Comments received on poems by Neville
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Goldfinch60 said:
\"love, honour, loyalty and compassion\" seem to have been cast adrift in much of our world Neville.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
\"love, honour, loyalty and compassion\" seem to have been cast adrift in much of our world Neville.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:47
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re you, birth to death, rascal or gentleman, and beloved by whom know to cherish you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2026 19:24
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re you, birth to death, rascal or gentleman, and beloved by whom know to cherish you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 5th, 2026 19:24
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Poetic Dan said:
Unpredictable pattern that\'s repeated I feel as time goes on I quickly question the real fact I know nothing other than the actions I take! It\'s all been burning for a long time and I am just the mold of this point in creation. Nature will always live on! Above or under the sea! I think I\'ve drifted far from my original thoughts as there are endless rabbit holes to explore nowadays.
Anyway, enjoyed that. Keep sailing my friend
May 5th, 2026 14:50
Poetic Dan said:
Unpredictable pattern that\'s repeated I feel as time goes on I quickly question the real fact I know nothing other than the actions I take! It\'s all been burning for a long time and I am just the mold of this point in creation. Nature will always live on! Above or under the sea! I think I\'ve drifted far from my original thoughts as there are endless rabbit holes to explore nowadays.
Anyway, enjoyed that. Keep sailing my friend
May 5th, 2026 14:50
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I’ve felt that kind of circling before…where things keep moving but nothing really settles. And then that shift into something bigger…something beyond just the self…hit close. You captured that tension well. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ in fact you get a whole murder of 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛
SIDE NOTE: Would you expect anything less from me other than a murder? Bwahahaha 😱 Just kidding of course, 🤣 but it does make me want to watch The Traitors or play Clue. Sigh. My apologies for this diversion.🤣 Great poem, mate!
May 5th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, I’ve felt that kind of circling before…where things keep moving but nothing really settles. And then that shift into something bigger…something beyond just the self…hit close. You captured that tension well. Wonderfully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ in fact you get a whole murder of 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛
SIDE NOTE: Would you expect anything less from me other than a murder? Bwahahaha 😱 Just kidding of course, 🤣 but it does make me want to watch The Traitors or play Clue. Sigh. My apologies for this diversion.🤣 Great poem, mate!
May 5th, 2026 10:19
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a restless honesty here that feels lived-in, like someone watching their own mind from the edges and still telling the truth about it.
It drifts from the personal into the planetary in a way that feels heavy, grounded, and quietly human.
May 5th, 2026 07:36
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a restless honesty here that feels lived-in, like someone watching their own mind from the edges and still telling the truth about it.
It drifts from the personal into the planetary in a way that feels heavy, grounded, and quietly human.
May 5th, 2026 07:36
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Friendship said:
Well written, not sure if I got what you are saying. Your poem \"Four Quiet Seasons\" reflects on the cyclical nature of existence, comparing human behavior and the changing seasons to illustrate how individuals navigate life’s unpredictable journey. You seem to highlight the tension between nature’s resilience and humanity’s destructive tendencies, particularly driven by greed and a loss of empathy. You had me thinking about this poem.
May 5th, 2026 05:27
Friendship said:
Well written, not sure if I got what you are saying. Your poem \"Four Quiet Seasons\" reflects on the cyclical nature of existence, comparing human behavior and the changing seasons to illustrate how individuals navigate life’s unpredictable journey. You seem to highlight the tension between nature’s resilience and humanity’s destructive tendencies, particularly driven by greed and a loss of empathy. You had me thinking about this poem.
May 5th, 2026 05:27
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to be challenged here, Neville, other than to remark that it is not ‘man’s’ or ‘us’ or ‘we’ but the increasing accumulation of wealth in fewer hands, the Mad Kings already referred to here and the self-serving acquiescence of enough interests to retain the status quo.
May 5th, 2026 04:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing to be challenged here, Neville, other than to remark that it is not ‘man’s’ or ‘us’ or ‘we’ but the increasing accumulation of wealth in fewer hands, the Mad Kings already referred to here and the self-serving acquiescence of enough interests to retain the status quo.
May 5th, 2026 04:42
Four Quiet Seasons One Loud Man
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately seems tis true. Never the less tis also true that out there, there are a few good souls left. Good write Neville my friend
May 5th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately seems tis true. Never the less tis also true that out there, there are a few good souls left. Good write Neville my friend
May 5th, 2026 04:06
On a Road to Knossos
NafisaSB said:
you paint such a beautiful picture that one wants to visit it asap...a great write..
May 4th, 2026 23:47
NafisaSB said:
you paint such a beautiful picture that one wants to visit it asap...a great write..
May 4th, 2026 23:47
On a Road to Knossos
Poetic Dan said:
Been some time but glad to be taken into the unknown with your mind that glows.
May 3rd, 2026 01:12
Poetic Dan said:
Been some time but glad to be taken into the unknown with your mind that glows.
May 3rd, 2026 01:12
On a Road to Knossos
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a gentle immersion here…the way the place unfolds through both feeling and presence. It’s not just a setting, it’s an experience that settles into you. That sense of quiet wonder and appreciation really lingers. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a gentle immersion here…the way the place unfolds through both feeling and presence. It’s not just a setting, it’s an experience that settles into you. That sense of quiet wonder and appreciation really lingers. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 29th, 2026 23:34
On a Road to Knossos
Poetic Licence said:
Mesmerized by the beauty, mind freed by the connection to the surroundings and the heart and soul in peace, when as one with nature, wonderful write, pleasure to read
April 29th, 2026 22:20
Poetic Licence said:
Mesmerized by the beauty, mind freed by the connection to the surroundings and the heart and soul in peace, when as one with nature, wonderful write, pleasure to read
April 29th, 2026 22:20
On a Road to Knossos
arqios said:
Even the bare beauty would transport the seeing eye! Goos show, N🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:37
arqios said:
Even the bare beauty would transport the seeing eye! Goos show, N🕊️🙏
April 29th, 2026 19:37
On a Road to Knossos
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this is a beautiful piece and image so nicely worded. I can see it in my mind’s eye.
April 29th, 2026 17:23
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this is a beautiful piece and image so nicely worded. I can see it in my mind’s eye.
April 29th, 2026 17:23
On a Road to Knossos
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, the way the world once was, perhaps, and once more with feeling, perhaps still should be.
Did you invest?
April 29th, 2026 16:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Neville, the way the world once was, perhaps, and once more with feeling, perhaps still should be.
Did you invest?
April 29th, 2026 16:58
On a Road to Knossos
Friendship said:
lovely written. Your poem aims to capture a moment of beauty and connection with the land, celebrating the simple joys of life and the profound impact of nature on the human spirit.
April 29th, 2026 12:14
Friendship said:
lovely written. Your poem aims to capture a moment of beauty and connection with the land, celebrating the simple joys of life and the profound impact of nature on the human spirit.
April 29th, 2026 12:14
Tiny Blue Moments
Doggerel Dave said:
Slow and steady wins the race, but a year? Couldn\'t you have notched up your frequent flyer points at faster rate than that?
Really enjoyed the detail here, and I\'m going to seek out a blue vein (and in this instance only I don\'t mean cheese) whenever I get the chance...if ever...
April 26th, 2026 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Slow and steady wins the race, but a year? Couldn\'t you have notched up your frequent flyer points at faster rate than that?
Really enjoyed the detail here, and I\'m going to seek out a blue vein (and in this instance only I don\'t mean cheese) whenever I get the chance...if ever...
April 26th, 2026 18:36
Tiny Blue Moments
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a quiet intimacy running through this…built out of small moments that refuse to stay small. That thread of blue carries everything…memory, longing, and what’s left unsaid. By the end, it feels less like reflection and more like something still unfolding. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, there’s a quiet intimacy running through this…built out of small moments that refuse to stay small. That thread of blue carries everything…memory, longing, and what’s left unsaid. By the end, it feels less like reflection and more like something still unfolding. Great job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 26th, 2026 09:16
Tiny Blue Moments
sorenbarrett said:
This journey starts before its beginning and yet has no ending it is an ongoing trip still underway. Nicely written my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:22
sorenbarrett said:
This journey starts before its beginning and yet has no ending it is an ongoing trip still underway. Nicely written my friend
April 26th, 2026 06:22
Tiny Blue Moments
arqios said:
Something shared, breathed in and threaded through so beautifully 🕊️🙏
April 26th, 2026 06:11
arqios said:
Something shared, breathed in and threaded through so beautifully 🕊️🙏
April 26th, 2026 06:11
For a Child
sorenbarrett said:
A soft promise in a poem that seems a pledge as well. Nicely done my friend. Sorry for the delayed response I have been traveling for the past two days with no internet access
April 8th, 2026 15:40
sorenbarrett said:
A soft promise in a poem that seems a pledge as well. Nicely done my friend. Sorry for the delayed response I have been traveling for the past two days with no internet access
April 8th, 2026 15:40
For a Child
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Then they will live forever !
Nice one
April 8th, 2026 15:35
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Then they will live forever !
Nice one
April 8th, 2026 15:35
For a Child
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem centers on the profound love and commitment a speaker feels for a child, likely a lost or unborn one. The poet expresses a deep sense of responsibility to live fully and meaningfully in honor of this child, acknowledging the fragility of life. Yet you encompass themes of love, memory, loss, and the desire for legacy, suggesting an emotional bond that transcends mortality.
April 8th, 2026 15:20
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem centers on the profound love and commitment a speaker feels for a child, likely a lost or unborn one. The poet expresses a deep sense of responsibility to live fully and meaningfully in honor of this child, acknowledging the fragility of life. Yet you encompass themes of love, memory, loss, and the desire for legacy, suggesting an emotional bond that transcends mortality.
April 8th, 2026 15:20
For a Child
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this really lands…that quiet vow to carry forward, especially in that promise to live those tomorrows on their behalf. It feels intimate and enduring without needing to name more. There’s something deeply moving in that. Beautiful write, my friend. And oooh. A new anthology in the works. Yesss!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this really lands…that quiet vow to carry forward, especially in that promise to live those tomorrows on their behalf. It feels intimate and enduring without needing to name more. There’s something deeply moving in that. Beautiful write, my friend. And oooh. A new anthology in the works. Yesss!!! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 8th, 2026 08:14
For a Child
Katie B. said:
Wow! This is heavy and heart-felt. It is a testimony to the enduring power of love. May peace be with you.
April 8th, 2026 04:43
Katie B. said:
Wow! This is heavy and heart-felt. It is a testimony to the enduring power of love. May peace be with you.
April 8th, 2026 04:43
The Impact of Sudden Unexpected Realisation
NafisaSB said:
🤩 wow. The fragility of fleeting time is well documented
April 7th, 2026 03:24
NafisaSB said:
🤩 wow. The fragility of fleeting time is well documented
April 7th, 2026 03:24
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