Comments received on poems by Neville
Sometimes She Just Cries
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I would love to know how you thought of “when she really means
don’t let go ..\"? Devastatingly simple yet conveying a wagon full payload. The magic touch of a magician
October 12th, 2025 06:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I would love to know how you thought of “when she really means
don’t let go ..\"? Devastatingly simple yet conveying a wagon full payload. The magic touch of a magician
October 12th, 2025 06:39
Sometimes She Just Cries
NafisaSB said:
Many a time a lady has been known to do just this🤐you have wrapped it up well
October 11th, 2025 03:50
NafisaSB said:
Many a time a lady has been known to do just this🤐you have wrapped it up well
October 11th, 2025 03:50
Sometimes She Just Cries
Poetic Licence said:
I think this hits a nerve for more people then they would care to admit, it certainly has many elements that i have encountered in a relationship coming from both sides. A write that makes you have a think and that is a good thing.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Poetic Licence said:
I think this hits a nerve for more people then they would care to admit, it certainly has many elements that i have encountered in a relationship coming from both sides. A write that makes you have a think and that is a good thing.
October 10th, 2025 13:35
Breakfast in Krakow
Poetic Licence said:
Hi , Neville first to say i hope all is well with you?. i enjoyed the read, sitting in beautiful places surrounded by beautiful woman does trigger the memory to days gone by.
I have sat in Krakow and admired the views myself, especially the beautiful church, take care
October 10th, 2025 13:29
Poetic Licence said:
Hi , Neville first to say i hope all is well with you?. i enjoyed the read, sitting in beautiful places surrounded by beautiful woman does trigger the memory to days gone by.
I have sat in Krakow and admired the views myself, especially the beautiful church, take care
October 10th, 2025 13:29
Sometimes She Just Cries
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps Neville but not in my case.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Perhaps Neville but not in my case.
Andy
October 10th, 2025 01:48
Sometimes She Just Cries
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that closing line...“hey babe now wasn’t that fun”...lands like a sigh. Equal parts irony and ache. Very well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, that closing line...“hey babe now wasn’t that fun”...lands like a sigh. Equal parts irony and ache. Very well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 9th, 2025 19:58
Sometimes She Just Cries
Doggerel Dave said:
Happily well in the past Neville, your quick poetic sketch reminded me too much of…..
Your comments were particularly relevant: I must commit the three ‘C’s to memory as an analytical aid to future (unlikely) engagements from which I might find it difficult to extricate myself….
October 9th, 2025 16:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Happily well in the past Neville, your quick poetic sketch reminded me too much of…..
Your comments were particularly relevant: I must commit the three ‘C’s to memory as an analytical aid to future (unlikely) engagements from which I might find it difficult to extricate myself….
October 9th, 2025 16:29
Sometimes She Just Cries
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Sometimes She Just Cries\" explores the complex emotional landscape of relationships, particularly focusing on the interplay between vulnerability and strength. The speaker reflects on moments of conflict and intimacy, revealing how words can often mask deeper feelings. The subject matter centers around the emotional states of a woman who oscillates between anger, longing, and sadness, ultimately highlighting the paradox of love where moments of tension can coexist with joy.
October 9th, 2025 13:59
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Sometimes She Just Cries\" explores the complex emotional landscape of relationships, particularly focusing on the interplay between vulnerability and strength. The speaker reflects on moments of conflict and intimacy, revealing how words can often mask deeper feelings. The subject matter centers around the emotional states of a woman who oscillates between anger, longing, and sadness, ultimately highlighting the paradox of love where moments of tension can coexist with joy.
October 9th, 2025 13:59
Sometimes She Just Cries
sorenbarrett said:
Neville you have captured in verse a tempered spring where push and pull are responded to with corresponding opposite reaction. A wonderful write that keeps meter short and near rhyme intriguing. Well crafted it is a fave
October 9th, 2025 03:52
sorenbarrett said:
Neville you have captured in verse a tempered spring where push and pull are responded to with corresponding opposite reaction. A wonderful write that keeps meter short and near rhyme intriguing. Well crafted it is a fave
October 9th, 2025 03:52
Sometimes She Just Cries
orchidee said:
Sounds like KP and the way I treat her. lol.
October 9th, 2025 02:11
orchidee said:
Sounds like KP and the way I treat her. lol.
October 9th, 2025 02:11
Breakfast in Krakow
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope you enjoyed your eggs benedict, I always do Neville. LOL
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Hope you enjoyed your eggs benedict, I always do Neville. LOL
Andy
October 6th, 2025 01:18
Breakfast in Krakow
Friendship said:
The poem \"Breakfast in Krakow\" explores themes of nostalgia, memory, and the fleeting nature of moments that evoke strong emotions. It presents a moment of reflection where a simple breakfast leads to the recollection of a past connection with a woman who symbolizes warmth and happiness.
October 5th, 2025 13:51
Friendship said:
The poem \"Breakfast in Krakow\" explores themes of nostalgia, memory, and the fleeting nature of moments that evoke strong emotions. It presents a moment of reflection where a simple breakfast leads to the recollection of a past connection with a woman who symbolizes warmth and happiness.
October 5th, 2025 13:51
Breakfast in Krakow
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence in a woman that many share.....I know...
More than glad to know you haven\'t given up on this meeting place, Neville.
October 5th, 2025 07:54
Doggerel Dave said:
The essence in a woman that many share.....I know...
More than glad to know you haven\'t given up on this meeting place, Neville.
October 5th, 2025 07:54
Breakfast in Krakow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville...yay, glad you posted another! I was thinking of you only yesterday. This is nostalgia served gentle and golden…the kind that lingers long after the last bite. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my dear friend. 🍳🍳🍳🍳
October 5th, 2025 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville...yay, glad you posted another! I was thinking of you only yesterday. This is nostalgia served gentle and golden…the kind that lingers long after the last bite. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done, my dear friend. 🍳🍳🍳🍳
October 5th, 2025 07:54
Breakfast in Krakow
orchidee said:
So you met KP?! lol. Good wishes for your recovery.
October 5th, 2025 04:22
orchidee said:
So you met KP?! lol. Good wishes for your recovery.
October 5th, 2025 04:22
Breakfast in Krakow
sorenbarrett said:
This is another one of your subtle masterpieces that one has to read several times to get the beauty of. This to me holds minds visions of time past, a happier time, a young love bright now grown older. It has that warm cheery feel to it. Very satisfying my friend. So good to hear from you.
October 5th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
This is another one of your subtle masterpieces that one has to read several times to get the beauty of. This to me holds minds visions of time past, a happier time, a young love bright now grown older. It has that warm cheery feel to it. Very satisfying my friend. So good to hear from you.
October 5th, 2025 03:53
Fear of Falling
Cassie58 said:
Visually stunning Neville, though your words touch on an emotional level. It is looking very much like autumn and those leaves tumbling and dancing in the wind speak to me of freedom. Hoping each day finds you healthier and stronger.
September 16th, 2025 02:58
Cassie58 said:
Visually stunning Neville, though your words touch on an emotional level. It is looking very much like autumn and those leaves tumbling and dancing in the wind speak to me of freedom. Hoping each day finds you healthier and stronger.
September 16th, 2025 02:58
Fear of Word Blindness
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, your poem \"Fear of Word Blindness\" explores the tension between the desire for expression and the fear of losing one\'s ability to communicate effectively. It juxtaposes the chaotic, overwhelming noise of modern life with the serene contemplation of ancient scribes, highlighting the struggle between clarity and obscurity. The imagery of fragile objects, such as champagne flutes and lacquered tsuba, signifies the delicacy of language and art, while the fear of “word blindness” suggests a deep-seated anxiety about the limitations of words in conveying profound meaning.
September 8th, 2025 15:36
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, your poem \"Fear of Word Blindness\" explores the tension between the desire for expression and the fear of losing one\'s ability to communicate effectively. It juxtaposes the chaotic, overwhelming noise of modern life with the serene contemplation of ancient scribes, highlighting the struggle between clarity and obscurity. The imagery of fragile objects, such as champagne flutes and lacquered tsuba, signifies the delicacy of language and art, while the fear of “word blindness” suggests a deep-seated anxiety about the limitations of words in conveying profound meaning.
September 8th, 2025 15:36
Fear of Word Blindness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is striking. The fragility in your images...the shattered flutes, the scribes fearing word blindness...holds tension and weight. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave from your ol\' friend Tristan over here!
September 7th, 2025 18:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this is striking. The fragility in your images...the shattered flutes, the scribes fearing word blindness...holds tension and weight. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave from your ol\' friend Tristan over here!
September 7th, 2025 18:22
Fear of Word Blindness
arqios said:
...\"ivorine,\" such an excellent word, Nev! I remember as a preschoooler enjoying the sight of our heirloom champagne flutes... I hope never to get wordblindness but I guess it could already have set in for yonks without my even noticing... *sigh*
September 7th, 2025 17:33
arqios said:
...\"ivorine,\" such an excellent word, Nev! I remember as a preschoooler enjoying the sight of our heirloom champagne flutes... I hope never to get wordblindness but I guess it could already have set in for yonks without my even noticing... *sigh*
September 7th, 2025 17:33
Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just one word- WOW. Another painting executed with words.
Leaves little choice than to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:40
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Just one word- WOW. Another painting executed with words.
Leaves little choice than to hit the fave.
September 7th, 2025 08:40
Fear of Word Blindness
sorenbarrett said:
There is an image here that is so Zen as I meditated on this I see silence in the materials above and below that is filled with the noise of history loud ecos of silence and the fear of not being able to hear it if one can not read it either in words of attention to detail. We live in a society that is becoming less religious and also less attentive to detail a population of ADD with short attention spans. A nice touch adding the monk for it is in meditation that there is enlightenment that needs no adulation. Another nice touch in the tsuba where a family crest may honor a family history and can be seen through like the translucent ivorine. Very refined work here Neville that dives deep into the psyche a fave
September 7th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
There is an image here that is so Zen as I meditated on this I see silence in the materials above and below that is filled with the noise of history loud ecos of silence and the fear of not being able to hear it if one can not read it either in words of attention to detail. We live in a society that is becoming less religious and also less attentive to detail a population of ADD with short attention spans. A nice touch adding the monk for it is in meditation that there is enlightenment that needs no adulation. Another nice touch in the tsuba where a family crest may honor a family history and can be seen through like the translucent ivorine. Very refined work here Neville that dives deep into the psyche a fave
September 7th, 2025 04:35
Fear of Word Blindness
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This instantly brought to my \"High Poetry\". Now thinking...is that at all valid phrase?
September 7th, 2025 02:36
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This instantly brought to my \"High Poetry\". Now thinking...is that at all valid phrase?
September 7th, 2025 02:36
Fear of Word Blindness
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP never craves obscurity. lol.
September 7th, 2025 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write N. KP never craves obscurity. lol.
September 7th, 2025 02:09
Fear of Word Blindness
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Neville. I feel a rich picture has been described here, but I cannot quite bring it into focus.
Any chance of some notes?
September 7th, 2025 01:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Neville. I feel a rich picture has been described here, but I cannot quite bring it into focus.
Any chance of some notes?
September 7th, 2025 01:31
Fear of Word Blindness
Goldfinch60 said:
In life Neville we always need to move on into reality.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
In life Neville we always need to move on into reality.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:21
Fake Nudes
rebellion_in_sanity said:
How do you do it? Few words conveying so many things. Needless to say loved it
September 5th, 2025 10:03
rebellion_in_sanity said:
How do you do it? Few words conveying so many things. Needless to say loved it
September 5th, 2025 10:03
Fear of Falling
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Only one word is needed - beautiful!
September 4th, 2025 03:26
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Only one word is needed - beautiful!
September 4th, 2025 03:26
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