Comments received on poems by Neville
With Only Nine Trees Left
rhmn_7 said:
Yes, we have f\'up big time but nature will come back despite all I want to believe. Nicely written Neville!
October 26th, 2025 15:47
rhmn_7 said:
Yes, we have f\'up big time but nature will come back despite all I want to believe. Nicely written Neville!
October 26th, 2025 15:47
With Only Nine Trees Left
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem explores themes of environmental degradation and the profound sense of loss associated with the destruction of nature. It reflects on humanity\'s failure to protect the environment, emphasizing a feeling of despair regarding the future of the planet.
October 24th, 2025 14:11
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem explores themes of environmental degradation and the profound sense of loss associated with the destruction of nature. It reflects on humanity\'s failure to protect the environment, emphasizing a feeling of despair regarding the future of the planet.
October 24th, 2025 14:11
With Only Nine Trees Left
rebellion_in_sanity said:
“Extraordinarily well screwed—so to speak. I find the injection of that one word quite… Extraordinary. Kindly pardon my simple mind. The theme is close to my heart, and I confess to a persistent pessimism. Fortunately—or unfortunately—the poem seemed to echo my bleak faith in our venerable leaders.
Why does the word venerable bring to mind venereal disease? Kindly pardon my poor English.
October 24th, 2025 09:32
rebellion_in_sanity said:
“Extraordinarily well screwed—so to speak. I find the injection of that one word quite… Extraordinary. Kindly pardon my simple mind. The theme is close to my heart, and I confess to a persistent pessimism. Fortunately—or unfortunately—the poem seemed to echo my bleak faith in our venerable leaders.
Why does the word venerable bring to mind venereal disease? Kindly pardon my poor English.
October 24th, 2025 09:32
With No Hint of An End
NafisaSB said:
romantic, lovely, and straight from the heart...enjoyed it
October 24th, 2025 01:12
NafisaSB said:
romantic, lovely, and straight from the heart...enjoyed it
October 24th, 2025 01:12
With Only Nine Trees Left
Poetic Licence said:
As sad as it is we proclaim to be an intelligent species, yet we put so much effort into destroying the very fabric of what gives us life. I hope nature finds a way to recover from our continued destruction of it, but that may well be in vein, hope you keeping well
October 23rd, 2025 19:27
Poetic Licence said:
As sad as it is we proclaim to be an intelligent species, yet we put so much effort into destroying the very fabric of what gives us life. I hope nature finds a way to recover from our continued destruction of it, but that may well be in vein, hope you keeping well
October 23rd, 2025 19:27
With Only Nine Trees Left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees left” is both prophecy and elegy...a line that hums with despair and bitter humor. The world we failed still finds her voice in yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees left” is both prophecy and elegy...a line that hums with despair and bitter humor. The world we failed still finds her voice in yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:29
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
orchidee said:
How are the juxtas now?! Enough, cease this drivel of comments, Fido says to me. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
orchidee said:
How are the juxtas now?! Enough, cease this drivel of comments, Fido says to me. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
With No Hint of An End
orchidee said:
Is Ken Simm related to the Sim card in phones, etc? I talk some rubbish, if I say so myself! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:58
orchidee said:
Is Ken Simm related to the Sim card in phones, etc? I talk some rubbish, if I say so myself! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:58
Why Nothing Falls Together
orchidee said:
KP only shed tears cos she had run out of money for botox! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:57
orchidee said:
KP only shed tears cos she had run out of money for botox! lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:57
With Only Nine Trees Left
orchidee said:
And KP\'s no help either. She\'s got 8 of those 9 trees in her garden! I\'m becoming nuttier than a............!
October 23rd, 2025 13:56
orchidee said:
And KP\'s no help either. She\'s got 8 of those 9 trees in her garden! I\'m becoming nuttier than a............!
October 23rd, 2025 13:56
With Only Nine Trees Left
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, mankind is destroying our world and so few in power seem to care.
Andy
October 23rd, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Neville, mankind is destroying our world and so few in power seem to care.
Andy
October 23rd, 2025 01:26
With Only Nine Trees Left
sorenbarrett said:
Mother earth abused, used, left ravished and broken by its children. An error in evolution coming to a dead end. Maybe with time Gaea will spawn a better species to resurrect a dying earth. Nicely done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Mother earth abused, used, left ravished and broken by its children. An error in evolution coming to a dead end. Maybe with time Gaea will spawn a better species to resurrect a dying earth. Nicely done my friend
October 22nd, 2025 08:30
Why Nothing Falls Together
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of fleeting time can bring so much emotion to us Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Memories of fleeting time can bring so much emotion to us Neville.
Andy
October 22nd, 2025 01:11
Why Nothing Falls Together
jarcher54 said:
All I can say is, you made me cry. I can\'t even explain why. Poetry I guess...
October 22nd, 2025 00:01
jarcher54 said:
All I can say is, you made me cry. I can\'t even explain why. Poetry I guess...
October 22nd, 2025 00:01
Why Nothing Falls Together
Doggerel Dave said:
Fragmented memories recollected in tranquility well captured here - I know, I have them and they aren\'t so very different beyond minor particular details...Enjoyed, Neville.
October 21st, 2025 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Fragmented memories recollected in tranquility well captured here - I know, I have them and they aren\'t so very different beyond minor particular details...Enjoyed, Neville.
October 21st, 2025 19:44
Why Nothing Falls Together
orchidee said:
Of course, my life fell apart the day I married KP! lol. But you knew that - yes?
October 21st, 2025 14:05
orchidee said:
Of course, my life fell apart the day I married KP! lol. But you knew that - yes?
October 21st, 2025 14:05
Why Nothing Falls Together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions and our collective unconscious”...is stunning. You blur philosophy and emotion until they fuse. I loved every bit of this, my dear Neville! Well done and a fave, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2025 07:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That phrase...“a union occurs somewhere between my memories, perceptions and our collective unconscious”...is stunning. You blur philosophy and emotion until they fuse. I loved every bit of this, my dear Neville! Well done and a fave, mate! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 21st, 2025 07:22
Why Nothing Falls Together
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so charged with quiet feeling for any that have experienced it that it can not help but be poetic and a fave. Well written my friend
October 21st, 2025 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so charged with quiet feeling for any that have experienced it that it can not help but be poetic and a fave. Well written my friend
October 21st, 2025 06:56
With No Hint of An End
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic words Neville, may they have some truth in them.
Andy
October 18th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful romantic words Neville, may they have some truth in them.
Andy
October 18th, 2025 01:48
With No Hint of An End
Doggerel Dave said:
Sweet nothings (them words - I\'ll have \'em, please!) pleasant afternoon, no hint of Sturm und Drang . Yet after the final line you are (your comments) getting rather cagey....
Enjoyed the trip though, Neville.
October 17th, 2025 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Sweet nothings (them words - I\'ll have \'em, please!) pleasant afternoon, no hint of Sturm und Drang . Yet after the final line you are (your comments) getting rather cagey....
Enjoyed the trip though, Neville.
October 17th, 2025 17:02
With No Hint of An End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing an end. “Be light as green lacewings wings”...that’s poetry at its most tactile. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ In fact. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐦⬛ and I had to throw a crow in too! 🤷♂️🤣
October 17th, 2025 10:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this reads like seafoam…each image drifting, circling, refusing an end. “Be light as green lacewings wings”...that’s poetry at its most tactile. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ In fact. 🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐧🐦⬛ and I had to throw a crow in too! 🤷♂️🤣
October 17th, 2025 10:55
With No Hint of An End
Poetic Licence said:
Wow that is simply a beautiful write, has such an intimate, tender and calming feel to it, a real pleasure to read
October 17th, 2025 09:55
Poetic Licence said:
Wow that is simply a beautiful write, has such an intimate, tender and calming feel to it, a real pleasure to read
October 17th, 2025 09:55
With No Hint of An End
arqios said:
Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of sea, wind, and harbour makes the intimacy feel timeless, like words and love circling forever with no beginning or end. It’s lush, sensual, and dreamlike. 🙏🕊️
October 17th, 2025 08:13
arqios said:
Amazing how this poem loops back on itself, Neville. How the imagery of sea, wind, and harbour makes the intimacy feel timeless, like words and love circling forever with no beginning or end. It’s lush, sensual, and dreamlike. 🙏🕊️
October 17th, 2025 08:13
With No Hint of An End
sorenbarrett said:
Romance tis grand and love grander still. As in the poem there is no beginning, middle or end to love that bounces within and out its shell nor are there words that do it justice. With any good fortune we will all live within that harbor of peace with the sea and the breezes on lacewings forever green and young for love has no age and with it time has no effect. A lovely poem Neville
October 17th, 2025 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Romance tis grand and love grander still. As in the poem there is no beginning, middle or end to love that bounces within and out its shell nor are there words that do it justice. With any good fortune we will all live within that harbor of peace with the sea and the breezes on lacewings forever green and young for love has no age and with it time has no effect. A lovely poem Neville
October 17th, 2025 07:34
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Neil Higgins said:
Neville.Great poem my friend.And,er,yes.I am back 😱
October 16th, 2025 05:58
Neil Higgins said:
Neville.Great poem my friend.And,er,yes.I am back 😱
October 16th, 2025 05:58
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding into one rhythm. You turn misunderstanding into connection, and that’s its own kind of poetry. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is smart, intimate writing…wordplay and desire folding into one rhythm. You turn misunderstanding into connection, and that’s its own kind of poetry. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 14th, 2025 08:00
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a juxta like ya can beat an egg? And what am I on about? You\'re rambling again, says Fido to me! lol.
October 14th, 2025 01:59
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a juxta like ya can beat an egg? And what am I on about? You\'re rambling again, says Fido to me! lol.
October 14th, 2025 01:59
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
Doggerel Dave said:
Connotations mean a lot.......... cor, fergit poetry, that could almost be the start of a song.... did use the term \'almost\'....
Advice to get out more duly noted, Neville.....
October 13th, 2025 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Connotations mean a lot.......... cor, fergit poetry, that could almost be the start of a song.... did use the term \'almost\'....
Advice to get out more duly noted, Neville.....
October 13th, 2025 17:02
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