Comments received on poems by HangingbyaHalo
Silently Suffering
SLR said:
Beautifully tragic. Speaks to me on a way too personal level. Truly Superb.
June 14th, 2018 10:47
SLR said:
Beautifully tragic. Speaks to me on a way too personal level. Truly Superb.
June 14th, 2018 10:47
Silently Suffering
C.N.A said:
This is excellent and described exactly how i feel! I love it.
June 14th, 2018 10:28
C.N.A said:
This is excellent and described exactly how i feel! I love it.
June 14th, 2018 10:28
Silently Suffering
Noah Malice said:
Beautiful write. This articulated feelings I didn\'t know how to, and in such a poetic way. 10 outta 10.
June 14th, 2018 10:19
Noah Malice said:
Beautiful write. This articulated feelings I didn\'t know how to, and in such a poetic way. 10 outta 10.
June 14th, 2018 10:19
Blackened Canvas
Lalion said:
Heart-felt.
Your poems are straight from your heart and soul. Remarkable.
I bow to you.
June 13th, 2018 17:03
Lalion said:
Heart-felt.
Your poems are straight from your heart and soul. Remarkable.
I bow to you.
June 13th, 2018 17:03
The End
MrNobody40 said:
Wow. I really have to say it kept my attention. I loved it. Thank you for sharing
June 12th, 2018 18:58
MrNobody40 said:
Wow. I really have to say it kept my attention. I loved it. Thank you for sharing
June 12th, 2018 18:58
The choice is yours
dusk arising said:
Wow! This is one of the best, most thought out and direct pieces i have ever read.
This is absolutely top class writing.
You are so gifted.
Has to go into my fav\'s
June 7th, 2018 00:05
dusk arising said:
Wow! This is one of the best, most thought out and direct pieces i have ever read.
This is absolutely top class writing.
You are so gifted.
Has to go into my fav\'s
June 7th, 2018 00:05
Echos
dusk arising said:
Your writing today has a theatrical mystery. Gripping, \'cantputdownable\' quality to it.
I can\'t find a word to encapsulate the feeling that i have just read something special here tonite.
Really remarkable and will go into my favourites.
June 5th, 2018 17:53
dusk arising said:
Your writing today has a theatrical mystery. Gripping, \'cantputdownable\' quality to it.
I can\'t find a word to encapsulate the feeling that i have just read something special here tonite.
Really remarkable and will go into my favourites.
June 5th, 2018 17:53
untitled
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write. Now those curtains are closed your life can move on and open some new curtains into the light and joy.
June 3rd, 2018 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write. Now those curtains are closed your life can move on and open some new curtains into the light and joy.
June 3rd, 2018 02:24
To the hopeless romantic
HangingbyaHalo said:
😉 Thank you brian. Im flattered that it rings a bell. Indeed it is rare to find any romantics left in this world and if you do it is a memerable experiance. Dont change for the world.
June 1st, 2018 01:37
HangingbyaHalo said:
😉 Thank you brian. Im flattered that it rings a bell. Indeed it is rare to find any romantics left in this world and if you do it is a memerable experiance. Dont change for the world.
June 1st, 2018 01:37
To the hopeless romantic
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"B\" for caring and sharing this lovely nostalgic poem ! It sure rings a BELL with ME ~ cos I am a HOPELESS ROMANTIC ! I always turn up for a date with FLOWERS ~ BOX of CHOCS ~ PERFUME etc ~ sometimes it pays off ~ there are a FEW Romantic ladies left on the Planet ! But often it backfires ~ they are allergic to pollen ~ wont eat chocs and ANAIS ANAIS is to \"mature\" for them ~ C\'EST LA VIE ! Yours (with a bunch of Pink Roses !) BRIAN XOX
June 1st, 2018 01:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks \"B\" for caring and sharing this lovely nostalgic poem ! It sure rings a BELL with ME ~ cos I am a HOPELESS ROMANTIC ! I always turn up for a date with FLOWERS ~ BOX of CHOCS ~ PERFUME etc ~ sometimes it pays off ~ there are a FEW Romantic ladies left on the Planet ! But often it backfires ~ they are allergic to pollen ~ wont eat chocs and ANAIS ANAIS is to \"mature\" for them ~ C\'EST LA VIE ! Yours (with a bunch of Pink Roses !) BRIAN XOX
June 1st, 2018 01:15
I See You
Jane Frye said:
Keep writing from the heart. It\'s working well for you. Thanks for sharing. :-)
May 30th, 2018 17:58
Jane Frye said:
Keep writing from the heart. It\'s working well for you. Thanks for sharing. :-)
May 30th, 2018 17:58
The world doesn’t understand
Jhe said:
good one.
not only do some people act like we all know what\'s going on with our bodies (inc brains), but some even act like we make them do weird stuff on purpose ~ guess they\'ve either never experienced such things, or were made to feel guilty for daring to disturb other people with their own weird symptoms.
May 28th, 2018 18:27
Jhe said:
good one.
not only do some people act like we all know what\'s going on with our bodies (inc brains), but some even act like we make them do weird stuff on purpose ~ guess they\'ve either never experienced such things, or were made to feel guilty for daring to disturb other people with their own weird symptoms.
May 28th, 2018 18:27
Love Is
Clarita said:
Great poem. Love can truly be defined in a million different ways if one allows it.
May 27th, 2018 14:47
Clarita said:
Great poem. Love can truly be defined in a million different ways if one allows it.
May 27th, 2018 14:47
Love Is
Jane Frye said:
Nice. Love is a big subject. I like your last line, \"Smiling, pulling your heart from your chest and giving it away.\"
May 27th, 2018 11:35
Jane Frye said:
Nice. Love is a big subject. I like your last line, \"Smiling, pulling your heart from your chest and giving it away.\"
May 27th, 2018 11:35
The End
Jane Frye said:
Wow! So much expressed here. When you write from the heart, you can\'t go wrong.
May 27th, 2018 11:30
Jane Frye said:
Wow! So much expressed here. When you write from the heart, you can\'t go wrong.
May 27th, 2018 11:30
Beauty in Pain
Jane Frye said:
The tears welled up in my eyes as I read this. Beautifully expressed.
May 27th, 2018 11:23
Jane Frye said:
The tears welled up in my eyes as I read this. Beautifully expressed.
May 27th, 2018 11:23
The End
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME \"B\" ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ I found it very powerful and very real ! Occasionally on this site (and yes it really is a GEM) we get a LOVE POEM that is a classic ~ and a situation that we can emphasise with ~ I\'ve been in and out of Love for the last 17 years ~ but I\'m now engaged to ANGELA and it will last forever ~ AMEN ! Your poem is structured into THREE major verses with dialogue in between ~ It throbs with rhythm and is great to read & recite ~ marks of a good poem !
Verse 1. \"Today I made sense of it !\" You shed the delusion you had been living !
Verse 2. \"The reality hurts more than the pretend play by plays\" You really believed He could magically turn into the MAN we wanted Him to be. This is hope and prayer we have all prayed at some time in our experience of LIFE & LOVE !
Verse 3. \"The MAN that stole the breath from my lungs\" Something was crushed that could have been ~ I can echo that !
What I really like is that you don\'t close the book ~ there is still a glimmer of HOPE !
\"I can\'t play the rewind game anymore ........... But what I can do ............ Is Hand you the pen and hope you change how the story ends ~ AMEN !\"
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ this is a MEGA POEM and very PRECIOUS ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
May 25th, 2018 17:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME \"B\" ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ I found it very powerful and very real ! Occasionally on this site (and yes it really is a GEM) we get a LOVE POEM that is a classic ~ and a situation that we can emphasise with ~ I\'ve been in and out of Love for the last 17 years ~ but I\'m now engaged to ANGELA and it will last forever ~ AMEN ! Your poem is structured into THREE major verses with dialogue in between ~ It throbs with rhythm and is great to read & recite ~ marks of a good poem !
Verse 1. \"Today I made sense of it !\" You shed the delusion you had been living !
Verse 2. \"The reality hurts more than the pretend play by plays\" You really believed He could magically turn into the MAN we wanted Him to be. This is hope and prayer we have all prayed at some time in our experience of LIFE & LOVE !
Verse 3. \"The MAN that stole the breath from my lungs\" Something was crushed that could have been ~ I can echo that !
What I really like is that you don\'t close the book ~ there is still a glimmer of HOPE !
\"I can\'t play the rewind game anymore ........... But what I can do ............ Is Hand you the pen and hope you change how the story ends ~ AMEN !\"
Thanks for caring & sharing ~ this is a MEGA POEM and very PRECIOUS ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
May 25th, 2018 17:58
The End
Sugiura Asuna said:
This is plain and simple, amazing,. You write from your heart and that is clearly expressed in your poetry. You are on of the many people on this site who know how to use all available resources when writing stories (they truly are narratives) such as these.
May 25th, 2018 17:29
Sugiura Asuna said:
This is plain and simple, amazing,. You write from your heart and that is clearly expressed in your poetry. You are on of the many people on this site who know how to use all available resources when writing stories (they truly are narratives) such as these.
May 25th, 2018 17:29
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