Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Arid
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pull of appeal in these few sad lines Seren - -- Arid indeed is life without the one whom we love.
June 1st, 2019 00:50
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a pull of appeal in these few sad lines Seren - -- Arid indeed is life without the one whom we love.
June 1st, 2019 00:50
Lupinus
Neville said:
to say I\'m not delighted to be the first, would be an understatement...
to say I\'m off to take a shower, would be a lie..
A cracking good punchy erotic post.. is perfectly put... and true... Neville
May 31st, 2019 08:22
Neville said:
to say I\'m not delighted to be the first, would be an understatement...
to say I\'m off to take a shower, would be a lie..
A cracking good punchy erotic post.. is perfectly put... and true... Neville
May 31st, 2019 08:22
Child
Suresh said:
I can feel the pain in your poetic words, hoping that this a no more than that.
In case of otherwise, you have already started your journey to rid yourself of this pain, by taking the first step of realizing the cause.
Try to focus on one really pleasant event, and then expending that moment.
May 30th, 2019 14:21
Suresh said:
I can feel the pain in your poetic words, hoping that this a no more than that.
In case of otherwise, you have already started your journey to rid yourself of this pain, by taking the first step of realizing the cause.
Try to focus on one really pleasant event, and then expending that moment.
May 30th, 2019 14:21
Child
Neville said:
a thoroughly enjoyed poem, and one that makes me wanna give you a gentle friendly hug...... N
May 30th, 2019 13:06
Neville said:
a thoroughly enjoyed poem, and one that makes me wanna give you a gentle friendly hug...... N
May 30th, 2019 13:06
Express
Neville said:
well and truly expressed.. now aint that\'s what poets do best..... Neville
May 27th, 2019 12:17
Neville said:
well and truly expressed.. now aint that\'s what poets do best..... Neville
May 27th, 2019 12:17
Express
Goldfinch60 said:
The words that have flown onto this page are so emotive but no sign of abuse so all is well.
May 27th, 2019 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
The words that have flown onto this page are so emotive but no sign of abuse so all is well.
May 27th, 2019 00:20
Our Truth
Neville said:
your truth & trust shared, are all that really matter.... muchly enjoyed my friend... N
May 26th, 2019 04:52
Neville said:
your truth & trust shared, are all that really matter.... muchly enjoyed my friend... N
May 26th, 2019 04:52
Our Truth
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of conviction and in such romantic words - - - devotion to truth is vital for love to survive and your verse expresses this thought very well Seren.
May 26th, 2019 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of conviction and in such romantic words - - - devotion to truth is vital for love to survive and your verse expresses this thought very well Seren.
May 26th, 2019 03:53
Demesne
Neville said:
I was just thinking about having a shave... but I guess it can wait a while longer.... a nice, mildly seductive bit o erotica..... Neville
May 23rd, 2019 13:29
Neville said:
I was just thinking about having a shave... but I guess it can wait a while longer.... a nice, mildly seductive bit o erotica..... Neville
May 23rd, 2019 13:29
Mon Amour
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful loving write Suresh, absolutely wonderful.
May 22nd, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful loving write Suresh, absolutely wonderful.
May 22nd, 2019 00:48
Mon Amour
Neville said:
I was write.. it is love... it has just gotta be...... N
May 21st, 2019 17:38
Neville said:
I was write.. it is love... it has just gotta be...... N
May 21st, 2019 17:38
Diamonds and Dust
SoulMeetsBody said:
There\'s a line from the one hit wonder Somebody That I Used To Know that\'s always stuck with me - \"You can get addicted to a certain kind of sadness\". I feel like that encapsulates the tone of the poem. I love the poetic and the almost, but not quite melodrama (due to being written with what seems to be a genuine sadness) of the first part before going into a harsher and colder description of what sadness can really be like when you strip away the catharsis. Just pure and bleak nothingness. Depression if you will. And with a further mirroring in the title - the beauty of diamonds with the nothingness of dust. A brilliant poem, absolutely stunning.
May 20th, 2019 15:40
SoulMeetsBody said:
There\'s a line from the one hit wonder Somebody That I Used To Know that\'s always stuck with me - \"You can get addicted to a certain kind of sadness\". I feel like that encapsulates the tone of the poem. I love the poetic and the almost, but not quite melodrama (due to being written with what seems to be a genuine sadness) of the first part before going into a harsher and colder description of what sadness can really be like when you strip away the catharsis. Just pure and bleak nothingness. Depression if you will. And with a further mirroring in the title - the beauty of diamonds with the nothingness of dust. A brilliant poem, absolutely stunning.
May 20th, 2019 15:40
Diamonds and Dust
Neville said:
you only need ask and I will lend you an ancient quilt and a tie for those tresses..... very nicely poemed in my opinion....... thank you say\'s I ....
May 20th, 2019 14:53
Neville said:
you only need ask and I will lend you an ancient quilt and a tie for those tresses..... very nicely poemed in my opinion....... thank you say\'s I ....
May 20th, 2019 14:53
Diamonds and Dust
dusk arising said:
heres an extract from something i wrote recently:-
for thats where every poet
is the same, dontcha know it
our hearts on our sleeves
showing inside we bleed
but sometimes it just don\'t chime
making pain into rhyme
it ain\'t always pretty
when you\'re down feeling shitty
your words made me think, i know just how you feel both inside and how it can look in poetry.
Great tragic writing from you.
May 20th, 2019 14:46
dusk arising said:
heres an extract from something i wrote recently:-
for thats where every poet
is the same, dontcha know it
our hearts on our sleeves
showing inside we bleed
but sometimes it just don\'t chime
making pain into rhyme
it ain\'t always pretty
when you\'re down feeling shitty
your words made me think, i know just how you feel both inside and how it can look in poetry.
Great tragic writing from you.
May 20th, 2019 14:46
Distant
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully sad read Seren with such an appealing final line.
May 19th, 2019 13:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautifully sad read Seren with such an appealing final line.
May 19th, 2019 13:24
Distant
Neville said:
I\'m guessing that if you had not felt it, you would not have been able to write about it .... enjoyed by me and then some...... N
May 19th, 2019 12:47
Neville said:
I\'m guessing that if you had not felt it, you would not have been able to write about it .... enjoyed by me and then some...... N
May 19th, 2019 12:47
An Old Saying
Goldfinch60 said:
May your wounds be healed and never happen again.
May 15th, 2019 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
May your wounds be healed and never happen again.
May 15th, 2019 00:17
An Old Saying
Gary Edward Geraci said:
May this, your cleaning water, be drawn at last from His living fountain dearest one.
May 14th, 2019 20:41
Gary Edward Geraci said:
May this, your cleaning water, be drawn at last from His living fountain dearest one.
May 14th, 2019 20:41
Love Letter
Fay Slimm. said:
Honest and full of delightful imagery this ode to devotion comes home loud and clear to my poetic ear. - - lovely read Seren.
May 14th, 2019 00:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Honest and full of delightful imagery this ode to devotion comes home loud and clear to my poetic ear. - - lovely read Seren.
May 14th, 2019 00:53
The Forest Shrine
Goldfinch60 said:
Forests are so special, they will always be with us as your words will be.
May 8th, 2019 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Forests are so special, they will always be with us as your words will be.
May 8th, 2019 00:40
The Forest Shrine
moordykspot2 said:
An enjoyable Piece Giving different thought processes throughout. Ah the Hawthorn I hope not the wild sort it rips you to shreds. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:32
moordykspot2 said:
An enjoyable Piece Giving different thought processes throughout. Ah the Hawthorn I hope not the wild sort it rips you to shreds. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:32
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