Comments received on poems by asrealastheycome



evergreen
asrealastheycome said:

Thank you homie, appreciate the love & sendin it right back

February 19th, 2024 00:37

evergreen
sorenbarrett said:

I liked the opening \"I walk a fine line between dreams and reality\" so true. It is matter of keeping sanity. The rest of this metaphor is wonderful and well thought out. It hangs together in a very nice piece.

December 24th, 2023 06:14

planetary
2781 said:

What are you planting?

November 23rd, 2023 07:58

whatever happens…happens
2781 said:

\"The mandrakes give a smell, and at our gates are all manner of pleasant fruits, new and old, which I have laid up for thee, O my beloved.\"

November 11th, 2023 08:53

whatever happens…happens
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic flow and rhythm

November 11th, 2023 06:04

the confused, fool in the mirror
Thomas W Case said:

Well done poet.

October 25th, 2023 00:53

on the edge
2781 said:

Depends on who you do it with.

July 29th, 2023 01:24

disappear
zakiyyahlife said:

I love this so much!

July 15th, 2023 14:15

thoughts from the void
Bobby O said:

Dichotomy. Forever the path. Each side has a list to point direction. The decade of the 50’s demonstrates indelibly. The two people lost in the news were
Jonas Salk and Joseph McCarthy.
Dichotomy

July 8th, 2023 08:42

out of orbit
2781 said:

Enjoy the trip?

May 1st, 2023 08:19

once upon a time
MR.apocalypse said:

love the flow and insight

November 12th, 2022 11:06

in your head
shaa said:

I love these lines \'the temptation that entices pleasureful sin\', \'intimacy that makes you lose control\'

September 14th, 2022 05:38

complex
jenny.g said:

Brilliant pace! Very clever write!

September 10th, 2022 13:25

complex
shaa said:

Love the rhyme and relate in so many ways. Nicely penned

September 10th, 2022 11:18

remedies
voices of ghosts said:

nice 👌 whatever works, works

April 10th, 2022 11:24

your spell
dusk arising said:

Those last two lines are masterful.

April 6th, 2022 15:36

your spell
voices of ghosts said:

nice read👌

April 6th, 2022 15:03

omnipotent
Thekkinkkattil said:

A good read

March 25th, 2022 07:02

omnipotent
dean langmuir said:

Enjoyed your last line,had to comment,take care.

March 24th, 2022 12:51

cosmic colors
Garth Rakumakoe said:

The rhythm it sews into our fabric of existence. That touched me. One poet to another, I know exactly what you mean.

November 10th, 2021 06:16

cosmic colors
dusk arising said:

Expressionism. Dunno about understanding it\'s nitty gritty necessarily but empathising with it ... oh yes.

November 10th, 2021 04:43

cosmic colors
Caring dove said:

Sometimes we can very much speak from our centre and who we truly are.

A nice writing 🙂

November 10th, 2021 02:35

rhymes at sunrise
L. B. Mek said:

a great message, and invigorating read
thanks for sharing!

October 11th, 2021 06:00

what’s wrong with silence?
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes - I can relate to that - pop it in the same bag as Summer Lovin.

September 15th, 2021 07:14

summer lovin’
Doggerel Dave said:

I \'m not a great fan of love poetry generally (and there\'s a lot of it). Here, however this is straight up and direct no cloying gooey stuff.
Good for you.

September 15th, 2021 07:10

what’s wrong with silence?
myself and me said:

As you stated \"To many it’s frightening\", only a few would be intoxicated by the beauty of the moment.

August 28th, 2021 15:26

craving her flavor
myself and me said:

A master chef indeed. Good appetite. Thank you for showing us the dish.

August 27th, 2021 13:04

craving her flavor
L. B. Mek said:

found this to be a fun read
liked the offbeat, flow
it adds something, I think
thanks for sharing

August 27th, 2021 04:57

Kissing Galaxies
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words about a a beautiful place.

Andy

August 25th, 2021 00:45

Kissing Galaxies
Caring dove said:

Good poem .I like your choice of words

August 24th, 2021 17:05

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