Comments received on poems by HangingbyaHalo
Everything Comes to an End
HangingbyaHalo said:
Thank you. It is a reflection of me, I will try to pen something lighter.
October 10th, 2018 14:20
HangingbyaHalo said:
Thank you. It is a reflection of me, I will try to pen something lighter.
October 10th, 2018 14:20
Everything Comes to an End
vanabba3 said:
Wow!!! Great poem, hope it\'s not about you... your too beautiful to write about your life ending... leave the darkness to me, it\'s more fitting that way... I hope if this poem is about you, you will change your mind and find at least a glimmer of light to hold on to. I would love to see your energy and passion for poetry writing something about faith, hope or even love...
October 10th, 2018 13:44
vanabba3 said:
Wow!!! Great poem, hope it\'s not about you... your too beautiful to write about your life ending... leave the darkness to me, it\'s more fitting that way... I hope if this poem is about you, you will change your mind and find at least a glimmer of light to hold on to. I would love to see your energy and passion for poetry writing something about faith, hope or even love...
October 10th, 2018 13:44
Everything Comes to an End
FineB said:
Hello HangingbyaHalo.
What an amazing write.
Vivid and evocative.
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 12:38
FineB said:
Hello HangingbyaHalo.
What an amazing write.
Vivid and evocative.
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 12:38
Untitled
A.H. Browning said:
I’ve read this several times before commenting. As usual, your writing is not just words on a page, but a thought provoking and moving experience. Thank you for for sharing your writing on this website.
In my opinion, “darkness” wears many faces and disguises, including the ones you wrote about here. For me, I know from personal experience, both good and bad, that I always have choices. I can be overcome by darkness and give in to it; perhaps even embrace it in life’s worst moments. The other choice I have is to resist the darkness... and perhaps even “shine”. Sometimes that choice is the most difficult thing in the world. But still, I know it makes a world of difference. When I read this, I am reminded of the good that can come from just one person when they choose to shine.
Best wishes,
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 14:48
A.H. Browning said:
I’ve read this several times before commenting. As usual, your writing is not just words on a page, but a thought provoking and moving experience. Thank you for for sharing your writing on this website.
In my opinion, “darkness” wears many faces and disguises, including the ones you wrote about here. For me, I know from personal experience, both good and bad, that I always have choices. I can be overcome by darkness and give in to it; perhaps even embrace it in life’s worst moments. The other choice I have is to resist the darkness... and perhaps even “shine”. Sometimes that choice is the most difficult thing in the world. But still, I know it makes a world of difference. When I read this, I am reminded of the good that can come from just one person when they choose to shine.
Best wishes,
A.H. Browning
September 15th, 2018 14:48
Missing Pieces
A.H. Browning said:
I\'ve been away from this site for a while. Other things have taken priority, (not my choosing)
Anyway, thank you for continuing to share your writing. I enjoy reading you. You make me feel and think and I believe you write from the heart, which takes courage. Best wishes to you.
Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
September 7th, 2018 20:39
A.H. Browning said:
I\'ve been away from this site for a while. Other things have taken priority, (not my choosing)
Anyway, thank you for continuing to share your writing. I enjoy reading you. You make me feel and think and I believe you write from the heart, which takes courage. Best wishes to you.
Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
September 7th, 2018 20:39
Awakening
Christina8 said:
Such truth to your words. I I find myself now in tune with my surroundings. Beautiful write!
September 2nd, 2018 20:56
Christina8 said:
Such truth to your words. I I find myself now in tune with my surroundings. Beautiful write!
September 2nd, 2018 20:56
Awakening
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant and there was definitely a day that your words would of tied my stomach into an endless pit of darkness, thank you for helping show your light to see how far I\'ve travelled.
Much love and respect
September 2nd, 2018 05:51
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely brilliant and there was definitely a day that your words would of tied my stomach into an endless pit of darkness, thank you for helping show your light to see how far I\'ve travelled.
Much love and respect
September 2nd, 2018 05:51
Awakening
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Life on earth may be finite but the Spirit of your life will go on for eternity.
September 2nd, 2018 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Life on earth may be finite but the Spirit of your life will go on for eternity.
September 2nd, 2018 00:59
The burning
Christina8 said:
Beautiful picture and poem! Very intense....reminds me of some of my earlier poetry. Love it!!
August 30th, 2018 05:54
Christina8 said:
Beautiful picture and poem! Very intense....reminds me of some of my earlier poetry. Love it!!
August 30th, 2018 05:54
The burning
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow...very nice...anyone who has ever experienced the intensity of true love can relate...very nice work
August 30th, 2018 04:43
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Wow...very nice...anyone who has ever experienced the intensity of true love can relate...very nice work
August 30th, 2018 04:43
A Journey to Forever and Always
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful! A vivid description of Love for the ages. A \"journey\" as you say, like a river meanders to the ocean, constantly changing direction, finding new pathways. To offer such a love to someone requires great courage, to write of it requires more. You have penned a manifesto. Well done. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2018 15:36
MendedFences27 said:
Beautiful! A vivid description of Love for the ages. A \"journey\" as you say, like a river meanders to the ocean, constantly changing direction, finding new pathways. To offer such a love to someone requires great courage, to write of it requires more. You have penned a manifesto. Well done. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2018 15:36
A Journey to Forever and Always
Crystal Hope said:
Aww! Your ending! 😊😍 Love this. Wonderful job!
August 10th, 2018 00:16
Crystal Hope said:
Aww! Your ending! 😊😍 Love this. Wonderful job!
August 10th, 2018 00:16
Missing Pieces
Crystal Hope said:
So incredible. I found this so beautiful. Fine words! :)
August 8th, 2018 17:15
Crystal Hope said:
So incredible. I found this so beautiful. Fine words! :)
August 8th, 2018 17:15
Bruised but not Broken
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant expressed may you continue with that inner strength and love for your self. I know the depths you have to go to find it!
June 21st, 2018 13:10
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant expressed may you continue with that inner strength and love for your self. I know the depths you have to go to find it!
June 21st, 2018 13:10
Bruised but not Broken
Jane Frye said:
The last tear, and then you get to your feet. I little wiser, somewhat stronger, and a lot more observant of the colors and beauty around you. Your write was well written.
June 18th, 2018 10:01
Jane Frye said:
The last tear, and then you get to your feet. I little wiser, somewhat stronger, and a lot more observant of the colors and beauty around you. Your write was well written.
June 18th, 2018 10:01
Bruised but not Broken
SLR said:
The first part reminded me of one of my favorite phrases. \"If you could read my mind, you\'d be in tears.\" Great emotion shown here. You can feel the frustration and pain. The second part reminds me of another favorite phrase \" I\'ve had to fight like hell, and fighting like hell has made me what I am.\" I can feel the anger and determination not to let them control you or your emotions anymore. Great message, great post!
June 18th, 2018 00:02
SLR said:
The first part reminded me of one of my favorite phrases. \"If you could read my mind, you\'d be in tears.\" Great emotion shown here. You can feel the frustration and pain. The second part reminds me of another favorite phrase \" I\'ve had to fight like hell, and fighting like hell has made me what I am.\" I can feel the anger and determination not to let them control you or your emotions anymore. Great message, great post!
June 18th, 2018 00:02
Silently Suffering
Syd said:
This is a very relatable write. Thanks for sharing.
- Syd
June 17th, 2018 07:06
Syd said:
This is a very relatable write. Thanks for sharing.
- Syd
June 17th, 2018 07:06
Silently Suffering
Jane Frye said:
I would definitely give this poem 5 stars. Very good flow, very good write, very moving.
June 15th, 2018 00:44
Jane Frye said:
I would definitely give this poem 5 stars. Very good flow, very good write, very moving.
June 15th, 2018 00:44
Silently Suffering
AmateurSomeone said:
Amazing imagery, it’s truely a talent to make someone see what you’re feeling, I love this
June 14th, 2018 13:12
AmateurSomeone said:
Amazing imagery, it’s truely a talent to make someone see what you’re feeling, I love this
June 14th, 2018 13:12
Silently Suffering
_poorlyNamed said:
This is so beautiful.
Keep writing when your mind is attacking. Write through the pain, it may not seem to gice ease. But whatever keeps you here. Jeep doing so. Thats what keeps me going. Is writing through some really heavy things. Thank you ffor sharing apart of yourself.
June 14th, 2018 11:37
_poorlyNamed said:
This is so beautiful.
Keep writing when your mind is attacking. Write through the pain, it may not seem to gice ease. But whatever keeps you here. Jeep doing so. Thats what keeps me going. Is writing through some really heavy things. Thank you ffor sharing apart of yourself.
June 14th, 2018 11:37
Silently Suffering
Frogspoetry said:
it is good for us to remember that we are all weak at times.that is what makes us human.you seem to be a very articulate and strong person who have had some truly painful moments.hang in there,you will make it.stay strong and remember tht you are a beautiful person.there is a silver lining to everything.
June 14th, 2018 11:36
Frogspoetry said:
it is good for us to remember that we are all weak at times.that is what makes us human.you seem to be a very articulate and strong person who have had some truly painful moments.hang in there,you will make it.stay strong and remember tht you are a beautiful person.there is a silver lining to everything.
June 14th, 2018 11:36
Silently Suffering
SLR said:
Beautifully tragic. Speaks to me on a way too personal level. Truly Superb.
June 14th, 2018 10:47
SLR said:
Beautifully tragic. Speaks to me on a way too personal level. Truly Superb.
June 14th, 2018 10:47
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