Comments received on poems by asrealastheycome
Distractions
dusk arising said:
Good thought provoking piece. Echoing my thoughts when i see so many people addicted to the tiny screens of mobile phones or should we call them \'communicators\' now. I\'m old school and like to make conversation.
January 26th, 2020 10:45
dusk arising said:
Good thought provoking piece. Echoing my thoughts when i see so many people addicted to the tiny screens of mobile phones or should we call them \'communicators\' now. I\'m old school and like to make conversation.
January 26th, 2020 10:45
Farther From Martyr
Goldfinch60 said:
Moving into your own Spiritual life is wonderful.
January 5th, 2020 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Moving into your own Spiritual life is wonderful.
January 5th, 2020 02:26
Farther From Martyr
dusk arising said:
This reads like the tale of one who has been converted by ones own life experience and come to terms with it.
It seems like an offer of serenity to those who endure lifes struggles.
January 4th, 2020 16:57
dusk arising said:
This reads like the tale of one who has been converted by ones own life experience and come to terms with it.
It seems like an offer of serenity to those who endure lifes struggles.
January 4th, 2020 16:57
Farther From Martyr
Clara said:
Oh I like this. Tells such a story! I\'m intrigued. Tell me more! Well written.
January 4th, 2020 05:00
Clara said:
Oh I like this. Tells such a story! I\'m intrigued. Tell me more! Well written.
January 4th, 2020 05:00
You Are Not Your Thoughts
SabreLi said:
I like the vocabulary used here and the way you weave it together to send an enlightening message. Nice articulation :)
November 29th, 2019 12:03
SabreLi said:
I like the vocabulary used here and the way you weave it together to send an enlightening message. Nice articulation :)
November 29th, 2019 12:03
Lose Ya Ego
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done but that ego can be our friend its just up to us, how we use them!
October 6th, 2019 03:05
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done but that ego can be our friend its just up to us, how we use them!
October 6th, 2019 03:05
Treadin Water
Neville said:
we all have days like this.... well said though... enjoyed the read....
September 19th, 2019 07:25
Neville said:
we all have days like this.... well said though... enjoyed the read....
September 19th, 2019 07:25
Let Me Be Me
Poetic Dan said:
So very true keep on writing that path and you\'ll soon find that voice no one can crush.
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
June 11th, 2019 02:29
Poetic Dan said:
So very true keep on writing that path and you\'ll soon find that voice no one can crush.
Thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
June 11th, 2019 02:29
Secluded and Reclusive
dusk arising said:
I am so \'with you\' on this subject. A free-thinker, an individual.
Great writing. Would one of the clones know what on earth you are on about?
May 24th, 2019 01:33
dusk arising said:
I am so \'with you\' on this subject. A free-thinker, an individual.
Great writing. Would one of the clones know what on earth you are on about?
May 24th, 2019 01:33
Is Love Lost?
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, those questions only we can answer ourselves.
Much appreciated
May 11th, 2019 07:01
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly done, those questions only we can answer ourselves.
Much appreciated
May 11th, 2019 07:01
Life Has A Melody
Poetic Dan said:
It absolutely does I\'ve now heard your, what a splendid tune.
Felt so pure
Thank you
Always appreciated
May 11th, 2019 06:57
Poetic Dan said:
It absolutely does I\'ve now heard your, what a splendid tune.
Felt so pure
Thank you
Always appreciated
May 11th, 2019 06:57
The Lost Cause of Love
Poetic Dan said:
I laughed and then cried
To much talent for my eyes
Thank you for sharing this
Much peace and respect
April 7th, 2019 03:27
Poetic Dan said:
I laughed and then cried
To much talent for my eyes
Thank you for sharing this
Much peace and respect
April 7th, 2019 03:27
Free Yourself
sylviasearcher said:
I’m releasing!
You inspired me to get out of my own way 😌
April 1st, 2019 02:06
sylviasearcher said:
I’m releasing!
You inspired me to get out of my own way 😌
April 1st, 2019 02:06
Free Yourself
dusk arising said:
Superb powerful writing with a bit of alliteration thrown in for good measure.
Great message too. Made me sit up and think about one or two things i ought to be doing.
Thank you for the kick in the pants to spur me into action.
March 31st, 2019 06:30
dusk arising said:
Superb powerful writing with a bit of alliteration thrown in for good measure.
Great message too. Made me sit up and think about one or two things i ought to be doing.
Thank you for the kick in the pants to spur me into action.
March 31st, 2019 06:30
Free Yourself
dusk arising said:
Superb powerful writing with a bit of alliteration thrown in for good measure.
Great message too. Made me sit up and think about one or two things i ought to be doing.
Thank you for the kick in the pants to spur me into action.
March 31st, 2019 05:41
dusk arising said:
Superb powerful writing with a bit of alliteration thrown in for good measure.
Great message too. Made me sit up and think about one or two things i ought to be doing.
Thank you for the kick in the pants to spur me into action.
March 31st, 2019 05:41
Your Effect
Poetic Dan said:
Well expressed, kicked in with an awesome beat.
Thanks for sharing
March 30th, 2019 04:16
Poetic Dan said:
Well expressed, kicked in with an awesome beat.
Thanks for sharing
March 30th, 2019 04:16
A Clear Morning
sylviasearcher said:
Glad you shared this.
It gives me this free liberating feeling when I read it 😊
March 13th, 2019 02:16
sylviasearcher said:
Glad you shared this.
It gives me this free liberating feeling when I read it 😊
March 13th, 2019 02:16
A Clear Morning
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s a pretty cool ideal. Not one of the sheep complacent with where they are. Quite nice.
March 12th, 2019 22:17
Nicholas Browning said:
That\'s a pretty cool ideal. Not one of the sheep complacent with where they are. Quite nice.
March 12th, 2019 22:17
Outside Looking In
sylviasearcher said:
You weave hope through the internal and external struggles
March 12th, 2019 03:09
sylviasearcher said:
You weave hope through the internal and external struggles
March 12th, 2019 03:09
Misery Without Company
sylviasearcher said:
Great flow and twist on the phrase misery loves company. I never understood that phrase nor believed it to be true.
In fact I find the only real company for my misery is my secret words.
You turned misery into hope.
March 11th, 2019 03:11
sylviasearcher said:
Great flow and twist on the phrase misery loves company. I never understood that phrase nor believed it to be true.
In fact I find the only real company for my misery is my secret words.
You turned misery into hope.
March 11th, 2019 03:11
Pragmatic Reflection
sylviasearcher said:
I think I have spent too long adjusting my demeanour... I\'m ready for a change of scene!
January 24th, 2019 04:13
sylviasearcher said:
I think I have spent too long adjusting my demeanour... I\'m ready for a change of scene!
January 24th, 2019 04:13
Own the Loneliness
sylviasearcher said:
This is such a pertinent poem for me thoughts today. I had been mulling over a short story which kind of echoes your poem in a long winded convoluted kind of way...
I\'m living your poems lately 🤗
January 17th, 2019 02:36
sylviasearcher said:
This is such a pertinent poem for me thoughts today. I had been mulling over a short story which kind of echoes your poem in a long winded convoluted kind of way...
I\'m living your poems lately 🤗
January 17th, 2019 02:36
Revolution
psychofemale said:
love this, the last lines especially stood out :)
January 15th, 2019 21:15
psychofemale said:
love this, the last lines especially stood out :)
January 15th, 2019 21:15
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