Comments received on poems by Neville
One More Open Verdict For the Road
SureshG said:
Contemplate on what the POET is thinking,
Or maybe just enjoy the mystery woven so intricately
June 28th, 2025 00:33
SureshG said:
Contemplate on what the POET is thinking,
Or maybe just enjoy the mystery woven so intricately
June 28th, 2025 00:33
The Weight of Enlightenment
SureshG said:
To live and let live,
To share, where receptive,
To learn to walk away, without confrontation.
And then maybe, just maybe I too will be enlightened like you.
May 30th, 2025 20:01
SureshG said:
To live and let live,
To share, where receptive,
To learn to walk away, without confrontation.
And then maybe, just maybe I too will be enlightened like you.
May 30th, 2025 20:01
One More Open Verdict For the Road
Parisab said:
She was looking for a safe place to land on and fell on her head instead! How romance takes a funny turn 😅great to say hi again friend ☺️
May 17th, 2025 19:20
Parisab said:
She was looking for a safe place to land on and fell on her head instead! How romance takes a funny turn 😅great to say hi again friend ☺️
May 17th, 2025 19:20
The Weight of Enlightenment
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Short, sweet ... but puzzling. It\'s like a dish not often tasted, leaving a lingering aftertaste that makes one unconsciously wonder—what was that?\"
May 2nd, 2025 22:59
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Short, sweet ... but puzzling. It\'s like a dish not often tasted, leaving a lingering aftertaste that makes one unconsciously wonder—what was that?\"
May 2nd, 2025 22:59
One More Open Verdict For the Road
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... did NOT see that tragic end coming! Master of the unexpected, as usual, sir.
April 30th, 2025 17:04
jarcher54 said:
Oh my... did NOT see that tragic end coming! Master of the unexpected, as usual, sir.
April 30th, 2025 17:04
This is Where Spring Begins – Haru Ga Hajimaru
NafisaSB said:
sentimental, beautiful and totally awesome
enjoyed the read
April 20th, 2025 23:18
NafisaSB said:
sentimental, beautiful and totally awesome
enjoyed the read
April 20th, 2025 23:18
The Weight of Enlightenment
jarcher54 said:
As we get older, most of us figure out there\'s less value in getting and more in giving. I think some mistake it as wisdom, but really there\'s just not much time left to enjoy what we get, while are gives live on after us. I have become totally addicted to giving in my dotage. I am lucky enough to be able to be generous.
April 20th, 2025 19:13
jarcher54 said:
As we get older, most of us figure out there\'s less value in getting and more in giving. I think some mistake it as wisdom, but really there\'s just not much time left to enjoy what we get, while are gives live on after us. I have become totally addicted to giving in my dotage. I am lucky enough to be able to be generous.
April 20th, 2025 19:13
The Weight of Enlightenment
spilleronsheet said:
What is right? What is wrong? Aren’t they all perception of mind…we truly live in rosy shades of time….good one dear Neville
April 3rd, 2025 15:02
spilleronsheet said:
What is right? What is wrong? Aren’t they all perception of mind…we truly live in rosy shades of time….good one dear Neville
April 3rd, 2025 15:02
Double Checking Our Favourite Positions
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t know wheter to be sad for them being on the z or smile at the humourous delivery. Perhaps, this is what true poetry is. Bravo 👏👌
March 29th, 2025 10:29
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I don\'t know wheter to be sad for them being on the z or smile at the humourous delivery. Perhaps, this is what true poetry is. Bravo 👏👌
March 29th, 2025 10:29
The Weight of Enlightenment
cellinic said:
A wise and sincere statement, Neville! Hello!
March 27th, 2025 21:33
cellinic said:
A wise and sincere statement, Neville! Hello!
March 27th, 2025 21:33
The Weight of Enlightenment
NafisaSB said:
you have truly nailed it - it does help when one can forgive , forget, and share
March 23rd, 2025 23:43
NafisaSB said:
you have truly nailed it - it does help when one can forgive , forget, and share
March 23rd, 2025 23:43
Just Me, Half a Love Song and An Idiopathic Itch
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! What mood am I in that you\'ve like, made me smile ear to ear upon concluding this characteristic pretty number from you?! What a gas! You\'re too fun and almost too much for me. Delightfully rendered with grand imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I do so love it.
March 23rd, 2025 10:57
Cheeky Missy said:
Goodnight! What mood am I in that you\'ve like, made me smile ear to ear upon concluding this characteristic pretty number from you?! What a gas! You\'re too fun and almost too much for me. Delightfully rendered with grand imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I do so love it.
March 23rd, 2025 10:57
The Weight of Enlightenment
RSM0812 said:
Great message. Great write. You write the truth and unfortunately some people feed lies into others.
March 19th, 2025 10:43
RSM0812 said:
Great message. Great write. You write the truth and unfortunately some people feed lies into others.
March 19th, 2025 10:43
The Weight of Enlightenment
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem,reflects on personal growth through the understanding that true warmth and strength come from acts of kindness and forgiveness rather than a sense of self-righteousness.
March 18th, 2025 08:54
Friendship said:
Well written,Your poem,reflects on personal growth through the understanding that true warmth and strength come from acts of kindness and forgiveness rather than a sense of self-righteousness.
March 18th, 2025 08:54
The Weight of Enlightenment
Neilton said:
Amazing poem with an even greater meaning! Neville I\'m truly happy there still people in this world who realize the importance of giving and forgiving ! !
March 17th, 2025 18:09
Neilton said:
Amazing poem with an even greater meaning! Neville I\'m truly happy there still people in this world who realize the importance of giving and forgiving ! !
March 17th, 2025 18:09
A Man With a Bucket and No Hat
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious with this pretty number of a reflection, causing me to shake with laughter. Argh! Rereading only makes me shake with laughter the more. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a distinctly haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing. You\'re too fun!
March 17th, 2025 16:44
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re downright hilarious with this pretty number of a reflection, causing me to shake with laughter. Argh! Rereading only makes me shake with laughter the more. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a distinctly haunting poignancy. I love it! Thank you very much for sharing. You\'re too fun!
March 17th, 2025 16:44
Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Were we unable to pull off that trick we\'d still be wallowing in whichever horror last had us by the throat. Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery until tis graphically roused to haunt with an exquisitely painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 16th, 2025 12:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Were we unable to pull off that trick we\'d still be wallowing in whichever horror last had us by the throat. Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery until tis graphically roused to haunt with an exquisitely painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 16th, 2025 12:04
Corporal B and Me
Cheeky Missy said:
For all the movies which culled our hearty laughter, you\'ve handily rendered the same in a tidy little pretty number which conjures images aplenty, sitting here daintily on the blank page. Gorgeous and deliciously rendered with delightful imagery and a rather disturbing poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. You, oh you!
March 15th, 2025 19:28
Cheeky Missy said:
For all the movies which culled our hearty laughter, you\'ve handily rendered the same in a tidy little pretty number which conjures images aplenty, sitting here daintily on the blank page. Gorgeous and deliciously rendered with delightful imagery and a rather disturbing poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing. You, oh you!
March 15th, 2025 19:28
One More Open Verdict For the Road
rebellion_in_sanity said:
As I was reading I got the feeling of a veil being lifted from the painting. Then suddenly I was confronted with the question \"is it truth what all that we see?\"
March 15th, 2025 07:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
As I was reading I got the feeling of a veil being lifted from the painting. Then suddenly I was confronted with the question \"is it truth what all that we see?\"
March 15th, 2025 07:57
The Weight of Enlightenment
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you wholeheartedly. it is more peaceful for ourselves when we forgive, though it is a bit harder to forget. very good advice
March 15th, 2025 00:03
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you wholeheartedly. it is more peaceful for ourselves when we forgive, though it is a bit harder to forget. very good advice
March 15th, 2025 00:03
The Weight of Enlightenment
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh you--!!! Look away, I can\'t stop smiling. How deliciously rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 13:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh you--!!! Look away, I can\'t stop smiling. How deliciously rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 13:17
The Weight of Enlightenment
Doggerel Dave said:
I confirm I\'ve considered, Neville. Thanks for the chance to do that.
March 13th, 2025 15:48
Doggerel Dave said:
I confirm I\'ve considered, Neville. Thanks for the chance to do that.
March 13th, 2025 15:48
The Weight of Enlightenment
orchidee said:
\'To err is human; to forgive divine\' (Alexander Pope - looked it up!). I\'m very \'human\' in my treatment of KP. Heehee.
March 13th, 2025 12:02
orchidee said:
\'To err is human; to forgive divine\' (Alexander Pope - looked it up!). I\'m very \'human\' in my treatment of KP. Heehee.
March 13th, 2025 12:02
The Weight of Enlightenment
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it my friend. Thank you for your writing.
March 13th, 2025 09:40
Thomas W Case said:
You nailed it my friend. Thank you for your writing.
March 13th, 2025 09:40
The Weight of Enlightenment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, this poem is so multilayered that it presents many questions. Are forgiving and giving to be valued universally? Are they truly the higher ground all the time? What does it mean for them to be fools? Are they foolish for hoping more from us, humanity? Or foolish because they don\'t recognize that what can be good in some circumstances does not always good? Or is it that we are the fools for knowing they lead us to better places, yet we choose not to pursue them? Those are just a few. That makes me love this poem, because the journey is in the questioning, never in the answers...and the journey is where its at for me because who knows on the rest. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed, this poem is so multilayered that it presents many questions. Are forgiving and giving to be valued universally? Are they truly the higher ground all the time? What does it mean for them to be fools? Are they foolish for hoping more from us, humanity? Or foolish because they don\'t recognize that what can be good in some circumstances does not always good? Or is it that we are the fools for knowing they lead us to better places, yet we choose not to pursue them? Those are just a few. That makes me love this poem, because the journey is in the questioning, never in the answers...and the journey is where its at for me because who knows on the rest. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:51
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