Comments received on poems by lemons poetry



A short yet extremely meaningful poem
Poetic Dan said:

Short and true
I\'m sure that kiss
Is now waiting for you

June 3rd, 2018 06:26

desert of weepless tears
HangingbyaHalo said:

I love this. Oh how I can relate.

May 27th, 2018 07:36

desert of weepless tears
orchidee said:

That friendly squirrel (in pic) won\'t stay depressed for ever! Nor will you hopefully!

May 27th, 2018 01:31

a special kind of suffering
orchidee said:

A fine poem LP, though I don\'t go along with the thought of life as a pack of cards. If so, why are some dealt the \'lucky\' hands, and some not?
Then I don\'t believe in \'luck\' either. It may make it seem as if life is some lottery. I say, we\'ve as much chance of winning that, as seeing pigs flying!

May 16th, 2018 02:10

his own little twisted addiction
Netashi said:

Very detailed and gritty poem, Hope your friend gets over drugs they don\'t need that in their life. Keep up the good writing lemons
-Theta

May 15th, 2018 12:02

his own little twisted addiction
A said:

Very emotional, has a great beat. Also extremely relatable. I like your imperfect capitalization. Your entire style really suits it. You have a awesome choice of wording hear.
Keep it up!

May 14th, 2018 21:41

moving ahead no matter what
Netashi said:

Very well written poem lemons, have a nice day

May 8th, 2018 10:09

moving ahead no matter what
orchidee said:

An old \'Carry On\' film joke is: \'Aww, why they always fire at poor Will. What\'s he done? Can\'t they fire at Fred, Bob, etc some times?!\' A fine write .

May 8th, 2018 08:37

moving ahead no matter what
Goldfinch60 said:

May that tragedy now be behind you and you move forward into an existence full of joy and wonder.

May 8th, 2018 05:30

a love for poetry
Goldfinch60 said:

The muse is obviously with you as it is with all who put pen to paper.

May 8th, 2018 00:16

a love for poetry
Michael Edwards said:

And may I wish the best day to you - super write - stay with us lp.

May 7th, 2018 08:13

a love for poetry
FineB said:

Thank you lemonspoetry.

A good and inspiring write.

We are all poets united under My poetic side.

Keep writing
FineB

May 7th, 2018 07:58

a love for poetry
Arianna Smith said:

Awesome read! And also relatable!!!

May 7th, 2018 07:09

a love for poetry
lemons poetry said:

any advice ideas or any thing? comment below :)

May 7th, 2018 05:42

it chains me to the floor
onepauly said:

you can save yourself.

May 5th, 2018 10:17

it chains me to the floor
orchidee said:

Ok, I\'ll go away. Save ya bashing yourself over the head with frying pan, etc. Cooke some bacon and eggs with it instead! I never realised me singing was that bad. Does your squirrel like it, in your pic? heehee.

May 5th, 2018 10:04

straw bery
onepauly said:

who said life is not a bowl of cherries.
I have at least one can of cherry pie filling a day. their only a dollar each.
at the dollar tree store.

May 4th, 2018 08:58

phantom (ghosted)
Netashi said:

Hauntingly beautiful, Keep up the good work Lemons
-Theta

May 2nd, 2018 11:28

this is not you....
Netashi said:

Very nice poem lemons you don\'t need to change yourself just improve upon yourself everyone\'s beautiful in their own way. Keep up the good work
-Theta

May 1st, 2018 11:13

this is not you....
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

i like this poem very much .. it sounds like you are having some sort of self talk / self reflection , sounds like you need to get more in touch with the real you , take off that mask and cover and look deep within .. i\'m currently reading a book called the love mindset, a very good book which you might want to read, it talks about self acceptance and the way to love

May 1st, 2018 03:56

Story of a wish
onepauly said:

wonderful story.

April 28th, 2018 21:03

that road...
onepauly said:

go all the way around the world and find yourself. all the way around.

April 27th, 2018 18:35

YOU....I?....WHY?!!
orchidee said:

Oh, all right, I won\'t right ya any more letters then! heehee.

April 27th, 2018 01:38

mystery love
onepauly said:

I wont take the bait.

April 23rd, 2018 14:20

mystery love
Netashi said:

When life gives you lemons you make lemonade you decided to make poetry instead, good choice.

Very nice first Lemon.

April 23rd, 2018 10:11

mystery love
lemons poetry said:

i like to make simple poems that are easy to read

April 23rd, 2018 04:52