Comments received on poems by Bloody Pen
what are you?
Cloie said:
It beautifully captures the essence of introspection and self-awareness. The repetition of \"take your time\" emphasizes the importance of patience in understanding oneself. The imagery of reading your brain like a book is particularly striking. Well done!
February 25th, 2024 06:11
Cloie said:
It beautifully captures the essence of introspection and self-awareness. The repetition of \"take your time\" emphasizes the importance of patience in understanding oneself. The imagery of reading your brain like a book is particularly striking. Well done!
February 25th, 2024 06:11
what are you?
Cloie said:
It beautifully captures the essence of introspection and self-awareness. The repetition of \"take your time\" emphasizes the importance of patience in understanding oneself. The imagery of reading your brain like a book is particularly striking. Well done!
February 25th, 2024 06:11
Cloie said:
It beautifully captures the essence of introspection and self-awareness. The repetition of \"take your time\" emphasizes the importance of patience in understanding oneself. The imagery of reading your brain like a book is particularly striking. Well done!
February 25th, 2024 06:11
Run.
Cassie58 said:
A tragic event that sadly would be impossible to forget. A young life taken in such s violent manner. An event that must have been replayed in your mind many times. I’m sorry you had to experience that. Such a sad poem.
January 17th, 2024 03:08
Cassie58 said:
A tragic event that sadly would be impossible to forget. A young life taken in such s violent manner. An event that must have been replayed in your mind many times. I’m sorry you had to experience that. Such a sad poem.
January 17th, 2024 03:08
The Pressure
Parisab said:
Those messages pressure and haunt us forever, but I’m relieved that you recognize that it is just a “false alarm” and you are trying to sing to your own music-keep writing please…
December 1st, 2023 11:44
Parisab said:
Those messages pressure and haunt us forever, but I’m relieved that you recognize that it is just a “false alarm” and you are trying to sing to your own music-keep writing please…
December 1st, 2023 11:44
Father...
Abby1234 said:
I understand. I miss my father who abandoned me 6 years ago.
March 27th, 2023 12:46
Abby1234 said:
I understand. I miss my father who abandoned me 6 years ago.
March 27th, 2023 12:46
where are you
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad emotive write, parents should always be there for their children.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very sad emotive write, parents should always be there for their children.
Andy
January 30th, 2021 02:52
Maybe i don\'t
Goldfinch60 said:
You have too much to give in your life before dying, look to the future as every day is special.
October 2nd, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
You have too much to give in your life before dying, look to the future as every day is special.
October 2nd, 2020 00:26
Maybe i don\'t
Whimsical_1 said:
I have defiantly been there as well. Many of the poems on my page before yesterday were geared toward this topic. Im glad you have somewhere to channel it. if you ever need to chat. feel free to reach out
- Whim
October 1st, 2020 17:22
Whimsical_1 said:
I have defiantly been there as well. Many of the poems on my page before yesterday were geared toward this topic. Im glad you have somewhere to channel it. if you ever need to chat. feel free to reach out
- Whim
October 1st, 2020 17:22
I fail
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words written down will release the bad in your life and replace it with good the more you write.
May 19th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words written down will release the bad in your life and replace it with good the more you write.
May 19th, 2020 00:23
I fail
PanAngel16 said:
I know that I don\'t completely understand how you\'re feeling because no one can truly understand how anyone feels, but if you ever need someone to talk to you can talk to me. This poem is wonderful though.
May 18th, 2020 13:52
PanAngel16 said:
I know that I don\'t completely understand how you\'re feeling because no one can truly understand how anyone feels, but if you ever need someone to talk to you can talk to me. This poem is wonderful though.
May 18th, 2020 13:52
SHUT UP!
orchidee said:
Ok, I\'ll stay around. You\'ll miss me if I shut up! heehee.
January 10th, 2019 07:45
orchidee said:
Ok, I\'ll stay around. You\'ll miss me if I shut up! heehee.
January 10th, 2019 07:45
Hell Hole
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice job...and the reason is because you write it in a way that leaves the reader with different possibilities s to what you are referring to...yet, only YOU really know what exactly you were writing about...so, it becomes all the more brilliant of a write..nice job..fully enjoyed...take care and keep writing and publishing , for the sake of this site
January 6th, 2019 04:47
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice job...and the reason is because you write it in a way that leaves the reader with different possibilities s to what you are referring to...yet, only YOU really know what exactly you were writing about...so, it becomes all the more brilliant of a write..nice job..fully enjoyed...take care and keep writing and publishing , for the sake of this site
January 6th, 2019 04:47
\"Family\"
Debsspot said:
Naiomi luckily the world is now accepting that \" Family\" is different for each person. Making a child no longer makes you \"Family \". You can include those who deserve the title. No more pretending.
Have a wonderful Christmas with those that love you.
December 22nd, 2018 21:11
Debsspot said:
Naiomi luckily the world is now accepting that \" Family\" is different for each person. Making a child no longer makes you \"Family \". You can include those who deserve the title. No more pretending.
Have a wonderful Christmas with those that love you.
December 22nd, 2018 21:11
I used to be able
SorrowfullyHappy said:
you shouldn\'t have to fake anything you should just be you don\'t hide the rest of your emotions I did and now I cant find them
December 21st, 2018 18:19
SorrowfullyHappy said:
you shouldn\'t have to fake anything you should just be you don\'t hide the rest of your emotions I did and now I cant find them
December 21st, 2018 18:19
I want to die
elimil02 said:
writing is the best outlet for those of us struggling with these things, don\'t ya think ? sorry I\'m awkward. this is beautifully blunt, honest, and raw. keep writing
December 12th, 2018 22:17
elimil02 said:
writing is the best outlet for those of us struggling with these things, don\'t ya think ? sorry I\'m awkward. this is beautifully blunt, honest, and raw. keep writing
December 12th, 2018 22:17
I want to die
Netashi said:
Very nicely written poem, at times people do feel life would be severely easier if they didn\'t exist or if they gave up on something. Its just that we are taught since birth that we must never give up or we must strive for the best. When in reality failure is the best since we learn from those things. We as people should be okay with failing and learn we don\'t need the best to feel alright. Although i do hope you feel better but keep writing good like this.
December 12th, 2018 16:37
Netashi said:
Very nicely written poem, at times people do feel life would be severely easier if they didn\'t exist or if they gave up on something. Its just that we are taught since birth that we must never give up or we must strive for the best. When in reality failure is the best since we learn from those things. We as people should be okay with failing and learn we don\'t need the best to feel alright. Although i do hope you feel better but keep writing good like this.
December 12th, 2018 16:37
I\'m sorry
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem is deeply emotional and it clearly expresses your pain.
However, stop apologizing for your behavior. Maybe it\'s not you.
If someone truly loves you they will accept you for who you are...warts and all.
Thanks for sharing. :-)
November 24th, 2018 17:19
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Your poem is deeply emotional and it clearly expresses your pain.
However, stop apologizing for your behavior. Maybe it\'s not you.
If someone truly loves you they will accept you for who you are...warts and all.
Thanks for sharing. :-)
November 24th, 2018 17:19
A.D.S
Debsspot said:
Painful to read and see what your going through. I hope the expression is helping. Very eloquent for one so young.
I hope with all my hear you find a way through.
November 2nd, 2018 15:54
Debsspot said:
Painful to read and see what your going through. I hope the expression is helping. Very eloquent for one so young.
I hope with all my hear you find a way through.
November 2nd, 2018 15:54
