Comments received on poems by Cynthia



Step Careful
Munro said:

Really Like your poem ,,liked lines
One wrong move and everything will collapse

February 27th, 2021 13:24

Step Careful
Goldfinch60 said:

You must come first, see what it is that you want in your life and just go for it.

Andy

February 1st, 2020 02:11

Step Careful
Clara said:

I\'m with Bragee here. If this is a reflection of your light right now... You need to put you first. You need to be true to who you are. Talk to your parents and don\'t let the boyfriend dictate to you. You\'re perfect just as you are
Flaws and all.
Keep writing. Keep your chin up.
Good little poem nonetheless.

January 31st, 2020 16:59

Step Careful
Bragee said:

Middle Finger to them!
Be You!

way to capture the pressure of living up to others expectations in words!

January 31st, 2020 14:48

Stop..
dusk arising said:

Gave me a good fun laugh. I love your drama,

June 17th, 2019 16:44

Problems
kevin browne said:

You tell them, girl and an uplift with your own authority in practicing how to protect yourself is needed. Look up to yourself to ease the pressure of your depression. Great things can be healed from the worst in your life and think of others who are not so fortunate as you unfortunately.

June 13th, 2019 13:00

Southern Dream
dusk arising said:

i soon stopped reading because its not poetry. Is there a more suitable site for this kind of work where you can attract worthwhile and positive comments from similar writers.

June 5th, 2019 09:45

The Evil Twin
dusk arising said:

Will the story continue in the new place..... ???
You have an amazing story writing skill..... I was held from start to finish.... are you a screenwriter just waiting for your big break?

Love this stuff.

May 10th, 2019 11:16

Not Ready..
dusk arising said:

What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.

Peace and harmony.

May 9th, 2019 17:39

Falling Short
dusk arising said:

You sound like just my kind of a gal! A true and genuine one-off.

February 20th, 2019 13:24

Struggles
laurenroe said:

This is a beautiful expression of a terrible thing. Bravo

February 20th, 2019 12:41

Falling Short
Neville said:

I think you are maybe being a bit hard on ya self... you sound like a lot of fella\'s dream....... like yourself a little bit and others will a lot... N

February 20th, 2019 12:25

My Death
Sunshinefalling said:

Thank you for sharing Cynthia. A dark story and moment. Nicely written. The emotion is seen. I had that feeling many times myself around your age. Attempting to act on it was a mistake thankfully seen. Expose and release your feelings, but know the truth. You are blessed. Maybe not now. But the future awaits. In life as we grow, we can create our own world.

January 21st, 2019 16:54

My Death
orchidee said:

Ooh I should hold on, and have a happy birthday soon - hopefully!

January 21st, 2019 10:53

My Death
sylviasearcher said:

I hope you are okay? Talk to someone? It sounds like things are feeling tough?

January 21st, 2019 10:50

Just done
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

When friends are no longer friends it\'s time to move on. You don\'t need to be available for them if they do not return the favor.

Edit: shoulder

I appreciate your words and wish you the best for the future. :-)



November 30th, 2018 16:28

Just done
lasergraph said:

A good write but a sad commentary. I can understand especially when you have been let down by so many. I hope you seen a change soon in those around you.

November 30th, 2018 10:14

I\'m Sorry
Sugiura Asuna said:

First and foremost, beauty is an opinion, it changes and fades over time.
Mistakes are things to be learned from and rarely to be apologized for. Depression, suicide, cutting, or any form of self-harm is never a joking matter. As someone who doesn\'t have an emotional/mental support system at home, I understand how frustrating, tiring, and how soul-crushing it can be when someone doesn\'t believe you.
I won\'t say I\'m sorry for you, its a phrase overused, and it never fully expands upon how a person feels. Instead, I sympathize with you and hope you find the support you need. Ps. just from the top half of your face, YOU ARE GORGEOUS girl, got it, and don\'t ever forget it.

November 14th, 2018 18:51

My Final Goodbye
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW CYNTHIA ~ A really powerful Poem ~ which I hope is not actually your final GOODBYE ! WE need excellent Poets like you on MPS !
On the subject of your Poem it has happened several times in our extended Family ! Stephen on his BIKE ~ George on his Motor Bike ~ Anthea out walking etc. What grieves me most is we never got a chance to say goodbye they were all D O A by the time they got to Hospital. Thanks for sharing pleased YOU sacrificed YOUR life to save a Child ~ YOU did not die in vain ! Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my POEM (Pilgrims Progress) and NEW FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ BRIAN.

November 12th, 2018 12:00

Empty
chaaz said:

wow! this is really great...relatable in some ways too

October 4th, 2018 09:01

Crying Blood
Sugiura Asuna said:

This is amazing..... It\'s soul-wrenching. you can feel the emotion.

May 23rd, 2018 19:26

Daydreamer
midnight drive said:

This is amazing!

April 22nd, 2018 23:00

I\'m Sorry
Carmine Branco said:

I agree and it\'s what I\'ve been telling you all along. Love yourself. There is no one more important than you and if you love you, who cares about anyone else.

March 25th, 2018 20:57

I\'m Sorry
Lorna said:

I\'m with Resa here..... you are obviously going through a bad time but you have to realize we all have to learn to love ourselves - and it isn\'t always easy. You sound very lovable to me! So a big hug for you today..... you will find love - but don\'t put all your hopes into other people - don\'t lose yourself!

March 25th, 2018 05:40

I\'m Sorry
Resa71 said:

Honey, please don’t misenterpet what I’m about to say.
Stop Appolizing!
Love who you are.
As far as “ Feeling arms around you “

Feeling loved
The feeling often passes

March 24th, 2018 22:44

Girl
Echo Seeker said:

I completely relate to this. Thank you for sharing.

March 20th, 2018 17:37

Cold and Alone
Jamie said:

Let them in, and they break your heart; keep them out and they beat you down for it, and then you blame yourself for all of it, and hate yourself for not being able to change, for not being worthy!

March 18th, 2018 19:14

Who Do I Choose
Jamie said:

Bradley, of course!

March 18th, 2018 19:05

Terror
Jamie said:

That\'s what I\'ve been saying, You\'ve got a gift! And hopefully someday life will quit beating on you, but you are definitely a strong soul!

March 18th, 2018 19:04

Going
Jamie said:

Ditto what Santita said!

March 18th, 2018 18:48

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