Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Our Scars
dusk arising said:
So very true. Encompassing this struggle and perhaps what is to follow, i wrote tip-toeing, please have a peep.
The scars you mention are rarely visible from the outside unless one is so disturbed that they just live those scars and nothing else. Most of us disguise them and they only surface when certain situations bring out the learning journey we have trodden. Not easy, but hopefully we are able to act upon the wisdom gained.
April 21st, 2019 19:05
dusk arising said:
So very true. Encompassing this struggle and perhaps what is to follow, i wrote tip-toeing, please have a peep.
The scars you mention are rarely visible from the outside unless one is so disturbed that they just live those scars and nothing else. Most of us disguise them and they only surface when certain situations bring out the learning journey we have trodden. Not easy, but hopefully we are able to act upon the wisdom gained.
April 21st, 2019 19:05
Our Scars
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful verse of inspiration for moving forward scars and all. Thanks for sharing the best way to survive life\'s burdens my friend.
April 21st, 2019 13:26
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful verse of inspiration for moving forward scars and all. Thanks for sharing the best way to survive life\'s burdens my friend.
April 21st, 2019 13:26
Soulmating
Neville said:
when you got it that bad,, dont it just feel so damned good ..... stanza number one is almost to die for.... N
April 18th, 2019 15:16
Neville said:
when you got it that bad,, dont it just feel so damned good ..... stanza number one is almost to die for.... N
April 18th, 2019 15:16
I Am Enough
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write, your words always show that you are certainly enough.
April 18th, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write, your words always show that you are certainly enough.
April 18th, 2019 00:26
I Am Enough
Fay Slimm. said:
You are more than enough of a poet to rhyme this sad song so well Seren - - balance has always been a difficult state to maintain.......... an engaging read.
April 17th, 2019 14:49
Fay Slimm. said:
You are more than enough of a poet to rhyme this sad song so well Seren - - balance has always been a difficult state to maintain.......... an engaging read.
April 17th, 2019 14:49
I Am Enough
Neville said:
when you put it like that, I aint gonna argue.. would anyone...
but would ya prove it tho.. I double dare ya..... N
April 17th, 2019 12:58
Neville said:
when you put it like that, I aint gonna argue.. would anyone...
but would ya prove it tho.. I double dare ya..... N
April 17th, 2019 12:58
Lemon Rind
Neville said:
Oh\' sweet thing, you aint bitter by any chance are ya....
told as is and told real well... cheers, Neville
April 17th, 2019 02:18
Neville said:
Oh\' sweet thing, you aint bitter by any chance are ya....
told as is and told real well... cheers, Neville
April 17th, 2019 02:18
The Voyage
Neville said:
another love poem, that dances like a song on this readers tongue.... delicious.. N
April 16th, 2019 10:19
Neville said:
another love poem, that dances like a song on this readers tongue.... delicious.. N
April 16th, 2019 10:19
Genesis
Neville said:
When it bites, it bites hard and boy, when it does, dont it just feel great..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 03:10
Neville said:
When it bites, it bites hard and boy, when it does, dont it just feel great..... Neville
April 16th, 2019 03:10
The Voyage
Goldfinch60 said:
May those raging seas calm and you get home to your love sooner.
April 16th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May those raging seas calm and you get home to your love sooner.
April 16th, 2019 00:16
The Voyage
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a warm appeal in this message to a loved one Seren.
April 15th, 2019 15:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a warm appeal in this message to a loved one Seren.
April 15th, 2019 15:49
Genesis
moordykspot2 said:
Wonderfully expressed enjoy the experience. Thankyou
April 14th, 2019 08:35
moordykspot2 said:
Wonderfully expressed enjoy the experience. Thankyou
April 14th, 2019 08:35
F**k It
Neville said:
there now, dont that make ya feel better... best to get it off ya chest
Nice one............................ Neville
April 13th, 2019 04:17
Neville said:
there now, dont that make ya feel better... best to get it off ya chest
Nice one............................ Neville
April 13th, 2019 04:17
F**k It
dusk arising said:
Sometimes it is enough... sometimes those words just fill the space you exist in... sometimes it doesn\'t need saying.
Lucky the man/woman who is saying those words and hearing them echoed back.
April 13th, 2019 01:09
dusk arising said:
Sometimes it is enough... sometimes those words just fill the space you exist in... sometimes it doesn\'t need saying.
Lucky the man/woman who is saying those words and hearing them echoed back.
April 13th, 2019 01:09
Fancy a Brew?
Fay Slimm. said:
Perceptive use of words in this clever piece which tells a much bigger story than seen through the leaves....... good read Seren.
April 12th, 2019 15:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Perceptive use of words in this clever piece which tells a much bigger story than seen through the leaves....... good read Seren.
April 12th, 2019 15:56
Fancy a Brew?
Neville said:
Look closer, there is always something more to see.. always...
teabags killed the art of prophecy .. bring back the leaf, that\'s what I say.... Nice one Seren.... N
April 12th, 2019 11:58
Neville said:
Look closer, there is always something more to see.. always...
teabags killed the art of prophecy .. bring back the leaf, that\'s what I say.... Nice one Seren.... N
April 12th, 2019 11:58
Unexpected Perfection
Neville said:
It must be love.. so very well depicted here, if not.. then adoration surely.. N
April 11th, 2019 12:02
Neville said:
It must be love.. so very well depicted here, if not.. then adoration surely.. N
April 11th, 2019 12:02
Unexpected Perfection
moordykspot2 said:
A great piece of Writing Heartfelt and captivates this reader, reading that recalls the time I wished so much. I hope yours are realised. Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2019 12:16
moordykspot2 said:
A great piece of Writing Heartfelt and captivates this reader, reading that recalls the time I wished so much. I hope yours are realised. Thanks for sharing
April 10th, 2019 12:16
Unexpected Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, may you hearts and souls become one.
April 10th, 2019 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write, may you hearts and souls become one.
April 10th, 2019 00:35
You
Neville said:
They used to say possession is nine tenths of the law.... I say better call in the exorcist..... a delight to read.. must be love methinks... Neville
April 9th, 2019 12:40
Neville said:
They used to say possession is nine tenths of the law.... I say better call in the exorcist..... a delight to read.. must be love methinks... Neville
April 9th, 2019 12:40
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