Comments received on poems by jarcher54
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dusk arising said:
There may be pain, regret, sadness and grief with and ending but, as you poem suggests, that is not the way to carry on in life.
Both sad and uplifting. Sophisticated.
September 3rd, 2020 12:39
dusk arising said:
There may be pain, regret, sadness and grief with and ending but, as you poem suggests, that is not the way to carry on in life.
Both sad and uplifting. Sophisticated.
September 3rd, 2020 12:39
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here (Brian is my Husband of 6 months !) Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site! Thanks for your first poem which has already had some good reviews! I love the MANTRA. We all suffer bereavement in most years - Your Poem suggests we should respect the departed & draw the line otherwise we would drown in unrequited grief! Thanks for sharing. Please check our site - Thanks A & B.
Blessings - Love - Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 3rd, 2020 12:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here (Brian is my Husband of 6 months !) Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site! Thanks for your first poem which has already had some good reviews! I love the MANTRA. We all suffer bereavement in most years - Your Poem suggests we should respect the departed & draw the line otherwise we would drown in unrequited grief! Thanks for sharing. Please check our site - Thanks A & B.
Blessings - Love - Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 3rd, 2020 12:21
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MendedFences27 said:
Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf, humblebee (brilliant), book, shelved, eternity. Could be any form of grief and the reader then chooses their own and is drawn in. Just a lovely bit of poetry. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:13
MendedFences27 said:
Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf, humblebee (brilliant), book, shelved, eternity. Could be any form of grief and the reader then chooses their own and is drawn in. Just a lovely bit of poetry. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:13
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AwHec8 said:
Beautiful Poem that does say so much with a few words. Don
September 3rd, 2020 07:02
AwHec8 said:
Beautiful Poem that does say so much with a few words. Don
September 3rd, 2020 07:02
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Neville said:
words well spent.... truly excellent ...
and welcome proper my friend
... Neville
September 3rd, 2020 03:50
Neville said:
words well spent.... truly excellent ...
and welcome proper my friend
... Neville
September 3rd, 2020 03:50
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Fay Slimm. said:
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end. Thanks for sharing this fragment my poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2020 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end. Thanks for sharing this fragment my poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2020 03:38
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