Comments received on poems by SerenWise



Vessel
Fay Slimm. said:

How true these few words Seren - - love cannot but feed us and set us on learning curves. A most engaging read.

September 16th, 2020 02:22

Vessel
dusk arising said:

Very true. As we mature, and begin to understand that romantic love is just the beginning in learning about love itself, then love fills us with understandings, acceptance and compassion.
All this was so ... long before various religions tried to hijack these traits and turn them into their own... but thats just another story about the falsehoods of organised religion.

September 15th, 2020 23:29

Vessel
MelissaJA said:

I love how you wrote this so that it physically shrank as the poem went on. well done. so much said in a very short piece.

September 15th, 2020 22:55

The Art of Giving a F*ck
peto said:

Your writing has always held weight seren
This was particularly strong
Maybe even allowing us a little glimpse at yourself

June 9th, 2020 09:30

The Art of Giving a F*ck
Fay Slimm. said:

This emotive write touches the core of age-old abuse - - seen from male ego the female has ever been \" a feast for greedy eyes\" and nothing more -- applause for this outing of unsmiling shame that art still displays the female\'s raw deal.
Thanks for the posting Seren and Into my favourites for sure.

June 9th, 2020 02:13

The Art of Giving a F*ck
Neville said:


without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have come of age...
Todays poem \'The Art of Giving a F*ck is without doubt your finest to date... at least it is in my book..

Neville

June 9th, 2020 01:23

The Art of Giving a F*ck
Neville said:


without going into too much detail.. it feels to me, as a poet, you have come of age...
Todays poem \'The Art of Giving a F*ck is without doubt your finest to date... at least it is in my book..

Neville

June 9th, 2020 01:23

The Art of Giving a F*ck
Goddess of the Mist said:

Really good - I feel the emotion very strongly!

June 8th, 2020 21:22

Reminder
Fay Slimm. said:

Words of love and understanding put so well into verse make this read outstanding. Well poemed your Reminder dear Seren.

May 8th, 2020 02:08

Reminder
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love combine into one soul.

Andy

May 8th, 2020 01:07

Awake
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving words SerenWise.

Andy

May 1st, 2020 00:52

Plant Boy
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words SerenWise, this really grabbed me. Listening to the rain can be so wonderful.

Andy

April 28th, 2020 23:54

Of No Matter
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotion laden write .

Andy

April 15th, 2020 00:42

Of No Matter
Neville said:

I like this.. I like it a lot

Neville

April 14th, 2020 12:44

Touch
Goldfinch60 said:

Super loving write.

Andy

April 12th, 2020 01:07

Touch
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Nice touch, Bill

April 11th, 2020 16:52

Touch
Neville said:

Very nice too, if I may be so bold...

Neville

April 11th, 2020 16:43

Thinking Out Loud
Ethan Daniel said:

Such a beautifully penned poem

April 10th, 2020 07:42

Thinking Out Loud
Fay Slimm. said:

Ooooh this is perfectly versed with a splash of great tenderness after a period of wondering why - - romance without a doubt appears in each line of your second stanza - well done indeed Seren.

April 10th, 2020 07:41

Thinking Out Loud
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful emotive write, that love will be there forever.

Andy

April 10th, 2020 05:41

Thinking Out Loud
Neville said:

very well expressed... that has just gotta be love..

Neville

April 10th, 2020 05:20

Ache
MendedFences27 said:

I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one another, trees, reeds, timber, limbs.
Tears and loneliness are such a sad ending. - Phil A.


April 6th, 2020 22:24

Ache
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, that loneliness may be within you but I am sure your writing helps to cure that loneliness as you lose yourself in your wonderful words.

Andy

April 6th, 2020 08:21

Ache
Fay Slimm. said:

The force of lonely poison creeps through each line of this sad lament -- first rate writing Seren.

April 6th, 2020 06:54

Ache
dusk arising said:

A very mindful write. Loneliness can take us to the most interesting of places, onesuch you describe here with haunting tone.

April 6th, 2020 06:23

Lust
Goldfinch60 said:

Love can be so captivating.

Andy

April 5th, 2020 01:25

Prince
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words SerenWise.

Andy

April 4th, 2020 00:11

Prince
Fay Slimm. said:

Beautiful this tender write Seren - - am keeping this one. in my list of faves/

April 3rd, 2020 13:43

Loner\'s Lament
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write.

April 1st, 2020 02:09

Rekindling
Neville said:

what better way to awaken and rejoice in the warmth of a new day...

Super words indeed my friend....

Neville

March 28th, 2020 06:21

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