Comments received on poems by SerenWise
Hole Hearted
Goldfinch60 said:
May your heart be filled with what could be. Wonderful words.
March 17th, 2019 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May your heart be filled with what could be. Wonderful words.
March 17th, 2019 01:47
Hole Hearted
Nicholas Browning said:
Ah HAH! I see! Aching for possibility! For this I weep, and for this I aspire. Well said.
March 16th, 2019 14:38
Nicholas Browning said:
Ah HAH! I see! Aching for possibility! For this I weep, and for this I aspire. Well said.
March 16th, 2019 14:38
Home
sylviasearcher said:
A painful piece. That hope for respite is a familiar feeling. I hope writing it out gave you if but a moment of peace and warmth.
Your words are home 🌈
March 16th, 2019 04:41
sylviasearcher said:
A painful piece. That hope for respite is a familiar feeling. I hope writing it out gave you if but a moment of peace and warmth.
Your words are home 🌈
March 16th, 2019 04:41
Mirrored Thoughts
sylviasearcher said:
I love this it’s like the painful yearning for a puzzle
March 14th, 2019 05:50
sylviasearcher said:
I love this it’s like the painful yearning for a puzzle
March 14th, 2019 05:50
Mirrored Thoughts
Nicholas Browning said:
A bit cryptic but I like it. Sometimes when we look in the mirror we don\'t always like what looks back at us.
March 14th, 2019 00:11
Nicholas Browning said:
A bit cryptic but I like it. Sometimes when we look in the mirror we don\'t always like what looks back at us.
March 14th, 2019 00:11
Wrecking Ball
dusk arising said:
Ah but did you learn from it? do you feel better for it being your past not your present?.... so why pity? you\'re wiser and stronger..... tomorrow is waiting.
March 11th, 2019 14:40
dusk arising said:
Ah but did you learn from it? do you feel better for it being your past not your present?.... so why pity? you\'re wiser and stronger..... tomorrow is waiting.
March 11th, 2019 14:40
Persistence of Memory
Neville said:
Have ya ever met a rich poet yet.. nah and dont hold your breath.... there are a lot of us hungry ones around tho... nice one friend.... N
March 8th, 2019 14:16
Neville said:
Have ya ever met a rich poet yet.. nah and dont hold your breath.... there are a lot of us hungry ones around tho... nice one friend.... N
March 8th, 2019 14:16
Art Prostitute
sylviasearcher said:
An interesting take on art, written exsquisitely!
March 6th, 2019 02:50
sylviasearcher said:
An interesting take on art, written exsquisitely!
March 6th, 2019 02:50
Art Prostitute
elmina said:
this was so unique and well thought out, i love it! you have a way with words, please keep writing!!
March 5th, 2019 23:27
elmina said:
this was so unique and well thought out, i love it! you have a way with words, please keep writing!!
March 5th, 2019 23:27
Remember the Now
Fay Slimm. said:
Bound we all are indeed seren - - a medley of reasons to take care of our heritage and hear a bit more the voices of memory. - - a first class write.
March 5th, 2019 11:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Bound we all are indeed seren - - a medley of reasons to take care of our heritage and hear a bit more the voices of memory. - - a first class write.
March 5th, 2019 11:59
Remember the Now
Jo March said:
It\'s a wonderful poem! I think we are definitely all bound, as you say \"by persistence and memory\". We really have no reason to consider ourselves superior. I think this is also one of the main reasons why we should study the history of our ancestors. We should never forget how we got to where we are now. After all, we started off as cave men, as you say, \"no better than beasts\". So, we shouldn\'t think of ourselves as the superior human race because we all walk \"in the footprints / of many thousands...\" Our persistence and memory make us who we are. Thank you for the poem!
March 5th, 2019 01:50
Jo March said:
It\'s a wonderful poem! I think we are definitely all bound, as you say \"by persistence and memory\". We really have no reason to consider ourselves superior. I think this is also one of the main reasons why we should study the history of our ancestors. We should never forget how we got to where we are now. After all, we started off as cave men, as you say, \"no better than beasts\". So, we shouldn\'t think of ourselves as the superior human race because we all walk \"in the footprints / of many thousands...\" Our persistence and memory make us who we are. Thank you for the poem!
March 5th, 2019 01:50
Remember the Now
Neville said:
Thoroughly enjoyed from one end to the very other... and am delighted to have been the first to leave a comment..... Neville
March 4th, 2019 12:52
Neville said:
Thoroughly enjoyed from one end to the very other... and am delighted to have been the first to leave a comment..... Neville
March 4th, 2019 12:52
Glossed Remorse
sylviasearcher said:
This one just kind of drenched me in a cloak of your glossed remorse.
Dark but it really gets under your skin.
March 3rd, 2019 04:17
sylviasearcher said:
This one just kind of drenched me in a cloak of your glossed remorse.
Dark but it really gets under your skin.
March 3rd, 2019 04:17
Glossed Remorse
Neville said:
No better way to go than to drown in some form of art... poetry would be my preferred demise..... an interesting and well formed poem that needs to be revisited every now and again ... N
March 2nd, 2019 16:25
Neville said:
No better way to go than to drown in some form of art... poetry would be my preferred demise..... an interesting and well formed poem that needs to be revisited every now and again ... N
March 2nd, 2019 16:25
Dead to Lights
sylviasearcher said:
A very relatable write, but I sensed a tenderness as I read which tells me there is hope 🌟
March 2nd, 2019 04:12
sylviasearcher said:
A very relatable write, but I sensed a tenderness as I read which tells me there is hope 🌟
March 2nd, 2019 04:12
Window Pain
Neville said:
enjoyed and then some...
and what\'s more.. oh\' how I just love the word gloaming....
we have so much of it around here unspoken and uncelebrated, tis such a crying shame..... N
February 28th, 2019 16:25
Neville said:
enjoyed and then some...
and what\'s more.. oh\' how I just love the word gloaming....
we have so much of it around here unspoken and uncelebrated, tis such a crying shame..... N
February 28th, 2019 16:25
The West
Neville said:
this has surely got to be one of my fave Seren Wise poems yet... N x
February 27th, 2019 14:56
Neville said:
this has surely got to be one of my fave Seren Wise poems yet... N x
February 27th, 2019 14:56
Lupine
Neville said:
How I would to be your wolf.... fine words indeed, and then some... N
February 27th, 2019 14:53
Neville said:
How I would to be your wolf.... fine words indeed, and then some... N
February 27th, 2019 14:53
The West
dusk arising said:
Both the joy and pain of a romance divided by an ocean call out from your writing. Difficult relationships to maintain, i failed at them.
February 26th, 2019 17:19
dusk arising said:
Both the joy and pain of a romance divided by an ocean call out from your writing. Difficult relationships to maintain, i failed at them.
February 26th, 2019 17:19
Body Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:
Love was not described better seren - - look forward to reading more of your work.
February 25th, 2019 13:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Love was not described better seren - - look forward to reading more of your work.
February 25th, 2019 13:53
Body Poetry
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SEREN for a really powerful meditative POEM ! Thats how I see my Brian : when He comes on SKYPE across 11,500 miles (UK to NZ) : sad that I cant actually touch his lovely face ! BUT he will be with me again (for two whole weeks) in APRIL : AMEN.
Thanks for sharing & caring
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡
February 24th, 2019 04:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SEREN for a really powerful meditative POEM ! Thats how I see my Brian : when He comes on SKYPE across 11,500 miles (UK to NZ) : sad that I cant actually touch his lovely face ! BUT he will be with me again (for two whole weeks) in APRIL : AMEN.
Thanks for sharing & caring
Love through Poetry : ANGELA 🧡
February 24th, 2019 04:24
Body Poetry
Neville said:
great body, flow, form and symmetry in fact, greater than the sum of its parts... a delightfully delicious bit o poetry dear starving poet & fine literary friend...... Neville
February 24th, 2019 02:44
Neville said:
great body, flow, form and symmetry in fact, greater than the sum of its parts... a delightfully delicious bit o poetry dear starving poet & fine literary friend...... Neville
February 24th, 2019 02:44
Mother
FineB said:
Hello Seren,
A lovely and beautiful poem.
Thank you.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:12
FineB said:
Hello Seren,
A lovely and beautiful poem.
Thank you.
Keep writing FineB.
February 23rd, 2019 05:12
The Theologian
Neville said:
Theologian\'s can wonder too as they wander with purpose, heads turned t\'ward sky................ intriguingly revealing, if I may say so.... N
February 21st, 2019 18:17
Neville said:
Theologian\'s can wonder too as they wander with purpose, heads turned t\'ward sky................ intriguingly revealing, if I may say so.... N
February 21st, 2019 18:17
The Lonely Sunflower
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you use the seasons to represent change and loss but end with hope.
February 21st, 2019 02:25
sylviasearcher said:
I like how you use the seasons to represent change and loss but end with hope.
February 21st, 2019 02:25
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