Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Withdrawal
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a great ending, those pills can be so important.
February 20th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write with a great ending, those pills can be so important.
February 20th, 2019 01:27
Withdrawal
Neville said:
this is brill .. always say it like it is..
respect N x
February 19th, 2019 18:10
Neville said:
this is brill .. always say it like it is..
respect N x
February 19th, 2019 18:10
Making Poetry
FineB said:
Delightful Serenwise!
A wonderful poem and spoken by a poet indeed!
Keep writing Fine B
February 18th, 2019 18:46
FineB said:
Delightful Serenwise!
A wonderful poem and spoken by a poet indeed!
Keep writing Fine B
February 18th, 2019 18:46
Making Poetry
kevin browne said:
A superb bit of poetic imagery blooming from start to finish. I was certainly captured with this one. Great work!
February 18th, 2019 15:29
kevin browne said:
A superb bit of poetic imagery blooming from start to finish. I was certainly captured with this one. Great work!
February 18th, 2019 15:29
Love Letter to Luna
Goldfinch60 said:
She is so wonderful to see and she guards over us with love and brilliance.
February 18th, 2019 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
She is so wonderful to see and she guards over us with love and brilliance.
February 18th, 2019 01:17
Love Letter to Luna
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING SEREN ! I love SISTER LUNA. We have pretty clear nights in Essex UK ~ so most nights I can have discourse with SISTER LUNA. She is so consistent in Time & Place & Waxing & Waning ~ She gives me confidence that all iwell in my neck of the Woods. Love the MOON and would love to walk on Her surface one day ! Everything about Her is perfect ~ Composition ~ Size ~ Distance form the Earth and Time of rotation round the Earth etc. She causes tides ~ gives light at night and controls cycles. She is unique and Science cant agree as to how She was formed. She is unique ~
The Good Book says GOD MADE Her ~ OK !
Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
February 17th, 2019 18:19
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING SEREN ! I love SISTER LUNA. We have pretty clear nights in Essex UK ~ so most nights I can have discourse with SISTER LUNA. She is so consistent in Time & Place & Waxing & Waning ~ She gives me confidence that all iwell in my neck of the Woods. Love the MOON and would love to walk on Her surface one day ! Everything about Her is perfect ~ Composition ~ Size ~ Distance form the Earth and Time of rotation round the Earth etc. She causes tides ~ gives light at night and controls cycles. She is unique and Science cant agree as to how She was formed. She is unique ~
The Good Book says GOD MADE Her ~ OK !
Blessings BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
February 17th, 2019 18:19
The Sands
Amherrera1190 said:
Wow your poems are some of my favorites. You are very talented.🖤🖤👌
February 16th, 2019 17:40
Amherrera1190 said:
Wow your poems are some of my favorites. You are very talented.🖤🖤👌
February 16th, 2019 17:40
Bohemia
Neville said:
Oh\' how I would like a slice of that... and a large slice too if you would be so very kind...... Bless ya Neville
February 16th, 2019 12:38
Neville said:
Oh\' how I would like a slice of that... and a large slice too if you would be so very kind...... Bless ya Neville
February 16th, 2019 12:38
The Sands
Neville said:
what a sad, almost mournful page I have stumbled upon... nicely penned tho regardless......... Neville
February 16th, 2019 12:00
Neville said:
what a sad, almost mournful page I have stumbled upon... nicely penned tho regardless......... Neville
February 16th, 2019 12:00
Bohemia
Kurt Philip Behm said:
\"Nothing to do
but everything to feel\"
I love it!
Kurt
February 15th, 2019 12:32
Kurt Philip Behm said:
\"Nothing to do
but everything to feel\"
I love it!
Kurt
February 15th, 2019 12:32
Lemon Rind
dusk arising said:
Shame that there are those among us who make us feel this way sometimes. There is anger lurking in your words... and rightly so.
February 13th, 2019 14:00
dusk arising said:
Shame that there are those among us who make us feel this way sometimes. There is anger lurking in your words... and rightly so.
February 13th, 2019 14:00
Lemon Rind
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow I absolutely love this.
Feels really raw and emotive.
I liked
I\'m not to be devoured by your salacious eyes
Especially.
Starred...x
February 13th, 2019 10:05
JaydeVictoria said:
Wow I absolutely love this.
Feels really raw and emotive.
I liked
I\'m not to be devoured by your salacious eyes
Especially.
Starred...x
February 13th, 2019 10:05
21st Century Vampire
FineB said:
Hi Serenwise,
Thank you for this good and vivid poem and fascinating journey into the vampire world!
Keep writing
FineB
February 13th, 2019 03:31
FineB said:
Hi Serenwise,
Thank you for this good and vivid poem and fascinating journey into the vampire world!
Keep writing
FineB
February 13th, 2019 03:31
Null & Void
Amherrera1190 said:
Deep words very relatable my kind of poetry.
February 12th, 2019 19:13
Amherrera1190 said:
Deep words very relatable my kind of poetry.
February 12th, 2019 19:13
Secrets
dusk arising said:
Wonderful! and if you knew those fantasies would they please you or worry you sick.... for we all have them. But there is another dream, to be able to share those wildest fantasies of your dreamworlds desires with your trusted loving soulmate......... now wouldnt that be something poetic and raw.
February 8th, 2019 17:32
dusk arising said:
Wonderful! and if you knew those fantasies would they please you or worry you sick.... for we all have them. But there is another dream, to be able to share those wildest fantasies of your dreamworlds desires with your trusted loving soulmate......... now wouldnt that be something poetic and raw.
February 8th, 2019 17:32
Sweet Blasphemy
A said:
best sex poem ive read? This is actually really good, and i think it captures your theme on both a literary and intimate level. Keep up the writing!
February 7th, 2019 00:41
A said:
best sex poem ive read? This is actually really good, and i think it captures your theme on both a literary and intimate level. Keep up the writing!
February 7th, 2019 00:41
Medusa
CindyB said:
There is truly nothing worse than asking ourselves \"what if?\"
That pain is laid bare here. There\'s truth in this.... beautifully written.
February 5th, 2019 00:39
CindyB said:
There is truly nothing worse than asking ourselves \"what if?\"
That pain is laid bare here. There\'s truth in this.... beautifully written.
February 5th, 2019 00:39
Maria
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SEREN for a very moving Poem ! In our experience ~ Just as God inhabited the Temple of Jerusalem ~ so He inhabits every Church on Earth today and we feel His presence in the House of God ~ AMEN Verse1. Place of Sanctuary V 2. House of Prayer V 3. Need to be cuddled with God\'s Love V 4. Memories V 5. Gazing Heavenwards & feeling CRUCIFIED ~ contact with the DIVINE ~ AMEN.
ANGELA & I love to visit \"CHURCHES\" wherever we are in the WORLD ! Once we were invited to a Wedding another time to a Christening and a Communion Service in a Shell of a Church in Ephesus ! In every Church we enter we ALWAYS meet GOD and we light candles for Friends & Relations who are sick !
Your lovely poem brought back many memories !
Blessings & Hugs ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡
Please check ANGELAS poem \"Love Me love my Cat\" ~ THANKS !
February 4th, 2019 12:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SEREN for a very moving Poem ! In our experience ~ Just as God inhabited the Temple of Jerusalem ~ so He inhabits every Church on Earth today and we feel His presence in the House of God ~ AMEN Verse1. Place of Sanctuary V 2. House of Prayer V 3. Need to be cuddled with God\'s Love V 4. Memories V 5. Gazing Heavenwards & feeling CRUCIFIED ~ contact with the DIVINE ~ AMEN.
ANGELA & I love to visit \"CHURCHES\" wherever we are in the WORLD ! Once we were invited to a Wedding another time to a Christening and a Communion Service in a Shell of a Church in Ephesus ! In every Church we enter we ALWAYS meet GOD and we light candles for Friends & Relations who are sick !
Your lovely poem brought back many memories !
Blessings & Hugs ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡
Please check ANGELAS poem \"Love Me love my Cat\" ~ THANKS !
February 4th, 2019 12:21
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