Comments received on poems by vanessa wallace
Stop
dusk arising said:
You will only hear crap if you mix with people who talk crap. If you are above the crap, step away from the crap.
There will always be crap, walk away from it and steer your own path regardless.
April 4th, 2020 06:17
dusk arising said:
You will only hear crap if you mix with people who talk crap. If you are above the crap, step away from the crap.
There will always be crap, walk away from it and steer your own path regardless.
April 4th, 2020 06:17
Manipulation
Saxon Crow said:
No. Not everything is justified. Trust me i know! Good poem
March 15th, 2020 02:12
Saxon Crow said:
No. Not everything is justified. Trust me i know! Good poem
March 15th, 2020 02:12
Lens
FredPeyer said:
hopeless and bleak, the message of \'it can\'t get any worse than that\' is coming through loud and clear.
November 1st, 2019 11:51
FredPeyer said:
hopeless and bleak, the message of \'it can\'t get any worse than that\' is coming through loud and clear.
November 1st, 2019 11:51
Overwhelm
Goldfinch60 said:
That past is there to guide you into your future.
October 20th, 2019 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
That past is there to guide you into your future.
October 20th, 2019 00:41
Overwhelm
Poetic Dan said:
Great stuff, I love chatting with the voices.
Keep up the write.
Much peace and respect
October 19th, 2019 16:05
Poetic Dan said:
Great stuff, I love chatting with the voices.
Keep up the write.
Much peace and respect
October 19th, 2019 16:05
Blind
Goldfinch60 said:
Those pictures can be wonderful but with today’s technology can they be trusted to be true.
October 4th, 2019 15:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Those pictures can be wonderful but with today’s technology can they be trusted to be true.
October 4th, 2019 15:36
Blind
FredPeyer said:
A picture can be worth a thousand words......or it can take your breath away....zero words!
Like your poem Rose.
October 4th, 2019 14:30
FredPeyer said:
A picture can be worth a thousand words......or it can take your breath away....zero words!
Like your poem Rose.
October 4th, 2019 14:30
Temporary nothing
Goldfinch60 said:
Those feelings of nothing are coming out onto the page and that \'nothingness\' will be replaced with joy and love.
October 4th, 2019 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Those feelings of nothing are coming out onto the page and that \'nothingness\' will be replaced with joy and love.
October 4th, 2019 00:37
Temporary nothing
FredPeyer said:
In my humble opinion, the fact that you write, and how you write about feeling nothing seems to show that you DID feel, but maybe more internal than external. You write well, keep on!
October 3rd, 2019 18:08
FredPeyer said:
In my humble opinion, the fact that you write, and how you write about feeling nothing seems to show that you DID feel, but maybe more internal than external. You write well, keep on!
October 3rd, 2019 18:08
Temporary nothing
Bragee said:
I love the poem.
Takes a strong person to feel nothing however it doesn\'t have to be a bad thing if channeled properly.
Having that much control over your emotions..to choose when to feel and not feel is like having a super power!
October 3rd, 2019 11:02
Bragee said:
I love the poem.
Takes a strong person to feel nothing however it doesn\'t have to be a bad thing if channeled properly.
Having that much control over your emotions..to choose when to feel and not feel is like having a super power!
October 3rd, 2019 11:02
Temporary nothing
Clara said:
Rose, I hope you feel soon. Life is to be felt. It is hard. Man is it hard. But feel it all. Cry until you silently scream... Then breathe deeply. You are alive. Look outside, find something beautiful and really look at it. Feel your feelings but then step away from yourself. You are part of a much larger grander image and Rose, it is beautiful. You are doing great. Keep writing and sharing. You feel enough to write the words. Keep doing. Keep fighting. CLARA X
October 3rd, 2019 09:49
Clara said:
Rose, I hope you feel soon. Life is to be felt. It is hard. Man is it hard. But feel it all. Cry until you silently scream... Then breathe deeply. You are alive. Look outside, find something beautiful and really look at it. Feel your feelings but then step away from yourself. You are part of a much larger grander image and Rose, it is beautiful. You are doing great. Keep writing and sharing. You feel enough to write the words. Keep doing. Keep fighting. CLARA X
October 3rd, 2019 09:49
Blood, water, and sadness
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep the two apart as you are doing with that blade, so much respect for your first three months.
Words on a page can be more cutting and will free you from the hurt as they go onto the page as you are so doing on MPS, keep writing it is so much more fulfilling.
We on MPS will support you Rose.
October 3rd, 2019 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Keep the two apart as you are doing with that blade, so much respect for your first three months.
Words on a page can be more cutting and will free you from the hurt as they go onto the page as you are so doing on MPS, keep writing it is so much more fulfilling.
We on MPS will support you Rose.
October 3rd, 2019 01:38
Blood, water, and sadness
dusk arising said:
LOL @ your \"stay\" at MPS... that\'s gotta become your \"life\" in MPS... this place is like a growth clan of self healers and fine poets.
Your piece presents an unsolveable question in metaphor. But i guess when we mix anything we get a new result..... maybe you\'re new mixing with us is giving you a new result... i hope so. We feed off each other.
October 2nd, 2019 16:44
dusk arising said:
LOL @ your \"stay\" at MPS... that\'s gotta become your \"life\" in MPS... this place is like a growth clan of self healers and fine poets.
Your piece presents an unsolveable question in metaphor. But i guess when we mix anything we get a new result..... maybe you\'re new mixing with us is giving you a new result... i hope so. We feed off each other.
October 2nd, 2019 16:44
Sound of silence
Poetic Dan said:
I work with animals and people, the thing that connects us is the energy! Universal language is there we have just lost sight of it and each other!
Great work!
Much peace and respect
September 25th, 2019 15:55
Poetic Dan said:
I work with animals and people, the thing that connects us is the energy! Universal language is there we have just lost sight of it and each other!
Great work!
Much peace and respect
September 25th, 2019 15:55
Sound of silence
Goldfinch60 said:
Even without a voice you can always make yourself heard by people who care.
September 25th, 2019 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Even without a voice you can always make yourself heard by people who care.
September 25th, 2019 02:48
Sound of silence
dusk arising said:
Say it loud, say it clear!
\"Get - up! Stand - up! Stand up for your rights!\" (R Marley)
September 25th, 2019 00:21
dusk arising said:
Say it loud, say it clear!
\"Get - up! Stand - up! Stand up for your rights!\" (R Marley)
September 25th, 2019 00:21
Demented
Goldfinch60 said:
For one so young these words show how the horror in this world is reaching to people who in my youth knew nothing about it.
I am glad you have moved on in your life, life is good.
September 24th, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
For one so young these words show how the horror in this world is reaching to people who in my youth knew nothing about it.
I am glad you have moved on in your life, life is good.
September 24th, 2019 00:43
Lo que siento
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will continue forever as will your wonderful words.
September 23rd, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will continue forever as will your wonderful words.
September 23rd, 2019 00:08
Lo que siento
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BUENOS TARDES ROSE ! ANGELA aqui - ame gusta la Poema *How I Feel !* Love the Song also *Tu eres mi sueno y mi Amor Vedad !* YES indeed - LOVE is a beautiful thing and it does make one very very HAPPY ! I am engaged to BRIAN and we are getting married @ Easter 2020 - AMEN !
Because of our Perfect Love *Lo que siento - is also surreal* and I can echo every loving word of your Perfect Love Poem. Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
September 22nd, 2019 15:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BUENOS TARDES ROSE ! ANGELA aqui - ame gusta la Poema *How I Feel !* Love the Song also *Tu eres mi sueno y mi Amor Vedad !* YES indeed - LOVE is a beautiful thing and it does make one very very HAPPY ! I am engaged to BRIAN and we are getting married @ Easter 2020 - AMEN !
Because of our Perfect Love *Lo que siento - is also surreal* and I can echo every loving word of your Perfect Love Poem. Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
September 22nd, 2019 15:40
Help
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never be alone as the people on this site care for you as they care for all. Keep calm and look to the light your friends are shining upon you.
September 20th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never be alone as the people on this site care for you as they care for all. Keep calm and look to the light your friends are shining upon you.
September 20th, 2019 01:27
Help
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Good evening Rose !
Only believe - Only believe
All things are possible - Only believe
Believe in Yourself - Believe in Your
MPS Friends -We believe in YOU !
You can also (if you want) Believe in GOD !
Love the TEAR DROP form of the Poem !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
September 19th, 2019 16:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ! Good evening Rose !
Only believe - Only believe
All things are possible - Only believe
Believe in Yourself - Believe in Your
MPS Friends -We believe in YOU !
You can also (if you want) Believe in GOD !
Love the TEAR DROP form of the Poem !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
September 19th, 2019 16:58
Help
dusk arising said:
Today I read the words which are your falling tears and emotionally reach out to place a comforting arm around you. As do others here I am sure.
You will never be alone and devoid of help so long as you allow us to read your feelings on mps here.
September 19th, 2019 13:20
dusk arising said:
Today I read the words which are your falling tears and emotionally reach out to place a comforting arm around you. As do others here I am sure.
You will never be alone and devoid of help so long as you allow us to read your feelings on mps here.
September 19th, 2019 13:20
Help
Neville said:
a little girl crying in a field full of fears
a little pearl singing in an ocean of tears...
tis poetry my friend so you are never alone and truly ... N
September 19th, 2019 10:42
Neville said:
a little girl crying in a field full of fears
a little pearl singing in an ocean of tears...
tis poetry my friend so you are never alone and truly ... N
September 19th, 2019 10:42
Imperfection
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully sad, you expressed it so well.
That part inside all of us that never really blended in, there I guess is the true wonder of being human!
Inspirational stuff, keep it up!
September 19th, 2019 10:30
Poetic Dan said:
Beautifully sad, you expressed it so well.
That part inside all of us that never really blended in, there I guess is the true wonder of being human!
Inspirational stuff, keep it up!
September 19th, 2019 10:30
Beauty
Poetic Dan said:
I see the beauty of the soul not the outer vessels.
Yours is shining wonderful!
September 19th, 2019 10:26
Poetic Dan said:
I see the beauty of the soul not the outer vessels.
Yours is shining wonderful!
September 19th, 2019 10:26
Help
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that felt so powerful! Took back to many times I cried to hard alone.
Keep searching and writing
You are never truly alone
Much peace and respect
September 19th, 2019 10:23
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that felt so powerful! Took back to many times I cried to hard alone.
Keep searching and writing
You are never truly alone
Much peace and respect
September 19th, 2019 10:23
Beauty
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never be alone when you can write words like this.
You are right though there is more beauty to be seen in nature, words, music and art can can be seen in most people.
September 19th, 2019 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
You will never be alone when you can write words like this.
You are right though there is more beauty to be seen in nature, words, music and art can can be seen in most people.
September 19th, 2019 00:30
Happiness
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness is within you Rose, you said it yourself when you said you think things too much. I have a saying that I say to many people \"Don\'t think, it is dangerous.\"
Your life is there before you, you know that happiness is there for you but you seem to dismiss it, just accept it. Yes you can achieve great happiness on occasion but it is no good trying to attain it all the time as it then becomes the norm and you would have nothing for which to aim.
Accept those wonderful times and keep the memories. Life is good as are the words of your poem. In your words I can see light and happiness, it is there within you let it out with joy and enjoy every moment of your life, each moment is precious.
Andy
September 18th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness is within you Rose, you said it yourself when you said you think things too much. I have a saying that I say to many people \"Don\'t think, it is dangerous.\"
Your life is there before you, you know that happiness is there for you but you seem to dismiss it, just accept it. Yes you can achieve great happiness on occasion but it is no good trying to attain it all the time as it then becomes the norm and you would have nothing for which to aim.
Accept those wonderful times and keep the memories. Life is good as are the words of your poem. In your words I can see light and happiness, it is there within you let it out with joy and enjoy every moment of your life, each moment is precious.
Andy
September 18th, 2019 00:18
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