Comments received on poems by jarcher54
All on a pleasant meadow
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful Fake Blake jarcher54.
Andy
October 20th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful Fake Blake jarcher54.
Andy
October 20th, 2020 01:31
A Fragment
FineB said:
A beautiful poignant poem Jarcher54
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
October 18th, 2020 01:15
FineB said:
A beautiful poignant poem Jarcher54
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
October 18th, 2020 01:15
A Fragment
Neville said:
I have visited each of your two current posted poems here before and on several previous occasions
.. I thought this time, I would leave my mark ....... again .. excellent in my opinion ...
October 17th, 2020 04:37
Neville said:
I have visited each of your two current posted poems here before and on several previous occasions
.. I thought this time, I would leave my mark ....... again .. excellent in my opinion ...
October 17th, 2020 04:37
IN MEMORIAM TRACY LAMAR WYATT
Neville said:
sadly and ever so.. but necessarily so .. this poem is quite like your dear friend Tracy .. not at all quiet, but larger than life and crammed with all manner of things loved, simple, profound remembered and useful.....
September 20th, 2020 07:38
Neville said:
sadly and ever so.. but necessarily so .. this poem is quite like your dear friend Tracy .. not at all quiet, but larger than life and crammed with all manner of things loved, simple, profound remembered and useful.....
September 20th, 2020 07:38
IN MEMORIAM TRACY LAMAR WYATT
Goldfinch60 said:
Sounds like a remarkable person and a very good friend. Good words Jarcher.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Sounds like a remarkable person and a very good friend. Good words Jarcher.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 01:26
A Fragment
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Gerard Manley Hopkins was notorious for leaving fragments...I’ve got multitudes of them lying around in little green “Memoranda” printed by the Federal Supply Service. Now get on out there and start putting together your fragments into a genuine catalogue of work my friend! Speaking like a Texan to a fellow Texan, just two government servants conversing, sorry for my brashness.
September 15th, 2020 22:38
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Gerard Manley Hopkins was notorious for leaving fragments...I’ve got multitudes of them lying around in little green “Memoranda” printed by the Federal Supply Service. Now get on out there and start putting together your fragments into a genuine catalogue of work my friend! Speaking like a Texan to a fellow Texan, just two government servants conversing, sorry for my brashness.
September 15th, 2020 22:38
A Fragment
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow said in awesome creatively crafted metaphor. Great in brevity. You ought to write more with such talent. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow said in awesome creatively crafted metaphor. Great in brevity. You ought to write more with such talent. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:41
A Fragment
Goldfinch60 said:
So much said in few words, that grief will not longer be with her.
Welcome to MPS.
September 4th, 2020 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
So much said in few words, that grief will not longer be with her.
Welcome to MPS.
September 4th, 2020 00:07
A Fragment
dusk arising said:
There may be pain, regret, sadness and grief with and ending but, as you poem suggests, that is not the way to carry on in life.
Both sad and uplifting. Sophisticated.
September 3rd, 2020 12:39
dusk arising said:
There may be pain, regret, sadness and grief with and ending but, as you poem suggests, that is not the way to carry on in life.
Both sad and uplifting. Sophisticated.
September 3rd, 2020 12:39
A Fragment
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here (Brian is my Husband of 6 months !) Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site! Thanks for your first poem which has already had some good reviews! I love the MANTRA. We all suffer bereavement in most years - Your Poem suggests we should respect the departed & draw the line otherwise we would drown in unrequited grief! Thanks for sharing. Please check our site - Thanks A & B.
Blessings - Love - Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 3rd, 2020 12:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here (Brian is my Husband of 6 months !) Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site! Thanks for your first poem which has already had some good reviews! I love the MANTRA. We all suffer bereavement in most years - Your Poem suggests we should respect the departed & draw the line otherwise we would drown in unrequited grief! Thanks for sharing. Please check our site - Thanks A & B.
Blessings - Love - Joy & Peace
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
September 3rd, 2020 12:21
A Fragment
MendedFences27 said:
Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf, humblebee (brilliant), book, shelved, eternity. Could be any form of grief and the reader then chooses their own and is drawn in. Just a lovely bit of poetry. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:13
MendedFences27 said:
Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf, humblebee (brilliant), book, shelved, eternity. Could be any form of grief and the reader then chooses their own and is drawn in. Just a lovely bit of poetry. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2020 10:13
A Fragment
AwHec8 said:
Beautiful Poem that does say so much with a few words. Don
September 3rd, 2020 07:02
AwHec8 said:
Beautiful Poem that does say so much with a few words. Don
September 3rd, 2020 07:02
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Neville said:
words well spent.... truly excellent ...
and welcome proper my friend
... Neville
September 3rd, 2020 03:50
Neville said:
words well spent.... truly excellent ...
and welcome proper my friend
... Neville
September 3rd, 2020 03:50
A Fragment
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end. Thanks for sharing this fragment my poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2020 03:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A tender scene set to stay with the reader long after the four lines end. Thanks for sharing this fragment my poet-friend.
September 3rd, 2020 03:38
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