Comments received on poems by asrealastheycome
what is depth?
Doggerel Dave said:
A great shout of pain I understand completely. And as a result I find that some folk\'s responses to face to face are in a way curtailed as a result... probably just age with me.
Wouldn\'t mind knowing a little more of that \'somebody\' before I could understand completely....
August 12th, 2021 21:22
Doggerel Dave said:
A great shout of pain I understand completely. And as a result I find that some folk\'s responses to face to face are in a way curtailed as a result... probably just age with me.
Wouldn\'t mind knowing a little more of that \'somebody\' before I could understand completely....
August 12th, 2021 21:22
Cosmic Vision
Goldfinch60 said:
That universe is there for us all to explore.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:12
Goldfinch60 said:
That universe is there for us all to explore.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 11:12
Tides of Love
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t normally go for love poetry much - too sugary mostly? This one however has a certain muscularity (and I\'m not talking about boofy masculinity) in it that appeals.
Thanks.
April 10th, 2021 19:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t normally go for love poetry much - too sugary mostly? This one however has a certain muscularity (and I\'m not talking about boofy masculinity) in it that appeals.
Thanks.
April 10th, 2021 19:12
Flow Lyrically
L. B. Mek said:
good rap, below is one of my fav\'s mainly cause it expresses so much confident emotion and self expressive rage - without, using excessive profanity (not a critique of your style btw):
\'Very contagious raps should be trapped in cages
Through stages of wackness, Pharoahe\'s raps are blazin
And it amazes - me how you claim thug
But go two-ways without SkyTel pagers
I\'m intellectual, pass more essays/ese\'s
Than motorcade police parades through East L.A.
More beef then deli\'s, thus what I vent is just
What you lust to vent is irrele\'
Huh, hallelujah, Pharoahe Monch\'ll do ya
Maintain the same frame of mind - screw ya!
Get the picture, sit ya, seat ya, preacher with scriptures
I\'m equipped to rip ya, reach ya
Pharoahe and Mos verbalize most
Coast to coast, we boast to be the most explosive here
Ferocious, the lyrical prognosis
The dosage is leavin you mentally unfocused here\'
lyrics from \'oh no\'
March 22nd, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
good rap, below is one of my fav\'s mainly cause it expresses so much confident emotion and self expressive rage - without, using excessive profanity (not a critique of your style btw):
\'Very contagious raps should be trapped in cages
Through stages of wackness, Pharoahe\'s raps are blazin
And it amazes - me how you claim thug
But go two-ways without SkyTel pagers
I\'m intellectual, pass more essays/ese\'s
Than motorcade police parades through East L.A.
More beef then deli\'s, thus what I vent is just
What you lust to vent is irrele\'
Huh, hallelujah, Pharoahe Monch\'ll do ya
Maintain the same frame of mind - screw ya!
Get the picture, sit ya, seat ya, preacher with scriptures
I\'m equipped to rip ya, reach ya
Pharoahe and Mos verbalize most
Coast to coast, we boast to be the most explosive here
Ferocious, the lyrical prognosis
The dosage is leavin you mentally unfocused here\'
lyrics from \'oh no\'
March 22nd, 2021 05:37
Flow Lyrically
FredPeyer said:
I was racing through your poem, enjoying the flow! Good write!!!
March 20th, 2021 23:00
FredPeyer said:
I was racing through your poem, enjoying the flow! Good write!!!
March 20th, 2021 23:00
Master of Your Destiny
L. B. Mek said:
\'Created by ill intent failed attempts and broken promises
I’m honest when I tell you I been down the road where the evil seemed dominant
Took acknowledgement not taught by the colleges
To learn my concern with negative is the only thing standing in the way of the positive\'..
unfiltered words of hard-earned wisdom, a brave sharing in my humble opinion
March 18th, 2021 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'Created by ill intent failed attempts and broken promises
I’m honest when I tell you I been down the road where the evil seemed dominant
Took acknowledgement not taught by the colleges
To learn my concern with negative is the only thing standing in the way of the positive\'..
unfiltered words of hard-earned wisdom, a brave sharing in my humble opinion
March 18th, 2021 04:09
Child of the Stars
FredPeyer said:
Well said, aratc! We are all \'galaxy travelers\'!
March 6th, 2021 10:44
FredPeyer said:
Well said, aratc! We are all \'galaxy travelers\'!
March 6th, 2021 10:44
Child of the Stars
dusk arising said:
Enjoyed reading your words. I agree totally with your thoughts expressed here and have done for a number of years.
There are quite a few spiritually aware poets on mps, uncluttered by the religious mumbo jumbo seen expressed all too often.
March 6th, 2021 05:13
dusk arising said:
Enjoyed reading your words. I agree totally with your thoughts expressed here and have done for a number of years.
There are quite a few spiritually aware poets on mps, uncluttered by the religious mumbo jumbo seen expressed all too often.
March 6th, 2021 05:13
Child of the Stars
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words, I agree with this totally.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 03:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words, I agree with this totally.
Andy
March 6th, 2021 03:04
Outer Space Faith
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully lyrical in delivery with a strong presence of quirky independence, a partnership of old stylistic writing with modern self-empowered thinking,
a good write and a great message, thanks for sharing
February 4th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully lyrical in delivery with a strong presence of quirky independence, a partnership of old stylistic writing with modern self-empowered thinking,
a good write and a great message, thanks for sharing
February 4th, 2021 04:17
Heartbreak Clarity
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thoughtful Read. Have a Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 13:29
Jerry Reynolds said:
Thoughtful Read. Have a Happy New Year.
December 26th, 2020 13:29
I Flow Like Oceans
Trenz Pruca said:
It sounds like rap lyrics in my mind. I like it.
September 12th, 2020 16:34
Trenz Pruca said:
It sounds like rap lyrics in my mind. I like it.
September 12th, 2020 16:34
I Flow Like Oceans
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant! reads like eloquent rap lyrics, although I still consider it a wonderful poem
September 12th, 2020 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant! reads like eloquent rap lyrics, although I still consider it a wonderful poem
September 12th, 2020 03:05
The Truth Of Social Distancing
Blackhawkwings said:
Your message definitely crystal clear of the pain and suffering that is here and now COVID-19. Really like your Poem.
May 22nd, 2020 09:59
Blackhawkwings said:
Your message definitely crystal clear of the pain and suffering that is here and now COVID-19. Really like your Poem.
May 22nd, 2020 09:59
Myself Through Parallel Dimensions
Blackhawkwings said:
Your poem Parallel Universes is heartwarming and filled with some of mankind characteristic struggles.
May 22nd, 2020 09:55
Blackhawkwings said:
Your poem Parallel Universes is heartwarming and filled with some of mankind characteristic struggles.
May 22nd, 2020 09:55
Pillow Talk
jarcher54 said:
You certainly demonstrated how poetry does NOT have to be hard to understand...
May 17th, 2020 00:55
jarcher54 said:
You certainly demonstrated how poetry does NOT have to be hard to understand...
May 17th, 2020 00:55
Pillow Talk
Bragee said:
Good Writing,
Nothing get the blood flowing like good love making!
May 16th, 2020 10:59
Bragee said:
Good Writing,
Nothing get the blood flowing like good love making!
May 16th, 2020 10:59
Myself Through Parallel Dimensions
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the theory of parallel Universes is intriguing and I often wonder what my life is like in them.
Andy
May 10th, 2020 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the theory of parallel Universes is intriguing and I often wonder what my life is like in them.
Andy
May 10th, 2020 00:08
extraterrestrial 👽
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps you are the one sent from the Universe to save this planet.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps you are the one sent from the Universe to save this planet.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:42
Brown Eyed Beauty
FredPeyer said:
She is not the only one.... I love your rhymes too!
April 18th, 2020 10:50
FredPeyer said:
She is not the only one.... I love your rhymes too!
April 18th, 2020 10:50
Answer In The Stars
anonymousblue said:
It\'s got a nice rhythm and a good use of language. Well done.
March 17th, 2020 14:39
anonymousblue said:
It\'s got a nice rhythm and a good use of language. Well done.
March 17th, 2020 14:39
Overcast Beauty
Clara said:
Absolutely nothing better than nature to ease and calm the soul. I rather like this poem. Great work.
March 3rd, 2020 16:02
Clara said:
Absolutely nothing better than nature to ease and calm the soul. I rather like this poem. Great work.
March 3rd, 2020 16:02
Daydream
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream become reality in all our lives.
Fine write.
Andy
March 1st, 2020 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream become reality in all our lives.
Fine write.
Andy
March 1st, 2020 01:59
Decisions
PotbellyPleb said:
Like Tom hanks in that Forrest Gump scene XD
legitimate advice.
February 5th, 2020 22:31
PotbellyPleb said:
Like Tom hanks in that Forrest Gump scene XD
legitimate advice.
February 5th, 2020 22:31
Y’all Ain’t Woke
Clara said:
I like this! There\'s such a presence behind your words - an attitude almost. Quite aggressive but impactful. Good work.
January 29th, 2020 17:10
Clara said:
I like this! There\'s such a presence behind your words - an attitude almost. Quite aggressive but impactful. Good work.
January 29th, 2020 17:10
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