Comments received on poems by FineB
The Alternative Fourth Day of Xmas
Michael Edwards said:
In front of the TV I decided to sit
to watch the same old film once more
a murder mystery I\'d seen before
pretending I didn\'t know who did it.
December 28th, 2020 15:21
Michael Edwards said:
In front of the TV I decided to sit
to watch the same old film once more
a murder mystery I\'d seen before
pretending I didn\'t know who did it.
December 28th, 2020 15:21
The Alternative Third Day of Xmas
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one FineB, robins do enjoy mealworms though.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one FineB, robins do enjoy mealworms though.
Andy
December 28th, 2020 01:28
The Alternative Third Day of Xmas
Jerry Reynolds said:
A humble link to a fine verse.
the new moon awakens
to the need of others
December 27th, 2020 09:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
A humble link to a fine verse.
the new moon awakens
to the need of others
December 27th, 2020 09:50
The Alternative Second Day of Xmas
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true except this year when Harrods was closed.
Good fun write FineB.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true except this year when Harrods was closed.
Good fun write FineB.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:47
The Alternative Second Day of Xmas
Jerry Reynolds said:
How it feels at a ghost fight
December 26th, 2020 10:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
How it feels at a ghost fight
December 26th, 2020 10:43
The Alternative Second Day of Xmas
orchidee said:
Can they this year?! Or fight online over it?
December 26th, 2020 07:26
orchidee said:
Can they this year?! Or fight online over it?
December 26th, 2020 07:26
The Alternative First Day of Xmas
Poetic Dan said:
Yes I have woken up with happiness in my feet and love in my heart!
This may be the only poem I read today so wish you love for today & beyond!
Keep up the write
Much peace, respect and all the light
December 25th, 2020 03:06
Poetic Dan said:
Yes I have woken up with happiness in my feet and love in my heart!
This may be the only poem I read today so wish you love for today & beyond!
Keep up the write
Much peace, respect and all the light
December 25th, 2020 03:06
The Alternative First Day of Xmas
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is everything FineB and may it always be with us and within us.
Andy
December 25th, 2020 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is everything FineB and may it always be with us and within us.
Andy
December 25th, 2020 01:46
Flashdance- A Tribute
Neville said:
I have never seen the film.. have heard about it and seen the clips ... in spite of this, I feel that I have a much greater understanding and appreciation of the movie ... now aint that just the power of words eh\' .... tis a fine line between ignorance and insight innit ..... thank you for helping this old fella to see ...
November 22nd, 2020 02:06
Neville said:
I have never seen the film.. have heard about it and seen the clips ... in spite of this, I feel that I have a much greater understanding and appreciation of the movie ... now aint that just the power of words eh\' .... tis a fine line between ignorance and insight innit ..... thank you for helping this old fella to see ...
November 22nd, 2020 02:06
Flashdance- A Tribute
Goldfinch60 said:
Once we find our place in life it will never be the same.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Once we find our place in life it will never be the same.
Andy
November 22nd, 2020 01:29
The King
Poetic Dan said:
I start and end with the king! I\'ll take that as a fantastic sign...
Always appreciated!
Keep up the write!
November 10th, 2020 14:16
Poetic Dan said:
I start and end with the king! I\'ll take that as a fantastic sign...
Always appreciated!
Keep up the write!
November 10th, 2020 14:16
The King
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sublime on chess and perhaps meant in subtle strong metaphor. Kudos.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
November 10th, 2020 05:05
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Sublime on chess and perhaps meant in subtle strong metaphor. Kudos.
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
November 10th, 2020 05:05
The King
Goldfinch60 said:
The piece the others are all trying to surround so he cannot move.
Andy
November 10th, 2020 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
The piece the others are all trying to surround so he cannot move.
Andy
November 10th, 2020 01:54
The QUEEN
Goldfinch60 said:
The most powerful piece on the board and forever being chased by the opposition.
Andy
November 8th, 2020 16:20
Goldfinch60 said:
The most powerful piece on the board and forever being chased by the opposition.
Andy
November 8th, 2020 16:20
The QUEEN
Nafis Light said:
I Love Chess Game. One of the true things about it is...about the way we play shows our personality.
November 8th, 2020 09:03
Nafis Light said:
I Love Chess Game. One of the true things about it is...about the way we play shows our personality.
November 8th, 2020 09:03
The QUEEN
FineB said:
HI Duskarising
Thank you for your own wonderful tribute to the Queen.
Never lose her too early in a game I have discovered.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 8th, 2020 05:57
FineB said:
HI Duskarising
Thank you for your own wonderful tribute to the Queen.
Never lose her too early in a game I have discovered.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
November 8th, 2020 05:57
The QUEEN
dusk arising said:
Yes, the noble beauty, around whom strategic forces move. Respect her then, for she has been known to suicide in a plot to dethrone an opposing king.
Weave a plot with care and precision but be afraid not to wield the highest ladies majestic power for she strikes fear and envy before her. Where nervous campaigns to thwart her presence have seen fatal collapse as she moves to final mate!
November 8th, 2020 05:07
dusk arising said:
Yes, the noble beauty, around whom strategic forces move. Respect her then, for she has been known to suicide in a plot to dethrone an opposing king.
Weave a plot with care and precision but be afraid not to wield the highest ladies majestic power for she strikes fear and envy before her. Where nervous campaigns to thwart her presence have seen fatal collapse as she moves to final mate!
November 8th, 2020 05:07
The QUEEN
orchidee said:
Good write Fine. The King plods on, a square at a time - well, except for the Castling move.
November 8th, 2020 03:40
orchidee said:
Good write Fine. The King plods on, a square at a time - well, except for the Castling move.
November 8th, 2020 03:40
The QUEEN
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the Queen - most noble piece - do like this series - must write a few lines about patriotism - coming to your computer screen soon.
November 8th, 2020 03:32
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the Queen - most noble piece - do like this series - must write a few lines about patriotism - coming to your computer screen soon.
November 8th, 2020 03:32
The Bishop
FineB said:
HI Angela, Brian and Smokey.
Thank you.
The Bishop doesn\'t worry me, it\'s rhe Knight that can be my Achilles heel in a game at times if Im not too careful.
Keep writing ✍ and safe all of you during lockdown.
FineB
November 7th, 2020 14:12
FineB said:
HI Angela, Brian and Smokey.
Thank you.
The Bishop doesn\'t worry me, it\'s rhe Knight that can be my Achilles heel in a game at times if Im not too careful.
Keep writing ✍ and safe all of you during lockdown.
FineB
November 7th, 2020 14:12
The Bishop
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE = Thanks for another Saga in your *Odes to Chessology* Because I can multitask I often find I have a better overview of the Game thanBRIAN who is technically a more experienced player. ! With two Bishops one commands all the Black & White squares in both an attacking & defensive mode. For Beginners _ because of its diagonal mode of attack it is difficult to see where it will strike next ! An unguarded QUEEN is often the victim of a BISHOP early in a game between Novices ! Atacking Knights & Bishops are two Pieces I teach youngsters to be very wary of ! Chess can teach us many lessons iin Real Life ~ AMEN
Blessings & Joy & Peace with Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
November 7th, 2020 11:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE = Thanks for another Saga in your *Odes to Chessology* Because I can multitask I often find I have a better overview of the Game thanBRIAN who is technically a more experienced player. ! With two Bishops one commands all the Black & White squares in both an attacking & defensive mode. For Beginners _ because of its diagonal mode of attack it is difficult to see where it will strike next ! An unguarded QUEEN is often the victim of a BISHOP early in a game between Novices ! Atacking Knights & Bishops are two Pieces I teach youngsters to be very wary of ! Chess can teach us many lessons iin Real Life ~ AMEN
Blessings & Joy & Peace with Love
Angela - Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛
November 7th, 2020 11:44
The Bishop
dusk arising said:
One\'s bishop should always be respected and brought into play only when a successful mating may take place.
Oh... you were basing this on chess.... i was thinking of...... oh well.
November 7th, 2020 05:54
dusk arising said:
One\'s bishop should always be respected and brought into play only when a successful mating may take place.
Oh... you were basing this on chess.... i was thinking of...... oh well.
November 7th, 2020 05:54
The Bishop
orchidee said:
Bishops in battles! \'God is on our side\' both sides say. Doh!
November 7th, 2020 04:50
orchidee said:
Bishops in battles! \'God is on our side\' both sides say. Doh!
November 7th, 2020 04:50
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