Comments received on poems by Neville
Beneath The Bruises
NafisaSB said:
a very sensitive rendition straight from a woman\'s heart to your pen - and the readers..well done..
June 2nd, 2026 02:18
NafisaSB said:
a very sensitive rendition straight from a woman\'s heart to your pen - and the readers..well done..
June 2nd, 2026 02:18
Beneath The Bruises
NafisaSB said:
a very sensitive rendition straight from a woman\'s heart to your pen - and the readers..well done..
June 2nd, 2026 02:18
NafisaSB said:
a very sensitive rendition straight from a woman\'s heart to your pen - and the readers..well done..
June 2nd, 2026 02:18
Beneath The Bruises
rhmn_7 said:
At the end of a day, isn\'t love we all want? Great poem dear Neville!
May 31st, 2026 01:43
rhmn_7 said:
At the end of a day, isn\'t love we all want? Great poem dear Neville!
May 31st, 2026 01:43
Beneath The Bruises
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, “something / is awakening but / as yet, it / just stirs so gentle / and quietly” is the passage that stayed with me most. That slow awakening of selfhood and dignity feels incredibly real here...fragile, but alive. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, “something / is awakening but / as yet, it / just stirs so gentle / and quietly” is the passage that stayed with me most. That slow awakening of selfhood and dignity feels incredibly real here...fragile, but alive. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:13
Beneath The Bruises
Goldfinch60 said:
Sensitive write Neville, if only all were good in our world.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Sensitive write Neville, if only all were good in our world.
Andy
May 27th, 2026 01:54
A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy
NafisaSB said:
such a vivid and true depiction of what happens at such sales - i can well understand why one would not like to be part of the vulture pack....
May 27th, 2026 00:51
NafisaSB said:
such a vivid and true depiction of what happens at such sales - i can well understand why one would not like to be part of the vulture pack....
May 27th, 2026 00:51
Beneath The Bruises
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem addresses themes of suffering, strength, identity, and the longing for love and connection. It reflects on the woman\'s experience of pain, resilience, and the desire to be cherished and recognized.
May 26th, 2026 19:40
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem addresses themes of suffering, strength, identity, and the longing for love and connection. It reflects on the woman\'s experience of pain, resilience, and the desire to be cherished and recognized.
May 26th, 2026 19:40
Beneath The Bruises
arqios said:
True and strong. Personhood manifests in many various ways. To recognise that and esteem accordingly is an excellent first step in every encounter with others. 🕊️🙏
May 26th, 2026 18:10
arqios said:
True and strong. Personhood manifests in many various ways. To recognise that and esteem accordingly is an excellent first step in every encounter with others. 🕊️🙏
May 26th, 2026 18:10
Beneath The Bruises
Katie B. said:
A most tender yet powerful write. Well written, Neville.
May 26th, 2026 14:14
Katie B. said:
A most tender yet powerful write. Well written, Neville.
May 26th, 2026 14:14
Beneath The Bruises
orchidee said:
What goes on behind some doors, we may not know......
May 26th, 2026 10:02
orchidee said:
What goes on behind some doors, we may not know......
May 26th, 2026 10:02
Beneath The Bruises
sorenbarrett said:
So sensitive and real this poem touches the needs of an aging woman in a relationship that has worn too comfortable in its use and lost the shine of magic that is the dream of every young girl. So nicely done Neville a fave
May 26th, 2026 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
So sensitive and real this poem touches the needs of an aging woman in a relationship that has worn too comfortable in its use and lost the shine of magic that is the dream of every young girl. So nicely done Neville a fave
May 26th, 2026 08:14
A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp honesty in this—like watching the end of something familiar and realizing you don’t want to feed on what’s left of it.
And that walk away empty-handed says more about you than anything on those stripped shelves ever could.
May 26th, 2026 07:30
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sharp honesty in this—like watching the end of something familiar and realizing you don’t want to feed on what’s left of it.
And that walk away empty-handed says more about you than anything on those stripped shelves ever could.
May 26th, 2026 07:30
The Preciseness of Your Approximations
Friendship said:
Nicely written, you had me thinking about this poem! Your poem explores the complexity of human emotions and relationships, particularly the tension between admiration and distance. It reflects the nuances of affection for someone perceived as both special and emotionally reserved.
May 22nd, 2026 13:31
Friendship said:
Nicely written, you had me thinking about this poem! Your poem explores the complexity of human emotions and relationships, particularly the tension between admiration and distance. It reflects the nuances of affection for someone perceived as both special and emotionally reserved.
May 22nd, 2026 13:31
The Preciseness of Your Approximations
arqios said:
In the same playing field, close enough is good enough, proximal transactions... a delight to read. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 07:44
arqios said:
In the same playing field, close enough is good enough, proximal transactions... a delight to read. 🕊️🙏
May 22nd, 2026 07:44
The Preciseness of Your Approximations
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem Neville life is based on approximations, educated guesses, hunches you may say. A basketball shot, a cricket swing of the bat, the stock market, a word in a poem, a ventured kiss and sometimes it is a while before we see the results. A wistful and wonderful write that takes a time to soak in. a fave my friend
May 22nd, 2026 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
Love this poem Neville life is based on approximations, educated guesses, hunches you may say. A basketball shot, a cricket swing of the bat, the stock market, a word in a poem, a ventured kiss and sometimes it is a while before we see the results. A wistful and wonderful write that takes a time to soak in. a fave my friend
May 22nd, 2026 07:42
A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understood Neville, we are lucky to not have to feed like thatg.
Andy
May 21st, 2026 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Completely understood Neville, we are lucky to not have to feed like thatg.
Andy
May 21st, 2026 01:51
A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy
Doggerel Dave said:
A piece of advice my dear old Dad left me which I was not forced to reject in the light of later experience, was: “A bargain is only a bargain if you really needed the purchase in the first place”.
I paid a very brief visit to a cheap n cheerful outlet for the lower end of the rag trade. While passing, I popped in out of curiosity. Among the frenzied throng I walked briefly on a thick carpet of clothing presumably selected and swiftly discarded. A five (maybe four) minute visit was quite enough.
You enabled me to relate that story, and it is a relief to spit it out, Neville.
May 20th, 2026 17:44
Doggerel Dave said:
A piece of advice my dear old Dad left me which I was not forced to reject in the light of later experience, was: “A bargain is only a bargain if you really needed the purchase in the first place”.
I paid a very brief visit to a cheap n cheerful outlet for the lower end of the rag trade. While passing, I popped in out of curiosity. Among the frenzied throng I walked briefly on a thick carpet of clothing presumably selected and swiftly discarded. A five (maybe four) minute visit was quite enough.
You enabled me to relate that story, and it is a relief to spit it out, Neville.
May 20th, 2026 17:44
A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, what a sharp and painfully observant poem this is. The retail liquidation becomes something much larger here...a portrait of appetite, decay, and the uneasy realization of how quickly sentiment gets consumed once scarcity enters the room. The vulture imagery is especially effective because the speaker recognizes themselves within it for a moment before rejecting it. That final image of leaving empty handed carries real moral and emotional weight. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, what a sharp and painfully observant poem this is. The retail liquidation becomes something much larger here...a portrait of appetite, decay, and the uneasy realization of how quickly sentiment gets consumed once scarcity enters the room. The vulture imagery is especially effective because the speaker recognizes themselves within it for a moment before rejecting it. That final image of leaving empty handed carries real moral and emotional weight. Excellent write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 20th, 2026 13:38
A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy
sorenbarrett said:
A carcass in the field picked by vultures is not a very appetizing sight. Nicely written Neville it is sad to watch what was a noble beast fall prey to modern predators. Well written my friend
May 20th, 2026 10:08
sorenbarrett said:
A carcass in the field picked by vultures is not a very appetizing sight. Nicely written Neville it is sad to watch what was a noble beast fall prey to modern predators. Well written my friend
May 20th, 2026 10:08
A Few Notes on A Feeding Frenzy
Friendship said:
I know this feeling very well. Your poem revolves around the themes of consumerism, loss, and moral conflict. It captures the experience of witnessing a retail store\'s liquidation sale, emphasizing the frenzy of shoppers as they rush to obtain discounted items.
May 20th, 2026 08:03
Friendship said:
I know this feeling very well. Your poem revolves around the themes of consumerism, loss, and moral conflict. It captures the experience of witnessing a retail store\'s liquidation sale, emphasizing the frenzy of shoppers as they rush to obtain discounted items.
May 20th, 2026 08:03
Late Harvest in Progress
NafisaSB said:
adolescent love is so sweet - well described
May 20th, 2026 00:51
NafisaSB said:
adolescent love is so sweet - well described
May 20th, 2026 00:51
Late Harvest in Progress
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab muses poem recollection, memories, romantic sighs. Kudos fir this superb one!
Long time no see Poet Neville,
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 13:25
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fab muses poem recollection, memories, romantic sighs. Kudos fir this superb one!
Long time no see Poet Neville,
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 13:25
Late Harvest in Progress
Thomas W Case said:
You’ve got that old ache wrapped in autumn light here—memory that still smells of apples and bad decisions.
There’s a rough, honest tenderness in how youth hears a warning and walks straight into it anyway.
May 19th, 2026 09:13
Thomas W Case said:
You’ve got that old ache wrapped in autumn light here—memory that still smells of apples and bad decisions.
There’s a rough, honest tenderness in how youth hears a warning and walks straight into it anyway.
May 19th, 2026 09:13
While These Words May Not Be Perfect
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a quiet morning promise spoken before the world wakes up, soft and unguarded,
There’s a steadiness in it—love set down simply, like something true enough it doesn’t need decoration.
May 17th, 2026 09:00
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like a quiet morning promise spoken before the world wakes up, soft and unguarded,
There’s a steadiness in it—love set down simply, like something true enough it doesn’t need decoration.
May 17th, 2026 09:00
Late Harvest in Progress
Goldfinch60 said:
Young love can be so wonderful Neville but it may not always last.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Young love can be so wonderful Neville but it may not always last.
Andy
May 17th, 2026 01:25
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