Comments received on poems by Neville
Signs of The Times x5
rhmn_7 said:
You already got me in the first stanza, where do we sign up?
December 21st, 2024 07:54
rhmn_7 said:
You already got me in the first stanza, where do we sign up?
December 21st, 2024 07:54
Signs of The Times x5
TobaniNataiella said:
we never read the small print in any contract we sign up to, this a reminder that maybe we should, Enjoyed the read.
December 21st, 2024 06:27
TobaniNataiella said:
we never read the small print in any contract we sign up to, this a reminder that maybe we should, Enjoyed the read.
December 21st, 2024 06:27
Signs of The Times x5
arqios said:
Hey Neville, this poem offers a poignant and insightful commentary on the complexities of contemporary life. Through a series of vivid snapshots, you address various societal and personal issues, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences and relationships. Glad our poetry and interactions bring all that into some manageable form. First responders do need bolstering, on a side note.
December 21st, 2024 06:03
arqios said:
Hey Neville, this poem offers a poignant and insightful commentary on the complexities of contemporary life. Through a series of vivid snapshots, you address various societal and personal issues, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences and relationships. Glad our poetry and interactions bring all that into some manageable form. First responders do need bolstering, on a side note.
December 21st, 2024 06:03
Signs of The Times x5
cellinic said:
A very nice and poetic statement/ reflection. best wishes, my friend!
December 21st, 2024 05:47
cellinic said:
A very nice and poetic statement/ reflection. best wishes, my friend!
December 21st, 2024 05:47
Signs of The Times x5
sorenbarrett said:
The less control we have over our world the more we seek to control others. Another poem from the pen of a philosopher and so true it is.
December 21st, 2024 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
The less control we have over our world the more we seek to control others. Another poem from the pen of a philosopher and so true it is.
December 21st, 2024 04:13
Signs of The Times x5
orchidee said:
Teh first one sounds like someone that if you say \'hello\' to them, he (or she) will punch you on the nose and say \'What do ya mean hello; what you up to; why you speaking to me?\' (lol).
December 21st, 2024 03:34
orchidee said:
Teh first one sounds like someone that if you say \'hello\' to them, he (or she) will punch you on the nose and say \'What do ya mean hello; what you up to; why you speaking to me?\' (lol).
December 21st, 2024 03:34
Quick Fingers
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I can just see them fangers now, a ghastly yellow-green hue to their customary shade and the nails what shoulda warned him, but failed. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 20th, 2024 16:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I can just see them fangers now, a ghastly yellow-green hue to their customary shade and the nails what shoulda warned him, but failed. Beautifully rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 20th, 2024 16:00
Quick Fingers
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant study in superficialty, or at least that\'s what I felt. Please correct me if I was way off. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 11:14
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant study in superficialty, or at least that\'s what I felt. Please correct me if I was way off. Loved it
December 19th, 2024 11:14
A Hand Full of Ashes
teardrop said:
Sorry for feel grief, Your words express it well.
December 19th, 2024 06:23
teardrop said:
Sorry for feel grief, Your words express it well.
December 19th, 2024 06:23
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
teardrop said:
You have such a poetic way of writting your words. Sounds as though you have had your heart broken and I am sorry for that. However, it does bring out some beautiful poetry we get to read,
December 19th, 2024 06:02
teardrop said:
You have such a poetic way of writting your words. Sounds as though you have had your heart broken and I am sorry for that. However, it does bring out some beautiful poetry we get to read,
December 19th, 2024 06:02
Ways of Falling Out of Love
cellinic said:
Quite impressively and persuasively written. best wishes, Neville
December 19th, 2024 05:21
cellinic said:
Quite impressively and persuasively written. best wishes, Neville
December 19th, 2024 05:21
Quick Fingers
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Neville. Nicely done, mate.
December 19th, 2024 05:14
Tom Dylan said:
An intriguing write, Neville. Nicely done, mate.
December 19th, 2024 05:14
Quick Fingers
Goldfinch60 said:
The ability of some people to fool us is often in our lives Neville.
Andy
December 19th, 2024 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
The ability of some people to fool us is often in our lives Neville.
Andy
December 19th, 2024 02:39
Quick Fingers
Dan Williams said:
Ain\'t the ladies grand? I have to admit I love the contradictions. Well done.
December 19th, 2024 02:16
Dan Williams said:
Ain\'t the ladies grand? I have to admit I love the contradictions. Well done.
December 19th, 2024 02:16
Quick Fingers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is a very thought-provoking poem. I love juxtaposition and duality and this line is an instant winner…and a mighty fine ending in my humble opinion:
“…she was a weaver but she had / a witches touch...”
This duality, for me, implies both the skills of a weaver (creation, mending) and also something potentially risky (or risqué?) and magical about the woman in the poem..That is not meant, necessarily, in a negative way, either. In fact, no value added to that ar all. Also, depending on how we define “witch”, witches could also be healers, etc. Anyway, like the woman of the poem, this write was charming! 🌹👏
December 18th, 2024 17:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is a very thought-provoking poem. I love juxtaposition and duality and this line is an instant winner…and a mighty fine ending in my humble opinion:
“…she was a weaver but she had / a witches touch...”
This duality, for me, implies both the skills of a weaver (creation, mending) and also something potentially risky (or risqué?) and magical about the woman in the poem..That is not meant, necessarily, in a negative way, either. In fact, no value added to that ar all. Also, depending on how we define “witch”, witches could also be healers, etc. Anyway, like the woman of the poem, this write was charming! 🌹👏
December 18th, 2024 17:38
Quick Fingers
Bobby O said:
There’s a fable I am slow to recall so this is a notice of delay , an excuse of sorts that shifts the blame for my dereliction to this amateur masseuse who BTW once traveled the Silk Road to illicitly acquire golden needles. Hmmm, perhaps her waxy gloves should have raised suspicion?
December 18th, 2024 15:12
Bobby O said:
There’s a fable I am slow to recall so this is a notice of delay , an excuse of sorts that shifts the blame for my dereliction to this amateur masseuse who BTW once traveled the Silk Road to illicitly acquire golden needles. Hmmm, perhaps her waxy gloves should have raised suspicion?
December 18th, 2024 15:12
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Tom Dylan said:
This one packed a punch, Neville. Nice one.
December 18th, 2024 08:24
Tom Dylan said:
This one packed a punch, Neville. Nice one.
December 18th, 2024 08:24
Holding Back the Smile
NafisaSB said:
good write, and good message too
keep them coming
December 18th, 2024 07:32
NafisaSB said:
good write, and good message too
keep them coming
December 18th, 2024 07:32
Quick Fingers
teardrop said:
I love reading your poetry, you write from experience and heart. And you do it so good! This is another well written piece. Lesson learned maybe?
December 18th, 2024 06:56
teardrop said:
I love reading your poetry, you write from experience and heart. And you do it so good! This is another well written piece. Lesson learned maybe?
December 18th, 2024 06:56
Quick Fingers
cellinic said:
Very deep and impressive, dear Neville! I was on leave from the website, \'cause I had a lot of work to do)
December 18th, 2024 05:18
cellinic said:
Very deep and impressive, dear Neville! I was on leave from the website, \'cause I had a lot of work to do)
December 18th, 2024 05:18
Quick Fingers
sorenbarrett said:
Unlike most, your poems provoke a great deal of thought. I would call them mystical and like nature itself hide their secrets beneath their beauty, Enigmas of wonder and I like Tobani\'s response that there may be rain on the other side of the rainbow we are attracted to and buying a car with a new paint job does not gurantee its performance. I find that I spend a good deal of time reflecting on not only the beauty of your poems structure but hidden meaning. Lovely worth a Fav
December 18th, 2024 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Unlike most, your poems provoke a great deal of thought. I would call them mystical and like nature itself hide their secrets beneath their beauty, Enigmas of wonder and I like Tobani\'s response that there may be rain on the other side of the rainbow we are attracted to and buying a car with a new paint job does not gurantee its performance. I find that I spend a good deal of time reflecting on not only the beauty of your poems structure but hidden meaning. Lovely worth a Fav
December 18th, 2024 04:20
Quick Fingers
TobaniNataiella said:
We have all been attracted by a rainbow, only to find it is raining on the other side, a make you think write
December 18th, 2024 03:17
TobaniNataiella said:
We have all been attracted by a rainbow, only to find it is raining on the other side, a make you think write
December 18th, 2024 03:17
Quick Fingers
arqios said:
And there are them with shorter fingers that do wonders it breaks the imagination!
December 18th, 2024 03:10
arqios said:
And there are them with shorter fingers that do wonders it breaks the imagination!
December 18th, 2024 03:10
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will always need releasing onto the page Neville.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will always need releasing onto the page Neville.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:45
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Dan Williams said:
My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
December 18th, 2024 01:01
Dan Williams said:
My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
December 18th, 2024 01:01
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The pain is palpable and relatable.
December 17th, 2024 22:57
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The pain is palpable and relatable.
December 17th, 2024 22:57
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