Comments received on poems by Clarita



A True Blessing
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lovely write,,merry christmas

December 24th, 2018 16:49

A True Blessing
ron parrish aka wordman said:

i loved it,makes you think of your past

June 9th, 2018 22:59

A True Blessing
Wistful Thinking said:

This brings a bittersweet smile to my face... Makes me look back on myself a bit.

It\'s good to put feelings down like this. It hurts to bring them up, but once they\'re out it feels so much better. I\'m sure you know

May 24th, 2018 23:00

Look Around Child
G84 said:

Awesome right a powerful use of words that conjure powerful imagery - blood and hunters and darkness coming.

Been there myself, questioned my mortality, confronted the monster - found him in the mirror!

May 24th, 2018 04:27

Imprisonment
Ian Primmer said:

I can relate to this one too, words inside my soul, yet, came out through your work, now I gotta read all your poetry. Soothes the soul, thank you!

May 22nd, 2018 20:17

Look Around Child
Ian Primmer said:

I can relate to the message, great poetry. This one reached me, thank you for that!


May 22nd, 2018 20:14

Self-Love
SLR said:

A good reminder to stop and remember our own worth. Great post.

May 21st, 2018 17:40

Self-Love
Laura said:

Clarity,
A beautiful and powerful self reflection! You’re an amazing writer! I enjoyed this read very much!

~Laura~

May 19th, 2018 14:37

Imprisonment
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sad write,when you feel imprisoned
and afraid

happy birthday soon mine was the 23 rd


April 2nd, 2018 09:18

A Nightmare Within a Dream
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, yes you can lose yourself in books, I do very often.

December 11th, 2017 02:44

A Nightmare Within a Dream
Endlessly said:

Great poem

December 11th, 2017 01:01

A Nightmare Within a Dream
Accidental Poet said:

I love the quote by Vivian Greene. And your Self-explanation is also very encouraging. Thank you for sharing.

December 10th, 2017 23:26

A Nightmare Within a Dream
ron parrish aka wordman said:

touching write,and the title is great

December 10th, 2017 23:26

A Nightmare Within a Dream
FredPeyer said:

Clarita, books have always been my thing! As opposed to a movie where we get the impression of the director, with a book I can use my own imagination.
Your poem is very well written, and I do like the last stanza and especially the last line.
The only thing even better than reading a book, is to write, and that you do well. Have to make this a favorite!

December 10th, 2017 17:07

A Nightmare Within a Dream
Cooley said:

I love this

December 10th, 2017 16:59

Alone in Darkness
WL Schuett said:

Love the naked emotions stirring in this poem , very well written!

December 10th, 2017 07:42

Imprisonment
rrodriguez said:

Deep feelings come through. Enjoyed the resding and I\'m intrigued with the message it holds. Great write...

December 10th, 2017 00:19

Imprisonment
ron parrish aka wordman said:

touching write

December 9th, 2017 19:12

Alone in Darkness
Accidental Poet said:

One more rooting for you Clarita. As Fred and tepo have expressed, you\'re a good writer. You have much to be proud of in your skills. If you\'re feeling depressed, let your writing pull you into the light of hope. Hold on girl. Tomorrow is waiting for you.

December 9th, 2017 16:00

Alone in Darkness
Synesthesia said:

Hi Clarita,

I’ve just joined - found your poem, thanks for sharing I really enjoyed it!
You’ve got great images in there, and the flash (wts) as well as the sound of crying; but no laughter?

I hope it’s ok if I - with the premise: my opinion is worth that of me, a beginner, but I hope this is the spirit(?) - offer some feedback.

I think, your title, and first line overlap a bit - two ‘negatives’ and the second tells us it’s dark... when the night wants to fall in the first line.

This line:

Now the only thing between us are dark emotions, crying,

dark emotions doesn’t live up to the rest of the poem for me, it’s too literal I think

I also noticed the sea mentioned just once - was that intentional? Seemed such a dark and murky setting, full of the blind fish

Ok, this is a lot now, but, quick proof read, there’s a couple of typos that really jar and let down the whole effort - which is a real shame!

Clarita, apologies for so much there, I’m sure I’ve convinced you otherwise, but I really did enjoy the read; I wouldn’t go on otherwise.

I hope to have not, but if I have overstepped/offended please ignore/retort etc

All the best
S




December 9th, 2017 15:20

Alone in Darkness
FredPeyer said:

You are an incredible writer, Clarita! I said it before, but have to say it again: That old saying \'When one door closes, another opens up\' is TRUE. While it is not easy, in fact very hard, to overcome a broken love, overcome you will! First of all you do have to believe in yourself. You are a good writer, and I am sure that as tepo already said, your writing will help you through the hard times. And now you have a whole bunch of people here on MPS rooting for you!!! You are not alone anymore.

December 9th, 2017 13:07

Imprisonment
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Clarita! Thank you for making my poem \'You\' a favorite! I meant what I wrote: YOU are special! Everybody is special!
If I learned anything in my 69 years in this world, it is that one has to fight. Your soul came here to accomplish something, whatever that something is. It is up to you to find out. So, yes, fight you must!

December 9th, 2017 13:02

Alone in Darkness
Saint Sinner said:

You\'re amazing at detailing your emotions.

December 9th, 2017 12:57

Imprisonment
Saint Sinner said:

Wow... I understand you completely.

December 9th, 2017 12:55

Imprisonment
orchidee said:

A bit psychological this - and a long word there! lol.
Yes, we may not want to be free from some things, if they are all we have known, e.g. insecurity. We get used to them. Not that we are attention-seekers, etc. But deep down, in this case, it\'s best to know security I think. Now I\'ve gone all psychological here!

December 9th, 2017 12:35

Alone in Darkness
tepo said:

feel your pain Clarita
hang in there
keep writing it out
another read full of emotion


December 9th, 2017 12:06

Alone in Darkness
rrodriguez said:

Beautifully expressed. Hope is necessary and is not dangerous, disappointment is. Love is not bad, but good. Be blessed.

December 9th, 2017 11:52

Imprisonment
tepo said:

welcome
great start
keep writing it out
a vacant soul could not come up with this wee gem
you have plenty to offer
look forward to more
well done

December 8th, 2017 14:30