Comments received on poems by FineB



Vampire\'s Kiss
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Its a well thought evoking poem!

January 21st, 2018 02:44

Vampire\'s Kiss
Michael Edwards said:

Nice one FB - love the idea of daring demonic love - must take the tablets :)

January 20th, 2018 16:12

Vampire\'s Kiss
FineB said:

Hello Laura.

Thank you so much.

I am delighted you liked it.

Keep writing

FineB

January 20th, 2018 03:50

Vampire\'s Kiss
Laura🌻 said:

Great write! Enjoyed the read!

January 19th, 2018 20:46

The Tower of London
Michael Edwards said:

A bit of nostalgia for me reading this - fine work FineB.

January 11th, 2018 17:10

Circle Line - Anti Clockwise
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Oh I see. Enjoyed your poem, super cool to read , the mouse part made me smile. Lol fun write all in all nicely rhymed in.

Soo nice to read from u again, hoping u will too review my latest titled, \"play it on your lips \"

January 10th, 2018 00:43

Circle Line - Anti Clockwise
Michael Edwards said:

Empathise with this but why not stick to the clockwise route? LoL :)

January 5th, 2018 07:29

Circle Line - Anti Clockwise
orchidee said:

Erm, should it be re-named, now that it\'s extended. Well, it is a Circle, but it isn\'t, if you see what I mean?! Sometimes there is a whole TEN minutes to wait on the Circle line. I sometimes use other lines. Not that I \'m in London much anyway.
And how about the \'various\' District lines?!

January 5th, 2018 04:26

Kylie- The Australian Pop Goddess
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and explanation of her life. She has always struck me as a charming and talented young lady (I say young as at my age most people are young!)

December 30th, 2017 01:27

Kylie- The Australian Pop Goddess
FineB said:

Hi Michael,

I am delighted you liked the poem.

You were in Wembley. There is never a dull moment in Wembley and especially thoroughout this football season as Spurs plays all their home games at the stadium until their own new stadium is built and completed.

Hope you are safe from the weather this festive season still remaining?

I wish you a prosperous 2018!

Keep writing
FineB

December 29th, 2017 07:49

Kylie- The Australian Pop Goddess
Michael Edwards said:

Well observed in great form - not that I knew much about her apart from the name - so thanks for that.

December 29th, 2017 06:05

RUSH HOUR
Michael Edwards said:

I do so recognise this - so pleased I am not part of it any more but will be there over Christmas (thankfully not using the underground) - great work FineB

December 21st, 2017 19:21

RUSH HOUR
kevin browne said:

I imagine you to have been everywhere in London. London life, well what can I say, especially someone who lives there. a fascinating city, and a great write about it too.

December 21st, 2017 18:56

Jubilee Line
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Extremely well!

December 11th, 2017 11:15

Jubilee Line
orchidee said:

A fine write Fine. Never knew there was so much we could do. Well, maybe I knew, but not done a lot myself!

December 11th, 2017 11:04

Jubilee Line
Michael Edwards said:

Often stay at the Premier Inn in Stratford - hop on a bus outside the door using bus pass and in the centre of town without spending a penny (don\'t live in London so don\'t qualify for a free underground pass) - do enjoy your underground journeys FineB

December 11th, 2017 09:22

Raven at the Tower
Michael Edwards said:

This takes me right back to the early 60s when I was involved in the design and construction of the CTBowring building right next to the Tower - great write and thanks for the memory.

December 5th, 2017 14:50

Susan Sarandon
Michael Edwards said:

Quite a write but being someone who can\'t watch a film longer than about 10 minutes (or falls asleep) without getting itchy and wanting to go and do something creative like writing, painting etc I can\'t say I have a clue who she is. Anyway it\'s a fine write and I\'m sure does her justice,

December 1st, 2017 13:28

Susan Sarandon
Syd said:

I love reading tribute writes. This one is excellent and well written FineB - Syd

December 1st, 2017 11:00

Susan Sarandon
Tony36 said:

Well written tribute to the Actress

December 1st, 2017 09:23

Susan Sarandon
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Nice...well composition!!

December 1st, 2017 05:46

The Hotel Bar
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow these are exotic societal sights n sounds for me but you have indeed narrated it in a very interesting awesomely rhymed manner. How u describe tge bombshell is terrific eh. Can quite picture her with your words. Enjoyable poetic commentary indeed. Kudos.


Pls do review my latest poem too and add your thoughts on it.

November 29th, 2017 05:55

The Hotel Bar
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Nice...excellency is there!

November 28th, 2017 06:26

Heathrow - Acton Town (The Piccadilly Line)
FineB said:

Thanks Accidental Poet.

Delighted that you have enjoyed it.

Ah my home town is buzzing today with the news of the Royal engagement, Prince Harry and Meghan Markle.

Keep writing
FineB




November 27th, 2017 07:56

The Hairdressers
FineB said:

Hi Accidental Poet,

Many thanks.

Glad
you liked it.

Keep writing
FineB

November 26th, 2017 03:02

The Hairdressers
Michael Edwards said:

I do enjoy your work - it is different and refreshing and so well written. Looking forward to more.

November 25th, 2017 14:26

The District Line: A journey Ealing Broadway – Richmond
FineB said:

Hi Brian,

Thank you.

Hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving celebration.

You are right in the UK there are so many wonderful things to see. Since I took up rambling many years ago. I have certainly discovered just how beautiful the countryside is visiting places I normally would not have gone to

The UK this green and pleasant land..

Keep writing
FineB



November 24th, 2017 14:09

Piccadilly Line - Acton Town to Cockfosters Connection
FineB said:

Thanks Michael,

Delighted that you liked the poem.

The Piccadilly Line conjures up memories for me too. I used to travel on that line a lot when I was a child.

Two more instalments left to go on the Piccadilly line.

Keep on writing
FineB

November 24th, 2017 07:06

Piccadilly Line - Acton Town to Cockfosters Connection
Michael Edwards said:

Arnos Grove was my local station - lovely circular building and I was always at Spurs home matches. Got off at South Ken for Sloane Square where I worked. Ah memories - thanks for posting this - the good old Piccadilly Line.

November 24th, 2017 06:25

The District Line: A journey Ealing Broadway – Richmond
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Beautiful FINE ~ Your poem reminds that in the UK ~ there are beautiful Stately Homes and Parks for us to visit ~ often FREE. Another wonderful tribute to OUR TUBE ! Stately Hugs ~ BRIAN

November 23rd, 2017 17:52

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