My Only
dusk arising said:

Was he so perfect that you should take all the blame for the pain?
Are you beating yourself up because you\'re that kind of person?
See what your writing does to my mind? Well done, you made me ask questions about you the writer. Yes sure i relate to the situation you describe but its negativity provokes my thoughts.
I hope you\'re taking this as a great compliment because i\'d love to think my writings made my reader think.

July 8th, 2018 19:17

My Only
Anasyil said:

We all have made this mistake with someone we sincerely care about. We do this because of the pain and suffering we experienced. My dear, do not fret. Time heals all wounds. Whether your mentor returns or not, at least learn to love yourself. It is the most important kind of love.

July 8th, 2018 14:23

The Crisis
Gabriella said:

your a great writer!!

June 15th, 2018 08:39

combat
dusk arising said:

Heartfelt. Our biggest fear the dreaded \'C\' which has taken friends and family members.
I admire your courage writing about this killer.

January 29th, 2018 16:10

Battle Worn - Triumphant
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 15th, 2018 09:10

selfish
MendedFences27 said:

It\'s been said (probably by me) that before you can love another, you must love yourself. Without this, you face a life of unhappiness. With this, all others are your equal, until you meet that one true love. Then, you know and feel that this is the one whose life you would choose over your own. And if this love is true , they feel the same way.
Everyone is different, no two the same, all have flaws or imperfections. This is what makes life (and love) interesting. Be happy in your own skin, love yourself, your flaws make you interesting, Love will come along, and when it does, you will know it, you will feel it, you will embrace it.
Your poem spurred these thoughts. Thus, it must be a good poem. For what else can a poet do but cause another to think. - Enjoyed it - Phil A.

December 29th, 2017 22:00