Comments received on poems by caz84



How his porn habit can break your heart
Cassie58 said:

It matters to you and that is all that counts. Powerfully conveyed. Well written stanzas. Thank you.

December 18th, 2023 14:44

How his porn habit can break your heart
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful write.

December 18th, 2023 14:09

Cycles of destruction
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

November 14th, 2023 19:42

Cycles of destruction
Lil said:

Love this!!!

November 14th, 2023 06:42

I was too happy
Garth Rakumakoe said:

A love trepidation. Very well depicted.

November 3rd, 2023 03:57

I was too happy
Thomas W Case said:

Very relatable. Great write.

November 2nd, 2023 07:59

Nothing is forever
writer in the dark said:

beautifully said, a voice for many. Thanks for sharing this!

June 20th, 2023 13:17

Nothing is forever
2781 said:

I was looking for love in all the wrong places....
Nicely written.

June 20th, 2023 08:30

Nothing is forever
LIZ said:

Love it!!! So true!!! Looking for forever! Thank you for sharing!

June 20th, 2023 04:25

Nothing is forever
terriblesoul977 said:

You remind me of myself

June 20th, 2023 04:22

Waiting Room
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!
so true, I\'m sorry for your troubles
thank you for choosing to share

June 16th, 2023 02:58

My life
dusk arising said:

Having just discovered you on here i had to see more of your poetry. You are very good.
This contains so much in the picture you paint and refrains from being a rant, which is seen all to often on your subject here in MPS. Your final line wraps it up perfectly.

Big gap between your two posts. You\'re good, you should show us some more of your stuff.... PLEEEZE!

December 4th, 2020 06:31

Although I weep...
dusk arising said:

This is quite beautiful. Hard to believe such a wonderful piece could be written at age ten but there again, it has to be, for it contains a purity and innocence of child.

I was drawn into it. So moving.

Into my favourites.

December 4th, 2020 06:25

Although I weep...
Fatlass said:

😢 I can feel your pain in your words. Very emotive. Sending kind thoughts

December 3rd, 2020 18:28

Although I weep...
carolkirby1952 said:

Touching!

December 3rd, 2020 14:04

Although I weep...
Jerry Reynolds said:

Feel better soon. Stay safe

December 3rd, 2020 13:25

My life
JasmineUK said:

:)

August 10th, 2018 05:10

My life
Crystal Hope said:

Your first stanza broke my heart. Then as I read on,it broke more and more. Such an emotional and beautiful read.

August 10th, 2018 00:18

My life
serenity-poetry said:

This is very powerful, represents the truth about heartache. Good writing.


August 9th, 2018 18:23