Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Sweet Blasphemy
Neville said:
Perfectly poemed...
I aint gonna shave till tomorrow now..
Neville
June 30th, 2019 03:22
Neville said:
Perfectly poemed...
I aint gonna shave till tomorrow now..
Neville
June 30th, 2019 03:22
Sotto Voce
Neville said:
what a wonderful love poem you have crafted here, this poet whispers....
Neville
June 30th, 2019 03:15
Neville said:
what a wonderful love poem you have crafted here, this poet whispers....
Neville
June 30th, 2019 03:15
Sotto Voce
Fay Slimm. said:
A very expressive and tender love poem . One for my faves. Seren.
June 30th, 2019 01:56
Fay Slimm. said:
A very expressive and tender love poem . One for my faves. Seren.
June 30th, 2019 01:56
When My Life Begins
Neville said:
We all have such days and moments.. ... tis the uncertainty of when the next one will give us a tender hug that keeps us going, methinks.... Well penned my literary friend..... Neville
June 28th, 2019 04:24
Neville said:
We all have such days and moments.. ... tis the uncertainty of when the next one will give us a tender hug that keeps us going, methinks.... Well penned my literary friend..... Neville
June 28th, 2019 04:24
When My Life Begins
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes life can be begin when love arrives home again - - a lovely first read of my day Seren.
June 28th, 2019 02:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes life can be begin when love arrives home again - - a lovely first read of my day Seren.
June 28th, 2019 02:05
Linconnue de le Siene
kevin browne said:
A great and beautiful lamented story of a mystery unseen. Everything is clear, subtle, provocative followed by a style which I find quite talented. Great work here to be hung upon the wall.
June 24th, 2019 16:55
kevin browne said:
A great and beautiful lamented story of a mystery unseen. Everything is clear, subtle, provocative followed by a style which I find quite talented. Great work here to be hung upon the wall.
June 24th, 2019 16:55
Linconnue de le Siene
Fay Slimm. said:
A most interesting penned picture of an lovely unknown who supports those abandoned by silent appeals. Agree too with Neville that you chose just the right font for the story of why the death-mask of a famed and mysterious lady.
June 24th, 2019 16:19
Fay Slimm. said:
A most interesting penned picture of an lovely unknown who supports those abandoned by silent appeals. Agree too with Neville that you chose just the right font for the story of why the death-mask of a famed and mysterious lady.
June 24th, 2019 16:19
Linconnue de le Siene
Neville said:
what a delightful dedication to the tragic, mysterious and otherwise unknown woman of the Seine... I dont think you could have chosen a more fitting font either.... Neville
June 24th, 2019 11:09
Neville said:
what a delightful dedication to the tragic, mysterious and otherwise unknown woman of the Seine... I dont think you could have chosen a more fitting font either.... Neville
June 24th, 2019 11:09
Children of the Sun
Neville said:
a very much enjoyed dedication to what I suspect is one of our most important annual calendar events the always eagerly awaited Summer Solstice...... were you truly there.... it has been quite a few years since I last watched this most amazing spectacle first hand.... Neville
June 24th, 2019 10:51
Neville said:
a very much enjoyed dedication to what I suspect is one of our most important annual calendar events the always eagerly awaited Summer Solstice...... were you truly there.... it has been quite a few years since I last watched this most amazing spectacle first hand.... Neville
June 24th, 2019 10:51
Last Night, I Learned How to Pray
Neville said:
someone somewhere is gonna be gasping for breath......
Neville
June 23rd, 2019 17:06
Neville said:
someone somewhere is gonna be gasping for breath......
Neville
June 23rd, 2019 17:06
Millennial
Fay Slimm. said:
How powerful these words of reflection - -- a compelling feel of mysterious truth in this read Seren.
June 23rd, 2019 11:29
Fay Slimm. said:
How powerful these words of reflection - -- a compelling feel of mysterious truth in this read Seren.
June 23rd, 2019 11:29
Millennial
Neville said:
I cam to these fine words late because I have been away for a few days.... but no sooner am I back, than they are thoroughly enjoyed ... more eyes need to focus upon this page.. at least in my opinion....... Neville
June 23rd, 2019 10:35
Neville said:
I cam to these fine words late because I have been away for a few days.... but no sooner am I back, than they are thoroughly enjoyed ... more eyes need to focus upon this page.. at least in my opinion....... Neville
June 23rd, 2019 10:35
Children of the Sun
Goldfinch60 said:
May the sun always fill your life with joy, happiness and love.
June 22nd, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
May the sun always fill your life with joy, happiness and love.
June 22nd, 2019 00:18
Yours, Truly
Neville said:
It has gotta be the L thing... it can\'t be anything else surely....... very nicely poemed indeed.......... N
June 17th, 2019 03:28
Neville said:
It has gotta be the L thing... it can\'t be anything else surely....... very nicely poemed indeed.......... N
June 17th, 2019 03:28
Rain & Coffee
Goldfinch60 said:
Your future will be fine and the light within it will dispel the raindrops.
June 13th, 2019 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Your future will be fine and the light within it will dispel the raindrops.
June 13th, 2019 00:50
New Definitions
kevin browne said:
A passing glimpse of where you once roamed. I love this, beautifully done and caught my heart upon your sleeve.
June 10th, 2019 10:29
kevin browne said:
A passing glimpse of where you once roamed. I love this, beautifully done and caught my heart upon your sleeve.
June 10th, 2019 10:29
New Definitions
Neville said:
and each a defining moment that shapes a brand new you..... sounds like you are on the move , tho wistfully ....
June 10th, 2019 02:59
Neville said:
and each a defining moment that shapes a brand new you..... sounds like you are on the move , tho wistfully ....
June 10th, 2019 02:59
My Muse
Fay Slimm. said:
Your Muse is well loved I see Seren - keep writing sweet poetry to whomever as when read it will bring warmth to a special heart.
June 6th, 2019 13:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Your Muse is well loved I see Seren - keep writing sweet poetry to whomever as when read it will bring warmth to a special heart.
June 6th, 2019 13:15
My Muse
Neville said:
someone somewhere is gonna be tickled pink & blushing scarlet...
I think your muse may well be a red herring... I hope so.. be happy.
Neville
June 6th, 2019 13:10
Neville said:
someone somewhere is gonna be tickled pink & blushing scarlet...
I think your muse may well be a red herring... I hope so.. be happy.
Neville
June 6th, 2019 13:10
My Muse
Goldfinch60 said:
Your muse brings words to your page and love to your heart.
June 6th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Your muse brings words to your page and love to your heart.
June 6th, 2019 00:16
One Day
Goldfinch60 said:
The happiness and light are there for you - hopefully this day.
June 4th, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
The happiness and light are there for you - hopefully this day.
June 4th, 2019 00:40
One Day
Neville said:
as a general rule, it would not seem too much to ask, but then again.. it depends on what you may have done previously...... unhappiness is a state of mind.. not just a statement..... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 23:08
Neville said:
as a general rule, it would not seem too much to ask, but then again.. it depends on what you may have done previously...... unhappiness is a state of mind.. not just a statement..... Neville
June 3rd, 2019 23:08
Where Are You Tonight?
Neville said:
perfectly penned my friend... and you mention one of my favourite birds too..... these words also look great on the page..... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 04:29
Neville said:
perfectly penned my friend... and you mention one of my favourite birds too..... these words also look great on the page..... Neville
June 2nd, 2019 04:29
Where Are You Tonight?
dusk arising said:
Hmmm maybe you dont want to hear the reply to the songs question.
I\'m guessing you already know the answer.
But now you\'ll tell me that it was all a made up thing, just a poem dusk.
And my reply is, well it\'s so well written that i felt it\'s anguish.
Good one.
June 2nd, 2019 01:45
dusk arising said:
Hmmm maybe you dont want to hear the reply to the songs question.
I\'m guessing you already know the answer.
But now you\'ll tell me that it was all a made up thing, just a poem dusk.
And my reply is, well it\'s so well written that i felt it\'s anguish.
Good one.
June 2nd, 2019 01:45
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