Comments received on poems by Suresh
Breath
Goldfinch60 said:
May your breaths never fail so that your words can inspire us all.
Andy
July 1st, 2020 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May your breaths never fail so that your words can inspire us all.
Andy
July 1st, 2020 00:42
Untitled- XXXI
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence within us takes us to such wondrous places.
Andy
July 1st, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That silence within us takes us to such wondrous places.
Andy
July 1st, 2020 00:16
Untitled- XXXI
Accidental Poet said:
Words of wisdom Suresh.
The silence within speaks to a heart that listens .
June 30th, 2020 17:44
Accidental Poet said:
Words of wisdom Suresh.
The silence within speaks to a heart that listens .
June 30th, 2020 17:44
Untitled- XXXI
Michael Edwards said:
Inner silence where the sounds of the world remain unheard. love your short writes Suresh.
June 30th, 2020 16:39
Michael Edwards said:
Inner silence where the sounds of the world remain unheard. love your short writes Suresh.
June 30th, 2020 16:39
Untitled - XXIX
Accidental Poet said:
Great words Suresh. Hopefully the intelligent life will point the way to a peaceful future.
June 30th, 2020 05:31
Accidental Poet said:
Great words Suresh. Hopefully the intelligent life will point the way to a peaceful future.
June 30th, 2020 05:31
Untitled - XXIX
Fay Slimm. said:
So true Suresh - and this planet though surrounded with intelligence often closes ears to its guidance.
June 30th, 2020 02:25
Fay Slimm. said:
So true Suresh - and this planet though surrounded with intelligence often closes ears to its guidance.
June 30th, 2020 02:25
Untitled - XXIX
Goldfinch60 said:
May that waypoint take us to wonderful places.
Andy
June 30th, 2020 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
May that waypoint take us to wonderful places.
Andy
June 30th, 2020 00:12
As born.....
Suresh said:
These few words highlight the stark reality of our existence.
When birthed, we are born with none of the attributes, and shed them upon departing. Our birth is not a reward, as every aspect of life is a struggle, interspersed with euphoria to keep hope alive. We are a product of fire, and so to purgatory we shall descend.
Ones belief is their own, a means to cope with their struggles. Neither do they influence nor are a part of this reality.
A concise poem is presented, where explanation becomes volumes. I do so want to thank you all for honoring me with these and further comments.
June 28th, 2020 11:10
Suresh said:
These few words highlight the stark reality of our existence.
When birthed, we are born with none of the attributes, and shed them upon departing. Our birth is not a reward, as every aspect of life is a struggle, interspersed with euphoria to keep hope alive. We are a product of fire, and so to purgatory we shall descend.
Ones belief is their own, a means to cope with their struggles. Neither do they influence nor are a part of this reality.
A concise poem is presented, where explanation becomes volumes. I do so want to thank you all for honoring me with these and further comments.
June 28th, 2020 11:10
As born.....
Neville said:
we would ne\'er allow such a thing to happen..
a dark but essentially honest, ragged and real reflective projection perchance... whatever the case a worthy write and read....
Neville
June 28th, 2020 08:12
Neville said:
we would ne\'er allow such a thing to happen..
a dark but essentially honest, ragged and real reflective projection perchance... whatever the case a worthy write and read....
Neville
June 28th, 2020 08:12
As born.....
dusk arising said:
Another man made myth for which there is no proof only belief induced by childhood indoctrination of fear of god. Blimey if god is so terrible what on earth are we doing worshipping him/it/her. Purgatory, invented when the world was flat and stating that the world revolved around the sun was heresy.
Apart from that, nice work lol.
June 28th, 2020 03:27
dusk arising said:
Another man made myth for which there is no proof only belief induced by childhood indoctrination of fear of god. Blimey if god is so terrible what on earth are we doing worshipping him/it/her. Purgatory, invented when the world was flat and stating that the world revolved around the sun was heresy.
Apart from that, nice work lol.
June 28th, 2020 03:27
As born.....
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great feeling to this S I like this
Is this Purgatory?
You might be right!
June 28th, 2020 02:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great feeling to this S I like this
Is this Purgatory?
You might be right!
June 28th, 2020 02:54
As born.....
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno if I will journey to Purgatory. Erm, a main point being that I don\'t believe in it!
This came to mind, reading this, if it links in some way: \'What a person is before God, that he/she is, and nothing more\'. (St Francis of Assisi).
June 28th, 2020 02:09
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno if I will journey to Purgatory. Erm, a main point being that I don\'t believe in it!
This came to mind, reading this, if it links in some way: \'What a person is before God, that he/she is, and nothing more\'. (St Francis of Assisi).
June 28th, 2020 02:09
Untitled - XXVIII
Goldfinch60 said:
May that island, and mine, be strong forever.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
May that island, and mine, be strong forever.
Andy
June 28th, 2020 01:37
Untitled - XXVIII
Neville said:
splendid... timeless and true
...................Neville
June 27th, 2020 17:38
Neville said:
splendid... timeless and true
...................Neville
June 27th, 2020 17:38
Untitled - XXVIII
Fay Slimm. said:
Great three liner painted in strokes of truth.
June 27th, 2020 17:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Great three liner painted in strokes of truth.
June 27th, 2020 17:27
Untitled - XXVIII
Michael Edwards said:
Succinct and with a punch - great write Suresh
June 27th, 2020 15:49
Michael Edwards said:
Succinct and with a punch - great write Suresh
June 27th, 2020 15:49
Untitled - XXVII
Accidental Poet said:
Very intriguing . Short but inspiring. Well done Suresh.
June 27th, 2020 08:28
Accidental Poet said:
Very intriguing . Short but inspiring. Well done Suresh.
June 27th, 2020 08:28
Untitled - XXVII
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nice one brother
HEY! you are my brother
Where are you from
I\'m from earth
Great write S
June 27th, 2020 05:32
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Nice one brother
HEY! you are my brother
Where are you from
I\'m from earth
Great write S
June 27th, 2020 05:32
Untitled - XXVII
dusk arising said:
Fills me with awe to think of myself as one of those written about in such fine words.
June 27th, 2020 05:01
dusk arising said:
Fills me with awe to think of myself as one of those written about in such fine words.
June 27th, 2020 05:01
Untitled - XXVII
Fay Slimm. said:
Thoughts to deepen my morning quiet-time - thank you Suresh for sharing such wisdom with us.
June 27th, 2020 00:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Thoughts to deepen my morning quiet-time - thank you Suresh for sharing such wisdom with us.
June 27th, 2020 00:54
Untitled - XXVII
Neville said:
and of course disciples...
I have a thing about your untitled series my friend and would seriously urge that you try and publish them elsewhere as well, if you have not done so already...
Neville
June 26th, 2020 23:40
Neville said:
and of course disciples...
I have a thing about your untitled series my friend and would seriously urge that you try and publish them elsewhere as well, if you have not done so already...
Neville
June 26th, 2020 23:40
WW1 - They were all Related
Neville said:
Excellent Suresh & so deserving of more attention than your pearl of a poem has so far received.. each time I have read these words through.. I get the feeling of a great war poem and a lump in my throat... and true..
Neville
June 26th, 2020 03:47
Neville said:
Excellent Suresh & so deserving of more attention than your pearl of a poem has so far received.. each time I have read these words through.. I get the feeling of a great war poem and a lump in my throat... and true..
Neville
June 26th, 2020 03:47
Love\'s recipe
Goldfinch60 said:
Words certainly are superfluous when love strikes.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Words certainly are superfluous when love strikes.
Andy
June 26th, 2020 01:06
Fahrenheit
Neville said:
in the heat of the moment, who would want to be anywhere else...
succinctly but otherwise perfectly poemed my friend...
June 24th, 2020 03:39
Neville said:
in the heat of the moment, who would want to be anywhere else...
succinctly but otherwise perfectly poemed my friend...
June 24th, 2020 03:39
Fahrenheit
Fay Slimm. said:
You verse the effect of passion when entertained by willing partners just perfectly here with excellent build-up Suresh. An exciting read.
June 24th, 2020 03:19
Fay Slimm. said:
You verse the effect of passion when entertained by willing partners just perfectly here with excellent build-up Suresh. An exciting read.
June 24th, 2020 03:19
Fahrenheit
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat of passion can create quite a temperature.
Andy
June 24th, 2020 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
That heat of passion can create quite a temperature.
Andy
June 24th, 2020 01:38
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