Comments received on poems by SerenWise
The Artist
Neville said:
You may be new here, but my word, you are to date enjoyed... Neville
February 3rd, 2019 11:23
Neville said:
You may be new here, but my word, you are to date enjoyed... Neville
February 3rd, 2019 11:23
Unravelling
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME SEREN ~ Thanks for your first MPS Poem which is bursting with emotion !
Verse 1. So soft ~ so gentle ~ love the opening line ! Yes from (or to) certain people ~ a glance can cause our tearnings to unravel !
Verse 2. Eyes alight ~ a fleeting touch ~ allows the mind to imagine a sunny riverbank tryst !
Verase 3. Your fantasy bridges Space & Time ~ Your Fever ~ Soothed and Your Heart Touched. An excellent Poem replete with Loves Hidden Meaning !
Yours through Poetry BRIAN & ANGELA !
Please check our site ~ Thanks.
February 2nd, 2019 20:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME SEREN ~ Thanks for your first MPS Poem which is bursting with emotion !
Verse 1. So soft ~ so gentle ~ love the opening line ! Yes from (or to) certain people ~ a glance can cause our tearnings to unravel !
Verse 2. Eyes alight ~ a fleeting touch ~ allows the mind to imagine a sunny riverbank tryst !
Verase 3. Your fantasy bridges Space & Time ~ Your Fever ~ Soothed and Your Heart Touched. An excellent Poem replete with Loves Hidden Meaning !
Yours through Poetry BRIAN & ANGELA !
Please check our site ~ Thanks.
February 2nd, 2019 20:12
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