Comments received on poems by dominique ruth

If I could
FineB said:

Hello Dominique,

A lovely and enchanting write.

At the end of the day true contentment in life comes with being at peace with ourselves.

Keep writing FineB

October 30th, 2019 16:58

If I could
Nicholas Browning said:

I found this quite comical. Nice little twist at the end.

March 14th, 2019 16:41

I want to play outside
Nicholas Browning said:

This is a tragedy all of its own.

March 13th, 2019 20:04

I was born wrong

Thanks for sharing RUTH ! In my view we are all born RIGHT but DIFFERENT ! This also seems to be your conclusion. What we are is GOD\'s Gift to US ~ what we make of ourselves is our Gift back to GOD ! I was Governor in a Comprehensive School and each year we took in a few Downs Syndrome Pupils into Year 7. they needed some 1:1 Supervision ~ BUT ~ they were so happy & communicative they gave far more to the School than we gave them ! Everybody loved them ! We all have SPECIFIC NEEDS ~ those less able and the very gifted. SO be yourself and YOU will succeed !
Yours through Poetry

March 10th, 2019 18:01

I was born wrong
Suresh said:

You are already a STAR, by accepting your physical condition, and challenging to STAND OUT.

Well written.

March 10th, 2019 12:53

I was born wrong
FineB said:

Thank you Dominique.

A lovely poem it is indeed the things in ourselves that are so different that will define us and mark our presence in the world!

Keep writing FineB.

March 10th, 2019 12:19

I was born wrong
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s those who fail you who were born wrong - not you. My guess is you\'re a strong young lady and my wishes go out to you.i

March 10th, 2019 10:55

Michael Edwards said:

A super read Dominique and I\'ve just read your fusion. Not yet a friend so I can\'t contribute to it but I was so moved - a really touching write and my heart goes out to you.

March 10th, 2019 08:49

Love is so strange
elmina said:

a very well written piece! i love the way you took reality and looked at love as it can both wreck you or warm you from within yourself! continue writing!!

March 1st, 2019 00:10

Saviour life’s moments

SLOW down yer move too fast
GOTTA make the Mornin\' last
Kickin along the cobble stones
An feelin GROOOOOVY !
Simon & Garfunkel ~ 1967

Thanks\\ for carin & sharin RUTH ! Very good advice ~ we live in a RUSHY WORLD and want everythin done YESTERDAY. If we carry on @ this rate we\'ll all be dead by 50 and never gat a chance to relax with our Grandchildren !
Love & Blessin 24/7 AMEN !

February 15th, 2019 10:26

Saviour life’s moments
dusk arising said:

Great and such good advice in a lovely positive package. I like this, pleasure to read.

February 15th, 2019 09:22

Stick to it
dominique ruth said:

Hey Angela, I am sorry if this poem has upset you any shape of form but it’s interesting that you think the mother wanted coustody, this poem can be seen differently to different people but I can say one thing, you are right that the mother is suppose to be engourging.

February 15th, 2019 06:09

Stick to it

CONTINUED ......... The Mothers attitude changes and she wants custody of the Child. Would her attitude be different if it had been a GRANDDAUGHTER and not a GRANDSON ? Thanks for sharing : ANGELA Please check our site : Thanks

February 14th, 2019 19:29

Stick to it

WELCOME RUTH : Angela here. Thanks for your first |Poem which I found intriguing. Personally I find my Female Friends Physically attarctive but they do not raise my libido like my Fiancee Brian does. However I do have close female Friends who are in a Pratnership with another Lady. This seems to be the story in your Poem. A Mother encourages her Daughter to take her Lady friend as a Wife. However when they have a Child

February 14th, 2019 19:16