Comments received on poems by Jaayx3
Soulless
Jason78 said:
As adults no one can be made into a monster. If you’re getting glimpses of the monster it is only because that person is getting comfortable enough to give you glimpses of who they really are.
December 20th, 2020 03:03
Jason78 said:
As adults no one can be made into a monster. If you’re getting glimpses of the monster it is only because that person is getting comfortable enough to give you glimpses of who they really are.
December 20th, 2020 03:03
Soulless
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Jaay, and the last line says it all.
December 18th, 2020 21:33
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Jaay, and the last line says it all.
December 18th, 2020 21:33
How do you
dusk arising said:
You start by telling yourself what a fool you would be to let such a beautiful thing pass out of your life in the certain knowledge that you would regret it for the rest of your days.
Whoever said loving was easy? It aint, but there is nothing comparable to the highs it brings.
February 8th, 2020 19:59
dusk arising said:
You start by telling yourself what a fool you would be to let such a beautiful thing pass out of your life in the certain knowledge that you would regret it for the rest of your days.
Whoever said loving was easy? It aint, but there is nothing comparable to the highs it brings.
February 8th, 2020 19:59
No Escape
AlitaOpal said:
Great masterpiece x filled with passion.. I really felt this x
November 3rd, 2019 20:15
AlitaOpal said:
Great masterpiece x filled with passion.. I really felt this x
November 3rd, 2019 20:15
UNexplainable thoughts
Poetic Dan said:
I grant you that wish keep writing like this and you\'ll see but remember waves take time to be calm at sea!
September 4th, 2019 16:18
Poetic Dan said:
I grant you that wish keep writing like this and you\'ll see but remember waves take time to be calm at sea!
September 4th, 2019 16:18
Anger
Poetic Dan said:
Great work Mary Jane has been by side for 24 years, still it never stopped the tears, but the only thing to settle my rage.
I\'m hoping soon I\'ll have no cage.
Loved your flow, keep up your glow
Much peace and respect
September 4th, 2019 16:16
Poetic Dan said:
Great work Mary Jane has been by side for 24 years, still it never stopped the tears, but the only thing to settle my rage.
I\'m hoping soon I\'ll have no cage.
Loved your flow, keep up your glow
Much peace and respect
September 4th, 2019 16:16
UNexplainable thoughts
Clara said:
I can sense such hopelessness and helplessness in your words. Emotive work.
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 08:44
Clara said:
I can sense such hopelessness and helplessness in your words. Emotive work.
CLARA X
September 3rd, 2019 08:44
No faith
Poetic Dan said:
This is my first read of others work in a while and for this is why some are here. I\'ve spent my life in darkness surrounded by people.
This is a powerful writing and know knowledge is found where you are, one day you\'ll look back seeing the shadows from your inner star.
Much peace and respect
Thank you for sharing this
January 8th, 2019 17:45
Poetic Dan said:
This is my first read of others work in a while and for this is why some are here. I\'ve spent my life in darkness surrounded by people.
This is a powerful writing and know knowledge is found where you are, one day you\'ll look back seeing the shadows from your inner star.
Much peace and respect
Thank you for sharing this
January 8th, 2019 17:45
No faith
psychofemale said:
I know this feeling, but some way we have to stay strong.
January 8th, 2019 16:54
psychofemale said:
I know this feeling, but some way we have to stay strong.
January 8th, 2019 16:54
Free
MendedFences27 said:
This seems very personal, very real. You say all the things one would say upon the end of a relationship. You have time in your life to find another love, perhaps the one true one. As you have said you must move on, be free to search for true love.
A very poignant and declarative write. Well done. - Phil A.
December 30th, 2018 17:48
MendedFences27 said:
This seems very personal, very real. You say all the things one would say upon the end of a relationship. You have time in your life to find another love, perhaps the one true one. As you have said you must move on, be free to search for true love.
A very poignant and declarative write. Well done. - Phil A.
December 30th, 2018 17:48
No Longer
MendedFences27 said:
A friendship that is ending, with no chance of resurrection. Perhaps, freedom is the best choice, but the loss will always remain. One of Life\'s lessons.
A very direct poem that explains it well. - Phil A.
December 29th, 2018 19:10
MendedFences27 said:
A friendship that is ending, with no chance of resurrection. Perhaps, freedom is the best choice, but the loss will always remain. One of Life\'s lessons.
A very direct poem that explains it well. - Phil A.
December 29th, 2018 19:10
Pain
vanabba3 said:
Wow! I\'m curious to what is causing or is at the root of all this pain...? Is this about a day-to-day person, or is this about you? If it is about you, it helps to talk about it.... just saying. Interesting poem
October 6th, 2018 16:51
vanabba3 said:
Wow! I\'m curious to what is causing or is at the root of all this pain...? Is this about a day-to-day person, or is this about you? If it is about you, it helps to talk about it.... just saying. Interesting poem
October 6th, 2018 16:51
Losing you
dusk arising said:
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but finding yourself again afterwards will be really rewarding, you\'ll find you have grown.
I like the way you have written this. All too often similar themes are written in a negative \'oh poor me i\'m a victim\' style but not yours. Your piece is positive. I like it.
Please comment on my poem on here today.
July 11th, 2018 21:29
dusk arising said:
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but finding yourself again afterwards will be really rewarding, you\'ll find you have grown.
I like the way you have written this. All too often similar themes are written in a negative \'oh poor me i\'m a victim\' style but not yours. Your piece is positive. I like it.
Please comment on my poem on here today.
July 11th, 2018 21:29
Losing you
dusk arising said:
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but finding yourself again afterwards will be really rewarding, you\'ll find you have grown.
I like the way you have written this. All too often similar themes are written in a negative \'oh poor me i\'m a victim\' style but not yours. Your piece is positive. I like it.
Please comment on my poem on here today.
July 11th, 2018 20:48
dusk arising said:
But i bet you\'ll be all the better for letting go. Its so painful but finding yourself again afterwards will be really rewarding, you\'ll find you have grown.
I like the way you have written this. All too often similar themes are written in a negative \'oh poor me i\'m a victim\' style but not yours. Your piece is positive. I like it.
Please comment on my poem on here today.
July 11th, 2018 20:48
Dark thoughts
elizabethshadow said:
This poem has a lot of imagery and description, so great job of that! However, I think it would do you well to add in more substance into it for a deeper meaning or underlying message in the future!
May 5th, 2018 18:48
elizabethshadow said:
This poem has a lot of imagery and description, so great job of that! However, I think it would do you well to add in more substance into it for a deeper meaning or underlying message in the future!
May 5th, 2018 18:48
Am I A Fool
Tony36 said:
I have felt that way about a few of my choices in life, great write
January 11th, 2018 08:59
Tony36 said:
I have felt that way about a few of my choices in life, great write
January 11th, 2018 08:59
