Comments received on poems by FineB
Disappointment is....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks B for a very elegant but real \"List of Disappointments\" most of which we can emphasise with most years ! However I note (as you comment) they are all transient ! I\'m an EVERTON SUPPORTER so I know what you mean ! Love the optimism in your you final line ~ In my experience ~ Life does turn around and Lady Luck is just around the Corner ! Love the POEM ~ thanks for sharing ~ Please check my ODES ~ Yours BRIAN
June 4th, 2018 11:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks B for a very elegant but real \"List of Disappointments\" most of which we can emphasise with most years ! However I note (as you comment) they are all transient ! I\'m an EVERTON SUPPORTER so I know what you mean ! Love the optimism in your you final line ~ In my experience ~ Life does turn around and Lady Luck is just around the Corner ! Love the POEM ~ thanks for sharing ~ Please check my ODES ~ Yours BRIAN
June 4th, 2018 11:15
The LIDO
Goldfinch60 said:
These places where people gather and commune together are wonderful and becoming so rare nowadays. Good write.
May 30th, 2018 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
These places where people gather and commune together are wonderful and becoming so rare nowadays. Good write.
May 30th, 2018 00:28
The LIDO
Michael Edwards said:
a great write and it takes me back to my childhood when I was a regular at Finchley Lido - a long time ago.
May 29th, 2018 13:09
Michael Edwards said:
a great write and it takes me back to my childhood when I was a regular at Finchley Lido - a long time ago.
May 29th, 2018 13:09
The LIDO
Laura🌻 said:
FineB,
An awesome write !
I enjoyed this read very much.
It resonates all the vacation
experiences of my youth at
the Italian beach resort, LIDO, near Venice!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 29th, 2018 09:57
Laura🌻 said:
FineB,
An awesome write !
I enjoyed this read very much.
It resonates all the vacation
experiences of my youth at
the Italian beach resort, LIDO, near Venice!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
May 29th, 2018 09:57
The tale of Jane Eyre
Laura🌻 said:
FineB,
A timeless classic indeed!
One of my favorites!
The first time I read it,
it was a required reading assignment! I did not appreciate it as much as I did the second time I read it...years later! Later in life I could relate to some of the events in Jane’s life...especially of being a teacher!
Your written account of her is fabulous! I truly enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing your excellent write!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 15:24
Laura🌻 said:
FineB,
A timeless classic indeed!
One of my favorites!
The first time I read it,
it was a required reading assignment! I did not appreciate it as much as I did the second time I read it...years later! Later in life I could relate to some of the events in Jane’s life...especially of being a teacher!
Your written account of her is fabulous! I truly enjoyed the read! Thank you for sharing your excellent write!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 15:24
The tale of Jane Eyre
Michael Edwards said:
Tremendous work FineB and I\'m envious of your trip to the ballet. I\'ve not read the book for some time now and you\'ve prompted me to get it out and dust it down.
May 17th, 2018 11:48
Michael Edwards said:
Tremendous work FineB and I\'m envious of your trip to the ballet. I\'ve not read the book for some time now and you\'ve prompted me to get it out and dust it down.
May 17th, 2018 11:48
The tale of Jane Eyre
Ian Primmer said:
Very well written with such passion. Thank you for that, what a great poem.
May 17th, 2018 11:13
Ian Primmer said:
Very well written with such passion. Thank you for that, what a great poem.
May 17th, 2018 11:13
Healing in the Yorkshire Dales
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
I am afraid so.
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
May 10th, 2018 11:54
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
I am afraid so.
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Thanks
Keep writing
FineB
May 10th, 2018 11:54
Healing in the Yorkshire Dales
Michael Edwards said:
Ah you\'re an old softie but so am I and this poem hit all the spots - fine work FineB
May 10th, 2018 11:05
Michael Edwards said:
Ah you\'re an old softie but so am I and this poem hit all the spots - fine work FineB
May 10th, 2018 11:05
Healing in the Yorkshire Dales
FineB said:
Thank you Goldfinch for reading.
Much appreciated.
Keep writing
FineB
May 10th, 2018 08:40
FineB said:
Thank you Goldfinch for reading.
Much appreciated.
Keep writing
FineB
May 10th, 2018 08:40
Healing in the Yorkshire Dales
Goldfinch60 said:
We spent many holidays in the Yorkshire Dales, Gods Country. Great write about an amazing place.
May 10th, 2018 07:52
Goldfinch60 said:
We spent many holidays in the Yorkshire Dales, Gods Country. Great write about an amazing place.
May 10th, 2018 07:52
Mental Health
RiverJordan said:
I can tell your a very well spoken person from the dynamics of your writing, awesome piece and well thought out illustration!
May 6th, 2018 19:04
RiverJordan said:
I can tell your a very well spoken person from the dynamics of your writing, awesome piece and well thought out illustration!
May 6th, 2018 19:04
Millennium Bridge - LONDON
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60.
Thanks.
One day don’t worry - you will!
Keep writing
FineB
May 4th, 2018 08:07
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60.
Thanks.
One day don’t worry - you will!
Keep writing
FineB
May 4th, 2018 08:07
Millennium Bridge - LONDON
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write FineB, I could see all those sights and people on that bridge.
I have never seen it myself though.
May 4th, 2018 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write FineB, I could see all those sights and people on that bridge.
I have never seen it myself though.
May 4th, 2018 00:36
Millennium Bridge - LONDON
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve swung on the bridge many times in sun and rain on my way to the Tate - I love it and a great write FB
May 3rd, 2018 12:14
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve swung on the bridge many times in sun and rain on my way to the Tate - I love it and a great write FB
May 3rd, 2018 12:14
The London Overground - Watford Junction to Euston
onepauly said:
wonderful! finally a great poem!
April 27th, 2018 10:15
onepauly said:
wonderful! finally a great poem!
April 27th, 2018 10:15
The London Overground - Watford Junction to Euston
orchidee said:
Ahh, you taking a birthday journey today? - I see - best wishes! One of my niece\'s birthday too.
I probably take a trip to Bognor, or Clacton, or Skegness - some really \'exciting\' place! (not?). lol.
April 27th, 2018 07:26
orchidee said:
Ahh, you taking a birthday journey today? - I see - best wishes! One of my niece\'s birthday too.
I probably take a trip to Bognor, or Clacton, or Skegness - some really \'exciting\' place! (not?). lol.
April 27th, 2018 07:26
The London Overground - Watford Junction to Euston
orchidee said:
Watford on the Overground. That\'s a long way. Almost as far as France, yes? lol. it\'s Bognor for me! lol.
April 27th, 2018 07:24
orchidee said:
Watford on the Overground. That\'s a long way. Almost as far as France, yes? lol. it\'s Bognor for me! lol.
April 27th, 2018 07:24
Images on the Hammersmith and City Line
onepauly said:
I\'m American with a mother who was born in England. to tell you the truth
id\'e rather be English. a lot of my thoughts are over their.
April 16th, 2018 08:15
onepauly said:
I\'m American with a mother who was born in England. to tell you the truth
id\'e rather be English. a lot of my thoughts are over their.
April 16th, 2018 08:15
Commonwealth Games 2018
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I agree FRIEND ~ It was the friendliest games I have ever witnessed ! I was on holiday fro the College where I teach Science so was able to watch during the day ! The SPIRIT among the competitors was so so loving and England did us proud across the whole range ~ I loved every minute of it ! Better than the OLYMPICS ~ No Drugs ~ USA / Russian Rivalry etc just pure sportmanship and sharing & caring ! BRUM 2022 should be equally as GREAT ! Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B !
April 15th, 2018 18:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I agree FRIEND ~ It was the friendliest games I have ever witnessed ! I was on holiday fro the College where I teach Science so was able to watch during the day ! The SPIRIT among the competitors was so so loving and England did us proud across the whole range ~ I loved every minute of it ! Better than the OLYMPICS ~ No Drugs ~ USA / Russian Rivalry etc just pure sportmanship and sharing & caring ! BRUM 2022 should be equally as GREAT ! Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check my poems ~ Thanks B !
April 15th, 2018 18:27
Commonwealth Games 2018
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
Much appreciated.
Keep writing
FineB
April 15th, 2018 17:24
FineB said:
Thank you Michael.
Much appreciated.
Keep writing
FineB
April 15th, 2018 17:24
Commonwealth Games 2018
Michael Edwards said:
Not something on my radar I\'m afraid apart from a summary I saw at the tail end of the news I know nothing about it. Guess I have an artistic temperament rather than a sports one. Nonetheless I recognise a great write to honour the event
April 15th, 2018 16:35
Michael Edwards said:
Not something on my radar I\'m afraid apart from a summary I saw at the tail end of the news I know nothing about it. Guess I have an artistic temperament rather than a sports one. Nonetheless I recognise a great write to honour the event
April 15th, 2018 16:35
Images on the Hammersmith and City Line
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, riding on the underground and looking t the people makes me wonder what their lives are about.
April 13th, 2018 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, riding on the underground and looking t the people makes me wonder what their lives are about.
April 13th, 2018 00:43
Images on the Hammersmith and City Line
orchidee said:
A fine write Fine. Yes, and some parts of the Underground are above ground. I recall going DOWN some steps somewhere to an exit of an underground station.
April 12th, 2018 13:26
orchidee said:
A fine write Fine. Yes, and some parts of the Underground are above ground. I recall going DOWN some steps somewhere to an exit of an underground station.
April 12th, 2018 13:26
Images on the Hammersmith and City Line
Michael Edwards said:
okay if you get on at the start and get a corner seat armed with a good book so you can pretend to read and still take a sly look at your fellow passengers. been there and done it - but not on this line.
April 12th, 2018 11:50
Michael Edwards said:
okay if you get on at the start and get a corner seat armed with a good book so you can pretend to read and still take a sly look at your fellow passengers. been there and done it - but not on this line.
April 12th, 2018 11:50
Mental Health
w c said:
I enjoyed the style and subject of this poem. I wish you health and happiness.
April 6th, 2018 19:31
w c said:
I enjoyed the style and subject of this poem. I wish you health and happiness.
April 6th, 2018 19:31
Mental Health
Michael Edwards said:
Fine write - sadly stigma is at the root of so many problems in our world and none more so than mental heath. I do a bit towards it with painting sessions for those with needs but I often think I don\'t do enough.
April 6th, 2018 07:48
Michael Edwards said:
Fine write - sadly stigma is at the root of so many problems in our world and none more so than mental heath. I do a bit towards it with painting sessions for those with needs but I often think I don\'t do enough.
April 6th, 2018 07:48
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