Comments received on poems by jarcher54
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here (Brian is my Husband of 6 months !) Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site! Thanks for your first poem which has already had some good reviews! I love the MANTRA. We all suffer bereavement in most years - Your Poem suggests we should respect the departed & draw the line otherwise we would drown in unrequited grief! Thanks for sharing. Please check our site - Thanks A & B.
Blessings - Love - Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 3rd, 2020 12:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here (Brian is my Husband of 6 months !) Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site! Thanks for your first poem which has already had some good reviews! I love the MANTRA. We all suffer bereavement in most years - Your Poem suggests we should respect the departed & draw the line otherwise we would drown in unrequited grief! Thanks for sharing. Please check our site - Thanks A & B.
Blessings - Love - Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 3rd, 2020 12:21
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MendedFences27 said:
Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf, humblebee (brilliant), book, shelved, eternity. Could be any form of grief and the reader then chooses their own and is drawn in. Just a lovely bit of poetry. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:13
MendedFences27 said:
Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf, humblebee (brilliant), book, shelved, eternity. Could be any form of grief and the reader then chooses their own and is drawn in. Just a lovely bit of poetry. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:13
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AwHec8 said:
Beautiful Poem that does say so much with a few words. Don
September 3rd, 2020 07:02
AwHec8 said:
Beautiful Poem that does say so much with a few words. Don
September 3rd, 2020 07:02
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Neville said:
words well spent.... truly excellent ...
and welcome proper my friend
... Neville
September 3rd, 2020 03:50
Neville said:
words well spent.... truly excellent ...
and welcome proper my friend
... Neville
September 3rd, 2020 03:50
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Fay Slimm. said:
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end. Thanks for sharing this fragment my poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2020 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end. Thanks for sharing this fragment my poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2020 03:38
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