Comments received on poems by HangingbyaHalo
Self Destruction
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.Very sad and filled with despair but well written.I enjoyed reading
December 13th, 2023 14:18
David Wakeling said:
This is okay.Very sad and filled with despair but well written.I enjoyed reading
December 13th, 2023 14:18
Down the Rabbit Hole
peto said:
Magic
The verse between \"we\'re all mad here\"
And \"Alice reminds me\" is breathtaking
In llandudno at the moment home of the author.. surrounded by sculptures of most characters
I\'ve read you a while back
Got better if possible
June 23rd, 2023 17:10
peto said:
Magic
The verse between \"we\'re all mad here\"
And \"Alice reminds me\" is breathtaking
In llandudno at the moment home of the author.. surrounded by sculptures of most characters
I\'ve read you a while back
Got better if possible
June 23rd, 2023 17:10
The End
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what write from start to end
Thank you so much for picking up thar pen
Never lose that light
Much peace and respect
March 30th, 2023 03:38
Poetic Dan said:
Wow what write from start to end
Thank you so much for picking up thar pen
Never lose that light
Much peace and respect
March 30th, 2023 03:38
Hanging by a Halo
MendedFences27 said:
Keep hanging on. The dystopian images you have displayed seem to spreading throughout this world. You were taught properly. Cling to what is right. And keep hanging on. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 20:55
MendedFences27 said:
Keep hanging on. The dystopian images you have displayed seem to spreading throughout this world. You were taught properly. Cling to what is right. And keep hanging on. - Phil A.
March 24th, 2023 20:55
Hanging by a Halo
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Sad times indeed.
Very sad and bad.
Throughout Human History...
We all know... there were bad times.
Seems that for some... they are back, once again.
Do not give up! Endure!
I could say something like...
Everything happens for a reason...
But truth is... sometimes... there is
just no reason, or a right good reason.
I would like to give you hope,
say something like...
Everything will turn out just fine.
Plain truth is... I don\'t know.
There should always... be...
Love... above all.
And yes... understanding...
Or at least... tolerance.
Respect. Human-Rights.
Freedom... to a certain level.
Some say... that for some...
It was the jab, or jabs.
I don\'t know... but... since I took none... Maybe it was.
However if that\'s the case... some people still seem to retain feelings.
Some others... seem to have turned into predators of some sort.
Realizing simple facts...
For many... things were already bad before all that.
However things do seem to have changed... and not for the better...
Certainly not the greater-good.
Please do carry on, with all your forces.
Love and understarding, yes always.
However against those that are nocive... and inflict harm upon others and destroy people\'s lives...
Above all... Innocents...
Well... very hard to understand such a thing... and to love it...
Seems... very impossible.
Peace and Love.
March 24th, 2023 16:15
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
Sad times indeed.
Very sad and bad.
Throughout Human History...
We all know... there were bad times.
Seems that for some... they are back, once again.
Do not give up! Endure!
I could say something like...
Everything happens for a reason...
But truth is... sometimes... there is
just no reason, or a right good reason.
I would like to give you hope,
say something like...
Everything will turn out just fine.
Plain truth is... I don\'t know.
There should always... be...
Love... above all.
And yes... understanding...
Or at least... tolerance.
Respect. Human-Rights.
Freedom... to a certain level.
Some say... that for some...
It was the jab, or jabs.
I don\'t know... but... since I took none... Maybe it was.
However if that\'s the case... some people still seem to retain feelings.
Some others... seem to have turned into predators of some sort.
Realizing simple facts...
For many... things were already bad before all that.
However things do seem to have changed... and not for the better...
Certainly not the greater-good.
Please do carry on, with all your forces.
Love and understarding, yes always.
However against those that are nocive... and inflict harm upon others and destroy people\'s lives...
Above all... Innocents...
Well... very hard to understand such a thing... and to love it...
Seems... very impossible.
Peace and Love.
March 24th, 2023 16:15
Yearning for Silence
mcat said:
Wow, this was haunting and deep. I walked the halls and felt like looking through someone else’s eyes. Your’s I suppose. Thanks for sharing.
March 22nd, 2023 23:16
mcat said:
Wow, this was haunting and deep. I walked the halls and felt like looking through someone else’s eyes. Your’s I suppose. Thanks for sharing.
March 22nd, 2023 23:16
Envy
A.H. Browning said:
Envy can destroy lives.
How many of our problems are born out of envy?
Kindest Regards.
December 19th, 2021 18:16
A.H. Browning said:
Envy can destroy lives.
How many of our problems are born out of envy?
Kindest Regards.
December 19th, 2021 18:16
Closed Chapter
A.H. Browning said:
“You could see all the times I revisited marked pages. Some present with evidence of my return.”
Powerful writing‼️
Thanks for posting agin.
December 1st, 2021 22:52
A.H. Browning said:
“You could see all the times I revisited marked pages. Some present with evidence of my return.”
Powerful writing‼️
Thanks for posting agin.
December 1st, 2021 22:52
Closed Chapter
L. B. Mek said:
\'You could see all the times I revisited marked pages. Some present with evidence of my return.
Ripped out
Or repaired
If You could run your fingers down my spine and feel the steel I acquired to replace a backbone that didn’t exist.
The defects on the outside are Proof that I have been fond of learning the hard way.\'
this is a great write
\'in my humble opinion\';
and I\'m sorry
you\'re not receiving the appreciation your writing deserves
but please, even if just for yourself
continue to cultivate and share
your unquestionable
poetic Talent!
thank you! for choosing to share
November 22nd, 2021 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'You could see all the times I revisited marked pages. Some present with evidence of my return.
Ripped out
Or repaired
If You could run your fingers down my spine and feel the steel I acquired to replace a backbone that didn’t exist.
The defects on the outside are Proof that I have been fond of learning the hard way.\'
this is a great write
\'in my humble opinion\';
and I\'m sorry
you\'re not receiving the appreciation your writing deserves
but please, even if just for yourself
continue to cultivate and share
your unquestionable
poetic Talent!
thank you! for choosing to share
November 22nd, 2021 06:18
Closed Chapter
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
I have always felt, life is indeed like a notebook
A diary to write and make amends
It’s a beautiful depiction
Though a heart had to be shattered to make a song
Heal sooner dear heart
Best of luck
November 22nd, 2021 05:05
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
I have always felt, life is indeed like a notebook
A diary to write and make amends
It’s a beautiful depiction
Though a heart had to be shattered to make a song
Heal sooner dear heart
Best of luck
November 22nd, 2021 05:05
All the Right Notes
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A masterpiece of instruments huddled together. A beautiful honest mess, of true emotion, that should not be re-arranged. It\'s magnificent!
November 3rd, 2021 05:42
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A masterpiece of instruments huddled together. A beautiful honest mess, of true emotion, that should not be re-arranged. It\'s magnificent!
November 3rd, 2021 05:42
Awakening
A.H. Browning said:
“The sky will seem as if it is the most beautiful shade of blue you have ever seen”
Those are the exact words to describe a very real memory that happened to me… the morning my father passed. Like you read my mind… your words here happened to me. In my grief and feeling lost, I remember driving that morning and suddenly noticing how the sky was exactly as you described. That was such an unusual feeling and I will never forget it.
I don’t know how I missed this one 🤔
Very nice writing. Cheers.
October 30th, 2021 17:35
A.H. Browning said:
“The sky will seem as if it is the most beautiful shade of blue you have ever seen”
Those are the exact words to describe a very real memory that happened to me… the morning my father passed. Like you read my mind… your words here happened to me. In my grief and feeling lost, I remember driving that morning and suddenly noticing how the sky was exactly as you described. That was such an unusual feeling and I will never forget it.
I don’t know how I missed this one 🤔
Very nice writing. Cheers.
October 30th, 2021 17:35
Lost in Translation
A.H. Browning said:
“ Years of searching to find nothing is untouched by time.”
Amazing and thought provoking words.
October 23rd, 2021 22:48
A.H. Browning said:
“ Years of searching to find nothing is untouched by time.”
Amazing and thought provoking words.
October 23rd, 2021 22:48
All the Right Notes
dusk arising said:
The honesty within this piece is outstanding. Excellent poetry. Should be compulsory reading for all broken hearted lovers.
October 21st, 2021 12:38
dusk arising said:
The honesty within this piece is outstanding. Excellent poetry. Should be compulsory reading for all broken hearted lovers.
October 21st, 2021 12:38
Lost in Translation
Neville said:
I am rapidly becoming a fan .. you clearly have a unique voice & use our shared passion to voice it and express yourself so very well .......... Neville
October 21st, 2021 11:20
Neville said:
I am rapidly becoming a fan .. you clearly have a unique voice & use our shared passion to voice it and express yourself so very well .......... Neville
October 21st, 2021 11:20
All the Right Notes
Neville said:
This is exceptionally good and there are so many lines contained within that I wish I had personally penned before you ... Neville
October 21st, 2021 11:17
Neville said:
This is exceptionally good and there are so many lines contained within that I wish I had personally penned before you ... Neville
October 21st, 2021 11:17
A Final Plea
MendedFences27 said:
This took me back to the passing of many a dear one. You have painted the picture in great detail. The sense of loss diminished by the lack of self respect, the self destruction, and the horror of it all. It almost seems that we should not shed a tear, but of course we do. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 17:54
MendedFences27 said:
This took me back to the passing of many a dear one. You have painted the picture in great detail. The sense of loss diminished by the lack of self respect, the self destruction, and the horror of it all. It almost seems that we should not shed a tear, but of course we do. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 17:54
A Final Plea
spilleronsheet said:
It’s very heartening…made me Teary…very touching dear poet…
October 19th, 2021 14:12
spilleronsheet said:
It’s very heartening…made me Teary…very touching dear poet…
October 19th, 2021 14:12
A Final Plea
Paul Bell said:
It really is the saddest day when you see the end of someone who really should be walking this earth for many years to come. Some for some reason can\'t win their own war, and that just makes the passing harder to take.
October 19th, 2021 12:25
Paul Bell said:
It really is the saddest day when you see the end of someone who really should be walking this earth for many years to come. Some for some reason can\'t win their own war, and that just makes the passing harder to take.
October 19th, 2021 12:25
Lost in Translation
L. B. Mek said:
purposefully Bold language,
Insightfully immersive imagery,
bravely intimate, Poetry..
thanks for sharing, an impactful reading experience
October 19th, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
purposefully Bold language,
Insightfully immersive imagery,
bravely intimate, Poetry..
thanks for sharing, an impactful reading experience
October 19th, 2021 05:25
Life Light
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
let me first, thank you for choosing to share your brilliant artistry and talent,
I can\'t help but be impressed by that impactful sketched art you include in your post, is it your work? I immediately thought this would make such a profound sculpted piece of art..
and I just loved these lines:
\'But I
kept hope, I am foolish
in this I know.
I am, somewhat
of a kamikaze optimist
often throwing my heart like a grenade
at things that are sure, to kill me.
I rattle off reasons and explanations in my head, like
scripture.\'
October 18th, 2021 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
wow!
let me first, thank you for choosing to share your brilliant artistry and talent,
I can\'t help but be impressed by that impactful sketched art you include in your post, is it your work? I immediately thought this would make such a profound sculpted piece of art..
and I just loved these lines:
\'But I
kept hope, I am foolish
in this I know.
I am, somewhat
of a kamikaze optimist
often throwing my heart like a grenade
at things that are sure, to kill me.
I rattle off reasons and explanations in my head, like
scripture.\'
October 18th, 2021 04:33
Life Light
Paul Bell said:
Some just don\'t realise where love lives, or if they do the grenade has already done the damage and there\'s no way back.
October 17th, 2021 13:26
Paul Bell said:
Some just don\'t realise where love lives, or if they do the grenade has already done the damage and there\'s no way back.
October 17th, 2021 13:26
Life Light
A.H. Browning said:
As always, I truly enjoy your very honest and passionate writing. Thank you for posting after quite a long time. Wish you well in all things.
A.H. Browning
October 17th, 2021 12:57
A.H. Browning said:
As always, I truly enjoy your very honest and passionate writing. Thank you for posting after quite a long time. Wish you well in all things.
A.H. Browning
October 17th, 2021 12:57
Still I Stand
dusk arising said:
A wounded animal exhibits many characteristics and behaviors which once healed will change.
Beauty restored should perhaps be beauty set free.
if you love someone.... set them free....
July 14th, 2020 18:04
dusk arising said:
A wounded animal exhibits many characteristics and behaviors which once healed will change.
Beauty restored should perhaps be beauty set free.
if you love someone.... set them free....
July 14th, 2020 18:04
Unsure
A.H. Browning said:
Thank you for your writing. It is always thought provoking and moving.
November 28th, 2018 19:44
A.H. Browning said:
Thank you for your writing. It is always thought provoking and moving.
November 28th, 2018 19:44
Still I Stand
A.H. Browning said:
Always look forward to reading you. I was very moved by the last line, \"Wondering if you will notice me without it.\"
I\'ve always found it interesting, funny, frustrating and sometimes completely annoying when I think of how others perceive me.
Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
October 21st, 2018 13:36
A.H. Browning said:
Always look forward to reading you. I was very moved by the last line, \"Wondering if you will notice me without it.\"
I\'ve always found it interesting, funny, frustrating and sometimes completely annoying when I think of how others perceive me.
Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
October 21st, 2018 13:36
Puppet Master
vanabba3 said:
I\'m so sorry you have been hurt this bad by someone who was supposed to love you... I promise things will get better, it just takes time to heal... At the same time, your writing some really outstanding material.... so descriptive, vivid imagery, and so much passion in your poems.
October 11th, 2018 14:01
vanabba3 said:
I\'m so sorry you have been hurt this bad by someone who was supposed to love you... I promise things will get better, it just takes time to heal... At the same time, your writing some really outstanding material.... so descriptive, vivid imagery, and so much passion in your poems.
October 11th, 2018 14:01
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