Comments received on poems by Sunshinefalling

Human Desire
BoxMyHeart said:

Everything is different in retrospect. Hindsight is 20/20 and we are always evolving our evolution. Lovely, thanks for that nice read.

August 7th, 2019 17:11

Vernal Equinox
Jenny Wren said:

Beautiful. X

May 8th, 2019 13:11

Suresh said:

Soar, soar as high as you can, but remember not too close to the Sun.
Pay for play, you need not, as in the realm of benevolent God, all is free

Enjoyed it

April 18th, 2019 12:25

Roadside Irises
Goldfinch60 said:

That unplanned beauty that we see is wonderful.

April 9th, 2019 00:15

Roadside Irises
SerenWise said:

Lovely write

April 8th, 2019 23:37

A Meditation for Love
Jon Nakapalau said:

Well done!

April 5th, 2019 16:12

For Our Hunting
Jon Nakapalau said:

Very deep - much to think on!

April 5th, 2019 16:10

For Our Hunting
handsomerose said:


April 4th, 2019 05:25

Searching for Peace
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.. Brilliant ending!

March 27th, 2019 23:47

For Our Hunting
Poetic Dan said:

Interesting read, thank you

March 27th, 2019 23:45

For Our Hunting
Suresh said:

All are predator and prey as well.

Challenging read. Thnx

March 26th, 2019 15:41

Vernal Equinox
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Very nice!

March 24th, 2019 18:49

Vernal Equinox
whisperingquill said:

Very exquisite
You are expanding as a writer poetess.

very moving work. 👍🏼 nicely done
That last line is immaculate

March 22nd, 2019 11:13

Vernal Equinox
Neville said:

a delightful and timely post... I had a huge smile on my face yesterday while driving past Stonehenge in Wiltshire on my way home from the airport.... Neville

March 22nd, 2019 01:56

Vernal Equinox
Goldfinch60 said:

Good tribute to Spring and that last line is very true.

March 22nd, 2019 01:20

Who am I?
Nicholas Browning said:

Forever the truth and forever a lie.
You are who you want to be, at least that is my hope.
Best regards.

March 19th, 2019 00:39

The unnamed.
sylviasearcher said:

Your opening verse is like an epic quote, like an awakening.

March 16th, 2019 04:38

The unnamed.
Nicholas Browning said:

Yeah, them, ugh, people sure are a handful.
(That was a joke where I pretended I didn\'t understand what this was about. funny, huh?)
All jokes aside, I see what you mean.
People blindly follow and we all swallow the pill of \"Truth\" for what we think it\'s worth. No one\'s an exception, some people just stand in different corners.

March 16th, 2019 01:37

Searching for Peace
MendedFences27 said:

Powerful words. Also frightening. You etch a very sad picture of one\'s struggles. Your phrases are virtual photos. \"between pages and the ears of animals,\" sweating in the rain,\" each shovelful...more debris,\" stc. Loved it. - Phil A.

March 9th, 2019 12:09

Suresh said:

If only we could whisk our pain away.
Nicely done

March 2nd, 2019 13:30

whisperingquill said: speak of....profound and elegant. 👍🏼

February 24th, 2019 20:13

Andrew Charles Forrest said:

To existance nd beyond!
Great write SF

February 24th, 2019 06:59

The Unsettling
Jo March said:

It\'s a beautiful poem. I think in real life that\'s part of what we do -- make ourselves tolerable for other people. But I think that\'s not who we are. Part of us as you say want to practice the \"art of detachment living between the moments of sound\". And I think it\'s during these moments when we detach ourselves that we find out who we really are. Thank you for the poem!

January 29th, 2019 00:53

The Unsettling
whisperingquill said: its walk
it\'s stealthy ripple into the pulse of rapture.
My compliments on your ink.

January 23rd, 2019 23:24

The Unsettling
kevin browne said:

You\'ll never be alone, not even id you lived in a cardboard box on 2 pence per week. Allow life to take hold of you and your existence. It will love you if you allow it to. Don\'t be afraid to enter into other areas of live to discover the reality of your own beauty. It will be worth your while!!

January 23rd, 2019 20:16

Visions of Shraavana
kevin browne said:

Loving this work, my dear friend.

January 23rd, 2019 00:30

Visions of Shraavana
psychofemale said:


January 22nd, 2019 23:42

Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Keep dancing.

January 22nd, 2019 01:51

kevin browne said:

I adore your Moon references in such a delightful way. There is a certain element in your poem which not only lifts my heart, but I didn\'t wan\'t to to end. Sensual moon heartened work. Thank you.

January 21st, 2019 20:16

Allure of a Stranger
Goldfinch60 said:

May your wish come true.

January 20th, 2019 01:15

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