Comments received on poems by asrealastheycome
evergreen
asrealastheycome said:
Thank you homie, appreciate the love & sendin it right back
February 19th, 2024 00:37
asrealastheycome said:
Thank you homie, appreciate the love & sendin it right back
February 19th, 2024 00:37
evergreen
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the opening \"I walk a fine line between dreams and reality\" so true. It is matter of keeping sanity. The rest of this metaphor is wonderful and well thought out. It hangs together in a very nice piece.
December 24th, 2023 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
I liked the opening \"I walk a fine line between dreams and reality\" so true. It is matter of keeping sanity. The rest of this metaphor is wonderful and well thought out. It hangs together in a very nice piece.
December 24th, 2023 06:14
whatever happens…happens
2781 said:
\"The mandrakes give a smell, and at our gates are all manner of pleasant fruits, new and old, which I have laid up for thee, O my beloved.\"
November 11th, 2023 08:53
2781 said:
\"The mandrakes give a smell, and at our gates are all manner of pleasant fruits, new and old, which I have laid up for thee, O my beloved.\"
November 11th, 2023 08:53
thoughts from the void
Bobby O said:
Dichotomy. Forever the path. Each side has a list to point direction. The decade of the 50’s demonstrates indelibly. The two people lost in the news were
Jonas Salk and Joseph McCarthy.
Dichotomy
July 8th, 2023 08:42
Bobby O said:
Dichotomy. Forever the path. Each side has a list to point direction. The decade of the 50’s demonstrates indelibly. The two people lost in the news were
Jonas Salk and Joseph McCarthy.
Dichotomy
July 8th, 2023 08:42
in your head
shaa said:
I love these lines \'the temptation that entices pleasureful sin\', \'intimacy that makes you lose control\'
September 14th, 2022 05:38
shaa said:
I love these lines \'the temptation that entices pleasureful sin\', \'intimacy that makes you lose control\'
September 14th, 2022 05:38
complex
shaa said:
Love the rhyme and relate in so many ways. Nicely penned
September 10th, 2022 11:18
shaa said:
Love the rhyme and relate in so many ways. Nicely penned
September 10th, 2022 11:18
omnipotent
dean langmuir said:
Enjoyed your last line,had to comment,take care.
March 24th, 2022 12:51
dean langmuir said:
Enjoyed your last line,had to comment,take care.
March 24th, 2022 12:51
cosmic colors
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The rhythm it sews into our fabric of existence. That touched me. One poet to another, I know exactly what you mean.
November 10th, 2021 06:16
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The rhythm it sews into our fabric of existence. That touched me. One poet to another, I know exactly what you mean.
November 10th, 2021 06:16
cosmic colors
dusk arising said:
Expressionism. Dunno about understanding it\'s nitty gritty necessarily but empathising with it ... oh yes.
November 10th, 2021 04:43
dusk arising said:
Expressionism. Dunno about understanding it\'s nitty gritty necessarily but empathising with it ... oh yes.
November 10th, 2021 04:43
cosmic colors
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sometimes we can very much speak from our centre and who we truly are.
A nice writing 🙂
November 10th, 2021 02:35
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sometimes we can very much speak from our centre and who we truly are.
A nice writing 🙂
November 10th, 2021 02:35
rhymes at sunrise
L. B. Mek said:
a great message, and invigorating read
thanks for sharing!
October 11th, 2021 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
a great message, and invigorating read
thanks for sharing!
October 11th, 2021 06:00
what’s wrong with silence?
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - I can relate to that - pop it in the same bag as Summer Lovin.
September 15th, 2021 07:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes - I can relate to that - pop it in the same bag as Summer Lovin.
September 15th, 2021 07:14
summer lovin’
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'m not a great fan of love poetry generally (and there\'s a lot of it). Here, however this is straight up and direct no cloying gooey stuff.
Good for you.
September 15th, 2021 07:10
Doggerel Dave said:
I \'m not a great fan of love poetry generally (and there\'s a lot of it). Here, however this is straight up and direct no cloying gooey stuff.
Good for you.
September 15th, 2021 07:10
what’s wrong with silence?
myself and me said:
As you stated \"To many it’s frightening\", only a few would be intoxicated by the beauty of the moment.
August 28th, 2021 15:26
myself and me said:
As you stated \"To many it’s frightening\", only a few would be intoxicated by the beauty of the moment.
August 28th, 2021 15:26
craving her flavor
myself and me said:
A master chef indeed. Good appetite. Thank you for showing us the dish.
August 27th, 2021 13:04
myself and me said:
A master chef indeed. Good appetite. Thank you for showing us the dish.
August 27th, 2021 13:04
craving her flavor
L. B. Mek said:
found this to be a fun read
liked the offbeat, flow
it adds something, I think
thanks for sharing
August 27th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
found this to be a fun read
liked the offbeat, flow
it adds something, I think
thanks for sharing
August 27th, 2021 04:57
Kissing Galaxies
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a a beautiful place.
Andy
August 25th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a a beautiful place.
Andy
August 25th, 2021 00:45
Kissing Galaxies
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good poem .I like your choice of words
August 24th, 2021 17:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Good poem .I like your choice of words
August 24th, 2021 17:05
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