Comments received on poems by E-Poems
The broken Generation.
Edthepoet said:
Fantastic write, It\'s like you read my mind :). Social media is a waste of life. Nobody knows how to use it. Give a fourteen year old the tools to build a house... They couldn\'t do it. It\'s the same with the Internet.. They have access to all the information in the world.. But they don\'t know how to do anything with it..
July 29th, 2018 11:07
Edthepoet said:
Fantastic write, It\'s like you read my mind :). Social media is a waste of life. Nobody knows how to use it. Give a fourteen year old the tools to build a house... They couldn\'t do it. It\'s the same with the Internet.. They have access to all the information in the world.. But they don\'t know how to do anything with it..
July 29th, 2018 11:07
The broken Generation.
Poetic Dan said:
I saw my daughter in this, we had our chats about musicly app and the other bits.
Sadly I\'m only half in their life and I make sure she skates, sings and climbing trees with me there is more to life than these screens.
On the others side they can be so a good tool but I guess that\'s the point we are the problems individually that is creating Society.
July 24th, 2018 02:21
Poetic Dan said:
I saw my daughter in this, we had our chats about musicly app and the other bits.
Sadly I\'m only half in their life and I make sure she skates, sings and climbing trees with me there is more to life than these screens.
On the others side they can be so a good tool but I guess that\'s the point we are the problems individually that is creating Society.
July 24th, 2018 02:21
The broken Generation.
Goldfinch60 said:
That new generation does not know what true communication is, you need to see in peoples eyes as you talk to see what they mean.
God write about what I believe is the idiocy of modern so called communication. (Sorry for the rant E-poems)
July 23rd, 2018 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That new generation does not know what true communication is, you need to see in peoples eyes as you talk to see what they mean.
God write about what I believe is the idiocy of modern so called communication. (Sorry for the rant E-poems)
July 23rd, 2018 00:49
Soul mates.
Syd said:
Great write E Poems. I totally agree with it.
A pleasure to read.
- Syd
July 18th, 2018 12:03
Syd said:
Great write E Poems. I totally agree with it.
A pleasure to read.
- Syd
July 18th, 2018 12:03
Soul mates.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write and the line:
\"It’s about comfort and respect together,\"
Is the most important thing in any relationship.
July 18th, 2018 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true write and the line:
\"It’s about comfort and respect together,\"
Is the most important thing in any relationship.
July 18th, 2018 01:16
Soul mates.
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s so true! From my marriage of 8 years to the next two amazing souls lead me right round the corner to some who I now understand what I should of been looking for.
People get naked every day but to truly show all of yourself is to love the whole soul that stands before you.
July 17th, 2018 16:47
Poetic Dan said:
That\'s so true! From my marriage of 8 years to the next two amazing souls lead me right round the corner to some who I now understand what I should of been looking for.
People get naked every day but to truly show all of yourself is to love the whole soul that stands before you.
July 17th, 2018 16:47
Soul mates.
Reyas said:
This write speaks volumes. Love goes much deeper than the surface.
July 17th, 2018 15:15
Reyas said:
This write speaks volumes. Love goes much deeper than the surface.
July 17th, 2018 15:15
why?
Poetic Dan said:
This was so awesome!
It was like I was at your concert
As if my soul was being heard
We will transform through our spirit and words.
O and I\'ve just finished something that I feel is in great synchronisation, I was already itching with anticipation but I guess I should thank you and the site for helping with my patience.
Hahaha that was fun
July 16th, 2018 17:09
Poetic Dan said:
This was so awesome!
It was like I was at your concert
As if my soul was being heard
We will transform through our spirit and words.
O and I\'ve just finished something that I feel is in great synchronisation, I was already itching with anticipation but I guess I should thank you and the site for helping with my patience.
Hahaha that was fun
July 16th, 2018 17:09
why?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and some meaningful questions, many just cannot be bothered to look around themselves much these days, I always do.
July 16th, 2018 08:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and some meaningful questions, many just cannot be bothered to look around themselves much these days, I always do.
July 16th, 2018 08:17
why?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SMILER ~ for a reminder of Nine Things we should ALL be doing to make our ~ Community ~ and the World ~ A Happier place !
We should ALL MORE ~ Open our eyes ~ Show love ~ Smile ~ Be fearless ~ Intolerant of Badness ~ Ready to speak out ~ TACTILE ! ~ Appreciative ~ Inhaling / Understanding
YES ~ WE should all \"Open our eyes wider & more !\" Thanks for sharing & caring ~ love IT ! Please check my CHESS Poem and my FUSION on Prayer ~ YOURS BRIAN
July 16th, 2018 08:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS SMILER ~ for a reminder of Nine Things we should ALL be doing to make our ~ Community ~ and the World ~ A Happier place !
We should ALL MORE ~ Open our eyes ~ Show love ~ Smile ~ Be fearless ~ Intolerant of Badness ~ Ready to speak out ~ TACTILE ! ~ Appreciative ~ Inhaling / Understanding
YES ~ WE should all \"Open our eyes wider & more !\" Thanks for sharing & caring ~ love IT ! Please check my CHESS Poem and my FUSION on Prayer ~ YOURS BRIAN
July 16th, 2018 08:13
why?
onepauly said:
I did the honor of reading your poem. it\'s o.k.
now read mine.
it\'s called \"who\"
right on top of yours in the list.
July 16th, 2018 07:31
onepauly said:
I did the honor of reading your poem. it\'s o.k.
now read mine.
it\'s called \"who\"
right on top of yours in the list.
July 16th, 2018 07:31
why?
orchidee said:
A fine write E. And why don\'t I sing more? Ahh I do, to everyone\'s torment! heehee. Who can bear it?!
July 16th, 2018 06:59
orchidee said:
A fine write E. And why don\'t I sing more? Ahh I do, to everyone\'s torment! heehee. Who can bear it?!
July 16th, 2018 06:59
I Feel Grumpy.
Poetic Dan said:
Even that was brilliant! I call it my grumpy pants and most of the time I don\'t really know how they get on, well actually I do and that\'s why I write.
The darkness needs light and light needs darkness too, I guess it\'s all about the balance and keeping the rhythm in tune and this is something you do. Be it happy or sad your flow is still smooth, see even these words come so easily for you.
July 16th, 2018 02:22
Poetic Dan said:
Even that was brilliant! I call it my grumpy pants and most of the time I don\'t really know how they get on, well actually I do and that\'s why I write.
The darkness needs light and light needs darkness too, I guess it\'s all about the balance and keeping the rhythm in tune and this is something you do. Be it happy or sad your flow is still smooth, see even these words come so easily for you.
July 16th, 2018 02:22
I Feel Grumpy.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI FRIEND ~ Love the PIC ~ Grumpy Cats ~ I like CATS because they let you know how they feel ~ so you know how to treat them ! Most HUMANS masquerade (hide behind masks) but I like you because you tell it like it is Grumpy Cat (instead of a SELFIE ?) and a GRUMPY POEM ! Love the POEM ~ rhyming couplets ~ and lots of RHYTHM ~ which suits me because I am a performance Poet and this one reads & recites well. I try to post a POEM every day ~ or ANGELA who shares my site ~ ANGELA has posted today ~ the song is in MAORI which is wonderful ~ ANGELA IN IN NZ. My philosophy is the same as yours ~ whatever MOOD I\'m in I post a POEM or a FUSION ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 15th, 2018 15:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI FRIEND ~ Love the PIC ~ Grumpy Cats ~ I like CATS because they let you know how they feel ~ so you know how to treat them ! Most HUMANS masquerade (hide behind masks) but I like you because you tell it like it is Grumpy Cat (instead of a SELFIE ?) and a GRUMPY POEM ! Love the POEM ~ rhyming couplets ~ and lots of RHYTHM ~ which suits me because I am a performance Poet and this one reads & recites well. I try to post a POEM every day ~ or ANGELA who shares my site ~ ANGELA has posted today ~ the song is in MAORI which is wonderful ~ ANGELA IN IN NZ. My philosophy is the same as yours ~ whatever MOOD I\'m in I post a POEM or a FUSION ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 15th, 2018 15:50
I Feel Grumpy.
Goldfinch60 said:
You maybe in a mood but it has inspired you to write these words.
July 15th, 2018 15:26
Goldfinch60 said:
You maybe in a mood but it has inspired you to write these words.
July 15th, 2018 15:26
I Feel Grumpy.
Edthepoet said:
I recommend Gin :D. Well..at least you got a quality little poem out of being grumpy. There\'s more to life than being happy all the time, in my humble opinion..
July 15th, 2018 14:46
Edthepoet said:
I recommend Gin :D. Well..at least you got a quality little poem out of being grumpy. There\'s more to life than being happy all the time, in my humble opinion..
July 15th, 2018 14:46
Punchbag.
Heartwriter said:
You are beautiful. They were just jealous! Look at your pic it\'s lovely.
July 14th, 2018 19:04
Heartwriter said:
You are beautiful. They were just jealous! Look at your pic it\'s lovely.
July 14th, 2018 19:04
Punchbag.
dusk arising said:
I thought my childhood experiences of similar treatment were totally a thing of the past until.....
I took a course of psychotherapy on an unrelated matter and it was all dug up from the past and revealed to me how it has affected some of my day to day behavior quite profoundly.
Have you considered how rhyming the end of each line isn\'t necessary when you create a certain \'flow\' or pace to your writing. It can free you up to use different language rather than restrict you by needing to rhyme. Just a thought. Many writers here forgo rhyme for content.
July 14th, 2018 15:35
dusk arising said:
I thought my childhood experiences of similar treatment were totally a thing of the past until.....
I took a course of psychotherapy on an unrelated matter and it was all dug up from the past and revealed to me how it has affected some of my day to day behavior quite profoundly.
Have you considered how rhyming the end of each line isn\'t necessary when you create a certain \'flow\' or pace to your writing. It can free you up to use different language rather than restrict you by needing to rhyme. Just a thought. Many writers here forgo rhyme for content.
July 14th, 2018 15:35
Punchbag.
Poetic Dan said:
... Wow I can relate to this pain and yet we turned out the same. Let\'s give it up for personal gain, I\'m now going to read one I\'m sure I did about what I\'d say to my younger self. Reflection is the key to our own mental health
Brilliant work! Shine on
July 14th, 2018 14:22
Poetic Dan said:
... Wow I can relate to this pain and yet we turned out the same. Let\'s give it up for personal gain, I\'m now going to read one I\'m sure I did about what I\'d say to my younger self. Reflection is the key to our own mental health
Brilliant work! Shine on
July 14th, 2018 14:22
Punchbag.
orchidee said:
Swoon! So you\'re a sex kitten now then?! Ooohhhh. Did you know you were?! heehee.
July 14th, 2018 14:16
orchidee said:
Swoon! So you\'re a sex kitten now then?! Ooohhhh. Did you know you were?! heehee.
July 14th, 2018 14:16
Punchbag.
JasmineUK said:
You can\'t change the past,
But the future\'s not written,
With your wit and style,
You\'re a super sex kitten. :)
July 14th, 2018 13:42
JasmineUK said:
You can\'t change the past,
But the future\'s not written,
With your wit and style,
You\'re a super sex kitten. :)
July 14th, 2018 13:42
Punchbag.
Edthepoet said:
Something tells me them kids now couldn\'t produce an ounce of art this emotionally expressive if they tried for the rest of their life\'s combined. I hope you came to a point or get to a point that you realise what other people think is important... But it\'s only important to them. And how \'what they think of you\' affects you, is really only \'what you think of what they think\'. It doesn\'t matter unless you let it, in other words.
July 14th, 2018 13:04
Edthepoet said:
Something tells me them kids now couldn\'t produce an ounce of art this emotionally expressive if they tried for the rest of their life\'s combined. I hope you came to a point or get to a point that you realise what other people think is important... But it\'s only important to them. And how \'what they think of you\' affects you, is really only \'what you think of what they think\'. It doesn\'t matter unless you let it, in other words.
July 14th, 2018 13:04
Assumptions
Poetic Dan said:
O my days it\'s like all the words that ran through me while under the stars last night but like always when I begin to write its like nothing I first thought.
The flow in this was so calming, you just lead me straight to the end. With a perfect picture of a smile on every one\'s face, your work is just divine.
July 14th, 2018 11:07
Poetic Dan said:
O my days it\'s like all the words that ran through me while under the stars last night but like always when I begin to write its like nothing I first thought.
The flow in this was so calming, you just lead me straight to the end. With a perfect picture of a smile on every one\'s face, your work is just divine.
July 14th, 2018 11:07
I Shared My Smile With A Stranger.
Syd said:
The world needs more people like you and more smiles. Great positive poem. Impeccable rhyming sequence by the way.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 13:13
Syd said:
The world needs more people like you and more smiles. Great positive poem. Impeccable rhyming sequence by the way.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 13:13
Assumptions
SLR said:
I could go on and on about all the things I like about this one, but I\'m just going to say LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! Your gift for exceptional, thought provoking, beautifully written work leaves me in awe. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
July 12th, 2018 20:33
SLR said:
I could go on and on about all the things I like about this one, but I\'m just going to say LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! Your gift for exceptional, thought provoking, beautifully written work leaves me in awe. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
July 12th, 2018 20:33
Assumptions
Heartwriter said:
I agree. All we should see is another of humanity. Hello human. Your right was great!
July 12th, 2018 16:13
Heartwriter said:
I agree. All we should see is another of humanity. Hello human. Your right was great!
July 12th, 2018 16:13
Assumptions
Reyas said:
There you go again taking such a beautiful message and all these big words and somehow magically putting them together and rhyming them like they were supposed to be that way. You make me mad in the best of ways. I’m just jealous of your amazing skill. Thank you for the wonderful read.
July 12th, 2018 16:00
Reyas said:
There you go again taking such a beautiful message and all these big words and somehow magically putting them together and rhyming them like they were supposed to be that way. You make me mad in the best of ways. I’m just jealous of your amazing skill. Thank you for the wonderful read.
July 12th, 2018 16:00
Assumptions
JasmineUK said:
Don\'t judge a book by its cover,
You could just miss out on that fantastic lover! :)
July 12th, 2018 15:40
JasmineUK said:
Don\'t judge a book by its cover,
You could just miss out on that fantastic lover! :)
July 12th, 2018 15:40
Assumptions
Edthepoet said:
*claps slowly as he stands* :)
The good poems make you nod as you read them, the great ones make you smile. I\'m still smiling..
July 12th, 2018 15:31
Edthepoet said:
*claps slowly as he stands* :)
The good poems make you nod as you read them, the great ones make you smile. I\'m still smiling..
July 12th, 2018 15:31
Assumptions
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow super questions and evocative style here. Poetic and rhyming fantastic. People tend to stereotype and prejudge you are so right. A fine society poem. Thumbs up, I like this epic.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 15:09
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow super questions and evocative style here. Poetic and rhyming fantastic. People tend to stereotype and prejudge you are so right. A fine society poem. Thumbs up, I like this epic.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 15:09
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