Comments received on poems by Cynthia
I\'m The Girl
Jamie said:
\"(You are) the girl\" with a great gift for writing!
March 18th, 2018 18:21
Jamie said:
\"(You are) the girl\" with a great gift for writing!
March 18th, 2018 18:21
Terror
Caring dove said:
wow, this is very powerful so well expressed ! well done . so terribly sad tho ,
February 27th, 2018 12:52
Caring dove said:
wow, this is very powerful so well expressed ! well done . so terribly sad tho ,
February 27th, 2018 12:52
Flashbacks
Christina8 said:
Even though no one should ever have to endure flashbacks, especially from their own family. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!
February 26th, 2018 20:58
Christina8 said:
Even though no one should ever have to endure flashbacks, especially from their own family. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!
February 26th, 2018 20:58
Flashbacks
Caring dove said:
hi cynthia , i am so sorry you have to experience this , you expressed this very well ..
such a cruel world, in which we live..
nobody should have to experience such cruelty from their own family
February 26th, 2018 18:57
Caring dove said:
hi cynthia , i am so sorry you have to experience this , you expressed this very well ..
such a cruel world, in which we live..
nobody should have to experience such cruelty from their own family
February 26th, 2018 18:57
Sleep
Caring dove said:
rest/ sleep can be very comforting .. sleep is like a friend , there for us when we need it the most .. nice piece of writing cynthia x
February 26th, 2018 04:54
Caring dove said:
rest/ sleep can be very comforting .. sleep is like a friend , there for us when we need it the most .. nice piece of writing cynthia x
February 26th, 2018 04:54
The Dance
Carmine Branco said:
Every step will speak of you and every move shall be a heart beat in someone\'s heart. Your grace will mesmorise your enemies and your true being shall glow more than the stars in the sky. Be happy my child. You are an eternal beauty and you will be blessed forever.
February 25th, 2018 14:15
Carmine Branco said:
Every step will speak of you and every move shall be a heart beat in someone\'s heart. Your grace will mesmorise your enemies and your true being shall glow more than the stars in the sky. Be happy my child. You are an eternal beauty and you will be blessed forever.
February 25th, 2018 14:15
The Dance
John Lee said:
As you read this message, your dance is over now, but you\'re still dancing.. you now realize that all you had feared really didn\'t exist. Your makeup was perfect, you were beautiful, you hit every beat, you thought you made a mistake but the mistake was trying to dance someone else\'s dance before it even started. When it started, you danced your dance perfectly. It was your dance, you were you.
February 24th, 2018 23:28
John Lee said:
As you read this message, your dance is over now, but you\'re still dancing.. you now realize that all you had feared really didn\'t exist. Your makeup was perfect, you were beautiful, you hit every beat, you thought you made a mistake but the mistake was trying to dance someone else\'s dance before it even started. When it started, you danced your dance perfectly. It was your dance, you were you.
February 24th, 2018 23:28
The Dance
FredPeyer said:
By the time you get this comment, Cynthia, your dance is either in full swing or already over. But this goes for any dance: Never worry about what others are thinking. Be yourself and be happy with yourself. That happiness will rub off on others! Somebody either likes you or does not like you, no matter what dress you are wearing.
February 24th, 2018 13:53
FredPeyer said:
By the time you get this comment, Cynthia, your dance is either in full swing or already over. But this goes for any dance: Never worry about what others are thinking. Be yourself and be happy with yourself. That happiness will rub off on others! Somebody either likes you or does not like you, no matter what dress you are wearing.
February 24th, 2018 13:53
They Did This
Carmine Branco said:
I know the feeling. I know it well. I\'ve outlived my welcome and overdone my stay. Over five decades have seen me wonder around seeking for peace and I\'ve found despair. And yet, against all odds, I\'m still here. Remember my child (forgive me for calling you this, but I feel as if you could be my daughter. God only knows how much I wish I wish I could talk to them the words that I\'m telling you), we are here for a reason that we ignore. Every life has a meaning and every pain has a smile at the end. Even if only for a moment. That\'s what keeps me alive in this horrible ocean of unhappiness. Write, read, think and act. It\'s a very powerful weapon, that will one day destroy those who think they have broken you. The power is inside you. Always remember this. A big fatherly hug. Hope to hear from you soon.
February 22nd, 2018 20:26
Carmine Branco said:
I know the feeling. I know it well. I\'ve outlived my welcome and overdone my stay. Over five decades have seen me wonder around seeking for peace and I\'ve found despair. And yet, against all odds, I\'m still here. Remember my child (forgive me for calling you this, but I feel as if you could be my daughter. God only knows how much I wish I wish I could talk to them the words that I\'m telling you), we are here for a reason that we ignore. Every life has a meaning and every pain has a smile at the end. Even if only for a moment. That\'s what keeps me alive in this horrible ocean of unhappiness. Write, read, think and act. It\'s a very powerful weapon, that will one day destroy those who think they have broken you. The power is inside you. Always remember this. A big fatherly hug. Hope to hear from you soon.
February 22nd, 2018 20:26
Sun and Moon
Caring dove said:
hi cynthia .. i love this ! beautiful poem , !! i love the idea of the sun and the moon being in love and the sun trying to catch the moon .. surely an impossible task lol , never in reality would the sun have any chance of catching the moon , one lives in the day , one lives in the night , impossible in the sky , but anything is possible with love there lol .. great read ! saved this as a favourite.. enjoyed every line x
February 19th, 2018 05:25
Caring dove said:
hi cynthia .. i love this ! beautiful poem , !! i love the idea of the sun and the moon being in love and the sun trying to catch the moon .. surely an impossible task lol , never in reality would the sun have any chance of catching the moon , one lives in the day , one lives in the night , impossible in the sky , but anything is possible with love there lol .. great read ! saved this as a favourite.. enjoyed every line x
February 19th, 2018 05:25
Can\'t Breathe
LAWLIET said:
I read all your poems you have on here your a great poet you write how and what you feel with a deep perception
February 18th, 2018 07:53
LAWLIET said:
I read all your poems you have on here your a great poet you write how and what you feel with a deep perception
February 18th, 2018 07:53
Fed Up
Caring dove said:
\'\' played like a card \'\' \'\' stepped on \'\' \'\' walked all over \'\' good expression for those who take you for granted , do not consider your feelings. this is well written , wow, i can kind of relate to this feeling ...sometimes you have just got to say . no .. dont treat me like that anymore , i wish people would listen but unfortunately they sometimes don\'t lol . but yes, i agree with you , try standing up for yourself, express your upset at being walked all over and say you will take no more lol
February 16th, 2018 15:32
Caring dove said:
\'\' played like a card \'\' \'\' stepped on \'\' \'\' walked all over \'\' good expression for those who take you for granted , do not consider your feelings. this is well written , wow, i can kind of relate to this feeling ...sometimes you have just got to say . no .. dont treat me like that anymore , i wish people would listen but unfortunately they sometimes don\'t lol . but yes, i agree with you , try standing up for yourself, express your upset at being walked all over and say you will take no more lol
February 16th, 2018 15:32
Fed Up
FredPeyer said:
Cynthia, you are a very good writer. This poem grabbed me right from the start. In my mind I saw this young lady putting her foot down, enough is enough! Honest and straight forward writing. After reading it I read some of your earlier poems too. Same thing. Very good! Would love to see you write something from your imagination. Maybe based on an actual event, but expanding on it. Letting your imagination fly!
Being fed up is only the first step, now you have to act! :-)
February 16th, 2018 15:09
FredPeyer said:
Cynthia, you are a very good writer. This poem grabbed me right from the start. In my mind I saw this young lady putting her foot down, enough is enough! Honest and straight forward writing. After reading it I read some of your earlier poems too. Same thing. Very good! Would love to see you write something from your imagination. Maybe based on an actual event, but expanding on it. Letting your imagination fly!
Being fed up is only the first step, now you have to act! :-)
February 16th, 2018 15:09
Fed Up
LAWLIET said:
This is nicely written great I love it... it\'s real ..
February 16th, 2018 11:15
LAWLIET said:
This is nicely written great I love it... it\'s real ..
February 16th, 2018 11:15
Lost
Lorna said:
Don\'t listen to those voices darling..... everything will get better because you have yourself and you can do it! Love yourself..... better things will come.
February 15th, 2018 05:29
Lorna said:
Don\'t listen to those voices darling..... everything will get better because you have yourself and you can do it! Love yourself..... better things will come.
February 15th, 2018 05:29
Sun and Moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CYNTHIA ~ I love Poems about the MOON and this is a GEM . I don\'t blame the SUN for being besotted by the MOON ~ she is PERFECT. The MOON is 360 times closer to us than the SUN so SHE is always in charge ! I like that you say \"SHE let the SUN catch her !\" A perfect LUNAR / SOLAR eclipse ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 11th, 2018 18:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks CYNTHIA ~ I love Poems about the MOON and this is a GEM . I don\'t blame the SUN for being besotted by the MOON ~ she is PERFECT. The MOON is 360 times closer to us than the SUN so SHE is always in charge ! I like that you say \"SHE let the SUN catch her !\" A perfect LUNAR / SOLAR eclipse ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 11th, 2018 18:49
Little Girl
Carmine Branco said:
Hold on tight \"little girl\" and don\'t let anyone throw you down. The blade cuts into your flesh and it\'s not fair. Confort will come, you need to be strong. Write, read and speak. Don\'t be afraid. The little girl will grow into a strong woman. Remember! Karma always pays back those who hurt others. You lay back and wait. Help and justice will one day arrive.
February 10th, 2018 21:09
Carmine Branco said:
Hold on tight \"little girl\" and don\'t let anyone throw you down. The blade cuts into your flesh and it\'s not fair. Confort will come, you need to be strong. Write, read and speak. Don\'t be afraid. The little girl will grow into a strong woman. Remember! Karma always pays back those who hurt others. You lay back and wait. Help and justice will one day arrive.
February 10th, 2018 21:09
I\'m The Girl
poetic Bre said:
I loved every bit and piece of that poem, myself personal can relate to various events that you express throughout your poem, i also think your writing is very well analyzed and you have a spark of talent for poetry. Hope you keep doing it.
February 10th, 2018 02:02
poetic Bre said:
I loved every bit and piece of that poem, myself personal can relate to various events that you express throughout your poem, i also think your writing is very well analyzed and you have a spark of talent for poetry. Hope you keep doing it.
February 10th, 2018 02:02
Only A Dream
Cynthia said:
Everyone\'s feedback and comments mean the world to me so thank you all!
February 9th, 2018 08:51
Cynthia said:
Everyone\'s feedback and comments mean the world to me so thank you all!
February 9th, 2018 08:51
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