Comments received on poems by Cynthia
Step Careful
Goldfinch60 said:
You must come first, see what it is that you want in your life and just go for it.
Andy
February 1st, 2020 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
You must come first, see what it is that you want in your life and just go for it.
Andy
February 1st, 2020 02:11
Step Careful
Clara said:
I\'m with Bragee here. If this is a reflection of your light right now... You need to put you first. You need to be true to who you are. Talk to your parents and don\'t let the boyfriend dictate to you. You\'re perfect just as you are
Flaws and all.
Keep writing. Keep your chin up.
Good little poem nonetheless.
January 31st, 2020 16:59
Clara said:
I\'m with Bragee here. If this is a reflection of your light right now... You need to put you first. You need to be true to who you are. Talk to your parents and don\'t let the boyfriend dictate to you. You\'re perfect just as you are
Flaws and all.
Keep writing. Keep your chin up.
Good little poem nonetheless.
January 31st, 2020 16:59
Step Careful
Bragee said:
Middle Finger to them!
Be You!
way to capture the pressure of living up to others expectations in words!
January 31st, 2020 14:48
Bragee said:
Middle Finger to them!
Be You!
way to capture the pressure of living up to others expectations in words!
January 31st, 2020 14:48
The Evil Twin
dusk arising said:
Will the story continue in the new place..... ???
You have an amazing story writing skill..... I was held from start to finish.... are you a screenwriter just waiting for your big break?
Love this stuff.
May 10th, 2019 11:16
dusk arising said:
Will the story continue in the new place..... ???
You have an amazing story writing skill..... I was held from start to finish.... are you a screenwriter just waiting for your big break?
Love this stuff.
May 10th, 2019 11:16
Not Ready..
dusk arising said:
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
Peace and harmony.
May 9th, 2019 17:39
dusk arising said:
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
Peace and harmony.
May 9th, 2019 17:39
Falling Short
dusk arising said:
You sound like just my kind of a gal! A true and genuine one-off.
February 20th, 2019 13:24
dusk arising said:
You sound like just my kind of a gal! A true and genuine one-off.
February 20th, 2019 13:24
Struggles
laurenroe said:
This is a beautiful expression of a terrible thing. Bravo
February 20th, 2019 12:41
laurenroe said:
This is a beautiful expression of a terrible thing. Bravo
February 20th, 2019 12:41
Falling Short
Neville said:
I think you are maybe being a bit hard on ya self... you sound like a lot of fella\'s dream....... like yourself a little bit and others will a lot... N
February 20th, 2019 12:25
Neville said:
I think you are maybe being a bit hard on ya self... you sound like a lot of fella\'s dream....... like yourself a little bit and others will a lot... N
February 20th, 2019 12:25
I\'m Sorry
Sugiura Asuna said:
First and foremost, beauty is an opinion, it changes and fades over time.
Mistakes are things to be learned from and rarely to be apologized for. Depression, suicide, cutting, or any form of self-harm is never a joking matter. As someone who doesn\'t have an emotional/mental support system at home, I understand how frustrating, tiring, and how soul-crushing it can be when someone doesn\'t believe you.
I won\'t say I\'m sorry for you, its a phrase overused, and it never fully expands upon how a person feels. Instead, I sympathize with you and hope you find the support you need. Ps. just from the top half of your face, YOU ARE GORGEOUS girl, got it, and don\'t ever forget it.
November 14th, 2018 18:51
Sugiura Asuna said:
First and foremost, beauty is an opinion, it changes and fades over time.
Mistakes are things to be learned from and rarely to be apologized for. Depression, suicide, cutting, or any form of self-harm is never a joking matter. As someone who doesn\'t have an emotional/mental support system at home, I understand how frustrating, tiring, and how soul-crushing it can be when someone doesn\'t believe you.
I won\'t say I\'m sorry for you, its a phrase overused, and it never fully expands upon how a person feels. Instead, I sympathize with you and hope you find the support you need. Ps. just from the top half of your face, YOU ARE GORGEOUS girl, got it, and don\'t ever forget it.
November 14th, 2018 18:51
My Final Goodbye
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CYNTHIA ~ A really powerful Poem ~ which I hope is not actually your final GOODBYE ! WE need excellent Poets like you on MPS !
On the subject of your Poem it has happened several times in our extended Family ! Stephen on his BIKE ~ George on his Motor Bike ~ Anthea out walking etc. What grieves me most is we never got a chance to say goodbye they were all D O A by the time they got to Hospital. Thanks for sharing pleased YOU sacrificed YOUR life to save a Child ~ YOU did not die in vain ! Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my POEM (Pilgrims Progress) and NEW FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ BRIAN.
November 12th, 2018 12:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CYNTHIA ~ A really powerful Poem ~ which I hope is not actually your final GOODBYE ! WE need excellent Poets like you on MPS !
On the subject of your Poem it has happened several times in our extended Family ! Stephen on his BIKE ~ George on his Motor Bike ~ Anthea out walking etc. What grieves me most is we never got a chance to say goodbye they were all D O A by the time they got to Hospital. Thanks for sharing pleased YOU sacrificed YOUR life to save a Child ~ YOU did not die in vain ! Yours as always BRIAN. Please check my POEM (Pilgrims Progress) and NEW FUSION on CHRISTMAS ~ BRIAN.
November 12th, 2018 12:00
Crying Blood
Sugiura Asuna said:
This is amazing..... It\'s soul-wrenching. you can feel the emotion.
May 23rd, 2018 19:26
Sugiura Asuna said:
This is amazing..... It\'s soul-wrenching. you can feel the emotion.
May 23rd, 2018 19:26
I\'m Sorry
Carmine Branco said:
I agree and it\'s what I\'ve been telling you all along. Love yourself. There is no one more important than you and if you love you, who cares about anyone else.
March 25th, 2018 20:57
Carmine Branco said:
I agree and it\'s what I\'ve been telling you all along. Love yourself. There is no one more important than you and if you love you, who cares about anyone else.
March 25th, 2018 20:57
I\'m Sorry
Lorna said:
I\'m with Resa here..... you are obviously going through a bad time but you have to realize we all have to learn to love ourselves - and it isn\'t always easy. You sound very lovable to me! So a big hug for you today..... you will find love - but don\'t put all your hopes into other people - don\'t lose yourself!
March 25th, 2018 05:40
Lorna said:
I\'m with Resa here..... you are obviously going through a bad time but you have to realize we all have to learn to love ourselves - and it isn\'t always easy. You sound very lovable to me! So a big hug for you today..... you will find love - but don\'t put all your hopes into other people - don\'t lose yourself!
March 25th, 2018 05:40
I\'m Sorry
Resa71 said:
Honey, please don’t misenterpet what I’m about to say.
Stop Appolizing!
Love who you are.
As far as “ Feeling arms around you “
Feeling loved
The feeling often passes
March 24th, 2018 22:44
Resa71 said:
Honey, please don’t misenterpet what I’m about to say.
Stop Appolizing!
Love who you are.
As far as “ Feeling arms around you “
Feeling loved
The feeling often passes
March 24th, 2018 22:44
Cold and Alone
Jamie said:
Let them in, and they break your heart; keep them out and they beat you down for it, and then you blame yourself for all of it, and hate yourself for not being able to change, for not being worthy!
March 18th, 2018 19:14
Jamie said:
Let them in, and they break your heart; keep them out and they beat you down for it, and then you blame yourself for all of it, and hate yourself for not being able to change, for not being worthy!
March 18th, 2018 19:14
Terror
Jamie said:
That\'s what I\'ve been saying, You\'ve got a gift! And hopefully someday life will quit beating on you, but you are definitely a strong soul!
March 18th, 2018 19:04
Jamie said:
That\'s what I\'ve been saying, You\'ve got a gift! And hopefully someday life will quit beating on you, but you are definitely a strong soul!
March 18th, 2018 19:04
Fed Up
Jamie said:
This was considerably liberating as I have made my way here from your first post! You have a gift!
March 18th, 2018 18:46
Jamie said:
This was considerably liberating as I have made my way here from your first post! You have a gift!
March 18th, 2018 18:46
I\'m The Girl
Jamie said:
\"(You are) the girl\" with a great gift for writing!
March 18th, 2018 18:21
Jamie said:
\"(You are) the girl\" with a great gift for writing!
March 18th, 2018 18:21
Terror
Caring dove said:
wow, this is very powerful so well expressed ! well done . so terribly sad tho ,
February 27th, 2018 12:52
Caring dove said:
wow, this is very powerful so well expressed ! well done . so terribly sad tho ,
February 27th, 2018 12:52
Flashbacks
Christina8 said:
Even though no one should ever have to endure flashbacks, especially from their own family. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!
February 26th, 2018 20:58
Christina8 said:
Even though no one should ever have to endure flashbacks, especially from their own family. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!
February 26th, 2018 20:58
Flashbacks
Caring dove said:
hi cynthia , i am so sorry you have to experience this , you expressed this very well ..
such a cruel world, in which we live..
nobody should have to experience such cruelty from their own family
February 26th, 2018 18:57
Caring dove said:
hi cynthia , i am so sorry you have to experience this , you expressed this very well ..
such a cruel world, in which we live..
nobody should have to experience such cruelty from their own family
February 26th, 2018 18:57
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