Comments received on poems by Nobody special
Lipstick
Cassie58 said:
She was clearly special for you and you knew her well. I read your author notes and felt sad. What a pity you couldn’t have chosen that final lipstick colour for her. So very hard losing friends.
April 17th, 2024 01:35
Cassie58 said:
She was clearly special for you and you knew her well. I read your author notes and felt sad. What a pity you couldn’t have chosen that final lipstick colour for her. So very hard losing friends.
April 17th, 2024 01:35
Letters
Crowns4Christ said:
I couldn\'t agree with you more,our heart and soul is what defines us, make us who we are and who we will be,not some letter of the alphabet, because you are a beautiful human being made in the image of God,you have heart and soul,you live and breathe,you love and hurt,but all of this is what makes you special, and gives your identity, don\'t base what you are by a letter,
Because when all is said and done,a letter is just a letter, nothing more, nothing less,you are so much more.believe me when I say that you are your own person, don\'t let others get you down,
April 8th, 2022 19:16
Crowns4Christ said:
I couldn\'t agree with you more,our heart and soul is what defines us, make us who we are and who we will be,not some letter of the alphabet, because you are a beautiful human being made in the image of God,you have heart and soul,you live and breathe,you love and hurt,but all of this is what makes you special, and gives your identity, don\'t base what you are by a letter,
Because when all is said and done,a letter is just a letter, nothing more, nothing less,you are so much more.believe me when I say that you are your own person, don\'t let others get you down,
April 8th, 2022 19:16
Numbers
Christina8 said:
A hauntingly good write...mostly because it seems to be true. Great job on this!
April 4th, 2022 13:36
Christina8 said:
A hauntingly good write...mostly because it seems to be true. Great job on this!
April 4th, 2022 13:36
Numbers
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
they say Maths, is what governs
our universe..
I think, it is Math
that warps and shrinks, our intuitive senses
and thus, our capacity
to connect
with that ethereal, majority
of existences mysteries..
but still, while Capitalism
has our worth, reductively
being governed
by probability calculated, investment
choices;
2 plus 2 equalling 4
with be valued, more
than that instinct
that has, spontaneously ducking
without rhyme or reason
and seeing a paint brush, of chance
fly - over our head...
April 4th, 2022 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
(a great write
thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
they say Maths, is what governs
our universe..
I think, it is Math
that warps and shrinks, our intuitive senses
and thus, our capacity
to connect
with that ethereal, majority
of existences mysteries..
but still, while Capitalism
has our worth, reductively
being governed
by probability calculated, investment
choices;
2 plus 2 equalling 4
with be valued, more
than that instinct
that has, spontaneously ducking
without rhyme or reason
and seeing a paint brush, of chance
fly - over our head...
April 4th, 2022 05:02
Words.
L. B. Mek said:
what we don\'t use, we waste
so write to your heart\'s content, or don\'t
but whatever you choose, try to make sure
its the path you\'ll regret, having never tried
let that be your guide, in life...
thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
what we don\'t use, we waste
so write to your heart\'s content, or don\'t
but whatever you choose, try to make sure
its the path you\'ll regret, having never tried
let that be your guide, in life...
thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:57
Words.
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you have found the right words in this poem.
Andy
October 12th, 2021 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you have found the right words in this poem.
Andy
October 12th, 2021 00:41
Pills in the drawer
sylviasearcher said:
Are you okay?
I felt the lingering of the thought.
July 31st, 2020 10:13
sylviasearcher said:
Are you okay?
I felt the lingering of the thought.
July 31st, 2020 10:13
If you still saw me
dusk arising said:
Interesting introspective read. Move on, she obviously has but females mature earlier than the male and are generably able to do this sooner.
After a while many other things will happen in your life and what happened socially in schooldays will become a distant memory.
Look forward with positivity to better times and meaningful relationships which happen purely by chance.
July 22nd, 2018 02:41
dusk arising said:
Interesting introspective read. Move on, she obviously has but females mature earlier than the male and are generably able to do this sooner.
After a while many other things will happen in your life and what happened socially in schooldays will become a distant memory.
Look forward with positivity to better times and meaningful relationships which happen purely by chance.
July 22nd, 2018 02:41
A world falling apart
blessednloved said:
This is beautiful and sad and so true. I am blessed for reading this it hit home! Good write!
March 26th, 2018 21:56
blessednloved said:
This is beautiful and sad and so true. I am blessed for reading this it hit home! Good write!
March 26th, 2018 21:56
A world falling apart
Caring dove said:
this is really expressive and well written , i enjoyed reading this despite the obvious pain running throughout
March 26th, 2018 15:48
Caring dove said:
this is really expressive and well written , i enjoyed reading this despite the obvious pain running throughout
March 26th, 2018 15:48
Soulmate
Resa71 said:
I’ve felt that way since I was twelve
Years old.
It’s nice to know, I’m not the only one:)
March 9th, 2018 01:37
Resa71 said:
I’ve felt that way since I was twelve
Years old.
It’s nice to know, I’m not the only one:)
March 9th, 2018 01:37
cry
Kruits said:
Im very sorry. It sounds like you lost someone, and you will help a lot of people if you keep sharing your experiences, keep it up!!
February 25th, 2018 21:22
Kruits said:
Im very sorry. It sounds like you lost someone, and you will help a lot of people if you keep sharing your experiences, keep it up!!
February 25th, 2018 21:22
cry
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ WELCOME to MPS ~ On this site everyone is very SPECIAL ! Thanks for your first POEM a meditation on the \"Loss of a Soul Mate\" I am pleased you mentioned it was not autobiographical ! It happens and I have experienced the loss of Family & Friends but (thank GOD) never my Soul Mate ! If anything happened to ANGELA I would DIE too ~ so I can understand the territory you are exploring in verse. Musing on Death and reading Poems relating to Death is CATHARTIC because it does prepare us should it happen ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my poems ~ thanks B.
February 25th, 2018 11:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ WELCOME to MPS ~ On this site everyone is very SPECIAL ! Thanks for your first POEM a meditation on the \"Loss of a Soul Mate\" I am pleased you mentioned it was not autobiographical ! It happens and I have experienced the loss of Family & Friends but (thank GOD) never my Soul Mate ! If anything happened to ANGELA I would DIE too ~ so I can understand the territory you are exploring in verse. Musing on Death and reading Poems relating to Death is CATHARTIC because it does prepare us should it happen ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my poems ~ thanks B.
February 25th, 2018 11:58
