Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
These Lyrical Beats Of Yours
sorenbarrett said:
The body\'s rhythms tell us many things from love to security and I hear you speaking of this in this poem. Very nice.
April 13th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
The body\'s rhythms tell us many things from love to security and I hear you speaking of this in this poem. Very nice.
April 13th, 2025 05:23
Without My True Love
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing that. Well done.
April 8th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing that. Well done.
April 8th, 2025 04:30
Broken Hearted Girl
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or emotional it matters not it is difficult. A touching poem.
April 7th, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or emotional it matters not it is difficult. A touching poem.
April 7th, 2025 05:47
Spring’s Cherry Blossom
Poetic Licence said:
Images of beauty and colour in a lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:38
Poetic Licence said:
Images of beauty and colour in a lovely write, enjoyed the read
March 31st, 2025 08:38
Spring’s Cherry Blossom
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful and most picturesque you have painted an image of beauty. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful and most picturesque you have painted an image of beauty. Nicely done
March 31st, 2025 07:53
Passion For Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:45
King Of Pop
sorenbarrett said:
A well performed action admired and acknowledged. Full of great imagery this poem describes a moment in time
March 28th, 2025 07:58
sorenbarrett said:
A well performed action admired and acknowledged. Full of great imagery this poem describes a moment in time
March 28th, 2025 07:58
My Brother
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love for a brother and put in good words.
March 27th, 2025 16:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love for a brother and put in good words.
March 27th, 2025 16:48
My Crip, Spastic The Uromastyx
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read with a serious message, our heart chooses to and what to live, then its our responsibility to nurture and look after that love, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read with a serious message, our heart chooses to and what to live, then its our responsibility to nurture and look after that love, enjoyed the read
March 23rd, 2025 05:40
My Crip, Spastic The Uromastyx
sorenbarrett said:
The bonds we make with those we love and we do not choose whom we love our heart does. A lovely write I too have had special bods with animals from dogs to octopus and this poem reminds me of an Iguana we had that we let go in our back yard and lived there for years tormenting the dog and eating the hibiscus flowers until a hurricane came and he moved on. A fun read
March 23rd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
The bonds we make with those we love and we do not choose whom we love our heart does. A lovely write I too have had special bods with animals from dogs to octopus and this poem reminds me of an Iguana we had that we let go in our back yard and lived there for years tormenting the dog and eating the hibiscus flowers until a hurricane came and he moved on. A fun read
March 23rd, 2025 04:43
Daddy….
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender and heartfelt poem of love for father gone but not forgotten. Lovely
March 17th, 2025 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
A most tender and heartfelt poem of love for father gone but not forgotten. Lovely
March 17th, 2025 09:24
Morning’s Sorrows
sorenbarrett said:
A horrible plight, pain is what I fear most either physical or emotional. This poem gives a sense of sadness and sorrow for anyone that has to go through it.
March 14th, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A horrible plight, pain is what I fear most either physical or emotional. This poem gives a sense of sadness and sorrow for anyone that has to go through it.
March 14th, 2025 12:31
This Is Me
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived expectations and sensory comparisons that when not met result in rejection. Few are willing to dive deeper beyond the surface of these to what really makes up a person. Great subject
March 11th, 2025 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A valid point that people base their decisions upon preconceived expectations and sensory comparisons that when not met result in rejection. Few are willing to dive deeper beyond the surface of these to what really makes up a person. Great subject
March 11th, 2025 05:19
The Loudest Non-Verbal
sorenbarrett said:
Taking a stand and drawing a line in the sand is important sometimes. Very nicely and powerfully written
March 9th, 2025 03:33
sorenbarrett said:
Taking a stand and drawing a line in the sand is important sometimes. Very nicely and powerfully written
March 9th, 2025 03:33
Just Speak To Me
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself the topic of this poem. A topic that most would agree is important for all of us. Nicely worded
March 7th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Being oneself the topic of this poem. A topic that most would agree is important for all of us. Nicely worded
March 7th, 2025 04:13
My Crazy Cat, Zackary
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 06:27
sorenbarrett said:
I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat. Nicely done
March 5th, 2025 06:27
We Must Fight To Dream
sorenbarrett said:
Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely written
March 4th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely written
March 4th, 2025 11:25
Daffodils Of Yellow
sorenbarrett said:
Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem. Descriptive in nature it also has a message. very nice
March 1st, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem. Descriptive in nature it also has a message. very nice
March 1st, 2025 04:48
The Tree That Grieves
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new growth. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new growth. Lovely
February 28th, 2025 04:32
Autumn’s Scents
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a part of nature and it a part of us as well stated in this poem. A lovely poem of unity. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
We are all a part of nature and it a part of us as well stated in this poem. A lovely poem of unity. Loved it
February 27th, 2025 14:12
Your Presence
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls out for love and passion. Very nice
February 23rd, 2025 05:53
sorenbarrett said:
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls out for love and passion. Very nice
February 23rd, 2025 05:53
My Sweet, Darling You
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12
My Sweet, Darling You
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write to a loved one, beautifully expressed in the read
February 19th, 2025 21:18
Poetic Licence said:
A very touching and emotional write to a loved one, beautifully expressed in the read
February 19th, 2025 21:18
Without A Goodbye
Bloomingdale said:
I love it, and if you lost someone, I hope you’re doing fine ❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:15
Bloomingdale said:
I love it, and if you lost someone, I hope you’re doing fine ❤️
February 18th, 2025 10:15
Diary Of My Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love overcomes all.
February 16th, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love overcomes all.
February 16th, 2025 09:04
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