Comments received on poems by theseachild



i cant do this anymore
Broken_kingdom said:

When you\'re in the grave
I\'ll still call you my friend
You were there to save
And i\'m with you till the end

So i guess maybe we\'ll suffer together
Brave the storms and fight the weather
Believe it or not you\'re the only friend I trust
And losing you too, is to much

January 3rd, 2019 14:24

rip to a legend
Syd said:

Great tribute write. Great flow to this poem also. I read about this wrapper in the paper today but I\'m unfamiliar with his music.

Beautifully written - Syd

June 19th, 2018 12:39

rip to a legend
Poetic Dan said:

A beautiful piece that I\'m sure will help everyone find harmony.
What was his name? I\'d like to hear some of his work.
Thank you again for sharing your thoughts

June 19th, 2018 11:33

cheater cheater
FineB said:

Thank you sad sunflower. An excellent poem.

Poignant, melancholy and brilliant showing the darker side of love and relationships!

Keep writing
FineB

June 4th, 2018 10:32

shadow
Candlewitch said:

hello,

I can relate to this...it was my story, many, many moons ago when speed/crank was my only friend. very well written!
always, Cat

June 2nd, 2018 11:20

justice doesn’t exist
kingOfOne said:

I actually enjoyed this a lot. I don\'t usually like poems where people complain about their jobs but you have flow!

May 27th, 2018 22:13

justice doesn’t exist
HangingbyaHalo said:

Justice does exist, overcoming in obstacle is justice in its self. I appreciate the reflection of perceived defeat. This is painfully beautiful.

May 27th, 2018 09:45

lockdown
Ian Primmer said:

I\'ve been waiting for a poem like this to fill the void, the unlawful attacks on our schools are out of control. I know a lockdown doesn\'t make everything alright. Thank you for the read, so sorry you have to go through this.

May 22nd, 2018 20:02

deadly time
Poetic Dan said:

Nice work.
Time is great, it can go fast or slow then not even exist at all ;)

May 19th, 2018 03:34

homesick
Mystery1023 said:

Aw Ella I know you will have fun. Remember just text us or facetime if u want

May 14th, 2018 09:55

it isn\'t enough
Maxine Smith said:

We learn from our failures but we ourselves are NOT failures.
Believe in yourself, your writing is beautiful, you should be proud ☺️

May 9th, 2018 11:11

childhood love
onepauly said:

ha! ha! humorus

May 3rd, 2018 13:13

childhood love
Broken_kingdom said:

CAN YOU FEEL THE LOVE TONIGHT?

WHY YES I CAN. THANK U. INVITE ME TO YOUR WEDDING. JK. NO IM SERIOUS. LUV U

May 3rd, 2018 10:14

childhood love
Broken_kingdom said:

YOUNG LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

May 3rd, 2018 10:13

childhood love
Broken_kingdom said:

CHILDHOOD CRUUSH

May 3rd, 2018 10:13

childhood love
Broken_kingdom said:

DAMM

May 3rd, 2018 10:13

the simple things
Jolie said:

Wow! This is truly amazing! Not many people appreciate those small, hardly noticable things in life. You were able to capture those perfectly! A job well done!

May 1st, 2018 17:37

the simple things
w c said:

Very nice

May 1st, 2018 13:20

the simple things
w c said:



May 1st, 2018 13:19

the simple things
onepauly said:

absoublutly maarvouless
even though I did not spell it right.
marvouless!

May 1st, 2018 11:27

the simple things
Netashi said:

Enjoy the small or in this case the simple things in life that sometime go unnoticed, Very nice poem Sea child this poem won\'t go unnoticed keep up the good work
-Theta

May 1st, 2018 11:11

a skinny desire
onepauly said:

excellent!
if theres a will theres a way.

April 30th, 2018 20:01

drowning
onepauly said:



April 29th, 2018 16:23

drowning
onepauly said:

sometimes we are so much in pain, suicide is the only way out.
my sister-in-law took a small boat to the center of a pond and slipped over the side. she had pain in her abdomen. described it like a tooth ache. she drowned herself. if the pain was like she described, I might do the same thing. no one deserves physical pain. sometimes its unimagineable . and we the living, don\'t want to imagine it. while we bury our heads, the person is still in powerful pain. we don\'t want to think about it. great poem by the way.

April 29th, 2018 16:20

drowning
Liam Lawless said:

TheSeaChild, I loved this piece, it is so captivating all the way through, I love how you transformed your trauma into art. if you ever need to talk please message me. But this poem is fantastic.

April 29th, 2018 11:41

my father’s eyes
onepauly said:

this was very good
I will always love my father. he\'s gone to heaven now.he sacrificed his life for his family. then he got lung cancer. he died 30 years ago. I am so sad or angry that he whent through that pain. I feel devastated.

April 28th, 2018 09:14

deathbed
onepauly said:

and death shall have no dominion.

April 27th, 2018 10:32

school system
yellowrose said:

school doesn\'t teach us about life , does it? how to cope if things go wrong in life, how to learn skills for life .. they just teach us so many things, which actually in reality if you think about it , they are pretty useless knowledge, when you think about it .. you speak true words . yep , who cares if one person gets an a grade one gets a e grade , i doubt it says much

April 26th, 2018 13:45

school system
Broken_kingdom said:

😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

April 26th, 2018 13:42

school system
Broken_kingdom said:

This is sooo goood

April 26th, 2018 13:42

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