Comments received on poems by Neville
How Far Do You Really Want to Go
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed this and especially the bit of mystique in the last line.
December 8th, 2018 11:29
Michael Edwards said:
Enjoyed this and especially the bit of mystique in the last line.
December 8th, 2018 11:29
How Far Do You Really Want to Go
orchidee said:
Same thing happened to me, despite me saying I only wanted to go as far as the shops on a No.7 bus! heehee. Swoon!
December 8th, 2018 08:27
orchidee said:
Same thing happened to me, despite me saying I only wanted to go as far as the shops on a No.7 bus! heehee. Swoon!
December 8th, 2018 08:27
A Travelling Man
sylviasearcher said:
I think I know a girl just like that, except the baking bread...
December 7th, 2018 08:54
sylviasearcher said:
I think I know a girl just like that, except the baking bread...
December 7th, 2018 08:54
Appetite for Words
sylviasearcher said:
I think I have this relentless appetite for words...
December 7th, 2018 08:47
sylviasearcher said:
I think I have this relentless appetite for words...
December 7th, 2018 08:47
What Do I Want From You
sylviasearcher said:
The repetition works well to create a sense of longing. Though I don\'t think I have experienced the things you write of. Beyond the folly of my own imagination.
December 7th, 2018 07:12
sylviasearcher said:
The repetition works well to create a sense of longing. Though I don\'t think I have experienced the things you write of. Beyond the folly of my own imagination.
December 7th, 2018 07:12
What Do I Want From You
Michael Edwards said:
When love departs - thankfully I married my first love and we are still together and still in love but nonetheless I recognise this fine write.
December 7th, 2018 04:33
Michael Edwards said:
When love departs - thankfully I married my first love and we are still together and still in love but nonetheless I recognise this fine write.
December 7th, 2018 04:33
What Do I Want From You
Fay Slimm. said:
So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away - - a poignant feel to this read Neville.
December 7th, 2018 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away - - a poignant feel to this read Neville.
December 7th, 2018 04:02
What Do I Want From You
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm is this about Polo mints? heehee.
December 7th, 2018 03:38
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Erm is this about Polo mints? heehee.
December 7th, 2018 03:38
No Pillow Required
Goldfinch60 said:
Very passionate write, certainly no pillow is required.
December 7th, 2018 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Very passionate write, certainly no pillow is required.
December 7th, 2018 02:25
No Pillow Required
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great write - we are waiting for that Part 2.
December 6th, 2018 13:51
Michael Edwards said:
Yes a great write - we are waiting for that Part 2.
December 6th, 2018 13:51
No Pillow Required
orchidee said:
I\'m always swooning. Maybe it should change to 50+ , for me anyway! lol. I\'ve a got an 18+ \'watchdog\'. Fido. He barks to warn me of anything swoony. He reads the poems first, of course! Much more of this from me and we\'ll all go barmy. lol.
December 6th, 2018 11:45
orchidee said:
I\'m always swooning. Maybe it should change to 50+ , for me anyway! lol. I\'ve a got an 18+ \'watchdog\'. Fido. He barks to warn me of anything swoony. He reads the poems first, of course! Much more of this from me and we\'ll all go barmy. lol.
December 6th, 2018 11:45
No Pillow Required
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow my hubby always prefers me to pillows so this creative imaginative poem of love reminds me of that and it is fantastic to read. Kudos.
Pleez do add a comment/thoughts/ review on my newest poem too.
December 6th, 2018 07:29
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow my hubby always prefers me to pillows so this creative imaginative poem of love reminds me of that and it is fantastic to read. Kudos.
Pleez do add a comment/thoughts/ review on my newest poem too.
December 6th, 2018 07:29
Cova
Michael Edwards said:
Well I do like this one a lot - an honest unpretentious write .
December 5th, 2018 04:34
Michael Edwards said:
Well I do like this one a lot - an honest unpretentious write .
December 5th, 2018 04:34
Cova
Fay Slimm. said:
You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with multi-linguistic Cova myself after this read. Thanks for sharing her.
December 5th, 2018 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with multi-linguistic Cova myself after this read. Thanks for sharing her.
December 5th, 2018 03:17
A Little Indiscretion
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting partners - - telling it as it is sometimes renews a forgotten time of happy union - - hope this poignant appeal hit the right mark Neville and the duo are now now makin\' whoopee again !! An engaging read .
December 4th, 2018 13:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting partners - - telling it as it is sometimes renews a forgotten time of happy union - - hope this poignant appeal hit the right mark Neville and the duo are now now makin\' whoopee again !! An engaging read .
December 4th, 2018 13:40
A Little Indiscretion
orchidee said:
You\'ll get me swooning with that \'familiar\' stuff! heehee.
December 4th, 2018 02:39
orchidee said:
You\'ll get me swooning with that \'familiar\' stuff! heehee.
December 4th, 2018 02:39
A Little Indiscretion
Neville said:
thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I guess these words, now captured here will likely remain long after I am gone and forgotten, and if so.. I will be happy..
December 4th, 2018 02:32
Neville said:
thank you sylviasearcher.. interesting is good and will do for me.. I guess these words, now captured here will likely remain long after I am gone and forgotten, and if so.. I will be happy..
December 4th, 2018 02:32
A Little Indiscretion
sylviasearcher said:
Interesting?
I\'m not convinced of how the words will remain \'long after you are forgotten’
It seems some ‘bruises’ never truly fade?
December 4th, 2018 02:26
sylviasearcher said:
Interesting?
I\'m not convinced of how the words will remain \'long after you are forgotten’
It seems some ‘bruises’ never truly fade?
December 4th, 2018 02:26
Long Shadows
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories so well portrayed in your wonderful words.
December 4th, 2018 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories so well portrayed in your wonderful words.
December 4th, 2018 01:13
Long Shadows
orchidee said:
Yes, enough to bring on a swoon for me. Then again, what doesn\'t bring on a swoon for me?! I shall not recover from \'erotica\' for at least a month! heehee. I should get out more, as they say! lol.
December 3rd, 2018 15:04
orchidee said:
Yes, enough to bring on a swoon for me. Then again, what doesn\'t bring on a swoon for me?! I shall not recover from \'erotica\' for at least a month! heehee. I should get out more, as they say! lol.
December 3rd, 2018 15:04
Long Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh tender the gentle erotica used here to depict a memory never forgotten - a gem of a read Neville.
December 3rd, 2018 09:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh tender the gentle erotica used here to depict a memory never forgotten - a gem of a read Neville.
December 3rd, 2018 09:50
Long Shadows
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
Long Shadows
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
sylviasearcher said:
It\'d strange I always read something very different in the words you have marked as erotic...
I really liked how the words lingered and paused on the thoughts in my mind
December 3rd, 2018 06:33
Autumn
Neville said:
indeed, I am a very good listener.. and thank you so much for your delightful written response to these words of mine.. much appreciated and blooming true.. Neville
December 3rd, 2018 04:51
Neville said:
indeed, I am a very good listener.. and thank you so much for your delightful written response to these words of mine.. much appreciated and blooming true.. Neville
December 3rd, 2018 04:51
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