Comments received on poems by Neville
Where Did The Cardamon Go
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville but sometimes the cardamon can reappear.
Andy
September 23rd, 2026 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Neville but sometimes the cardamon can reappear.
Andy
September 23rd, 2026 01:05
Where Did The Cardamon Go
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a poem, Neville...warm, wistful, and just a little painful. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
One heck of a poem, Neville...warm, wistful, and just a little painful. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 22nd, 2026 22:06
Where Did The Cardamon Go
orchidee said:
Good write N. Who is Cardamon? lol. Note from Fido to me: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 22nd, 2026 08:48
orchidee said:
Good write N. Who is Cardamon? lol. Note from Fido to me: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 22nd, 2026 08:48
Where Did The Cardamon Go
arqios said:
Memory does seem sensory before it is an articulated awareness; often being rebuilt by surviving sensory cues and fragments.
September 22nd, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
Memory does seem sensory before it is an articulated awareness; often being rebuilt by surviving sensory cues and fragments.
September 22nd, 2026 07:00
Where Did The Cardamon Go
Doggerel Dave said:
Neva tried cardamon before, had to ask me AI. Sounds good, think I might give it a go...
September 22nd, 2026 04:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Neva tried cardamon before, had to ask me AI. Sounds good, think I might give it a go...
September 22nd, 2026 04:44
Where Did The Cardamon Go
sorenbarrett said:
A message well sent when spices are new their fragrance is savory and as they age it dampens. I can still smell the Cardamon at times but often leaves with the holidays. Good to hear from you again my friend.
September 22nd, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A message well sent when spices are new their fragrance is savory and as they age it dampens. I can still smell the Cardamon at times but often leaves with the holidays. Good to hear from you again my friend.
September 22nd, 2026 03:53
Where Did The Cardamon Go
isa kemmy said:
I really relate to it,where did the cardmon go,sometimes we make plans with people love the next minute we realise we walked tha path alone
September 22nd, 2026 02:58
isa kemmy said:
I really relate to it,where did the cardmon go,sometimes we make plans with people love the next minute we realise we walked tha path alone
September 22nd, 2026 02:58
Slow Sunday Mornings
Cheeky Missy said:
You can definitely be the charmer when it suits your fancy. Gorgeous and rendered to effect in your fashion, oh! What a very lovely number indeed. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
September 19th, 2026 22:07
Cheeky Missy said:
You can definitely be the charmer when it suits your fancy. Gorgeous and rendered to effect in your fashion, oh! What a very lovely number indeed. Thank you for sharing, Sir.
September 19th, 2026 22:07
Slow Sunday Mornings
NafisaSB said:
Beautifully written. Can visualize the scene completely 🤗💐
September 18th, 2026 00:57
NafisaSB said:
Beautifully written. Can visualize the scene completely 🤗💐
September 18th, 2026 00:57
Slow Sunday Mornings
Jamiano said:
Great imagery in this poem. Congratulations.
September 11th, 2026 10:48
Jamiano said:
Great imagery in this poem. Congratulations.
September 11th, 2026 10:48
Slow Sunday Mornings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, what a warm and tender piece. The sleepy household, gentle humor, and deep affection make this feel like a moment worth holding onto. Absolutely lovely, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, what a warm and tender piece. The sleepy household, gentle humor, and deep affection make this feel like a moment worth holding onto. Absolutely lovely, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2026 07:59
Slow Sunday Mornings
arqios said:
Reminds me of the doves that used to nest in our rain spouts in the winter and had nestlings in the spring. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 9th, 2026 07:22
arqios said:
Reminds me of the doves that used to nest in our rain spouts in the winter and had nestlings in the spring. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 9th, 2026 07:22
Slow Sunday Mornings
Goldfinch60 said:
Those early mornings are so special, I should know I am awake early every morning.
Andy
September 9th, 2026 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Those early mornings are so special, I should know I am awake early every morning.
Andy
September 9th, 2026 01:01
Slow Sunday Mornings
MendedFences27 said:
Every-day mornings
are filled with repetition
until one cannot.
We have doves who nest beneath our deck and their cooing often woke us early in the morning. We\'re so used to it now it no longer wakes us. Our morning rituals follow the same pattern until we are both fully awake.
Your poem hit a nerve such that I thought you were writing about us. Your last line brings a real truth to the poem. We are grateful for every day we spend together on this Earth. needless to say I loved this poem. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2026 22:12
MendedFences27 said:
Every-day mornings
are filled with repetition
until one cannot.
We have doves who nest beneath our deck and their cooing often woke us early in the morning. We\'re so used to it now it no longer wakes us. Our morning rituals follow the same pattern until we are both fully awake.
Your poem hit a nerve such that I thought you were writing about us. Your last line brings a real truth to the poem. We are grateful for every day we spend together on this Earth. needless to say I loved this poem. - Phil A.
September 8th, 2026 22:12
Slow Sunday Mornings
Kevin Hulme said:
That Couple next door: The Doves , maybe you should have a word with them. At it on a Sunday Morning.
I remember the Salvation army on Sunday Mornings way back. In your Street. Didn\'t need an Alarm clock then. A good Write.
September 8th, 2026 19:34
Kevin Hulme said:
That Couple next door: The Doves , maybe you should have a word with them. At it on a Sunday Morning.
I remember the Salvation army on Sunday Mornings way back. In your Street. Didn\'t need an Alarm clock then. A good Write.
September 8th, 2026 19:34
Slow Sunday Mornings
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m really glad you can find so much value in the five thirty start, Mine too, but I wish it could be eight thirty or nine. I define myself as a night owl and late riser. Now the up late remains, but also the five thirty wakefulness has reached a state of permanency, become fixed and….. All this has nothing to do with your situation, Neville – Your enjoyment clearly evident here.
September 8th, 2026 18:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m really glad you can find so much value in the five thirty start, Mine too, but I wish it could be eight thirty or nine. I define myself as a night owl and late riser. Now the up late remains, but also the five thirty wakefulness has reached a state of permanency, become fixed and….. All this has nothing to do with your situation, Neville – Your enjoyment clearly evident here.
September 8th, 2026 18:20
Slow Sunday Mornings
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is it Sunday today? Well, I\'m sure it\'s Easter next week, yes?! lol. I dunno what year it is, let alone what day.
September 8th, 2026 14:40
orchidee said:
Good write N. Is it Sunday today? Well, I\'m sure it\'s Easter next week, yes?! lol. I dunno what year it is, let alone what day.
September 8th, 2026 14:40
Slow Sunday Mornings
sorenbarrett said:
That minuet that one awakes and just wants to go back to sleep for another hour. Too many things going on. Nicely done Neville
September 8th, 2026 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
That minuet that one awakes and just wants to go back to sleep for another hour. Too many things going on. Nicely done Neville
September 8th, 2026 13:45
Angry River Song
Doggerel Dave said:
The old wisdom about water and its ultimate affect on stone surely would point to the ultimate fate of the mountain. Final score: River 1 Mountain 0.
However, there’s a richness here not alluded to in the stats...
..
September 6th, 2026 21:03
Doggerel Dave said:
The old wisdom about water and its ultimate affect on stone surely would point to the ultimate fate of the mountain. Final score: River 1 Mountain 0.
However, there’s a richness here not alluded to in the stats...
..
September 6th, 2026 21:03
Reflection
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely piece, Neville. The humor keeps it light, but underneath it there’s a real humility and tenderness…someone content to reflect something back rather than claim the light for himself. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a lovely piece, Neville. The humor keeps it light, but underneath it there’s a real humility and tenderness…someone content to reflect something back rather than claim the light for himself. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 6th, 2026 13:06
Reflection
Friendship said:
Wow, I enjoy your writing so much, yet so powerful. You had me thinking. Your dialogue between two characters—one who feels ordinary and the other who sees greatness in them—highlights the contrast between self-doubt and the admiration of others. Your poem suggests that interactions and reflections with others can shape one\'s identity and value.
September 6th, 2026 10:24
Friendship said:
Wow, I enjoy your writing so much, yet so powerful. You had me thinking. Your dialogue between two characters—one who feels ordinary and the other who sees greatness in them—highlights the contrast between self-doubt and the admiration of others. Your poem suggests that interactions and reflections with others can shape one\'s identity and value.
September 6th, 2026 10:24
Reflection
arqios said:
Good to be reading you again, N! Much enjoyed. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:43
arqios said:
Good to be reading you again, N! Much enjoyed. 👍🏻🕊️
Always, R
September 6th, 2026 06:43
Reflection
orchidee said:
Good write N. The mirror replied to KP \'You\'re looking more trout-like each day!\' lol.
September 6th, 2026 05:14
orchidee said:
Good write N. The mirror replied to KP \'You\'re looking more trout-like each day!\' lol.
September 6th, 2026 05:14
Reflection
sorenbarrett said:
It is those secondary thoughts bounced back phrases that rattle in the mind and are reflected back to another that provide opportunities at time. A fun read where the mirror uses the viewer as least as I see it. Nicely done Neville
September 6th, 2026 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
It is those secondary thoughts bounced back phrases that rattle in the mind and are reflected back to another that provide opportunities at time. A fun read where the mirror uses the viewer as least as I see it. Nicely done Neville
September 6th, 2026 04:44
Angry River Song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Neville, this is one hell of an elemental showdown. The mountain may have stature, but the river has patience…and that deeper contest between pride, endurance, and inevitable change gives this real bite. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Neville, this is one hell of an elemental showdown. The mountain may have stature, but the river has patience…and that deeper contest between pride, endurance, and inevitable change gives this real bite. Loved it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2026 20:08
Angry River Song
sorenbarrett said:
Persistence out does strength and size. And those canyons carved and eroded they too cut deep. A wonderful and most wise fable with great meaning my friend. A fave
September 5th, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Persistence out does strength and size. And those canyons carved and eroded they too cut deep. A wonderful and most wise fable with great meaning my friend. A fave
September 5th, 2026 12:14
Angry River Song
orchidee said:
Good write N. Since when was I perceptive?! lol.
September 5th, 2026 11:30
orchidee said:
Good write N. Since when was I perceptive?! lol.
September 5th, 2026 11:30
Angry River Song
Friendship said:
A strong poem, well written. Your poem contrasts the mountain\'s permanence and grandeur with the river\'s fluidity and dynamism, suggesting that pride and ego can be challenged and diminished by nature\'s relentless forces.
September 5th, 2026 10:31
Friendship said:
A strong poem, well written. Your poem contrasts the mountain\'s permanence and grandeur with the river\'s fluidity and dynamism, suggesting that pride and ego can be challenged and diminished by nature\'s relentless forces.
September 5th, 2026 10:31
Why Not Just Call Them Sundays
NafisaSB said:
wow- a great commentary on how Sunday came into being...!
September 4th, 2026 02:39
NafisaSB said:
wow- a great commentary on how Sunday came into being...!
September 4th, 2026 02:39
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