Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Thinking Out Loud
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh this is perfectly versed with a splash of great tenderness after a period of wondering why - - romance without a doubt appears in each line of your second stanza - well done indeed Seren.
April 10th, 2020 07:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh this is perfectly versed with a splash of great tenderness after a period of wondering why - - romance without a doubt appears in each line of your second stanza - well done indeed Seren.
April 10th, 2020 07:41
Thinking Out Loud
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write, that love will be there forever.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 05:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write, that love will be there forever.
Andy
April 10th, 2020 05:41
Thinking Out Loud
Neville said:
very well expressed... that has just gotta be love..
Neville
April 10th, 2020 05:20
Neville said:
very well expressed... that has just gotta be love..
Neville
April 10th, 2020 05:20
Ache
MendedFences27 said:
I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one another, trees, reeds, timber, limbs.
Tears and loneliness are such a sad ending. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 22:24
MendedFences27 said:
I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one another, trees, reeds, timber, limbs.
Tears and loneliness are such a sad ending. - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 22:24
Ache
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that loneliness may be within you but I am sure your writing helps to cure that loneliness as you lose yourself in your wonderful words.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 08:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, that loneliness may be within you but I am sure your writing helps to cure that loneliness as you lose yourself in your wonderful words.
Andy
April 6th, 2020 08:21
Ache
Fay Slimm. said:
The force of lonely poison creeps through each line of this sad lament -- first rate writing Seren.
April 6th, 2020 06:54
Fay Slimm. said:
The force of lonely poison creeps through each line of this sad lament -- first rate writing Seren.
April 6th, 2020 06:54
Ache
dusk arising said:
A very mindful write. Loneliness can take us to the most interesting of places, onesuch you describe here with haunting tone.
April 6th, 2020 06:23
dusk arising said:
A very mindful write. Loneliness can take us to the most interesting of places, onesuch you describe here with haunting tone.
April 6th, 2020 06:23
Prince
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful this tender write Seren - - am keeping this one. in my list of faves/
April 3rd, 2020 13:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Beautiful this tender write Seren - - am keeping this one. in my list of faves/
April 3rd, 2020 13:43
Rekindling
Neville said:
what better way to awaken and rejoice in the warmth of a new day...
Super words indeed my friend....
Neville
March 28th, 2020 06:21
Neville said:
what better way to awaken and rejoice in the warmth of a new day...
Super words indeed my friend....
Neville
March 28th, 2020 06:21
Rekindling
Fay Slimm. said:
Compelling imagery in this emotive invite - - I love the calming effect of the metre you use to portray the thought of Rekindling - - good read Seren.
March 28th, 2020 03:17
Fay Slimm. said:
Compelling imagery in this emotive invite - - I love the calming effect of the metre you use to portray the thought of Rekindling - - good read Seren.
March 28th, 2020 03:17
Soul Search
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love blossom with your words Seren.
Andy
March 14th, 2020 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love blossom with your words Seren.
Andy
March 14th, 2020 02:05
Soul Sounds
Saxon Crow said:
Very cool poem. I wonder what you mean by bitter recreation... hmmm
February 28th, 2020 09:11
Saxon Crow said:
Very cool poem. I wonder what you mean by bitter recreation... hmmm
February 28th, 2020 09:11
Soul Sounds
Goldfinch60 said:
Those buzzards can lift you from your low place, just keep watching them and you will fly with them.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those buzzards can lift you from your low place, just keep watching them and you will fly with them.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:35
Único
Fay Slimm. said:
A perfect and very poetic Valentine which no normal male would be able to resist............. full of delectable imagery make this a lovely read - - thank you Seren.
February 14th, 2020 05:18
Fay Slimm. said:
A perfect and very poetic Valentine which no normal male would be able to resist............. full of delectable imagery make this a lovely read - - thank you Seren.
February 14th, 2020 05:18
Único
Neville said:
Ah\' yes.. this is what they want..... nice one my friend.... I\'m more into slippers and cocoa these days..... sadly..
Neville
February 14th, 2020 04:01
Neville said:
Ah\' yes.. this is what they want..... nice one my friend.... I\'m more into slippers and cocoa these days..... sadly..
Neville
February 14th, 2020 04:01
Child of the Tempest
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate piece of work Seren - feeling the storm through your graphic lines gives the scene life and ends on an impressively deep finalé. This one goes to my faves.
February 10th, 2020 17:17
Fay Slimm. said:
A first rate piece of work Seren - feeling the storm through your graphic lines gives the scene life and ends on an impressively deep finalé. This one goes to my faves.
February 10th, 2020 17:17
Child of the Tempest
Neville said:
Deeper than forty feet I would say and deceptively higher too... enjoyed from the basement to the topmost floor..... Neville
February 10th, 2020 16:34
Neville said:
Deeper than forty feet I would say and deceptively higher too... enjoyed from the basement to the topmost floor..... Neville
February 10th, 2020 16:34
Child of the Tempest
Goldfinch60 said:
Those storms can bring us such wonder within us.
February 10th, 2020 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Those storms can bring us such wonder within us.
February 10th, 2020 02:50
Midnight
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture with well written rhyme the sense of a scary night scene so well here Seren - good to have you back posting again my friend.
February 5th, 2020 02:44
Fay Slimm. said:
You capture with well written rhyme the sense of a scary night scene so well here Seren - good to have you back posting again my friend.
February 5th, 2020 02:44
Midnight
Nicholas Browning said:
What a solid piece of work. This plays out like a little movie scene in the brain. Gonna read it a couple more times.
February 4th, 2020 22:15
Nicholas Browning said:
What a solid piece of work. This plays out like a little movie scene in the brain. Gonna read it a couple more times.
February 4th, 2020 22:15
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