Comments received on poems by Neville
Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight
NafisaSB said:
a fine and inspired write...
November 19th, 2025 08:33
NafisaSB said:
a fine and inspired write...
November 19th, 2025 08:33
Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight
Neilton said:
Everything in this poem is just perfect.From the title to the poem and all the words you used to describe in detail.I read it Many times to fully understand it and feel it. Amazing poem!!!
Also have a nice trip ! I hope everything went as planned🫶
November 13th, 2025 12:26
Neilton said:
Everything in this poem is just perfect.From the title to the poem and all the words you used to describe in detail.I read it Many times to fully understand it and feel it. Amazing poem!!!
Also have a nice trip ! I hope everything went as planned🫶
November 13th, 2025 12:26
Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Starting from Still till end- breathtaking. Simply words pregnant with meaning. Perhaps that is what a good poem is all about. A definite fave.
November 12th, 2025 06:01
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Starting from Still till end- breathtaking. Simply words pregnant with meaning. Perhaps that is what a good poem is all about. A definite fave.
November 12th, 2025 06:01
Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Nicely done.
November 12th, 2025 03:27
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Neville. Nicely done.
November 12th, 2025 03:27
Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this poem reads to all us old pots as the shards that we will become. But remember that what is discarded on the trash heap of today becomes the archeological find of the future. Not that I have any illusion that anything I write will survive more than today but maybe if it touches one soul it might make some difference. When teaching there was no greater joy than to see a pupil that made it big come back to thank for the inspiration that they said made the difference in their life. So your words have touched many, me included.
November 11th, 2025 10:22
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this poem reads to all us old pots as the shards that we will become. But remember that what is discarded on the trash heap of today becomes the archeological find of the future. Not that I have any illusion that anything I write will survive more than today but maybe if it touches one soul it might make some difference. When teaching there was no greater joy than to see a pupil that made it big come back to thank for the inspiration that they said made the difference in their life. So your words have touched many, me included.
November 11th, 2025 10:22
Lest We Should Ever Forget
NafisaSB said:
This stark poem is a wand a beautiful tribute too. 🙏🏼
November 10th, 2025 12:00
NafisaSB said:
This stark poem is a wand a beautiful tribute too. 🙏🏼
November 10th, 2025 12:00
Lest We Should Ever Forget
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this balances reverence and realism with care. The clouds, the crossroads, the metal figures...it all becomes one living reminder. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, this balances reverence and realism with care. The clouds, the crossroads, the metal figures...it all becomes one living reminder. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:50
Lest We Should Ever Forget
Doggerel Dave said:
Weary of the whole damnable thing, Neville and no I don\'t, won\'t, can\'t forget.......
November 9th, 2025 18:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Weary of the whole damnable thing, Neville and no I don\'t, won\'t, can\'t forget.......
November 9th, 2025 18:33
Lest We Should Ever Forget
Bella Shepard said:
Five very important words, for the shadows of the past are with us, and the rememberance of those who fought so bravely should be revered. It us up to us to strengthen generational memory in the hope that we can pass on the values that make us stronger together, that we may put destructive human folly to rest. Eloquent and profound my friend!
November 9th, 2025 11:41
Bella Shepard said:
Five very important words, for the shadows of the past are with us, and the rememberance of those who fought so bravely should be revered. It us up to us to strengthen generational memory in the hope that we can pass on the values that make us stronger together, that we may put destructive human folly to rest. Eloquent and profound my friend!
November 9th, 2025 11:41
Lest We Should Ever Forget
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Great point to not forget.
November 9th, 2025 09:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Neville. Great point to not forget.
November 9th, 2025 09:11
Lest We Should Ever Forget
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this poem offers a reverent and solemn picture to an irreverent and violent generation. One where a low cloud formation brings ideas that their online memory is running short. Tommies carved of metal bring to their mind heavy metal music now out of date. This poem sets different with our generation where defending one\'s nation and values was something honored and valued. Something that seems to be fading away. Great write my friend
November 9th, 2025 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
Neville this poem offers a reverent and solemn picture to an irreverent and violent generation. One where a low cloud formation brings ideas that their online memory is running short. Tommies carved of metal bring to their mind heavy metal music now out of date. This poem sets different with our generation where defending one\'s nation and values was something honored and valued. Something that seems to be fading away. Great write my friend
November 9th, 2025 08:03
With Only Nine Trees Left
arqios said:
This is really hard hitting. A raw, honest, timely and powerful expression. I love how you gave Gaea a voice and didn’t hold back on the urgency. It’s a tough truth, but you’ve captured it with such clarity. Thanks for sharing this with us. 🙏🕊️
November 8th, 2025 08:33
arqios said:
This is really hard hitting. A raw, honest, timely and powerful expression. I love how you gave Gaea a voice and didn’t hold back on the urgency. It’s a tough truth, but you’ve captured it with such clarity. Thanks for sharing this with us. 🙏🕊️
November 8th, 2025 08:33
Number Four Lipow Strasse
NafisaSB said:
this one is straight from the heart, and touches a chord..
well done indeed
November 4th, 2025 03:03
NafisaSB said:
this one is straight from the heart, and touches a chord..
well done indeed
November 4th, 2025 03:03
Number Four Lipow Strasse
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. You bring this to vivid life.
October 29th, 2025 20:53
Thomas W Case said:
Boom. You bring this to vivid life.
October 29th, 2025 20:53
Number Four Lipow Strasse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend, this poem lingers like smoke from Café Alchemia...rich, weary, unshakably human. You’ve written not just of a place, but of the persistence of memory itself. Cheers! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 20:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend, this poem lingers like smoke from Café Alchemia...rich, weary, unshakably human. You’ve written not just of a place, but of the persistence of memory itself. Cheers! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 29th, 2025 20:34
Number Four Lipow Strasse
Doggerel Dave said:
Never been to Krakow, or for that matter Poland, Neville. My tour, curtesy of my screen and a comfortable seat was more than interesting; indeed you, a poetic tour advisor, really took me there. After a lengthy visit to the museum, Café Alchemia feels just the right place to linger in.....
When you have finished upstairs, perhaps you could join me? At the absolute very least I owe you a coffee after.....
October 29th, 2025 18:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Never been to Krakow, or for that matter Poland, Neville. My tour, curtesy of my screen and a comfortable seat was more than interesting; indeed you, a poetic tour advisor, really took me there. After a lengthy visit to the museum, Café Alchemia feels just the right place to linger in.....
When you have finished upstairs, perhaps you could join me? At the absolute very least I owe you a coffee after.....
October 29th, 2025 18:15
Number Four Lipow Strasse
sorenbarrett said:
This poem built in sentiment and welling feeling from beginning to end. The pacing and flow felt like climbing stairs in a tall building and with each floor an new sensation. As I reached the top I felt out of breath emotionally. Well done my friend. A fave
October 29th, 2025 14:38
sorenbarrett said:
This poem built in sentiment and welling feeling from beginning to end. The pacing and flow felt like climbing stairs in a tall building and with each floor an new sensation. As I reached the top I felt out of breath emotionally. Well done my friend. A fave
October 29th, 2025 14:38
With Only Nine Trees Left
NafisaSB said:
you have nailed it so well, and i hope your call awakens the slumbering majority
October 29th, 2025 07:27
NafisaSB said:
you have nailed it so well, and i hope your call awakens the slumbering majority
October 29th, 2025 07:27
With Only Nine Trees Left
rhmn_7 said:
Yes, we have f\'up big time but nature will come back despite all I want to believe. Nicely written Neville!
October 26th, 2025 15:47
rhmn_7 said:
Yes, we have f\'up big time but nature will come back despite all I want to believe. Nicely written Neville!
October 26th, 2025 15:47
With Only Nine Trees Left
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem explores themes of environmental degradation and the profound sense of loss associated with the destruction of nature. It reflects on humanity\'s failure to protect the environment, emphasizing a feeling of despair regarding the future of the planet.
October 24th, 2025 14:11
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem explores themes of environmental degradation and the profound sense of loss associated with the destruction of nature. It reflects on humanity\'s failure to protect the environment, emphasizing a feeling of despair regarding the future of the planet.
October 24th, 2025 14:11
With Only Nine Trees Left
rebellion_in_sanity said:
“Extraordinarily well screwed—so to speak. I find the injection of that one word quite… Extraordinary. Kindly pardon my simple mind. The theme is close to my heart, and I confess to a persistent pessimism. Fortunately—or unfortunately—the poem seemed to echo my bleak faith in our venerable leaders.
Why does the word venerable bring to mind venereal disease? Kindly pardon my poor English.
October 24th, 2025 09:32
rebellion_in_sanity said:
“Extraordinarily well screwed—so to speak. I find the injection of that one word quite… Extraordinary. Kindly pardon my simple mind. The theme is close to my heart, and I confess to a persistent pessimism. Fortunately—or unfortunately—the poem seemed to echo my bleak faith in our venerable leaders.
Why does the word venerable bring to mind venereal disease? Kindly pardon my poor English.
October 24th, 2025 09:32
With No Hint of An End
NafisaSB said:
romantic, lovely, and straight from the heart...enjoyed it
October 24th, 2025 01:12
NafisaSB said:
romantic, lovely, and straight from the heart...enjoyed it
October 24th, 2025 01:12
With Only Nine Trees Left
Poetic Licence said:
As sad as it is we proclaim to be an intelligent species, yet we put so much effort into destroying the very fabric of what gives us life. I hope nature finds a way to recover from our continued destruction of it, but that may well be in vein, hope you keeping well
October 23rd, 2025 19:27
Poetic Licence said:
As sad as it is we proclaim to be an intelligent species, yet we put so much effort into destroying the very fabric of what gives us life. I hope nature finds a way to recover from our continued destruction of it, but that may well be in vein, hope you keeping well
October 23rd, 2025 19:27
With Only Nine Trees Left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees left” is both prophecy and elegy...a line that hums with despair and bitter humor. The world we failed still finds her voice in yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Neville, my friend… brutal truth beautifully spoken. “Only nine trees left” is both prophecy and elegy...a line that hums with despair and bitter humor. The world we failed still finds her voice in yours. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 23rd, 2025 18:29
A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions
orchidee said:
How are the juxtas now?! Enough, cease this drivel of comments, Fido says to me. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
orchidee said:
How are the juxtas now?! Enough, cease this drivel of comments, Fido says to me. lol.
October 23rd, 2025 13:59
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