Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Who Knows
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing read, encouraged by the style you chose to utilise,
Happy holidays
December 24th, 2020 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing read, encouraged by the style you chose to utilise,
Happy holidays
December 24th, 2020 06:18
Who Knows
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions we have in our lives where we do know the answers within ourselves but sometimes we wish we had forgotten them.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
So many questions we have in our lives where we do know the answers within ourselves but sometimes we wish we had forgotten them.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:35
Thoughts of a Mushroom
dusk arising said:
mmm taste and try.
Combining the earthy and the mystical worlds of these everyday fungi .... oh to have the shamans knowledge of which would take one where....
Very enjoyable read.
December 22nd, 2020 10:28
dusk arising said:
mmm taste and try.
Combining the earthy and the mystical worlds of these everyday fungi .... oh to have the shamans knowledge of which would take one where....
Very enjoyable read.
December 22nd, 2020 10:28
Thoughts of a Mushroom
orchidee said:
Eek yes, some of them mushrooms are dangerous.
Is that us on a bad-hair day - the first verse? lol.
December 22nd, 2020 02:56
orchidee said:
Eek yes, some of them mushrooms are dangerous.
Is that us on a bad-hair day - the first verse? lol.
December 22nd, 2020 02:56
Thoughts of a Mushroom
Clara said:
This poem is one for the senses. It feels almost deep and magical to me. A dark forest... It\'s rather brilliant, thank you for sharing!
December 22nd, 2020 02:03
Clara said:
This poem is one for the senses. It feels almost deep and magical to me. A dark forest... It\'s rather brilliant, thank you for sharing!
December 22nd, 2020 02:03
Thoughts of a Mushroom
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words SerenWise - have you been eating those \'Magic Mushrooms\' again. LOL
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words SerenWise - have you been eating those \'Magic Mushrooms\' again. LOL
Andy
December 22nd, 2020 01:43
The Red Stuff
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad emotive write SerenWise, may that blood change to ink for you to write more words on the page.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Sad emotive write SerenWise, may that blood change to ink for you to write more words on the page.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:34
The Kiss
Fay Slimm. said:
Your choice of right words for this love poem drew my mind into a similar time when softness governed all loving........... a fine piece Seren.
December 18th, 2020 03:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Your choice of right words for this love poem drew my mind into a similar time when softness governed all loving........... a fine piece Seren.
December 18th, 2020 03:46
The Art of Giving a F*ck
Doggerel Dave said:
Or, just rich man\'s erotica - give them a break, there was no internet tnen... :-)
Dave
December 17th, 2020 16:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Or, just rich man\'s erotica - give them a break, there was no internet tnen... :-)
Dave
December 17th, 2020 16:35
Vessel
Fay Slimm. said:
How true these few words Seren - - love cannot but feed us and set us on learning curves. A most engaging read.
September 16th, 2020 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
How true these few words Seren - - love cannot but feed us and set us on learning curves. A most engaging read.
September 16th, 2020 02:22
Vessel
dusk arising said:
Very true. As we mature, and begin to understand that romantic love is just the beginning in learning about love itself, then love fills us with understandings, acceptance and compassion.
All this was so ... long before various religions tried to hijack these traits and turn them into their own... but thats just another story about the falsehoods of organised religion.
September 15th, 2020 23:29
dusk arising said:
Very true. As we mature, and begin to understand that romantic love is just the beginning in learning about love itself, then love fills us with understandings, acceptance and compassion.
All this was so ... long before various religions tried to hijack these traits and turn them into their own... but thats just another story about the falsehoods of organised religion.
September 15th, 2020 23:29
Vessel
MelissaJA said:
I love how you wrote this so that it physically shrank as the poem went on. well done. so much said in a very short piece.
September 15th, 2020 22:55
MelissaJA said:
I love how you wrote this so that it physically shrank as the poem went on. well done. so much said in a very short piece.
September 15th, 2020 22:55
The Art of Giving a F*ck
peto said:
Your writing has always held weight seren
This was particularly strong
Maybe even allowing us a little glimpse at yourself
June 9th, 2020 09:30
peto said:
Your writing has always held weight seren
This was particularly strong
Maybe even allowing us a little glimpse at yourself
June 9th, 2020 09:30
The Art of Giving a F*ck
Fay Slimm. said:
This emotive write touches the core of age-old abuse - - seen from male ego the female has ever been \" a feast for greedy eyes\" and nothing more -- applause for this outing of unsmiling shame that art still displays the female\'s raw deal.
Thanks for the posting Seren and Into my favourites for sure.
June 9th, 2020 02:13
Fay Slimm. said:
This emotive write touches the core of age-old abuse - - seen from male ego the female has ever been \" a feast for greedy eyes\" and nothing more -- applause for this outing of unsmiling shame that art still displays the female\'s raw deal.
Thanks for the posting Seren and Into my favourites for sure.
June 9th, 2020 02:13
The Art of Giving a F*ck
Neville said:
without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have come of age...
Todays poem \'The Art of Giving a F*ck is without doubt your finest to date... at least it is in my book..
Neville
June 9th, 2020 01:23
Neville said:
without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have come of age...
Todays poem \'The Art of Giving a F*ck is without doubt your finest to date... at least it is in my book..
Neville
June 9th, 2020 01:23
The Art of Giving a F*ck
Neville said:
without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have come of age...
Todays poem \'The Art of Giving a F*ck is without doubt your finest to date... at least it is in my book..
Neville
June 9th, 2020 01:23
Neville said:
without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have come of age...
Todays poem \'The Art of Giving a F*ck is without doubt your finest to date... at least it is in my book..
Neville
June 9th, 2020 01:23
The Art of Giving a F*ck
Goddess of the Mist said:
Really good - I feel the emotion very strongly!
June 8th, 2020 21:22
Goddess of the Mist said:
Really good - I feel the emotion very strongly!
June 8th, 2020 21:22
Reminder
Fay Slimm. said:
Words of love and understanding put so well into verse make this read outstanding. Well poemed your Reminder dear Seren.
May 8th, 2020 02:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Words of love and understanding put so well into verse make this read outstanding. Well poemed your Reminder dear Seren.
May 8th, 2020 02:08
Plant Boy
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SerenWise, this really grabbed me. Listening to the rain can be so wonderful.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 23:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SerenWise, this really grabbed me. Listening to the rain can be so wonderful.
Andy
April 28th, 2020 23:54
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