Comments received on poems by asrealastheycome
Divine Intervention
psychofemale said:
Nice poem :) i especially loved the last four lines
January 14th, 2019 21:04
psychofemale said:
Nice poem :) i especially loved the last four lines
January 14th, 2019 21:04
Time To Shift The Paradigm
sylviasearcher said:
Reality/ illusion it\'s true it\'s but confusion!
Well written, I could here it like a wake up call
January 13th, 2019 12:54
sylviasearcher said:
Reality/ illusion it\'s true it\'s but confusion!
Well written, I could here it like a wake up call
January 13th, 2019 12:54
In Life, You Can’t Pretend
dusk arising said:
And all the rest is just poetry!
January 6th, 2019 06:40
dusk arising said:
And all the rest is just poetry!
January 6th, 2019 06:40
Ability to be Free
psychofemale said:
sounds like it could be a rap, i almost heard music :)
January 5th, 2019 19:30
psychofemale said:
sounds like it could be a rap, i almost heard music :)
January 5th, 2019 19:30
Unraveling
A.H. Browning said:
I learn my position every day and try to do my best. Thank you for your writing. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2018 05:37
A.H. Browning said:
I learn my position every day and try to do my best. Thank you for your writing. Merry Christmas.
December 24th, 2018 05:37
Unraveling
Simon Bromley said:
Very meaningful and straight to the point. \'You ain\'t alone in this world it creates a lot of noise\' very clever verse. well done.
December 23rd, 2018 08:48
Simon Bromley said:
Very meaningful and straight to the point. \'You ain\'t alone in this world it creates a lot of noise\' very clever verse. well done.
December 23rd, 2018 08:48
so contradictive
orchidee said:
Erm, how about that 1 time out of 10 when you\'re not contradicting? I should go with that one! heehee.
December 11th, 2018 03:39
orchidee said:
Erm, how about that 1 time out of 10 when you\'re not contradicting? I should go with that one! heehee.
December 11th, 2018 03:39
Sick of Waitin’
dusk arising said:
Could you have said this in a more punchy way in six or eight lines?
I guarantee more would read it if you did.
December 8th, 2018 12:55
dusk arising said:
Could you have said this in a more punchy way in six or eight lines?
I guarantee more would read it if you did.
December 8th, 2018 12:55
Sick of Waitin’
orchidee said:
Woof woof, my \'watchdog\' Fido, thinks this should be marked 18+, cos of the F word in it.
December 8th, 2018 08:38
orchidee said:
Woof woof, my \'watchdog\' Fido, thinks this should be marked 18+, cos of the F word in it.
December 8th, 2018 08:38
Sick of Waitin’
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s the same for me, waiting for a bus. None for ages, then six come along at once heehee.
December 8th, 2018 08:32
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s the same for me, waiting for a bus. None for ages, then six come along at once heehee.
December 8th, 2018 08:32
Life Is A Puzzle
sylviasearcher said:
I think I believed in magic too long.
Thanks for sharing the love and your free thoughts
December 5th, 2018 03:03
sylviasearcher said:
I think I believed in magic too long.
Thanks for sharing the love and your free thoughts
December 5th, 2018 03:03
The Digital World
A.H. Browning said:
You write with passion. I appreciate that.
Kindest Regards
December 3rd, 2018 22:28
A.H. Browning said:
You write with passion. I appreciate that.
Kindest Regards
December 3rd, 2018 22:28
The Digital World
sylviasearcher said:
I like to think I\'m a rebel because the only Facebook profile I have is an imaginary one where I post poems and things I can\'t say out loud!
Noone reads it of course. So it can feel lonely.
Not sure I should have admitted to that 😳
November 13th, 2018 02:48
sylviasearcher said:
I like to think I\'m a rebel because the only Facebook profile I have is an imaginary one where I post poems and things I can\'t say out loud!
Noone reads it of course. So it can feel lonely.
Not sure I should have admitted to that 😳
November 13th, 2018 02:48
Love Without Reciprication
The Gifted One said:
A very nice poem
The Gifted One
September 8th, 2018 22:33
The Gifted One said:
A very nice poem
The Gifted One
September 8th, 2018 22:33
Change is Peace
Goldfinch60 said:
As the hippie culture used to say back in the 1960s -\"Make love, not war\".
September 5th, 2018 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
As the hippie culture used to say back in the 1960s -\"Make love, not war\".
September 5th, 2018 00:54
Y-O-U
Poetic Dan said:
I know this so well, beautiful written about loves spell
July 27th, 2018 01:48
Poetic Dan said:
I know this so well, beautiful written about loves spell
July 27th, 2018 01:48
Comfort in Solitude
dusk arising said:
They wreck you because they don\'t have your depth. But deep people cant be in familiar company for long without beginning to open up can they. So i understand your self protectionist point of view.
One could spend years being similar, yet yearning for closeness.
July 24th, 2018 22:56
dusk arising said:
They wreck you because they don\'t have your depth. But deep people cant be in familiar company for long without beginning to open up can they. So i understand your self protectionist point of view.
One could spend years being similar, yet yearning for closeness.
July 24th, 2018 22:56
Your Love, Im The Addict
Rainbow said:
this is a lovely poem very nice way of expressing your love for someone through a poem
July 20th, 2018 08:46
Rainbow said:
this is a lovely poem very nice way of expressing your love for someone through a poem
July 20th, 2018 08:46
Your Love, Im The Addict
Syd said:
Brilliant love poem. Flows like a rap song.
- Syd
July 20th, 2018 08:30
Syd said:
Brilliant love poem. Flows like a rap song.
- Syd
July 20th, 2018 08:30
Thoughts From a Rainy Day
Resa71 said:
I really felt this for some reason.
It’s almoat as if someone I once knew wrote it!
Not saying it’s you.
Its just a coincidence.
Really enjoyed it!
Thank you 😊Resa
July 16th, 2018 01:29
Resa71 said:
I really felt this for some reason.
It’s almoat as if someone I once knew wrote it!
Not saying it’s you.
Its just a coincidence.
Really enjoyed it!
Thank you 😊Resa
July 16th, 2018 01:29
Memories
dusk arising said:
Yep you\'re hooked ok. Love to read what she writes about you. LOL
July 14th, 2018 11:34
dusk arising said:
Yep you\'re hooked ok. Love to read what she writes about you. LOL
July 14th, 2018 11:34
Memories
JasmineUK said:
She is so lucky to have your devotion,
You sound a lover to stir juicy emotion. :)
July 14th, 2018 04:54
JasmineUK said:
She is so lucky to have your devotion,
You sound a lover to stir juicy emotion. :)
July 14th, 2018 04:54
Full of Emotion
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m really at that place today
If it ain\'t a connection I don\'t want it
Sick of societies infection like I\'m gonna vomit.
Well actually I just feel a big bad feeling growing inside.
How long can this disconnectedness survive?
July 12th, 2018 08:28
sylviasearcher said:
I\'m really at that place today
If it ain\'t a connection I don\'t want it
Sick of societies infection like I\'m gonna vomit.
Well actually I just feel a big bad feeling growing inside.
How long can this disconnectedness survive?
July 12th, 2018 08:28
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