Comments received on poems by Neville
Some Kind of African Life
NafisaSB said:
the experience seems sorrowful and devastating; but the message learnt will remain for a lifetime, and slowly one learns to accept the inevitable, and cease grieving, and get ready to move forward or retaliate. wishing success in whichever course chosen
July 15th, 2025 23:47
NafisaSB said:
the experience seems sorrowful and devastating; but the message learnt will remain for a lifetime, and slowly one learns to accept the inevitable, and cease grieving, and get ready to move forward or retaliate. wishing success in whichever course chosen
July 15th, 2025 23:47
Some Kind of African Life
Cassie58 said:
To those who worked on him and didn’t give up I give my eternal thanks 💜
July 12th, 2025 07:25
Cassie58 said:
To those who worked on him and didn’t give up I give my eternal thanks 💜
July 12th, 2025 07:25
One More Open Verdict For the Road
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, this makes me think deeply. There are so many ways people fall, in popularity, in love, in status, or off the wagon. These are mere phrases. People can also fall physically. I\'m reaching, but I think you intend to mean, in or out, of love. Maybe it\'s just me but why write about someone just falling physically. Maybe then, she was not sure, and fell in and out, and in again. As to being \"pushed,\" well, some outside influence perhaps. There that\'s what I read into it. Must say though, I enjoyed the read. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 15:01
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, this makes me think deeply. There are so many ways people fall, in popularity, in love, in status, or off the wagon. These are mere phrases. People can also fall physically. I\'m reaching, but I think you intend to mean, in or out, of love. Maybe it\'s just me but why write about someone just falling physically. Maybe then, she was not sure, and fell in and out, and in again. As to being \"pushed,\" well, some outside influence perhaps. There that\'s what I read into it. Must say though, I enjoyed the read. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 15:01
Some Kind of African Life
Thomas W Case said:
Good to see you back. Great writing.
July 10th, 2025 08:14
Thomas W Case said:
Good to see you back. Great writing.
July 10th, 2025 08:14
Some Kind of African Life
Doggerel Dave said:
More scratching around ...and...found ya... Matters Arising: To be clear here - \'him\' = \'I\'?
Take bloody good care of yourself, whatever.
PS :Can\'t fave - Its horrendous.
July 9th, 2025 18:52
Doggerel Dave said:
More scratching around ...and...found ya... Matters Arising: To be clear here - \'him\' = \'I\'?
Take bloody good care of yourself, whatever.
PS :Can\'t fave - Its horrendous.
July 9th, 2025 18:52
Some Kind of African Life
MendedFences27 said:
Hey, welcome back. Missed your poetry. Hope this poem wasn\'t why you were absent for so long. My mind thought you were probably working on another book.
Your poem paints a dreadfully scary episode for someone\'s life. It reads as a straightforward depiction of what happened and of his response. As always it is clear and concise.
Once again, welcome back and AGTs. - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 11:57
MendedFences27 said:
Hey, welcome back. Missed your poetry. Hope this poem wasn\'t why you were absent for so long. My mind thought you were probably working on another book.
Your poem paints a dreadfully scary episode for someone\'s life. It reads as a straightforward depiction of what happened and of his response. As always it is clear and concise.
Once again, welcome back and AGTs. - Phil A.
July 9th, 2025 11:57
Some Kind of African Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville…my dear poetic friend—it’s so good to see your voice again. I cannot remember if I sent you a PM or not, but I’ve thought of you more than once in your absence, sent quiet prayers your way, and hoped you were well. And then this…raw, redemptive, and pulsing with mercy. That closing vow? Brought tears to my eyes. Welcome back, my friend! You were missed. 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 10:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville…my dear poetic friend—it’s so good to see your voice again. I cannot remember if I sent you a PM or not, but I’ve thought of you more than once in your absence, sent quiet prayers your way, and hoped you were well. And then this…raw, redemptive, and pulsing with mercy. That closing vow? Brought tears to my eyes. Welcome back, my friend! You were missed. 🌹👏
July 9th, 2025 10:13
Some Kind of African Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Such dark times Neville, I hope the light is now with you and that all is well. Glad to see you back here.
Andy
July 9th, 2025 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Such dark times Neville, I hope the light is now with you and that all is well. Glad to see you back here.
Andy
July 9th, 2025 01:27
Some Kind of African Life
arqios said:
Ah, too long of a while! Good to have you back here🕊🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 19:09
arqios said:
Ah, too long of a while! Good to have you back here🕊🙏🏻
July 8th, 2025 19:09
Some Kind of African Life
Bella Shepard said:
It looks like we\'ve both returned to the fold. What a remarkable and terrifying story, sadly our world becomes more violent. Wishing you much peace and strength my friend.
July 8th, 2025 15:52
Bella Shepard said:
It looks like we\'ve both returned to the fold. What a remarkable and terrifying story, sadly our world becomes more violent. Wishing you much peace and strength my friend.
July 8th, 2025 15:52
Some Kind of African Life
orchidee said:
Good write N. I was just deleting you - oops! Old e-mails, I mean! lol.
July 8th, 2025 11:57
orchidee said:
Good write N. I was just deleting you - oops! Old e-mails, I mean! lol.
July 8th, 2025 11:57
Some Kind of African Life
sorenbarrett said:
Been worried about you, checked other sites and asked around but nothing to be found. So glad that your are back seeing your poem nearly gave me a heart attack. I hope that this poem is not a personal story but whether or not it shines in all its glory. Worried that you might have been in your grave I give this poem a fave
July 8th, 2025 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Been worried about you, checked other sites and asked around but nothing to be found. So glad that your are back seeing your poem nearly gave me a heart attack. I hope that this poem is not a personal story but whether or not it shines in all its glory. Worried that you might have been in your grave I give this poem a fave
July 8th, 2025 09:00
Some Kind of African Life
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, he\'s damned determined, albeit, I canna guess why on earth the dark continent owns such a sway on him. Adroitly rendered with your capable expertise, tastefully overburdened with excellent imagery, and haunted by a ghastly, intriguing poignancy, thank you very much for sharing! I\'m happy to have you back with us!
July 8th, 2025 08:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, he\'s damned determined, albeit, I canna guess why on earth the dark continent owns such a sway on him. Adroitly rendered with your capable expertise, tastefully overburdened with excellent imagery, and haunted by a ghastly, intriguing poignancy, thank you very much for sharing! I\'m happy to have you back with us!
July 8th, 2025 08:14
Some Kind of African Life
Poetic Licence said:
I have the sense this is a true story, it sounds familier, nicely expressed write, good to see you back, hope all is good
July 8th, 2025 08:12
Poetic Licence said:
I have the sense this is a true story, it sounds familier, nicely expressed write, good to see you back, hope all is good
July 8th, 2025 08:12
One More Open Verdict For the Road
SureshG said:
Contemplate on what the POET is thinking,
Or maybe just enjoy the mystery woven so intricately
June 28th, 2025 00:33
SureshG said:
Contemplate on what the POET is thinking,
Or maybe just enjoy the mystery woven so intricately
June 28th, 2025 00:33
The Weight of Enlightenment
SureshG said:
To live and let live,
To share, where receptive,
To learn to walk away, without confrontation.
And then maybe, just maybe I too will be enlightened like you.
May 30th, 2025 20:01
SureshG said:
To live and let live,
To share, where receptive,
To learn to walk away, without confrontation.
And then maybe, just maybe I too will be enlightened like you.
May 30th, 2025 20:01
One More Open Verdict For the Road
Parisab said:
She was looking for a safe place to land on and fell on her head instead! How romance takes a funny turn 😅great to say hi again friend ☺️
May 17th, 2025 19:20
Parisab said:
She was looking for a safe place to land on and fell on her head instead! How romance takes a funny turn 😅great to say hi again friend ☺️
May 17th, 2025 19:20
The Weight of Enlightenment
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Short, sweet ... but puzzling. It\'s like a dish not often tasted, leaving a lingering aftertaste that makes one unconsciously wonder—what was that?\"
May 2nd, 2025 22:59
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Short, sweet ... but puzzling. It\'s like a dish not often tasted, leaving a lingering aftertaste that makes one unconsciously wonder—what was that?\"
May 2nd, 2025 22:59
One More Open Verdict For the Road
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... did NOT see that tragic end coming! Master of the unexpected, as usual, sir.
April 30th, 2025 17:04
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... did NOT see that tragic end coming! Master of the unexpected, as usual, sir.
April 30th, 2025 17:04
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
NafisaSB said:
sentimental, beautiful and totally awesome
enjoyed the read
April 20th, 2025 23:18
NafisaSB said:
sentimental, beautiful and totally awesome
enjoyed the read
April 20th, 2025 23:18
The Weight of Enlightenment
jarcher54 said:
As we get older, most of us figure out there\'s less value in getting and more in giving. I think some mistake it as wisdom, but really there\'s just not much time left to enjoy what we get, while are gives live on after us. I have become totally addicted to giving in my dotage. I am lucky enough to be able to be generous.
April 20th, 2025 19:13
jarcher54 said:
As we get older, most of us figure out there\'s less value in getting and more in giving. I think some mistake it as wisdom, but really there\'s just not much time left to enjoy what we get, while are gives live on after us. I have become totally addicted to giving in my dotage. I am lucky enough to be able to be generous.
April 20th, 2025 19:13
The Weight of Enlightenment
spilleronsheet said:
What is right? What is wrong? Aren’t they all perception of mind…we truly live in rosy shades of time….good one dear Neville
April 3rd, 2025 15:02
spilleronsheet said:
What is right? What is wrong? Aren’t they all perception of mind…we truly live in rosy shades of time….good one dear Neville
April 3rd, 2025 15:02
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t know wheter to be sad for them being on the z or smile at the humourous delivery. Perhaps, this is what true poetry is. Bravo 👏👌
March 29th, 2025 10:29
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t know wheter to be sad for them being on the z or smile at the humourous delivery. Perhaps, this is what true poetry is. Bravo 👏👌
March 29th, 2025 10:29
The Weight of Enlightenment
cellinic said:
A wise and sincere statement, Neville! Hello!
March 27th, 2025 21:33
cellinic said:
A wise and sincere statement, Neville! Hello!
March 27th, 2025 21:33
The Weight of Enlightenment
NafisaSB said:
you have truly nailed it - it does help when one can forgive , forget, and share
March 23rd, 2025 23:43
NafisaSB said:
you have truly nailed it - it does help when one can forgive , forget, and share
March 23rd, 2025 23:43
Just Me, Half a Love Song and An Idiopathic Itch
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! What mood am I in that you\'ve like, made me smile ear to ear upon concluding this characteristic pretty number from you?! What a gas! You\'re too fun and almost too much for me. Delightfully rendered with grand imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I do so love it.
March 23rd, 2025 10:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! What mood am I in that you\'ve like, made me smile ear to ear upon concluding this characteristic pretty number from you?! What a gas! You\'re too fun and almost too much for me. Delightfully rendered with grand imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I do so love it.
March 23rd, 2025 10:57
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