Comments received on poems by Neville
Sunday School Afternoons
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sunday School was a staple in my life. My mom was a Sunday School teacher. Truthfully, I LOVED Sunday School. I guess it is a good thing because I was going regardless! 🤣This poem brought up many good memories, including sneaking into the choir room during fellowship to play on the piano. Good memories. Thank you for bringing them up for me, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Sunday School was a staple in my life. My mom was a Sunday School teacher. Truthfully, I LOVED Sunday School. I guess it is a good thing because I was going regardless! 🤣This poem brought up many good memories, including sneaking into the choir room during fellowship to play on the piano. Good memories. Thank you for bringing them up for me, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
January 19th, 2025 16:19
Sunday School Afternoons
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as life progresses, and as the brain becomes less cluttered with the hustle and bustle of life, wonderful memories are triggered by the senses and allowed to run free. Your stroll down memory lane is bursting with the simple pleasures and sensations of life that you treasure. Lucky you my friend, it is why your poetry is so rich in texture. Beautiful!
January 19th, 2025 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
I find that as life progresses, and as the brain becomes less cluttered with the hustle and bustle of life, wonderful memories are triggered by the senses and allowed to run free. Your stroll down memory lane is bursting with the simple pleasures and sensations of life that you treasure. Lucky you my friend, it is why your poetry is so rich in texture. Beautiful!
January 19th, 2025 10:54
Sunday School Afternoons
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah me! I swoon, I swoon! My la, how almost recklessly rendered seemingly with that carefree sense of such waltzing hours imbued, imagery to die for tricking out every single line whilst its inherent poignancy holds us so securely I must, perforce, swoon. I love it, I love it! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 06:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah me! I swoon, I swoon! My la, how almost recklessly rendered seemingly with that carefree sense of such waltzing hours imbued, imagery to die for tricking out every single line whilst its inherent poignancy holds us so securely I must, perforce, swoon. I love it, I love it! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 06:29
Sunday School Afternoons
arqios said:
We had those too and the Sunday School had a bottle green Urvan (Nissan) for the pick up’s and drop offs.
January 19th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
We had those too and the Sunday School had a bottle green Urvan (Nissan) for the pick up’s and drop offs.
January 19th, 2025 05:34
Sunday School Afternoons
sorenbarrett said:
This poem captured the nostalgia of the past put in the perspective of the present. The imagry brought the poem to life stimulating those archetypal memories long burried and opened the oven door to the aroma of the past. Lovely Neville
January 19th, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem captured the nostalgia of the past put in the perspective of the present. The imagry brought the poem to life stimulating those archetypal memories long burried and opened the oven door to the aroma of the past. Lovely Neville
January 19th, 2025 05:16
At The Risk of Reaching Out
Cheeky Missy said:
Persistence pays off in time, and this charming little number in tribute is so beautifully rendered to effect, with a haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much!
January 18th, 2025 21:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Persistence pays off in time, and this charming little number in tribute is so beautifully rendered to effect, with a haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much!
January 18th, 2025 21:53
At The Risk of Reaching Out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in brevity. Profound. So, at the risk of reaching out, I will say... well-done mate! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 11:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in brevity. Profound. So, at the risk of reaching out, I will say... well-done mate! 🌹👏
January 18th, 2025 11:21
At The Risk of Reaching Out
sorenbarrett said:
A truism spoken poetically in so few words. Lovely Neville
January 18th, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
A truism spoken poetically in so few words. Lovely Neville
January 18th, 2025 05:31
At the Very End of Darkness
cellinic said:
Very deep and sincere, although quite reserved in terms of emotional side of the poem. best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:50
cellinic said:
Very deep and sincere, although quite reserved in terms of emotional side of the poem. best wishes,
January 18th, 2025 02:50
At the Very End of Darkness
Goldfinch60 said:
The porch light is always on for all in our house Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The porch light is always on for all in our house Neville.
Andy
January 18th, 2025 02:22
At the Very End of Darkness
Doggerel Dave said:
Having just come out of an six hour electricity blackout....🔆
January 17th, 2025 20:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Having just come out of an six hour electricity blackout....🔆
January 17th, 2025 20:24
At the Very End of Darkness
orchidee said:
Did an \'Idea\' light-bulb come on in your head when you thought to write this?!
January 17th, 2025 10:42
orchidee said:
Did an \'Idea\' light-bulb come on in your head when you thought to write this?!
January 17th, 2025 10:42
At the Very End of Darkness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances. Still, no circumstance is too large to snuff that light or its inner potential. Or at least that is what I got out of it. A wonderful write, Neville! Faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The light within, waiting to be unleashed but blocked by circumstances. Still, no circumstance is too large to snuff that light or its inner potential. Or at least that is what I got out of it. A wonderful write, Neville! Faved, my friend! 🌹👏
January 17th, 2025 09:07
At the Very End of Darkness
arqios said:
There is a light within us waiting to be unleashed that is quite locked up by many a circumstance and situation. That’s the feel I got reading this.
January 17th, 2025 06:54
arqios said:
There is a light within us waiting to be unleashed that is quite locked up by many a circumstance and situation. That’s the feel I got reading this.
January 17th, 2025 06:54
At the Very End of Darkness
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes that bounce off word\'s walls. It has a haunting quality reinforced by the last word. Nicely constructed its archetecture is musical
January 17th, 2025 05:22
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes that bounce off word\'s walls. It has a haunting quality reinforced by the last word. Nicely constructed its archetecture is musical
January 17th, 2025 05:22
Flushed
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Lots of lovely little details.
January 17th, 2025 05:19
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Lots of lovely little details.
January 17th, 2025 05:19
Flushed
Goldfinch60 said:
Those touches to the one you love are so meaningful Neville.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Those touches to the one you love are so meaningful Neville.
Andy
January 17th, 2025 02:11
Flushed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I absolutely love this beautiful and sensual poem. Wonderful job, Neville. 🌹👏 Easily faved.
January 16th, 2025 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I absolutely love this beautiful and sensual poem. Wonderful job, Neville. 🌹👏 Easily faved.
January 16th, 2025 08:52
Flushed
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply sensual in literal and metaphorical ways double entendre give even greater feel to this seductive piece
January 16th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply sensual in literal and metaphorical ways double entendre give even greater feel to this seductive piece
January 16th, 2025 04:31
The Joy of Silence
Cheeky Missy said:
[That\'s right, THIS pretty little number was so eloquent I felt me too much of a child to leave a comment. Here goes nothing.] Whew! Pass me the smelling salts, the heat is killing me! I declare, you men know too well how to expertly describe the exquisite joys of the boudoir. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heady poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:24
Cheeky Missy said:
[That\'s right, THIS pretty little number was so eloquent I felt me too much of a child to leave a comment. Here goes nothing.] Whew! Pass me the smelling salts, the heat is killing me! I declare, you men know too well how to expertly describe the exquisite joys of the boudoir. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heady poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:24
Masterpieces
Cheeky Missy said:
And yet there\'s always at least one or more souls who think to try their hand at it likewise. Fascinating with a haunting, teasing, intrigue and poignancy oh how charming this pretty little number is! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 14th, 2025 16:16
Cheeky Missy said:
And yet there\'s always at least one or more souls who think to try their hand at it likewise. Fascinating with a haunting, teasing, intrigue and poignancy oh how charming this pretty little number is! Thank you very much for sharing.
January 14th, 2025 16:16
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