Comments received on poems by vanessa wallace
Happiness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ROSE ~ BRIAN HERE ! In essence we all want to be Happy but as we all know Happiness is transient and comes & goes with circumstances & moods etc. For us the Secret of Happiness is to be CONTENT whatever situation we are in ! Angela and are very much in Love ~ and that makes us happy and we are getting married next Year. BUT Im in London (UK) and Angela has been in AUCKLAND (NZ) ~ 11,500 miles away ~ on a work exchange and I encouraged her to go ! Our separation makes us SAD but we know next month we will be together again for ever ~ AMEN ~ That makes us Happy. We are both Christians and both Scientists and both Young 36 & 31 and that makes us both Happy & Content ! On balance we are content because we have lots of Positives in our Lives and few negatives and we have a possibility of 50 years together and (God willing) raising a Family. Circumstances may change but we have both been content with our lot for over 30 Years and also HAPPY 24/7 ! Contentment is our secret of HAPPINESS ~ AMEN.
Thanks for sharing ~ I lik your idea of
posting the same POEM tomorrow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡
September 17th, 2019 09:44
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ROSE ~ BRIAN HERE ! In essence we all want to be Happy but as we all know Happiness is transient and comes & goes with circumstances & moods etc. For us the Secret of Happiness is to be CONTENT whatever situation we are in ! Angela and are very much in Love ~ and that makes us happy and we are getting married next Year. BUT Im in London (UK) and Angela has been in AUCKLAND (NZ) ~ 11,500 miles away ~ on a work exchange and I encouraged her to go ! Our separation makes us SAD but we know next month we will be together again for ever ~ AMEN ~ That makes us Happy. We are both Christians and both Scientists and both Young 36 & 31 and that makes us both Happy & Content ! On balance we are content because we have lots of Positives in our Lives and few negatives and we have a possibility of 50 years together and (God willing) raising a Family. Circumstances may change but we have both been content with our lot for over 30 Years and also HAPPY 24/7 ! Contentment is our secret of HAPPINESS ~ AMEN.
Thanks for sharing ~ I lik your idea of
posting the same POEM tomorrow !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡
September 17th, 2019 09:44
Out
Goldfinch60 said:
Be true to yourself, your Mother loves you, she will accept it.
September 17th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Be true to yourself, your Mother loves you, she will accept it.
September 17th, 2019 00:38
Heartbreak
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a heartfelt write Rose, lost loves can be hard to deal with but be assured there is somebody out there for you and you will be together forever.
September 13th, 2019 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a heartfelt write Rose, lost loves can be hard to deal with but be assured there is somebody out there for you and you will be together forever.
September 13th, 2019 01:00
Heartbreak
Bragee said:
Heartbreaks are hard,
but it\'s better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.....or so they say.
Good writing
September 12th, 2019 09:26
Bragee said:
Heartbreaks are hard,
but it\'s better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all.....or so they say.
Good writing
September 12th, 2019 09:26
The end of it all
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words are so strong, yes our life on earth will end but before that happens we must ensure that every single moment is taken and enjoyed be fore that day. On that day I KNOW I will leave my body and My Spirit will go on forever.
September 12th, 2019 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words are so strong, yes our life on earth will end but before that happens we must ensure that every single moment is taken and enjoyed be fore that day. On that day I KNOW I will leave my body and My Spirit will go on forever.
September 12th, 2019 01:12
The end of it all
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t count on it being the end, there\'s so much evidence of more lifes than one on this planet IF YOU LOOK FOR IT... start in your local library.
September 11th, 2019 18:48
dusk arising said:
I wouldn\'t count on it being the end, there\'s so much evidence of more lifes than one on this planet IF YOU LOOK FOR IT... start in your local library.
September 11th, 2019 18:48
Get out of my head
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry but your words compel me to be there.
September 10th, 2019 14:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Sorry but your words compel me to be there.
September 10th, 2019 14:52
Get out of my head
dusk arising said:
Because you haven\'t replaced them with something more satisfying or more rewarding or better.
September 10th, 2019 11:21
dusk arising said:
Because you haven\'t replaced them with something more satisfying or more rewarding or better.
September 10th, 2019 11:21
Denial
Goldfinch60 said:
In our lives I believe we all aim for perfection to progress in life. We all need something for which to aim.
If we reach perfection where do we go from there?
September 7th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
In our lives I believe we all aim for perfection to progress in life. We all need something for which to aim.
If we reach perfection where do we go from there?
September 7th, 2019 00:56
Denial
Neville said:
I am so glad you posted these delightful words..
I have always had a thing about perfection myself... not that I strive for it in myself but am rather intrigued by it as a concept.. or more precisely as a subjective concept... the subject has even been a predominant feature in a would be novel I have been playing with for several years..... Cheers,
Neville
September 6th, 2019 11:24
Neville said:
I am so glad you posted these delightful words..
I have always had a thing about perfection myself... not that I strive for it in myself but am rather intrigued by it as a concept.. or more precisely as a subjective concept... the subject has even been a predominant feature in a would be novel I have been playing with for several years..... Cheers,
Neville
September 6th, 2019 11:24
Denial
Fay Slimm. said:
A good look at perfection and how it changes according to choice - - I liked your presentation Rose which clearly outlined the main reasons in life for needing distraction - - well- crafted and very meaningful.
September 6th, 2019 10:49
Fay Slimm. said:
A good look at perfection and how it changes according to choice - - I liked your presentation Rose which clearly outlined the main reasons in life for needing distraction - - well- crafted and very meaningful.
September 6th, 2019 10:49
Shutter
Fay Slimm. said:
A shutter will snap and there will be an image - your poem looked at what could be a substitute of reality and I thought that was quite a new take on the power of a camera. Thanks for sharing it with us Rose.
September 6th, 2019 10:43
Fay Slimm. said:
A shutter will snap and there will be an image - your poem looked at what could be a substitute of reality and I thought that was quite a new take on the power of a camera. Thanks for sharing it with us Rose.
September 6th, 2019 10:43
Shutter
dusk arising said:
A picture tells a story, and your photograph is, and always will be, part of YOUR story.
September 6th, 2019 06:42
dusk arising said:
A picture tells a story, and your photograph is, and always will be, part of YOUR story.
September 6th, 2019 06:42
Shutter
Goldfinch60 said:
That shutter can bring many wonderful images of your life all it needs is the image to come alive and be with you.
September 6th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
That shutter can bring many wonderful images of your life all it needs is the image to come alive and be with you.
September 6th, 2019 01:25
Shutter
Neville said:
I can appreciate the inspiration behind these fine words.. there is a juxtapositioning between the snap of a camera shutting and the blink of an eye.. both capture moments and have often fascinated me...
Neville
September 5th, 2019 23:59
Neville said:
I can appreciate the inspiration behind these fine words.. there is a juxtapositioning between the snap of a camera shutting and the blink of an eye.. both capture moments and have often fascinated me...
Neville
September 5th, 2019 23:59
Shutter
Neville said:
I can appreciate the inspiration behind these fine words.. there is a juxtapositioning between the snap of a camera shutting and the blink of an eye.. both capture moments and have often fascinated me...
Neville
September 5th, 2019 23:59
Neville said:
I can appreciate the inspiration behind these fine words.. there is a juxtapositioning between the snap of a camera shutting and the blink of an eye.. both capture moments and have often fascinated me...
Neville
September 5th, 2019 23:59
Imperfection
Goldfinch60 said:
That canvas is filled with wonder and glory but the imperfection you perceive is the colour that brings true life to the artwork. |Just look at that colour and look through it and the light will shine on you.
September 5th, 2019 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That canvas is filled with wonder and glory but the imperfection you perceive is the colour that brings true life to the artwork. |Just look at that colour and look through it and the light will shine on you.
September 5th, 2019 00:15
Euphoria
dusk arising said:
Beautiful. Who could ask for more. Let it be and let it last.
September 4th, 2019 11:28
dusk arising said:
Beautiful. Who could ask for more. Let it be and let it last.
September 4th, 2019 11:28
Imperfection
dusk arising said:
I like this a lot. I understand completely but .... BIG but, ... you\'re perceived imperfection is a temporary thing through which you are moving. Where you arrive is not for either you or me to know but sooner or later you WILL be in harmony.
Great structure, and thoroughly enjoyable thought provoking piece.
September 4th, 2019 10:59
dusk arising said:
I like this a lot. I understand completely but .... BIG but, ... you\'re perceived imperfection is a temporary thing through which you are moving. Where you arrive is not for either you or me to know but sooner or later you WILL be in harmony.
Great structure, and thoroughly enjoyable thought provoking piece.
September 4th, 2019 10:59
Memories
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile on your face show the wonder of your life to all.
August 25th, 2019 23:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile on your face show the wonder of your life to all.
August 25th, 2019 23:56
I feel like chet
Goldfinch60 said:
You mentioned chet, another chet is Chet Baker, my favourite Jazz Trumpeter - https://youtu.be/jvXywhJpOKs
August 25th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
You mentioned chet, another chet is Chet Baker, my favourite Jazz Trumpeter - https://youtu.be/jvXywhJpOKs
August 25th, 2019 01:07
Try
Christina8 said:
Hopefully you will be able to find a reason to try! Good write, hope to see more...Christina
August 4th, 2019 23:12
Christina8 said:
Hopefully you will be able to find a reason to try! Good write, hope to see more...Christina
August 4th, 2019 23:12
Slip
Goldfinch60 said:
Certainly a dark write Rose, but you have survived so that we can see more of your words.
July 28th, 2019 15:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Certainly a dark write Rose, but you have survived so that we can see more of your words.
July 28th, 2019 15:16
Slip
dusk arising said:
How thoughtful of you to make a mess in the bathroom where it can be easily cleaned up LOL.
When u cut yourself with a blade the blade gets blood upon it... therefore it will not make the sound of a clean blade (clink) when it hits the floor. The sound is not perceivable at all because the mind is absorbing the jolt of pain one has inflicted.
More please.
Hey this site works best if you read and comment on the other poets work. Please feel free to pick holes in mine, others do.
July 28th, 2019 08:47
dusk arising said:
How thoughtful of you to make a mess in the bathroom where it can be easily cleaned up LOL.
When u cut yourself with a blade the blade gets blood upon it... therefore it will not make the sound of a clean blade (clink) when it hits the floor. The sound is not perceivable at all because the mind is absorbing the jolt of pain one has inflicted.
More please.
Hey this site works best if you read and comment on the other poets work. Please feel free to pick holes in mine, others do.
July 28th, 2019 08:47
What Happened?
Christina8 said:
Maybe you should let her know how you feel....good emotional write!
July 27th, 2019 17:25
Christina8 said:
Maybe you should let her know how you feel....good emotional write!
July 27th, 2019 17:25
What Happened?
dusk arising said:
You are still a young person and both you and your friend are going thru a lot of changes as you grow to adulthood. Friendships change as years pass and new friendships are formed. As you age you will take this in your stride.
Meantime i find your writing exceptional. Your discipline is remarkable. I really believe you have poetic talent way above your years judging by this piece.
July 27th, 2019 06:24
dusk arising said:
You are still a young person and both you and your friend are going thru a lot of changes as you grow to adulthood. Friendships change as years pass and new friendships are formed. As you age you will take this in your stride.
Meantime i find your writing exceptional. Your discipline is remarkable. I really believe you have poetic talent way above your years judging by this piece.
July 27th, 2019 06:24
What Happened?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I do hope that gap between you closes and you are friends once more. Good friends are so important in our lives.
July 27th, 2019 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, I do hope that gap between you closes and you are friends once more. Good friends are so important in our lives.
July 27th, 2019 02:51
The not so reality
Goldfinch60 said:
Because it\'s a dream, not all dreams come true, only those that bring you joy come true.
June 10th, 2019 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Because it\'s a dream, not all dreams come true, only those that bring you joy come true.
June 10th, 2019 00:08
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