line you share, thank you!
October 13th, 2019 01:23
London to Brighton 100k
orchidee said:
Happy Birthday too, yes?! The date format on here would show 9/16. It does not exist in UK format!
September 16th, 2019 01:34
orchidee said:
Happy Birthday too, yes?! The date format on here would show 9/16. It does not exist in UK format!
September 16th, 2019 01:34
London to Brighton 100k
orchidee said:
A fine write there Fine. I was worn out only walking to the Co-op and back. mid you, it was 10 miles each way. lol.
September 16th, 2019 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write there Fine. I was worn out only walking to the Co-op and back. mid you, it was 10 miles each way. lol.
September 16th, 2019 01:33
London to Brighton 100k
Goldfinch60 said:
May the strength in your mind that helped you complete the walk always be with you.
When I was a lot younger it was the 50 mile London to Brighton walk.
September 16th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
May the strength in your mind that helped you complete the walk always be with you.
When I was a lot younger it was the 50 mile London to Brighton walk.
September 16th, 2019 01:17
Tea at the Ritz
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
Glad you liked the poem?
How do you take your tea - Lapsangsouchong, Earl Grey or Darjeeling?
Keep writing FineB
September 15th, 2019 16:05
FineB said:
Hi Neville,
Glad you liked the poem?
How do you take your tea - Lapsangsouchong, Earl Grey or Darjeeling?
Keep writing FineB
September 15th, 2019 16:05
Tea at the Ritz
Neville said:
sounds heavenly.... just love scones jam & clotted cream...... N
September 14th, 2019 09:44
Neville said:
sounds heavenly.... just love scones jam & clotted cream...... N
September 14th, 2019 09:44
Sharon Tate
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
Many thanks.
Yes, Sharon Tate\'s death was so bizarre and tragic and out of the blue.
Hollywood is more corporate now and certainly less hedonistic and wild compared to the days of the Swinging Sixties.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:38
FineB said:
Hello Fay.
Many thanks.
Yes, Sharon Tate\'s death was so bizarre and tragic and out of the blue.
Hollywood is more corporate now and certainly less hedonistic and wild compared to the days of the Swinging Sixties.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:38
Sharon Tate
Fay Slimm. said:
Poor young innocents got really hung up on the tinsel back then - one sad tragedy which your verse captures so well .
September 5th, 2019 04:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Poor young innocents got really hung up on the tinsel back then - one sad tragedy which your verse captures so well .
September 5th, 2019 04:20
Sharon Tate
Neville said:
Captured perfectly....
I went on an open top tour right past the Polanski estate a few years back..
gave me quite a chill I can tell thee...
September 5th, 2019 04:14
Neville said:
Captured perfectly....
I went on an open top tour right past the Polanski estate a few years back..
gave me quite a chill I can tell thee...
September 5th, 2019 04:14
Sharon Tate
orchidee said:
A fine write Fine.
He\'s dead now. He\'ll answer for his monstrous deeds, as will his gang.
September 5th, 2019 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Fine.
He\'s dead now. He\'ll answer for his monstrous deeds, as will his gang.
September 5th, 2019 01:34
Modern Disney Heroine
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND - ANGELA HERE - Its nearly midnight (Sunday) here in NEW ZEALAND but I wanted to comment on your lovely Poem - Celebrating Disney Female role-models - before I went to bed ! From MINNIE MOUSE onwards the Disney Girls have always been an inspiration to me as have the Ladies in the Bible ! Loved all the Ladies you mentioned - the skills they possessed and the success they achieved ! In my profession PHYSIOTHERAPY the skills and gifts we Ladies bring to the Job make us equally valued as the Men so we have equal pay - equal opportunities and equal chances in promotion. What we do bring is healing hands in massage - lots of TLC for our Clients - a knowledge - and understanding - of Aromatherapy - Aquatherapy & Acupuncture which are important facets of our Job. Thanks for caring & sharing I enjoyed it !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 18th, 2019 07:08
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND - ANGELA HERE - Its nearly midnight (Sunday) here in NEW ZEALAND but I wanted to comment on your lovely Poem - Celebrating Disney Female role-models - before I went to bed ! From MINNIE MOUSE onwards the Disney Girls have always been an inspiration to me as have the Ladies in the Bible ! Loved all the Ladies you mentioned - the skills they possessed and the success they achieved ! In my profession PHYSIOTHERAPY the skills and gifts we Ladies bring to the Job make us equally valued as the Men so we have equal pay - equal opportunities and equal chances in promotion. What we do bring is healing hands in massage - lots of TLC for our Clients - a knowledge - and understanding - of Aromatherapy - Aquatherapy & Acupuncture which are important facets of our Job. Thanks for caring & sharing I enjoyed it !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
August 18th, 2019 07:08
Modern Disney Heroine
Neville said:
you have certainly made a niche for yourself FineB
Keep writing
Neville
August 18th, 2019 06:46
Neville said:
you have certainly made a niche for yourself FineB
Keep writing
Neville
August 18th, 2019 06:46
FRUSTRATION
Fay Slimm. said:
Felt that outburst against things that go wonky at times in our life - - dunno how I would cope for more an hour with London Underground chaos so hats off to your closing line -- better to let out built-up steam to keep things in perspective and hope this write has done that for now Fine B
August 15th, 2019 12:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Felt that outburst against things that go wonky at times in our life - - dunno how I would cope for more an hour with London Underground chaos so hats off to your closing line -- better to let out built-up steam to keep things in perspective and hope this write has done that for now Fine B
August 15th, 2019 12:47
FRUSTRATION
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic. We all get those days, I had a similar day yesterday while driving, all the idiots were on the road!
August 15th, 2019 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic. We all get those days, I had a similar day yesterday while driving, all the idiots were on the road!
August 15th, 2019 00:29
FRUSTRATION
Michael Edwards said:
I never (or very rarely) look back and know not frustration - mine is more indifferent acceptance. But heigh - this a fine work from your fine pen.
August 14th, 2019 23:27
Michael Edwards said:
I never (or very rarely) look back and know not frustration - mine is more indifferent acceptance. But heigh - this a fine work from your fine pen.
August 14th, 2019 23:27
FRUSTRATION
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ Loved the Poem ! Life today all over the World - London (UK) or Auckland (NZ) is full of petty FRUSTATIONS ! Our poetic MANTRA is *When in doubt write an ACROSTIC* ! Which ~ in our experience ~ is the least frustrating POETIC FORM !
1. The number of lines is dictated
2. It doesn*t have to RHYME (yours does)
3. It doesn*t have to scan (free verse)
4. The end product always looks *classic*
5. An ACROSTIC is (by its very nature) ~
Complete & Satisfying
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 14th, 2019 17:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FRIEND ~ Loved the Poem ! Life today all over the World - London (UK) or Auckland (NZ) is full of petty FRUSTATIONS ! Our poetic MANTRA is *When in doubt write an ACROSTIC* ! Which ~ in our experience ~ is the least frustrating POETIC FORM !
1. The number of lines is dictated
2. It doesn*t have to RHYME (yours does)
3. It doesn*t have to scan (free verse)
4. The end product always looks *classic*
5. An ACROSTIC is (by its very nature) ~
Complete & Satisfying
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 14th, 2019 17:21
FRUSTRATION
Neville said:
your frustration is clearly palpable within this most apt acrostic post... N
August 14th, 2019 17:06
Neville said:
your frustration is clearly palpable within this most apt acrostic post... N
August 14th, 2019 17:06
SWEET MELODY
Goldfinch60 said:
Music in our lives always brings us to a better place - as do your words.
August 11th, 2019 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Music in our lives always brings us to a better place - as do your words.
August 11th, 2019 00:47
SWEET MELODY
orchidee said:
A good write Fine. Oohh, Happy Birthday too, I see! I won\'t give a rendition to you, as me singing will spoil your whole day! heehee.
August 10th, 2019 13:49
orchidee said:
A good write Fine. Oohh, Happy Birthday too, I see! I won\'t give a rendition to you, as me singing will spoil your whole day! heehee.
August 10th, 2019 13:49
SWEET MELODY
kevin browne said:
You certainly fine tunes this melodic poem. Great stuff to catch the readers eyes and ears..!!
August 10th, 2019 11:01
kevin browne said:
You certainly fine tunes this melodic poem. Great stuff to catch the readers eyes and ears..!!
August 10th, 2019 11:01
SWEET MELODY
Neville said:
I think you have the market cornered for this particular genre... quite unique in my mind... N
August 10th, 2019 10:46
Neville said:
I think you have the market cornered for this particular genre... quite unique in my mind... N
August 10th, 2019 10:46
LAS VEGAS
Neville said:
I have been to the US several times.. never to Las Vegas tho...
and no need to now.. you kinda literally took me there .............. N
August 5th, 2019 09:49
Neville said:
I have been to the US several times.. never to Las Vegas tho...
and no need to now.. you kinda literally took me there .............. N
August 5th, 2019 09:49
Kew Gardens
Goldfinch60 said:
Good colourful write FineB.
I have never been to Kew but have been to other gardens around the country. It is wonderful to see all those colours.
The best \'garden\' that I like though is when I walk in the wild gardens of nature.
August 5th, 2019 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good colourful write FineB.
I have never been to Kew but have been to other gardens around the country. It is wonderful to see all those colours.
The best \'garden\' that I like though is when I walk in the wild gardens of nature.
August 5th, 2019 00:52
Kew Gardens
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic read before bed, I shall drift nicely tonight thank you.
August 4th, 2019 17:20
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic read before bed, I shall drift nicely tonight thank you.
August 4th, 2019 17:20
Kew Gardens
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FRIEND - Brian & I love KEW GARDENS and have visited several times and also the University Botanical Gardens @ Cambridge which are only 50 miles from Essex as is Kew. We have both studied Botany (Brian moreso than me) and Ecology so we are both very interested in Gardens wherever we are in the World (Im still in New Zealand til October !) Brian teaches Plant Science (Horticulture) at College and has a big allotment for the students to use. Pleased you enjoyed KEW. We have also spent a week @ the Eden Project and the Lost Gardens of Helligan in Devon - very exciting for anyone intersted in *The Life of Plants* We loved your Poem & enthusiasm for Plants !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙
August 4th, 2019 17:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FRIEND - Brian & I love KEW GARDENS and have visited several times and also the University Botanical Gardens @ Cambridge which are only 50 miles from Essex as is Kew. We have both studied Botany (Brian moreso than me) and Ecology so we are both very interested in Gardens wherever we are in the World (Im still in New Zealand til October !) Brian teaches Plant Science (Horticulture) at College and has a big allotment for the students to use. Pleased you enjoyed KEW. We have also spent a week @ the Eden Project and the Lost Gardens of Helligan in Devon - very exciting for anyone intersted in *The Life of Plants* We loved your Poem & enthusiasm for Plants !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours Angela & Brian 🧡💙🧡💙
August 4th, 2019 17:02
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