Comments received on poems by Suresh
Remaining Span
RDS said:
A nice meditation on focus, effort and the tangled nature of time Suresh. I enjoyed reading thanks
J
November 30th, 2020 16:34
RDS said:
A nice meditation on focus, effort and the tangled nature of time Suresh. I enjoyed reading thanks
J
November 30th, 2020 16:34
Remaining Span
Neville said:
nothing like being reminded of one\'s own mortality in a well crafted poem .. gotta make sure we make every moment count ....
November 30th, 2020 12:07
Neville said:
nothing like being reminded of one\'s own mortality in a well crafted poem .. gotta make sure we make every moment count ....
November 30th, 2020 12:07
Remaining Span
dusk arising said:
If time be on our hands at the fall of the day, as dusk arises from the land, pleasant thoughts of bygone pleasures can become a romantic muse. Enjoy those moments to their full i say when the perfect mood surrounds you. For if there were other needy tasks, why then, of course, it\'s those you\'d be doing instead.mood
Took me several reads too really enter into your piece today. That mention of dusk (my fav time of day in fair weather) straight away creates a romantic mood for me...... the land begins to darken and offer up concealment of all sorts of wonderful things.
November 30th, 2020 10:31
dusk arising said:
If time be on our hands at the fall of the day, as dusk arises from the land, pleasant thoughts of bygone pleasures can become a romantic muse. Enjoy those moments to their full i say when the perfect mood surrounds you. For if there were other needy tasks, why then, of course, it\'s those you\'d be doing instead.mood
Took me several reads too really enter into your piece today. That mention of dusk (my fav time of day in fair weather) straight away creates a romantic mood for me...... the land begins to darken and offer up concealment of all sorts of wonderful things.
November 30th, 2020 10:31
Remaining Span
orchidee said:
A fine write Suresh.
Is the title \'Remaking\' or \'Remaining\' or both?!
November 30th, 2020 08:34
orchidee said:
A fine write Suresh.
Is the title \'Remaking\' or \'Remaining\' or both?!
November 30th, 2020 08:34
Remaining Span
Fay Slimm. said:
A needed and well crafted reminder that time spent reviewing the past never lets us enter the peace of the present. Good read my friend and thank you for sharing it.
November 30th, 2020 05:36
Fay Slimm. said:
A needed and well crafted reminder that time spent reviewing the past never lets us enter the peace of the present. Good read my friend and thank you for sharing it.
November 30th, 2020 05:36
Happy Diwali 2020
dusk arising said:
May the lights remain in your soul to light your future wellbeing. Stay safe.
November 14th, 2020 09:36
dusk arising said:
May the lights remain in your soul to light your future wellbeing. Stay safe.
November 14th, 2020 09:36
Happy Diwali 2020
Neville said:
What a delightful thought and wish ... Happy Diwali to You and all those who visit this page ....
Neville
November 14th, 2020 07:57
Neville said:
What a delightful thought and wish ... Happy Diwali to You and all those who visit this page ....
Neville
November 14th, 2020 07:57
Happy Diwali 2020
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to see you posting again Suresh - - wishing you happy memories of this year\'s Diwali.
November 14th, 2020 05:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Good to see you posting again Suresh - - wishing you happy memories of this year\'s Diwali.
November 14th, 2020 05:39
Happy Diwali 2020
Goldfinch60 said:
May Diwali be filled with joy for you as well Suresh.
Andy
November 14th, 2020 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
May Diwali be filled with joy for you as well Suresh.
Andy
November 14th, 2020 02:24
Lost Loves Memories
Neville said:
there is indeed more than just a tinge of sadness here.... nevertheless.. much enjoyed ..
October 5th, 2020 16:30
Neville said:
there is indeed more than just a tinge of sadness here.... nevertheless.. much enjoyed ..
October 5th, 2020 16:30
Untitled - XXXIII
Fay Slimm. said:
This makes clear the need to become aware that human intellect often falls short in the knowledge department. Another gem on which to ponder Suresh.
July 8th, 2020 03:00
Fay Slimm. said:
This makes clear the need to become aware that human intellect often falls short in the knowledge department. Another gem on which to ponder Suresh.
July 8th, 2020 03:00
Untitled - XXXIII
Neville said:
Well aint that just the truth, truer than the truest true....
July 8th, 2020 01:15
Neville said:
Well aint that just the truth, truer than the truest true....
July 8th, 2020 01:15
Simplicity
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
We agree SURESH - Verbosity is Pomposity and only seeks to confuse ! We both love the Japanese 17 syllable poems (5 7 5 triplets in English) HAIKU & SENRYU
Summer is the month
of bright sunny days - and long
warm and silky nights !
One can say so much in 17 syllables but it is a challenge to express onself succinctly & simply. Thanks for sharing ! Please check our latest FUSION (*BEYOND THE SUNSET*) and add a Poem if you have time - Thanks.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smoley Cat !
July 2nd, 2020 13:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
We agree SURESH - Verbosity is Pomposity and only seeks to confuse ! We both love the Japanese 17 syllable poems (5 7 5 triplets in English) HAIKU & SENRYU
Summer is the month
of bright sunny days - and long
warm and silky nights !
One can say so much in 17 syllables but it is a challenge to express onself succinctly & simply. Thanks for sharing ! Please check our latest FUSION (*BEYOND THE SUNSET*) and add a Poem if you have time - Thanks.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smoley Cat !
July 2nd, 2020 13:26
Simplicity
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple is always the best Suresh -and magically captured in just a few lines.
July 2nd, 2020 02:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Simple is always the best Suresh -and magically captured in just a few lines.
July 2nd, 2020 02:08
Simplicity
orchidee said:
Yes - why add to the ignorant or stupid? Are there enough of them to go round already?! ooohh.
July 2nd, 2020 01:59
orchidee said:
Yes - why add to the ignorant or stupid? Are there enough of them to go round already?! ooohh.
July 2nd, 2020 01:59
Simplicity
Bragee said:
Ah
The world often confuses the one who speaks the loudest or the most in conversation for the intellect but in the poetic community we know the opposite to be true!
July 2nd, 2020 01:54
Bragee said:
Ah
The world often confuses the one who speaks the loudest or the most in conversation for the intellect but in the poetic community we know the opposite to be true!
July 2nd, 2020 01:54
Simplicity
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Suresh, so much can be said in very few words.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Suresh, so much can be said in very few words.
Andy
July 2nd, 2020 00:50
Simplicity
Neville said:
Keep it simple.. why make things any harder than they already are.. Simply well stated.. Simple as that ..
July 2nd, 2020 00:17
Neville said:
Keep it simple.. why make things any harder than they already are.. Simply well stated.. Simple as that ..
July 2nd, 2020 00:17
Breath
Bragee said:
Such thought provoking writing In such few words.
Put me in the frame of one mans trash being another man treasure.
July 1st, 2020 23:09
Bragee said:
Such thought provoking writing In such few words.
Put me in the frame of one mans trash being another man treasure.
July 1st, 2020 23:09
Breath
Neville said:
understandably profound
&
profoundly understandable
a good shout my friend
&
Oh\' so bloomin true 10/10
July 1st, 2020 16:55
Neville said:
understandably profound
&
profoundly understandable
a good shout my friend
&
Oh\' so bloomin true 10/10
July 1st, 2020 16:55
Breath
dusk arising said:
Not to be sniffed at. This piece has a certain air about it.
July 1st, 2020 06:39
dusk arising said:
Not to be sniffed at. This piece has a certain air about it.
July 1st, 2020 06:39
Breath
Accidental Poet said:
So true Suresh.
Breathe in, breathe out
Without air we\'ll die no doubt
July 1st, 2020 05:43
Accidental Poet said:
So true Suresh.
Breathe in, breathe out
Without air we\'ll die no doubt
July 1st, 2020 05:43
Breath
orchidee said:
I se this as the good and, dare I say it, the evil.
Some Biblical writers ask the same things: \'Why do the good seem to die young, but the evil seem to live on longer?\'
A general principle though, not applying to all, or we may say \'I\'m 100 next week; who you calling evil?!\'
July 1st, 2020 04:40
orchidee said:
I se this as the good and, dare I say it, the evil.
Some Biblical writers ask the same things: \'Why do the good seem to die young, but the evil seem to live on longer?\'
A general principle though, not applying to all, or we may say \'I\'m 100 next week; who you calling evil?!\'
July 1st, 2020 04:40
Breath
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good JULY Suresh ~May you always be one of those who values and thanks His God each day for His LIFE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *ANGELA MY WIFE* Thanks !
July 1st, 2020 02:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good JULY Suresh ~May you always be one of those who values and thanks His God each day for His LIFE ~ AMEN
Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check *ANGELA MY WIFE* Thanks !
July 1st, 2020 02:21
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