Comments received on poems by Ajon4wheels
Just Smile
Resa71 said:
So much, and so many emotions!
I was a little confused here and there as far as what was happening?
Is he dying?
It is beautifully written, I’m just not sure I’m grasping the entire meaning:)
March 10th, 2018 14:00
Resa71 said:
So much, and so many emotions!
I was a little confused here and there as far as what was happening?
Is he dying?
It is beautifully written, I’m just not sure I’m grasping the entire meaning:)
March 10th, 2018 14:00
Blanket Of Bluebells
Lorna said:
Lovely - and as a side note, i would bounce on the bed again if I could but now i would be the one paying for the damage if the ceiling fell down below! So better not - I\'ll read your poem instead.
March 4th, 2018 06:37
Lorna said:
Lovely - and as a side note, i would bounce on the bed again if I could but now i would be the one paying for the damage if the ceiling fell down below! So better not - I\'ll read your poem instead.
March 4th, 2018 06:37
Blanket Of Bluebells
Caring dove said:
really lovely :-) enjoyed reading this .. such lovely words used throughout , makes for a very pleasant read
March 3rd, 2018 18:26
Caring dove said:
really lovely :-) enjoyed reading this .. such lovely words used throughout , makes for a very pleasant read
March 3rd, 2018 18:26
Miscommunication
swyndell said:
This is really wonderful, humans like to judge others without knowing a single thing about the victim of their unfair outlooks cast upon them. So we must stand proud of who we are despite the road-blocks. I really enjoyed reading this.
February 26th, 2018 15:43
swyndell said:
This is really wonderful, humans like to judge others without knowing a single thing about the victim of their unfair outlooks cast upon them. So we must stand proud of who we are despite the road-blocks. I really enjoyed reading this.
February 26th, 2018 15:43
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