Comments received on poems by FineB
The Circle Line - Clockwise
FineB said:
Hello Michael.
Many thanks.
Enjoy the forthcoming rides!
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 15:01
FineB said:
Hello Michael.
Many thanks.
Enjoy the forthcoming rides!
Keep writing
FineB
January 25th, 2018 15:01
The Circle Line - Clockwise
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll be riding it in about 10 days time plus a good few of the other lines as well. Great write FB.
January 25th, 2018 12:12
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ll be riding it in about 10 days time plus a good few of the other lines as well. Great write FB.
January 25th, 2018 12:12
Vampire\'s Kiss
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one FB - love the idea of daring demonic love - must take the tablets :)
January 20th, 2018 16:12
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one FB - love the idea of daring demonic love - must take the tablets :)
January 20th, 2018 16:12
Vampire\'s Kiss
FineB said:
Hello Laura.
Thank you so much.
I am delighted you liked it.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 03:50
FineB said:
Hello Laura.
Thank you so much.
I am delighted you liked it.
Keep writing
FineB
January 20th, 2018 03:50
The Tower of London
Michael Edwards said:
A bit of nostalgia for me reading this - fine work FineB.
January 11th, 2018 17:10
Michael Edwards said:
A bit of nostalgia for me reading this - fine work FineB.
January 11th, 2018 17:10
Circle Line - Anti Clockwise
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh I see. Enjoyed your poem, super cool to read , the mouse part made me smile. Lol fun write all in all nicely rhymed in.
Soo nice to read from u again, hoping u will too review my latest titled, \"play it on your lips \"
January 10th, 2018 00:43
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oh I see. Enjoyed your poem, super cool to read , the mouse part made me smile. Lol fun write all in all nicely rhymed in.
Soo nice to read from u again, hoping u will too review my latest titled, \"play it on your lips \"
January 10th, 2018 00:43
Circle Line - Anti Clockwise
Michael Edwards said:
Empathise with this but why not stick to the clockwise route? LoL :)
January 5th, 2018 07:29
Michael Edwards said:
Empathise with this but why not stick to the clockwise route? LoL :)
January 5th, 2018 07:29
Circle Line - Anti Clockwise
orchidee said:
Erm, should it be re-named, now that it\'s extended. Well, it is a Circle, but it isn\'t, if you see what I mean?! Sometimes there is a whole TEN minutes to wait on the Circle line. I sometimes use other lines. Not that I \'m in London much anyway.
And how about the \'various\' District lines?!
January 5th, 2018 04:26
orchidee said:
Erm, should it be re-named, now that it\'s extended. Well, it is a Circle, but it isn\'t, if you see what I mean?! Sometimes there is a whole TEN minutes to wait on the Circle line. I sometimes use other lines. Not that I \'m in London much anyway.
And how about the \'various\' District lines?!
January 5th, 2018 04:26
Kylie- The Australian Pop Goddess
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and explanation of her life. She has always struck me as a charming and talented young lady (I say young as at my age most people are young!)
December 30th, 2017 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and explanation of her life. She has always struck me as a charming and talented young lady (I say young as at my age most people are young!)
December 30th, 2017 01:27
Kylie- The Australian Pop Goddess
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I am delighted you liked the poem.
You were in Wembley. There is never a dull moment in Wembley and especially thoroughout this football season as Spurs plays all their home games at the stadium until their own new stadium is built and completed.
Hope you are safe from the weather this festive season still remaining?
I wish you a prosperous 2018!
Keep writing
FineB
December 29th, 2017 07:49
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
I am delighted you liked the poem.
You were in Wembley. There is never a dull moment in Wembley and especially thoroughout this football season as Spurs plays all their home games at the stadium until their own new stadium is built and completed.
Hope you are safe from the weather this festive season still remaining?
I wish you a prosperous 2018!
Keep writing
FineB
December 29th, 2017 07:49
Kylie- The Australian Pop Goddess
Michael Edwards said:
Well observed in great form - not that I knew much about her apart from the name - so thanks for that.
December 29th, 2017 06:05
Michael Edwards said:
Well observed in great form - not that I knew much about her apart from the name - so thanks for that.
December 29th, 2017 06:05
RUSH HOUR
Accidental Poet said:
Great write FineB. May God be with you as you make your way through the jungle.
December 21st, 2017 19:41
Accidental Poet said:
Great write FineB. May God be with you as you make your way through the jungle.
December 21st, 2017 19:41
RUSH HOUR
Michael Edwards said:
I do so recognise this - so pleased I am not part of it any more but will be there over Christmas (thankfully not using the underground) - great work FineB
December 21st, 2017 19:21
Michael Edwards said:
I do so recognise this - so pleased I am not part of it any more but will be there over Christmas (thankfully not using the underground) - great work FineB
December 21st, 2017 19:21
RUSH HOUR
kevin browne said:
I imagine you to have been everywhere in London. London life, well what can I say, especially someone who lives there. a fascinating city, and a great write about it too.
December 21st, 2017 18:56
kevin browne said:
I imagine you to have been everywhere in London. London life, well what can I say, especially someone who lives there. a fascinating city, and a great write about it too.
December 21st, 2017 18:56
Jubilee Line
orchidee said:
A fine write Fine. Never knew there was so much we could do. Well, maybe I knew, but not done a lot myself!
December 11th, 2017 11:04
orchidee said:
A fine write Fine. Never knew there was so much we could do. Well, maybe I knew, but not done a lot myself!
December 11th, 2017 11:04
Jubilee Line
Michael Edwards said:
Often stay at the Premier Inn in Stratford - hop on a bus outside the door using bus pass and in the centre of town without spending a penny (don\'t live in London so don\'t qualify for a free underground pass) - do enjoy your underground journeys FineB
December 11th, 2017 09:22
Michael Edwards said:
Often stay at the Premier Inn in Stratford - hop on a bus outside the door using bus pass and in the centre of town without spending a penny (don\'t live in London so don\'t qualify for a free underground pass) - do enjoy your underground journeys FineB
December 11th, 2017 09:22
Jubilee Line
Accidental Poet said:
Great write FineB. I almost feel as though I could make my way around London without getting lost. Keyword-Almost. LOL.
December 11th, 2017 09:17
Accidental Poet said:
Great write FineB. I almost feel as though I could make my way around London without getting lost. Keyword-Almost. LOL.
December 11th, 2017 09:17
Raven at the Tower
Michael Edwards said:
This takes me right back to the early 60s when I was involved in the design and construction of the CTBowring building right next to the Tower - great write and thanks for the memory.
December 5th, 2017 14:50
Michael Edwards said:
This takes me right back to the early 60s when I was involved in the design and construction of the CTBowring building right next to the Tower - great write and thanks for the memory.
December 5th, 2017 14:50
Susan Sarandon
Michael Edwards said:
Quite a write but being someone who can\'t watch a film longer than about 10 minutes (or falls asleep) without getting itchy and wanting to go and do something creative like writing, painting etc I can\'t say I have a clue who she is. Anyway it\'s a fine write and I\'m sure does her justice,
December 1st, 2017 13:28
Michael Edwards said:
Quite a write but being someone who can\'t watch a film longer than about 10 minutes (or falls asleep) without getting itchy and wanting to go and do something creative like writing, painting etc I can\'t say I have a clue who she is. Anyway it\'s a fine write and I\'m sure does her justice,
December 1st, 2017 13:28
Susan Sarandon
Syd said:
I love reading tribute writes. This one is excellent and well written FineB - Syd
December 1st, 2017 11:00
Syd said:
I love reading tribute writes. This one is excellent and well written FineB - Syd
December 1st, 2017 11:00
Susan Sarandon
Accidental Poet said:
Hollywood relationships seldom last longer than the honeymoon. But Susan\'s career found a groove because that\'s where she belonged. A very talented woman certainly. And an excellent tribute to her in your poem FineB.
December 1st, 2017 09:21
Accidental Poet said:
Hollywood relationships seldom last longer than the honeymoon. But Susan\'s career found a groove because that\'s where she belonged. A very talented woman certainly. And an excellent tribute to her in your poem FineB.
December 1st, 2017 09:21
The Hotel Bar
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow these are exotic societal sights n sounds for me but you have indeed narrated it in a very interesting awesomely rhymed manner. How u describe tge bombshell is terrific eh. Can quite picture her with your words. Enjoyable poetic commentary indeed. Kudos.
Pls do review my latest poem too and add your thoughts on it.
November 29th, 2017 05:55
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow these are exotic societal sights n sounds for me but you have indeed narrated it in a very interesting awesomely rhymed manner. How u describe tge bombshell is terrific eh. Can quite picture her with your words. Enjoyable poetic commentary indeed. Kudos.
Pls do review my latest poem too and add your thoughts on it.
November 29th, 2017 05:55
The Hotel Bar
Accidental Poet said:
A very interesting description of the on goings is a crowded bar and in poetic rhyme no less. Well done Fine B.
November 27th, 2017 19:27
Accidental Poet said:
A very interesting description of the on goings is a crowded bar and in poetic rhyme no less. Well done Fine B.
November 27th, 2017 19:27
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