Comments received on poems by E-Poems



Heal me.
SLR said:

First, I love the first stanza. Great word combos/usage. Second, this describes SO well how so many people think/feel. Third, I LOVE your comment that someone\'s self love/ self esteem depends on themselves. (Such wisdom from someone so young! LOVE THAT!) Other people can damage our self worth only if we allow them to. We have to fight past those bad feelings and realize that that is their deficiency, not ours! Great write.

June 27th, 2018 16:22

Heal me.
Heartwriter said:

Truly a gifted write. Not too many can express their self to the fullest as you have here. Hope you find all you need and much more!

June 27th, 2018 12:35

Heal me.
Poetic Dan said:

Wow out standing messages, so many moments of my life flashed before me.
Thank you for helping me see something, I\'ll enjoy this self reflection.



June 27th, 2018 10:25

Shed tears for a stranger
SLR said:

Holy cow, girl! You just threw down the gauntlet for some people!! LOVE IT! So out there blunt and fed up with the bs! I know people like this and I\'ve SO wanted to give them this exact ear full! Love today\'s post! Your pic looks like such a sweet little girl, it\'s great to see that you can throw down when needed!! :-) :-) :-)

May 13th, 2018 20:55

What if Humans weren\'t the smart ones?
SLR said:

This is so fanciful and fun! Like a Dr Seuss book! Love it! A unique voice.

May 11th, 2018 00:13

Allow your life to freeze.
SLR said:

I LOVE the last two lines, I\'ve always felt that people are so focused on the mundane every day life that they lose their imagination and creativity. They lose their connection with nature.

May 10th, 2018 21:39

Boredom.
Netashi said:

Boredom is mymost hated yet loved feeling cuz so much thing ca come from boredom but bordom itself is a nightmare, Very nice poem keep it up E
-Theta
P.S From another bored person to another can you read my poem about boredom

May 3rd, 2018 11:28

Boredom.
Moom said:

Man I know this feeling all too well. Restlessness and boredom.

May 1st, 2018 16:59

19 year old me...
RhysPieces said:

Refreshing read and keep it up, it was lovely x

April 20th, 2018 07:47

Listen up Lions!!
RhysPieces said:

Lion rawr with your head held high
Find comfort in your luscious locks of mane
Lion cub rawr like the king you do try
Know that this was to elevate sheep pain

I think the lions with be thankful for your poem 💜

April 20th, 2018 07:46

Sleep tight.
RhysPieces said:

So spooky! Love it ☺️X

April 20th, 2018 07:42

Inside Insecurities.
RhysPieces said:

Very good read Elise, and a very honest poem! Keep it up ☺️ X

April 20th, 2018 07:40

19 year old me...
orchidee said:

A fine write E. Of course, no one gets older than 21. If you ask them how old they are on their birthday, they say \'Oh, I\'m 21 again, don\'t you know?!\' lol

April 19th, 2018 01:45

19 year old me...
sharda92 said:

This poem made me real emotionally cause I can relate with a lot of what your saying. Then a bit of joy care. To know that everything has gotten better. This was absolutely amazing!!!😊

April 19th, 2018 00:48

19 year old me...
Laura🌻 said:

E,
A super write which I enjoyed reading! You have a great outlook on living your life from this point on!

Great ending to your poem...
“I’m just continuing to live my life, with hope, love and respect.”

With such positivity on life, you WILL be just fine! You are wise beyond your years! I admire you! Love your pics!

~Laura~

April 18th, 2018 19:11

19 year old me...
Accidental Poet said:

Well, you\'re definitively a survivor E. That\'s a lot of living in a short time. And it might seem like a lot of hard living, but they are great lessons in life. When I was 18, Alice Cooper was on the radio singing, \"I\'m 18\". It was a huge hit song for him and it rang true for me. I didn\'t know if I was coming or going. But it sounds like you\'re well on your way to figuring out who you are and where you want to go in life. Best of luck, but most of all...keep writing your poetry. It\'s wonderful.

April 18th, 2018 17:57

Listen up Lions!!
orchidee said:

Sheep following one after another, in a herd. Well, in a flock. Not known of a \'herd of sheep\'!
There\'s a puzzle about a lion, a wolf, and a sheep - or something like that, and how do they all egt across a river one at a time without any of them eating one another. Something like that anyway lol.
But do they know how to row a boat to start with?! lol

April 17th, 2018 13:41

Inside Insecurities.
blessednloved said:

This is wonderful! Way to put it out there!

April 16th, 2018 22:49

Sleep tight.
orchidee said:

Oh, she\'ll be all right. She\'s just having a bad-hair day, or rather a bad-hair night! heehee.

April 16th, 2018 12:25

Sleep tight.
orchidee said:

I\'m bit naughty - I may \'defuse\' heavy poems with some daft comment! lol.

April 16th, 2018 09:20

Sleep tight.
orchidee said:

Oh dear, not a pleasant night for her then? heehee. Now I\'ve taken the atmosphere out of the poem. doh!

April 16th, 2018 09:19

Inside Insecurities.
Jeremy Cohen said:

This is really sad. You painted quite the picture. Just know you are a beautiful person regardless of exterior. Much love. PS I can relate to these feelings.

April 15th, 2018 14:11

Inside Insecurities.
Eugene S. said:

Awesome, awesome, awesome! Love it!

April 15th, 2018 10:46

Inside Insecurities.
orchidee said:

The only thing Terthas that you got to be insecure about, is my singing when you\'re in the UK! heehee.

April 15th, 2018 08:18

Inside Insecurities.
orchidee said:

Oops best tick the \'18+\' box for this one. It\'s there when you post a poem!

April 15th, 2018 08:17

Inside Insecurities.
orchidee said:

Have you said all this twice? I said, have you said all this twice, as I just have?! lol


April 15th, 2018 08:16

What if Humans weren\'t the smart ones?
Nicholas Browning said:

I liked the first stanza the most. Interesting concept for sure.
Overall a ride through another mind\'s eye. I enjoyed it.

April 15th, 2018 00:42

What if Humans weren\'t the smart ones?
orchidee said:

Yes, pigs flying too? Heehee.

April 14th, 2018 10:55

What if Humans weren\'t the smart ones?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Amazing & Amusing ! The EARTH is a Living Planet and all ling things ~ Flora & Fauna have built in intelligence to enable them to do what they do ! Increasingly ROBOTS are replacing Humans in the Workplace ! To some extent the Flora & Fauna are genetically programmed to do a limited number of things ~ but humans because of their superior BRAINS are capable of anything & everything ! So I think Planet of the Apes is Science Fiction and will never be Science Fact ! However we are in the ROBOT AGE and this makes your poem credible ! Thanks f\\or scaring ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Love the Picture \"Road to Somewhere !\" Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

April 14th, 2018 10:16

What if Humans weren\'t the smart ones?
Jooles said:

Really enjoyed this

April 14th, 2018 10:01

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